Mortal Promises!#T6!*UPDATED CH64@PG 125 ||23rd Nov 2021 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
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happy that you are updating!!! 😃
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Part 20 -26

Dadi maa character is amazing .Her plan work on maaneet and she finally see bold side of their romance and taken it positively. Maan is full of life around geet. I wish sameera was also take things positively. Maaneet romance is full on in party and obviously it makes sameera jealous but i didnt like the way sameera thought about geet as gold digger. The problem with sameera is her delusional thoughts when maan was drunk in holy party hug her she think people say truth in drunk condition same like in her drunk condition she thinks maan call her jaan.After helping sam in her state hope she dont think like that maan is with her at night.Dev is misinterpret maan and sammera seeing them together.Geet is so caring towards sameera hope she dont hurt geet.UFFF this naintara is so creepy try to impress her boyfriend brother and take sympathy by using geet and dev.Aik sameera kam this jo yeh bhi agai. dev not deserve Nt he should break up with her and find someone better. geet burning hand incident shake maan he cant see geet in pain.he is feeling helpless want to be geet all the time.love this possessive side of maan. hahaha geet is so cute and her expression when maan wake her and all present in her room. Annie and geet relationship is very nice i want to see more of them in future. Oh come on now sameera is jeolous with annie and dadi care for geet. This purposal acting scene of dev and geet is creating strom in sam mind and she cant let it go easily because she perceive wrongly and i am 100% sure she will use it against geet in front of maan to degrade geet.with the conversation between sam and her mom i conclude that sam father is very possessive of sameera and may be in future he may has important role in maaneet life as story progress or may create problem for maaneet i just have a hunch about him while reading.As usual maan and geet romance and nokjhok is so full of life.

26-30

The best part of this story is that maaneet childhood memories written beautifully love the way maan care geet in past and even in present. Their LOVE is so unique and pure. Oh sameera saw maaneet closeness and it will shake her badly. Initially I thought sameera is calm and composed girl will face situation patiently but no i was wrong she is aggressive in nature when it comes to maan and her love. After seeing maaneet closeness she should understand maan love for geet but no she will take it as physical attraction. Finally maan told dadi maa about his love for geet now see what will dadi maa plan for maaneet wedding.Maan want to get married as early as possible. Dev and geet go to cafe as per their plan and maan and sameera also there. So here we go sameera defiantly hate geet and consider her double crosser. Maan is shocked to see geet their but i know he will trust geet but he will not understand current scenerio. Hope sameera dont do work like jalti per tilli dalna.Dev and geet dance can make maan uneasy because if his possessive nature. Maan trust geet and dont want to get hurt by her question . Geet herself tell him everything. Maan and geet fight over their concerns regarding their friendship with dev and sam. Maan is so confident that sam not loves him which is going to be proving so wrong in future. I hope and wants that in further story there is no separation track and hatred and huge misunderstanding between maaneet because it will destroy the essence of the MP, their trust on each other is most amazing i dont want it to end it ever.

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31-40

Dev is thinks that maan and sam together and that's good geet don't get upset his assumption about maan and sam as she knew the real picture. Wow maan is awesome he arrange everything for geet and her friend meetup.Whe he was going to australia i have a hunch something might take place regarding sam and maan seems quite disturb when geet called him. geet is feelings depicts beautifully her guilt with maan fight then her excitement seeing maan back home. Maan is looking so aloof and distract something weird must happened .WOW i love the relationship of geet and dadi maan. Sam confesses her love for maan in Australia a big shock for maan. Sam is going manic day by day like seriously she thinks if she throws herself on maan he will accept her. Her heart and mind is not in normal state to understand maaneet love. Maan is also getting irritated with her and her acts. Poor geet her monthly cycles and maan behavior take a toll on her she is very distrub.LOL love the geet tigress avatar she is really angry with maan and he is handling her anger with love and care. Love the way maan call her doll. I dont know what will geet reaction when she will get to know of sam purposal. hhaha shasha is another churail for geet. Geet is so innocent like a child and mature like a women i lover her shades of character. Maaneet romance is out of this world so different in this story. Maan knows each and everything about geet her antics, her favorites and her growing condition and her pain during puberty. Maaneet 7 anniversary with red and white roses blooming beautifully with their romance. Oh now I get why maan is uneasy with dev and geet closeness because of dev childhood prank or stunt with geet as maan is very possessive for geet. I hope dev will not fall for geet beacuse of naintara. Geet is really a cute devil and she made MSK to confess his love wow good job geet. Maan describe pyaar and ishq notion in a dreamy way. Geet is so pampered by maan in ts full way. Likes the gift choice of geet for maan .I can't wait to read maan birthday and their wedding announcement. Maan is really a diverse man with unique personality which sam fail to understand.This is maan good move to behave normally with sam and watch her closely before telling geet everything. But sam is sam uff i hate the way she uses dev name to provoke maan against geet. She really need a psychologist.Geet is calm now and feeling guilty on bursting maan on sam matter thats good geet mind is clear regarding sam. MISTY is geet name and this stupid sam thinks geet snatch her name right huhh. Geet is such a angel and sam thinks her of some attention seeker or doing fake drama of her illness. The flashback of australia, sam thinks geet is after maan from childhood come on women use some sense in you. Maan always turned down the every high hope of sam thats good for her.New character Ayan he seems very jolly nature person and teasing maan by talking about geet purposal with his cousin.

