MG FF. I Own You. Thread 2. Pg. 1. - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats for new story
nice prologue
Waiting for updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I don't know how I missed this story of your. So far everything looking nice. Cant wait to read part one. Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulation for starting new story😊
prologue seem very painful from both sides.I think this is prologue of maan and geet.
Interesting character sketch
Maan is dark character but don't know what is the intensity of his darkness in his character.
Geet character sketch depicts her loneliness and helplessness
Lets see what other character role in the story.

Can't wait to read the further story.



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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Nice teaser
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I Own You
Part. 1.

A man was driving his jeep and with him his right hand was with him, they are going to hp for business purpose as he want to get land over there and he know he can get what he want by hook or crook. Adi look at his boss who was in his thought and he prays in his heart.

Ad. Please God here I don't want to face MSK wrath please God sir mood remain normal which is tough thing (thinking of this he closed his eyes. But Maan was thinking about the promise he did with dadi who was on death bed that he will marry soon but least he was so busy in business that he didn't have time to think about that but now he will fulfill his dadi wish he never break any of his promise and he thought about the girl whom he will marry.


M. Sorry dadi I know I am late in by fulfilling my promise but you don't worry soon I will marry as you know I have been with many girls but there was no girl whom should be best for MSK but don't worry I will find that girl. But I want girl who's life should be according to me also she will be in my control as if I say it's a day then she will say it's a day also if I say it's night then without thinking twice she say it's night and she never argue with me whatever I give her she will be happy and for her my name, fame doesn't matter but I will be centre of her world/life (thinking of this he smirk.
Maan was driving his car but then Adi woke up he look at Maan who was continuously driving the jeep from last few hours then gaining come courage he said.

Ad. Sir you must be tired if you give permission can I drive now (listening to Adi Maan come out of thought then he said him.
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M. Hhmm Okk you can drive (saying this he stop the jeep as he stop his bodyguards also stop their car, he come and sit on front seat then Adi start to drive but then after few minutes Adi look at Maan who was reading file also looking at his mobile seeing this Adi look front and thought.

Ad. Why sir is like this doesn't he get tired and all say he work like a machine also he heartless yes he work like a machine but he had golden heart yes I am saying because I know him as because of me he almost lost million dollars deal as that day early in morning I lost my uncle who was my everything but he didn't yell at me also understanding my situation he give me time for myself and I can't forget that. He hate those who hurt him or try to destroy him as there will be something in his past which made him like this but I don't know what is his past as from last 6 years I am working with him also that time he was rude but after his Dadi death which happened 3 years ago after that he totally changed him as he become more rude and arrogant also ruthless not only for others but also he didn't care about himself (but he come of his thought when Maan call him and said him.

M. Adi are the project papers ready also what about that land (Adi look at him and said him.

Ad. Yes sir project papers are ready but about the land that munshi jii said that he will tell you by himself (Maan look at him and then nodded his head. As after few hours they were in guest house where Maan and Adi with his guards were staying.

Other side in girls college all girls were laughing, playing and enjoying time with each other but there in small class there a girl was siting who was studying but when she tried to write something but got pain in her hand and because of this her eyes become moist then she start to blow air on her hand but her hand was held was someone else that make her scared and when she saw the person that make her relax as that was not another then her teacher Neha. She took Geet hand then start to put cream on her hand then ask her.

N. Now how this happened (Geet give her small smile then said her.

G. Mam Jii woh accidentally I burnt my hand (Neha give her small smile seeing this Geet lower her eyes but then her teacher kiss on her forehead and said her.

N. Now take of Geet yourself as I will be not here to take care of you as now my all time will for my baby (her miss said touching her stomach and seeing this Geet had tears in her eyes also before it fall from her eyes she clear it then ask her miss.

G. Mam Jii I pray to God to give you and your baby all happiness which you always give me (her miss Neha smile at her also felt bad for this little girl but then Geet ask her happily) mam Jii what is marriage and when will baby will come (her mam Neha smile at her then said her.

N. Geet baby will in come in few months but marriage is sacred bound in which God bound us, this bound is for life time where two strangers become one as they not only share their happiness but also stand with their partners in his or her hard phase of life. We girls give ourselves to our husband from where we become one and then from girl we become women then become mother. You know Geet we women had powers to handle these men violence also our elders say that our husband are our God and what he say that is right we had to follow what ever he say also never stop him loving us so for that we have to face his torture also for him it could be his right but for us we have to used to that pain and never stop him torturing us (her miss smile sadly but few things Geet understand also other things make her scared.

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Edited by T.Peru - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Friends enjoy the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Maan seems like very dominating person who likes things in his control.He want a wife that can be mold in his ways.He is going HP i think where he met geet and marry her and fullfil his dadi wish. As geet age is 17 years it is easy to mold her.Adi is very fond of maan.Maan lost his family members that made him ruthless and arrogant.Geet burnt hand tells another story.She may had suffered a lot. Neha is very kind teacher and she gives geet concept of marriage.Let see how much geet grasp it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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so maan is going to get girl in this trip as per his wish
geet's teacher love geet like mother but she is going away to give birth her baby

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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice update... maans view about wife is really scary. he wants to control his wife and dominate her. geet is very innocent and she is being tortured by someone... he teacher is taking care of her pain. how will geet and maan meet,,,,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start
Maan want to marry a girl who listen to him blindly
Geet is very innocent and being tortured by some one
Waiting for maneet meet

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