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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

Congratulations for your new story

Sounds interesting...make shaurya suffer a bit in this story. To bring back mehek.😈
Thanks for the pm...eager to read the first chapter...continue soon

Thanks Di
Shaurya will surely suffer but not to bring her back but to heal her inner wounds n to bring his Mehak back.
First chapter is here in just 2 minutes😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-1


Mehak enters Sharma Niwas n aasked mohit that she wanted to talk to him in alone. In Mohit's bedroom Mehak gave him the picture she had in her hand. Mehak- What is this Mohit? U made us to loose in the competition. How can u do this? This was for ur child's future. Bcz of u I refused Shaurya to participate with him. U stabbed me at my back. How can u do this to me? Tell me, what made u to do this?She shaked him while grabbing his collars in her fists. Mohit shamelessly asnwered without any guilt- Money. Money made me do this. Your husband offered me. I accepted. Mehak looked at him in disbelief n said- What Money made u do this. Shaurya bribed u. How can u accept it. When he was offerinng d prize money n partnership in his buisness u refused. Now frm nowhere u accepted his offer n Betrayed us. Mohit- Seriously u betrayed me n Nehal since u lost ur parents. All showered love on u only. We used to feel rejected. Its like u were only child of this family. Anything u say or do is always right. What we say or do never matter or wrong. Is this right Di? Mehak was shocked n can't stand anymore n fell on the ground. Mohit continued- Again ur drama of innocence started. Now behn ji will go n tell everyone that I'm d one who make our team to loose d competition. Sharafat ki Moorti. Nautanki. Mehak composed herself n stand on her feet n said- Yep I'll say that I was d one who cheated u n make u loose d competition. Bcz u bcm a stone in his way of success. Will that b fine Mohit. All will hate me n you can make all to break relationship with me. All will b fine then. Mohit said happily- Ok go n say then we all will be happy without u. Never ever try to come back. U have to stay on ur words forever. Mehak said- Ok lets go out after I clean my face.

After some time bothh came out playing their respective role in drama. Mohit came with sad face n Mehak made a face like feeling proud or something like that. Sharmas were shocked to see Mohit's state. Mohit was really acting like full bechara. Mansi asked- Mohit yeh kya shakal bana rakhi hai. Mohit- Chachi everything is over now. We lost competition. Kanta- Don't worry beta nothing is over. What happened if we lost. Haar kar jeetne wala hi asli Khiladi hota hai. Aur hum Khiladi hai Anadi nahi. Mohit- Maa we haven't lost we were made to lost. All have confusing expressions clearly visible. Jeevan- What are u saying? We can't understand. Mohit- Matlb Papa ji Mehak Di make u loose that competition for her husband's profit. All were shocked. PD said- Nahi, ladoo can't do this. She can't betray her family. Kanta- Aisa nah ho sakta. Sonal- Mehak tell us this is not true. Ravi- Mehak puttar kya yeh sach hai? Nehal- Di say something. Mehak screamed- Haan yeh bilkul sach hai. I was d one who added salt in dish. I want to make Shaurya win. I love him n want him to b successfull at any cost. So, I did it without even telling him. Kanta slapped her. Dadji- Yeh toh hona hi tha. Yeh ladki humme apna Parivaar nahi maanti. Mehak- haan aap sabh ho hi Kaun mere. Jab meri Jaroorat hoti hai tab meri yaad aati hai app sabhko. Mujhe aapse rishta rakhne ka koi shaunk nahi hai. PD- Toh aaj se kabhi bhi iss ghar mein kadam mat rakhna. Yahan tumhara koi nahi hai. Kanta- Aapna bacha huaa saaman uthaoo aur nikal jaao humare ghar se. Sonal- Mehak, I haven't excepted this frm u. Nehal- Me too di. I can't think that u can stoop so low. Disgusting. Mansi- We trusted u n u stabbed us. Jeevan- We did everything we can do for u n this is what u have done in return. Leave d house as soon as possible Mehak. Never show ur face again.Mehak took some of pics of her precious time with her family n left frm there. Mohit smirked.