41-50

All women are behind maan Yeh misha kia cheez thi so funny turn of story LOL. Misha and geet face off is most hilarious part of MP itni choti si geet tab bhi tigress thi aur aj bhi hai and maan and dadi maa try to control her anger.Sam should learn from misha experience otherwise geet will take sam class like in misha way and force sam to tie rahki on maan hand so fun to watch if this happened.Adorable scene between maaneet after misha incident in maan home. Awww maan and geet are inseparable I don't know how they live 5 years away from eachother. Maan is really a workaholic he should gave himself sometimes and geet as always start her nonstop chatterbox.Sam heart burnt with maaneet closeness and maan calling her baby and doll and even kiss her hand. Come on sam ab tu samj jao they are made for each other and maan is so happy around geet if Sam truly loved him then she should leave them in peace and to answer sam Q yes geet is really like a doll and so innocent like a baby which she will never understand in her delusional love or say obsessive love. Wow geet sneak in maan room to sleep with him and their some other reason behind it. The valentine flashback is so hilarious only maan can pull things this way hahaha and poor geet is in shock istmahi of valentines too good.The dialogues of maaneet romance ,funny fight, their msging and their argument are written beautifully. Geet is going Chandigarh and maan don't know let's see how he will react. Maaneet dates going smoothly when geet brust the bubble of her going. Maan is very pissed by sam issue already and want to tell geet but now she is going to chandigarh .Poor him feeling so irritated. Geet wants maan to come but he refused but he is geet maan he will defiantly come to her house as per her wish. Maan should tell dadi maa about sam as soon as possible she is not in right state. Sam is turning very creepy by her moves she can't win maan love by msg and top of that blackmailing him. After all he is MSK he knows his ways. Ayan coming to india hope he can handle the sam or say the mess sam will creates knowing her manic state and ayaan is write maan should tell geet as early as possible. Wow ayan ko sahi jhootey bare only geet remember things like that.Maan is losing patience with sameera and talk to dadi maa hope dadi maa can talk geet parents about alliance in this visit.Oh come on why dev is so interested to know sam and maan relation he should directly ask maan instead asking sam.rano maa and maan is cute pulling geet legs. Every one arrive in geet house especially sam not good feeling about this one.Cute geet jealouse with waitress behind maan in hotel LOL.They both are missing each other. uff in all between sam started her dirty politics on maan regarding geet as if maan dont geet na.Sam ka kuch nhi hosakta maan is giving her tit fot tat come on women have some respect for yourself.Oh so sam heard dadi maa and rano maa conversation i think it is about maaneet alliance and sam here to destroy it. Maan and geet relationship is going beautifully but geet have concerns over physical intimacy in their relationship Geet is being maan wife wants to give every right to him. She should discuss with maan and remove her insecurities regarding this. So maan came to geet house and welcome with geet bold side. Geet is taking maan class and spill the beans of her and rano conversation regarding alliance. Finally the most awaiting moment dadi maa ask geet hand for maan.

