RS: Ek nayi shuruat part 13 (05-08-18) - Page 29

Originally posted by: roshni_az

awww dat fmily moment❤️😭..

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Sorry for being by late .

it's okay sri...mai kudh late hu😛

O my how we missed Aman and Ali on screen . They never got a proper ending . They vanished in thin air altogether .

issliye..i got them back😎

I loved last update than Aman's return . You were so good in bringing out their feelings beautifully .

thankyou sri😳 Special applause for that mornings scene where Neav lies on his lap and thank God even after all these years Bebe and Sweta didn't tease him. they are saving them for some other day😉 . I loved the total scene .

Avni should repent and cry when she learns how Neil spent these 10 years . Ye toh hona Hi hai !

decisions ab kya kar sakte hai...hona hi tha ek din..hogaya..ab they'll try to over come that

You made Sherry Ali's daughter 😳 aate hi poha 😆

she got a tiffin box full of poha with her...and yesh..sherry is sheriza ali khan😳😃😃 expect kiya kya when you read till u realize rs for first time?😆

Originally posted by: sugar_candy15

Sorry sanju main itni busy thi ki aaj Maine apni story update ki vo bhi aadhi.

Abhi last update hi padh paayi. Pehle ke baad mein padhungi and I am sure humesha ki tarah acche honge.

congo on new story rachna🥳❤️

pehle ke baad mein kaise? samjh mein kaise aayega phir?😆

I loved this part.

Sherry Ali ki beti hai wow🥳

yess😃😳

WO family Waala scene kitna beautiful that.👍🏼

Ab humesha reply karne ki koshish karungi❤️

thankyou ❤️

Tum meri story padhogi?

definitely yes🤗ssoonn😃

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

look whoz here!! CAptain Nidhii❤️Cute little family yeah!

What a family scene.

Truly loved it.

thankyouu❤️

But the way sherry.

Sheriza Ali khan means daughter of avni's Ali.

yup youre right😆😃

Correctly me if I am wrong.

But I am 100% sure cos of the name and that poha.

right right right😃

Waise bhi Neil avni ke saare bikhre huye risto ko jod raha hai.

To Ali ka aana is not a big thing.

yup...😉

Pls update the next soon Sanju.

tu wattpad inbox check kar😆

Much love

Nidhi.

Originally posted by: ...SA...

thankyou soo much nidhuu🤗❤️❤️

Originally posted by: ...SA...

thankyou soo much sri🤗

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Ali could never get Avni . At least his daughter has got Avni's son😆😆 .Baap nahin karti paya to beti sahi .😉 You mad woman !

"Omg..."avni gasps, picking up the kid, as she realizes who she is. Soon laughter filled in the place and everyone come into sight at once. The reunion of the best friends was too emotional and everyone in the room got teary eyed.

"Surprise again wifey!!" Neil winks at her and Avni just smiles at him, tilting her head slightly. She mouths a "Thank you!" Moving towards him but before they could reach each other, zara hugs Avni.

"Oh bhai...aapke tiger saahb kaha hai? "Ali asks looking at Neil making him chuckle. "Friday week hai na.. Saturday toda late ut tha hai...I'll get him.."Avni says.

Avni walks onto the room to see Neav still sleeping. "Neav..bacha..uthjaoo.."she says pushing strands of short hair away from his forehead. "Mumma..."he whispers, opening his eyes into thin slits and then moves to rest his forehead in her lap. "Kya hua Neav? Tum theek toh ho..?"she gets worried seeing him soo dull. Usually he's all charged up in the morning especially when he wakes up this late. He sneezes making it clear for her.

Before Neav could answer, they hear Ali's voice, "ohhooo...omg..."Ali smiles in surprise, seeing Neav. Smiling at the couple avni looks to the door to find Neil entering the room with Sherry in his arms. Neav just looked on clueless. "Kitna pyaara hai.."Zara begins sitting on the other side of the bed, pulling his cheeks. "Hi Neav..."she says and Neav smiles, "Hi..".

