MG ff. Naseeb. Thread. 2. Pg.1. - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

834

Views

47.7k

Users

102

Likes

1.8k

Frequent Posters

T.Peru thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: jaya6696

Nice teaser

But who is this sruthi


See character sketch to know who is Shurtii
T.Peru thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Naseeb
Part. 1.

In the big mansion there everyone was quietly having dinner and after having meal all left to their room, in this mansion 5 members live one is old women, her son and daughter in law then other two are her grandson and granddaughter but that women love her grandson more than her grand daughter also she is proud of her grand son. Men in his early 30s after having his dinner he went to his room there then pick up the file and start reading it and he closed his eyes to take deep breath as he was not another big business tycoon Maan Singh Khuran who is also known in business world as MSK, he kept the file then went to make coffee for himself but picking up the up cup his eyes fell on picture which is his wedding pic and there were others few pictures, he smile seeing his baby wife then sit on the sofa and kept looking at the pictures and remembered the time when he got married to his child wife.
Flashback 14 years back...
A small boy who's age was 15 years old he was sitting in front of sacred fire, he turn back look at his mother Priya who was sitting on weal chair, she give him helpless look. Priya look at her husband Ram who was happily talking with his parents then she look at her son but her thoughts were broken when she see her son was still looking at her she cupped his face and kissed on his forehead then said him.


P. I am sorry Maan beta that I can't save you from there backward thoughts and tradition also I know now with you someone else is going to be force in this marriage who didn't know the meaning of marriage (Maan look at his mother and give her small as he didn't want hurt her. Yes Maan Singh Khurana who is 15 years old, he is going to get married or say forced be married just because of his mother as he didn't want his Dadi doesn't hurt his mother or his father point finger on his mother that she didn't make him agree for marriage.

He is getting married with his grand father friend whom his grandfather promised that he will make his grand son Maan marry with his grand daughter. His grand father friend had 3 sons, where their first had had 2 child that are boys and second one had one daughter and with whom he is going marry but his thoughts were broken when he hear sound voice. Maan look another side but seeing his bride his eyes remain open as according to him she will be just 5 or 6 years old, he look at his mother who was also shock like him but still they cant do anything.

Mohindar who is girl father look at his daughter Geet who is 6 and half year old, he didn't want to get marry his daughter now as its his dream to make his daughter independent but he know now nothing is in his hand as he cant go against his parents. Rano who is Geet mother she was also crying seeing this but she is also helpless in front of her in laws. She make Geet sit with Maan where they both got married with proper ritual where they took the phare then he make her wedding chain also filled her maang . During the wedding ritual Maan look at his child wife who was sitting quite as he know may be her mother ask her also he can see she is all the time playing with her bangles and when she saw him looking at her so she give him cute smile and not wanting to hurt her he also give her small smile.

After wedding get over Geet was taken back to room where her mother love her also Rano can feel Geet is still having temperature as yesterday her cousin brother beat her as she was playing outside and due to this she got ill so coming out of her thought when Geet said.

G. Maa tired (Rano smile at her and said her)


R. Haan bacha come (then she help her to change her clothes and Geet was going to remove her wedding symbols but her mother said her) Geet beta don't remove that (she make her small face but her mother cup her face and said her) please bacha I will tell you when you get big okk so now sleep (Rano smile as Geet understands her also she make her sleep then went out.

As the wedding finish Maan and Geet took blessing from elders also when Rano took Geet to her room Maan also left outside to get fresh air as he was getting suffocated inside. While walking away he was going bu there is saw one girl who was trying to pick up both water pot together but she was unable to so Maan went and help that girl and that girl said him.

G. Thank you for your help but what is your name (Maan give her small smile and said him.

M. Maan Singh Khurana and yours (that girl smile at him and said him.


S. My name is Shurti (then they went away also Maan staying over there few times Maan met Shurti. They stay over there for 4 days and then they left to Delhi. After coming back Maan kept himself busy in his studies but was worried about his mother health and unfortunately he lost his mother after 8 month of his marriage. He was sad and upset as his mother was only one who understand him.

It has been 3 months to his mother death his father and his dadi went to village there to meet his wife {Geet} family that he know but later he got shock when they come back that time his father got married with another girl who will be almost few years elder from him and that was not another than Shurti he was sad and hurt.


Friends give feedback
Thank you...

Edited by T.Peru - 6 years ago
T.Peru thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#93
Thank enjoy the update
Thank you 😊😊
angel0912 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#94
Ohhh so maan father married shurti
maherkhan thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#95
congrats for new ff...it was superbly updated...so maaneet both are victim of child marriage...so sad still people believe in this...maan married to geet at age of 15 and geet's only 6 year old...maan's mother health not good that was main reason for his agree.other side geet's parents were not happy about this but stand helpless...maan lost his mother so sad...here his moron father got married once again thats to be too younger girl same age like maan...waiting for next...hope in between maaneet relation not effect...
preyasekar thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#96
Nice update
You have clear all the doubts in this first chapter dear feeling angry at their backward thoughts
Maan and geet are minor na that marriage is not legal but now maan is big shot will he accept geet now ? By the way where and how is geet now ? Can't wait for her entry
Lovely update dear
iyshuganesh thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#97
Nice update... Child marriage.. so sad for both man and geet
love2_soma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#98
oh no geet n maan already married at sooo young age...geet dont knw d meaning of marriage only...sooo backward mentality...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
neasya thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#99
very interesting update dear loved it...
maan is married to a very young geet and also he had met shruti too...
will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...
ambeern thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update l
Loved it

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-2 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".