In White Chillis

Shaurya- Nikki evry thing should b perfect. Its my first date with her n I want this to memorable one.

Nikki- Oh Shaurya don't stress urself much. I'll manage. Now tell me what are u going to give her as a present. I mean first date with out gift doesn't sounds great.

Shaurya- No one else will know what I'm presenting her.

Nikki- Ok Mr. Surprising. Can I ask u something.

Shaurya- Yes Plz.

Nikki- Why u booked this whole restraunt when only u two r dating not a family party.

Shaurya- exactly Nikki only we two r going to date here tonight. I don't want anyone else. Hope she will forgive me.

Nikki- She will Shaurya. Now let me do my work as per you orders we have to leave till 8. By the way when Mehak is coming?

Shaurya- At 9. I want no one here. I'll be d host, waiter, attender n all. No one else's presence.

Nikki- Ok Ok.

At Khanna Mansion-

Karuna Maa n Dolly Massi were out of house as they were going to stay at K Maa's friend's house at Chandigarh for 4days due to some wedding. Vicky is out for Jaipur's project. Mehak thanked Mata Rani for being alone in d house. She went to her room n locked herself n started weeping. She took her family's picture in her hand n whole scene was again bupping in front of her eyes. Everyone's saying came in her mind again n again. She fell unconsious there.

Shaurya was again n again trying to call her. When he tried her phone for 50th time Mehak didn't picked it up. He called Awara to ask where is Mehak? He said that She is in her Room. Shaurya was very angry at her n decided to ignore as She did in his point of view.

What will happen now???????

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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Great start chotu😊 my question was same in the actual show also ki why Mohit first refused to take price money a first and then took bribe from him? Please continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajinder.k

Great start chotu😊 my question was same in the actual show also ki why Mohit first refused to take price money a first and then took bribe from him? Please continue soon and thanks for PM

Thanks Raj Di
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Mine Too Raj di
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Edited by ddramaqueen - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my God, the whole family not only disowned her but said bitter words too...poor Mehak😭 and selfish Mohit😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Specygirl

Oh my God, the whole family not only disowned her but said bitter words too...poor Mehak😭 and selfish Mohit😡

thanks for FB di
They will regret for this.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Emotional update. Mohit is being so selfish and whole family disowns her. Waiting for next part. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woow what an amazing update Anu👏
Loved it thanks for the update. 😛
For one mistake whole sharma clan hovered over mehek 😲
The mistake she never did
On the other side shaurya arranging for dinner date ...and he is not bothered much of mehek safety ...he is bothered about she is not picking his phone... Hope she is fine and will not get misunderstood by shaurya again .
Continue soon. ..And thanks for the PM😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good start girl do continue soon. it was some how similar to my ff start of Mehrya My Version. Love to see how you are doing in your way. tq
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aww meri pyaari Anu itni jldi update bhi aa gyi muaah 😉
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Totally loved this n got angry on Mohit too😡
How cud he do this wid his sister who chosen him over d man whom she loved d most n he loved her to d core too😡😡
I m very much shocked n also want answer dat why he had not accepted Shaurya's offer dat was valid n legal in everyone's eyes rather than illeagal he is such a Dumbo who lost his sister😡
I pity on Shaurya n Mehak as both were sad n he prepared everything for her o God I m crying for my hero😭😭😭
She needs someone beside her to pacify her n badly needs a shoulder to cry over😭😭
U know I m also writing something on this track bt just wrote a little as I need to concentrate on my pending 3 ffs n 2 fss😆
Anyways it was superb n do continue soon wid second part...I m very much excited to know what wud happen next😃😃
N how is ur Bhai's wedding going on...u must b enjoying a lot as r younger one😆😆
Ty for d PM n enjoy bt don't keep us hungry 😆😆
Edited by anjali45 - 7 years ago

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