Thank you for the PM Di!!! Read all the parts in a go and should say it's an interesting work...
However, one problem I encounter while reading your stories is keeping a neutral perspective on IshRa.. Often, fall in love with either of them and as a result the other one is out of limelight .. Maybe the characterisations are such that one predominate the other... In this story, unlike the norms fell in love with Ishita...
Ishita became Ishima for her siblings after the unexpected mishap in her life.. Simultaneously, building an empire singlehandedly to accomplish her father's dream...She is portrayed to be bold, independent, affectionate and sensible- a paradigm of beauty with brains...On the other hand, Raman comes across a fun loving guy, overly pampered by her mother , who indulges in merrymaking all times.. He is reluctant to accept responsibility ...
As always, IshRa starts off on an acidic note where each try to outsmart other.. However, Raman is outdone on all occasions.. The Nidhi debacle brings IshRa together, the manner in which Ishita unmasked Nidhi's true face is quite appealing, a businesswoman for a reason... Raman inadvertently falls for Ishita after the fiasco and gifts her with a self made portrait... Initially, she was hesitant to accept his token of gratitude but upon seeing his artistry, she was spellbounded...
Raman with tenacious resolve tried to get her attention but he was partly successful.. However, with every passing day their distance lessened, IshRa's dance on freshers day is a perfect example where Ishita too felt something weird about his proximity...
Goa trip helped Raman in taking their relationship to next level where Ishita too started pondering about the dominance of Raman in her life... After the eventful night at pub, the scene where IshRa almost ends up kissing, lost in the effect of each other was a perfect example of how their relationship evolved over the period...
IshRa confession wasn't dramatic as expected ... Ishita was suspicious of Raman and his family's acceptance of her responsibilities but at the same time couldn't see him moving on in life... Their confrontation was so convincing and natural and culminated in a soul searing kiss...
Ishita makes Raman realize his responsibilities, who starts working under Mr Bhalla... On the other hand, families start doubting IshRa's sudden change in behaviour and Mr Bhalla pushes for Raman's marriage...
Raman perplexed about what to do next, marries Ishita in a covert wedlock, which will have remarkable consequences on all their lives...
However, one character I am looking forward to is Prateek's.. His character has shades of grey but somewhere down the line, he is doing out of jealousy.. I would like to see if he takes advantage of the situation and contrives against Ishita to take over her empire.. Mihika, on the other hand didn't had any significant presence in the story...
Edited by srini18 - 7 years ago
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