REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 18

Posted: 5 years ago
Thanks for the pm . Just now read the lovely update.   Hope geet will also realize her love for maan
Posted: 5 years ago
hope she can see the difference between him n Maan
he never show care even when she literary do all his works
I want her to move on
Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 8

 

He looks up and away again

 

M- Well, maybe we did

 

G-Hawww

 

She without thinking hits his chest

 

He doesn't feel much

 

Jaakar he says ki knock karo

 

G-Utaaro

 

Maan grins and then puts her down

 

Sliding her down real close

 

She quickly turns around unable to look more

 

She opens the door with her keys

 

Maan gayab ho gaya peeche se

 

Geet ka khayal rakhna, giving her advice is as far as he can safely divert and let himself be distracted

 

Maan gaya wapas apne apartment mein

 

Aaj Akhul ki gf kaafi upset and disturbed hai

 

Maan thinks about striking the iron when it's hot

 

Antara kaafi upset thi

 

Wo neeche dekhne ki kahin Akhil abhi bhi wait to nahi kar raha

 

Wahan Maan apna get up change karke apni Porche mein aaya

 

Antara ro rahi thi

 

Maan ne usse hanky offer kiya

 

M- Are You ok?

 

Antara lipat gai Maan se

 

He smirks and pats her back

 

M-Hey its ok

 

He says rubbing her back

 

Antara lipte jaaye Maan se

 

Tabhi Maan ka phone baja

 

Maan curses ki pata nahi kaun pareshaan kar raha hai

 

Ek haath around Antara; he takes out his phone to check the number

 

"Gee calling

 

Maan ignore kar deta hai

 

Phone ko silent kar deta hai

 

Lekar jaata hai Antara ko apne apartment mein

 

Antara leaned a little to kiss him

 

He held her off

 

She frowns

 

He touches her cheek and gives her a smile

 

M- I dont want you to do anything while you are upset and you'll regret in the morning

 

She pulls his shirt...torning some buttons in process and dives on him

 

He grabs her by her shoulders and holds her away

 

M- Do you even know my name or is this the type of girl you are?

 

She frowns...ki isko kya problem h jab main ready hoon

 

M-I don't have sex with strangers

 

He says easily...

 

M-And generally not with girls who have mascara running down both their eyes. I was only offering you some wine and gentle company...if you wanted more...I am sorry

 

Antara is silent, mooh poncha

 

He offers her a glass of wine

 

M- You are an intelligent girl...how can you let someone make you cry?

 

Antara-I hate him! He is a wimp...worse than a girl

 

M-Then dump him...

 

Antara-I want to...but he threatens suicide...and he is such a a baby

 

M- Dogs who bark don't bite. Besides if he scares so easy I doubt he would have guts to take his own life

 

Maan says stroking a smudge off her cheek

 

M- And if that doesn't work; maybe you can just drive him crazy that he is forced to dump you...

 

Antara-Mmm...thanks for being here. Friends?

 

She extends hand

 

 

He takes her hand

 

M- Only if you promise not to kill any more pets

 

He says jokingly

 

She smiles and gives him a nice peck

 

Maan returns the smile

 

M- I am Rajeev by the way. I don't think I know your name either

 

Antara-Its Antara

 

M- Beautiful name. Are you feeling better now?

 

She nods

 

M-More wine?

 

She nods

 

He pours her some more wine

 

M-So tell me about yourself..

 

Ladki chatar patar karti hai maina ctress hu aisa waisa ye kiya wo kiya

 

Maan nods pretending to be listening attentively when he already knew everything about her

 

Aese kaafi der tak baat ki dono ne

 

Fir Maanne poocha ki iss weekend kya kar rai ho? Ki there is this party I have to attend it would be nice to have someone along who I know

 

Antara to bilkul ready

 

They exchange numbers

 

M- Details I will let you know later

Antara-Sure

 

M-Let me walk you to your apartment

 

It was like 2 am when she left

 

Maan bhi thak gaya tha uski chhik chik sunkar

 

Socha ek baar ki Geet ka phone aaya tha usse call back karun, fir socha ki kuch zyada involve ho raha hai wo khud Geet ke saath...

 

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Posted: 5 years ago
My like isn't working don't know why
It says login error
Ufff
Nice part maan was faking as he is consoling Antara
He ignored Geet cal
And was with Antara like a gentleman hmmm
Antara was more than ready to sleep with him
Yeh ladki besharam hai
Posted: 5 years ago
wonderful update! thanks 4 da pm! Maan is fooling Antara! she is ready to sleep with him! update soon
Posted: 5 years ago
ur link is not opening dear...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
Posted: 5 years ago
Maan ignored Geet ...that make me angry he so into revenge game n plan
ugh antara dumbo deserve akhil only
two dumbo together
but I would hate if Maan sleep with antara for plan
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by love2_soma


ur link is not opening dear...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Arre kaise?...kya dikha raha h?
Posted: 5 years ago
Lovely update antara so irritating so clingy hope maan wont go for her just to revenge


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