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Thank you Everyone Who had Been Commenting & Liking

I Could not reply to Some Previous Comments Sorry But I read everything & happy to know you guys are loving it ..I am having a hectic schedule as I work & study everyday and I get time only to update ..Hope you guys won't mind if I don't reply to your comments !! But Please Continue Commenting ..More the Responses Update will be Faster ..Thank you !!



Chapter 5 : Cinderella Enters The Palace




Sultan Reaches the Caf to meet his would be fiance as He sees her waiting for him ..Not bad Punctual Sultan Muses ..."Hi" ..as The Heiress gives a smile ..."mmm Ragini right?" he asks with not so interested look as She raises her brow ..."So we are Marrying ..Just letting you know beforehand...Our marriage would be just a business deal after all ..Just A Profitable Business " Ragini emphasizes as Sultan Frowns . Dipali Enters the Caf with one of her friend ..Sultan Spies on her as She nears him He pulls her by her arm as She crashes out to his chest ..Cupping her face in his palms Sultan Looks remorseful for a minute but swoops her in for kiss... Dipali Was shocked due to sudden act as She closes her eyes in pleasure..She had Dreamed To be close to him as Ragini scoffs at them leaving the place tempered..Pulling out from the Kiss Sultan puts his hands up "Sorry" and leaves the place as Dipali looked dazed ...Catching up with him out She shouts "Sultan"...as Sultan halts on his steps Regretting but wears his carefree mask soon as She comes face to face "What was that?" she yells at him furiously "A Kiss" He replies nonchalantly as She stares at him scandalized "Are you for real?" she asks him without blinking as she continues as tears made their way out "You used me "...as Sultan Fumes "I did not use you..Get that ..it was a kiss...Just ..A...Kiss" he tells her word by word as he tried to calm his anger..How could she think that he will use her? As Dipali tells with sarcastic laugh "You know I am Fool to still believe that I will get my Old Sultan back...After that incident 15 years ago who went away from me ? Why Sultan? ..Still I believe somewhere through that carefree nature I feel my Sultan is hidden "pushing him away crying she leaves the place as Sultan's mask starts falling as tear slid down ...He leaves the place ...

Throughout the Day Rishab had a Smile on his face ..He did not know why he had been smiling so much like an idiot ? ..The way She Got pissed when he called her Jaan..The way her petite frame matched with his like a long lost puzzle ...her anger her smile ..Everything was infectious ...He hits his head with his palm for thinking nonsense it is nothing he just wanted to piss her so he called her "Jaan"..It is nothing he chants to himself.

Madhu enters her home after her work in the night as She finds her Family Settled for dinner including her Father ..Seems like my Papa is back...As Madhu tries to silently sneak into her room she hears her stepmom call her out as Madhu curses herself ...Coming before her Family She sees Roop gives her a fake smile lovingly as Madhu scoffs mentally ..."Why didn't you come for Maa's Pooja?" Madhu asks meekly as Her Father snaps at her "Here is your mother "pointing to Roop ..."Why you didn't?" Madhu repeats this time a bit loudly ..."I do not have time to waste for people who are dead "he yells as Madhu answers back fuming "That Person You are Talking is The Women you spend your life with for almost Fifteen years " as Madhu's Father Malik glares at her as Roop and Ria smirks ...Unable to take it Madhu leaves to her room to come back frowning "Where are my things?" ..."Oh Dear it is in your Room" Roop tells her lovingly "It is not" She snaps back at her ..."Oh Child it is in the room where you & Ria had been sharing for years now" She fakes a smile ..."How much do you act? Sharing?" She busts out as Mr.Malik Slams his hand on the table "Just Shut up Madhu ..How could you even treat her like this? She is your mother who gave your love and care when your own mother wasn't here" .. Madhu answers back seething "Care and Love?...Do you know how do they treat me ?" ..

.'Madhu what did I ever to do you my child?..Why do you want to make me bad In front of your father? " She fakes tears as she starts sobbing..."I am just stating facts" Madhu raises her voice as Mr.Malik loses his temper ends up slapping Madhu as he spats venomously "This is What happens when you raise someone else's child as your own" as Madhu's eyes goes wide horrified as Roop and Ria gapes and Simultaneously asks "She is not your Child?" as Ria and Roop look at each smirking smiling inwards ...as Madhu look numbed The man who is in front of her ? Whom she had thought as her father?..How could he? Without a word Flabbergasted She leaves to her room taking out her mother's picture with her She moves out of the house as Roop Shouts from behind as Madhu hears Mr.Malik Warn them "Don't you dare let her in " but Roop comes running as she faked her tears as She hugs Madhu murmuring loudly "She cannot leave the house like this"... but as She pulls Madhu close and Whispers "That's right when you leave everything will fall back in place "She smirks as Madhu did not respond instead she walks out of the place she had lived her life..She walks out of the place where she had been told she did not belong..

The Nature Witness the indifference Happen to Our Dabbang Cinderella as It starts thundering..raining heavily ...As Madhu soaks in tears as She fell on the Ground crying "I am not his blood.." she shouts loudly as she cocoons herself in the middle of the road hugging her mother's photo close to her chest as She remembers a Memory of her playing with her mother and family happily when she small .."Why mama?" She cries .."Why?"..."How could Paa think that you would Cheat on him?..."...as She stood up determined as She gives her call to Mr.Kundra through her new brought cell for cheaper rate "Is the Offer valid?" she makes out from the sound that Mr.Kundra is smiling "Always your welcome"...

Sultan Falls on the bed as He thought about Dipali's words that his true form is hidden within himself as He takes a frame close to his bed as He runs his hands through them as He smiles sadly ..The Picture was two boys about 12 years hugging a 10 year old as they posed to the picture squealing.

Mukund was Shocked as He thought about the Girl who had kissed him ..He had Many Female fans ..This wasn't the first time someone had kissed him but it felt different He did not know why "Trishna " he whispers as his lips curved up .

"Bittuji Make arrangements "Mr.Kundra Orders as Bittuji nods and takes his leave.

"Everything is Gonna change Come and See for yourself at The Mansion" The Cousins receive a text which is enough for them to drop their works and to head to the mansion. Madhu stands In front of the Kundra Mansion in the Rain as She closes her eyes asking her maa mentally "It it okay Maa for me to stay here?" ...Just then Bittuji arrives with an umbrella asking her to lead the way ...Cinderella Officially enters the Place With her three Prince's as They Slow Walk from behind her one by one ..

Once Madhu is In Bittuji Tells her "One Condition."NO DATING ANYONE IN THE MANSION".

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Nice update
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A well-written update . You are a good writer. No need to think twice to put your thoughts on the net pages.😊
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Nice fantastic superb update dear
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fantastic update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice update.Madhu entered kundra mansion.Waiting for the next part.Thanks for the PM.
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