Before they knew, Ali and Zara already start arguing on who Neav looked like."Aakhein bhaiya zaise hai na..?"zara says. "Mummy Daddy aap ladna band karo na.."Sherry giggles, making Neil and Avni burst out into laughter. "Aap bhi mere mama ho?"neav asks making them pause their actions. "Nahi.."zara says. "Toh chacha ho?"neav asks. "Nahi.."Ali smiles. "Toh.."before Neav could ask anything, Ali says patting his cheek, "tu joh chahta hai..woh bula..".

"Sherry..neav ko hi bolo.."zara says and Neil puts her on the floor. Taking small steps, she reaches to Avni's side and whispers a "hi", accompanied by her toothy smile. "Hi.."neav forwards his hand for a handshake. "Tumhara naam kya hai?"neav asks sitting to the edge of the bed. "Sherry.. Sheriza.."she replies. Neav laughs saying "cherry?", making her frown. "Uh-hu...sha.. sherry.."she corrects him, making him pause his laughter. "Neav..bad manners aise nahi bolte.."avni says in a warning tone, "sorry bolo..". "Sorry.."he smiles, holding his ears and gets out of the bed from other side and laughs adding, "cherry!"

Minutes pass by in that laughter and madness. Both the couples become kids, arguing while the kids kept running around the room. It was avni who says, "acha..bas bas..aap sab neeche jao...neav ke fresh hone ke baad hum aajayenge..".

As said, avni and neav join them at the breakfast table, shortly. Breakfast was a joyous affair, it had the entire long table filled today.

While Ali and Neil sit together chatting something, Avni takes Zara to the lawn where Aman was already there, playing with the kids. They sit on the other side, deciding not to disturb their game, what ever crazy game they're playing at time.

They sit there for a long time, chatting. Zara is truly a Chatter box. She , in that short time told avni about everything. It started of with why she calls Neil Bhaiya. She always has that respect for Neil and could never forget how he helped Ali and her get married against her parents wish. Her family.. brothers literally chased them, to kill them at that time. If it wasn't for Neil, she doesn't know what would have happened to them at that time. She tells avni everything, from their little restaurant which they handle together to the news that she's two months pregnant now, everything.

Everything went on well until evening. Neav was behaving extremely strange. He's always welcoming but Today, he was behaving extra rude with Sherry, which didn't go unnoticed by any of the people in the house.

"Neav..ye kya badtameezi hai?"Neil asks in a little louder tone. Sherry was already sobbing, clutching onto Neil's leg. Tears filled Neav's eyes and he just runs away from the hall. "Sherry..."Neil picks up her trying to calm her down, but fails. "Neil.."avni approaches him and takes Sherry into her arm looking into his eyes. He immediately regrets shouting at Neav. "Go.."avni says calmly and he nods before going to neav's room. "Sherry..bacha..stop crying..aise nahi rote .."avni says sitting on the sofa, with Sherry on her lap. "Mai sorry bolti hu aapko Neav ne jo bhi Kiya uskeliye.."she says and the little girl looks at her, sniffling. "Aap mujeh karoge na..dil se sorry.."she asks again.

While Ali tries to walk towards Sherry, Zara stops him, smiling. It was the first time she saw Sherry listening to someone and calming down. It doesn't happen unless it's her parents or Neil. But today Zara was surprised to see how quickly Sherry bonded with Avni.

As Neil enters neav's room, he calls "Neav...". There was no response. "Tiger?"he calls again walking further inside. When he hears sounds of sniffles, he knew where his son is. He bends and looks beneath the bed , to find him there.

His heart broke seeing his son like that, again. "Neav.. I'm sorry.. please bahar aajao.."Neil says. "Aap mujhse bilkul bhi pyaar nahi karte..."he hears neav whisper. "Neav.. please ek baat meri baat suno..bahar aajao..bas ek baar.."Neil says. That minute long silence, that look on his son's face was turning unbearable for him. Neav slides out and finally kneels infront of his father. "Aap mujhse pyar nahi karte na.."he says in a feeble tone, sobbing. "Nahi Neav...aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai...tu jaanta hai na..mai tumse bahut pyaar"before Neil could finish, he finds Neav closing his eyes. Before he falls back, Neil holds him screaming his name. That's when he realizes that Neav has fever.

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