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50-54

Geet parents are already likes maan for geet and said yes but wants to know maan decision. On the other love birds are engrossed in their romance and geet stop him. Geet always get shy with maan boldness and stop him but in his frustration say that in you are a bad wife which can make geet again fill with insecurity and hurt her. Even maan notice her look in her face he should ask her afterwards. haha like the way dadi maa pulled maan leg and stop his drama. Maan told his feelings towards geet to her parents clearly sooon their will be wedding bells.Maan is trying to manaofying geet and she give him hard time. Some sense in dev and he talk directly with maan about his liking and maan clear his mind.oh good i was wrong dev is not in love with geet even know maan liking towards geet. Lets see what will maan talk to dev about naintara must be some story behind.Vicky is so cute such a dramey baaz now everyone will know about maaneet thanks to vicky and vege table briyani scene so funny and geet get embarrassed in front of dev and vicky by challenging maan. Some childhood memories for maan and geet just like nostaligia. Their loves blooming more and more by reach passing day. SO their is surprised roka of geet and maan parents are also come to welcome them. Poor geet in shock and want to dress up properly. UH OH sam is burning in rage let see what will she do. Dadi maa is very intelligent lady she knows how to handle sam and her behavior but how will she get to know about her that is supersizing.hmm so rajveer is the one who broke sam heart.He is so creepy and geet and maan give him befitting reply.When geet know of rajveer she turn into tigress and shock sam also.I feel bad and pity on sam until he will not turn typical witch like maan is mine n all.Because of rajveer she is not willing to accept another heart break. She is so fool to use rajveer reason to make maan attention towards her but maan do the right thing by maintaining some distance. Sam should realize that geet is jem of a person. Geet will get hurt when she get know how sam thinks about her.So sam thought to destroy maaneet happiness by coming her but thats good she stop herself but still sending maan msg during roka is so absurd. Ahan so maan and sam have already a drastic fight with each other and thats how dadimaa know.So good sam let dev and geet trump card out to provoke maan and maan is definatly not believing her knowing dev and geet but sam is disgrace herself in front of maan by putting allegation on geet character. Maan should take her to hospital.i dont sam will do things like that totally destroying her garce and now she want to teach a lesson to maan coz she things he betray her. She is willing to destroy maan and her friendship. She is turning more manic maan should tell her geet and even his parents about her to stop her planning. Wow maaneet roka is done and they are very happy and hope that they will get married in early mohrat. Maan is so happy and so romantic with geet.

This story progress with so much creativity and there is no loop hole in it.I am want to see naintara scenario and sam dad role in this story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 55

OH WOW SO HOT AND PASSIONATE UPDATE MAAN IS TOO BOLD😳
In his passion maan superize geet and she get nervous and shy😉
geet is so cute she unintentionally hiss at maan and maan thought he hurt her. Maan should first listen to geet.This is the problem with maan when he saw geet is slight pain he got shaken.Geet is afraid that she hurt by her foolish act.
ohkay now they are in delhi and geet is remembering this event.
Geet is naive in physical intimacy matter and pinky sam and her friends talk can lead her to some other conclusion even when maan prank with her she get afraid in her heart.They should talk about it openly because anyone can manipulates geet especially sam.So maan call geet to walk and she get all shy due to annie and pinky teasing.Now she again thought she hurt maan.
Precap is interesting maan is to tell geet about sam issue.Lets see how will geet react hope she will understand maan position.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice part
wen will this samera keep her mouth shut she is just making me mad with constant interfaring just hate her
oh no girls teasing geet n she is nervous
maan nt realizing gert delima n felt hurt
now that monkey samera will be happy to see maaneet fight bcz of her 😡
oh no precap is scary
finally the truth how will geet react i m going to kill that samera 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hottt n passionate update. Maan is out off control ...but geet stop him going further.
Maan feels that he hurt geet by his advances. N geet thought she hurts maan by stopping him... misunderstanding between them...
Precap is very interesting...
Update next chapter soon dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ok thank you for pm
Awesome update
Passionate and hot
Geet became shy and nervous
He thought he hurt his Misty
Ohh chery on cake
Girls talking about relationship
Geet felt so gushy and shy with all this
Maan came to talk with her but in her shyness she just snapped at his advancement think he came to for something else
Ops be get disappointed and hurt which actually she thinks
Maan never take his mooh words on heart
Ok
Teaser is something really not good
Maan think that geet misunderstood him
I am dam sure she doesn't
I think she hurt think he gives explanation to her
Think she didn't trust him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hoping that your mood improves soon Iptida!!
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