Devil's Bride Samina ff Chapter 60 on page 144 - Page 17

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OMG!! She said he's an AIDS patient🤣
That girl was melodramatic man.. And the advice she gave Naina was just hilarious🤣 but, well.. She wouldn't hv to do that😉

I actually thought Sameer would challenge Naina to dress like that girl☺️
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Like anjali said even i thought he would challenge her to dress like that and then we could have some of their intimate moments 😉 but anyways waiting for some romantic update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update ...This Naina is total different ...
From start I have seen that Sameer has feelings for Naina but not able to pin point though... But I was not able to understand Naina...she loved some one else...I am sure ...you will show the mystery behind this and actually some where she like Sameer but as he had no feeling...may be gave up...very long back and hope her friend (Sameer's Sister) is aware of this feeling...

Please please update soon...



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Hahahaha! You are doing a swell of a job with this one! It's entertaining and gripping and every time I see an update my insides do a somersault! Hahahaha! HIV hahahaha! That cracked me up but serves him right given the torture that he is trying to put naina through is disgusting, especially when there's no fault of hers. He needs to be taught quite a few lessons before he actually realises his wrongs. Sameer's bitterness is well ingrained and sometimes it's hard to fathom his hatred here. He sure does have feelings for naina , somewhere down the line he is attracted to her physically and in the earlier updates too it's quite evident that he is jealous because she has the hots for some other guy. Then why this? I guess he needs to get a reality check because it is not hatred that pulls him to her but sheer love that he harbours deep down within . Am sure that too would come to the fore given your brilliance in the art of imagination and I have full faith in your prowess as a story teller. You have me terribly hooked and booked.
Naina's bold avataar is something am loving. For every lewd move she has a befitting answer and every time it's leaving mr maheshwari stumped and badly bruised. I would love to see more of such bruises come to him. He is shocked but am locked with this naina! This naina definitely has it in her to live up to the challenge of this marriage and tame this wild bull straight by locking horns with him taking him head on !

Lovely part
Will.be eagerly waiting for the next part
Please please update soon enough.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This update was awesome...This Naina is so fun, bindass😆 Sameer, a HIV patient, hehe🤣and that girl, so much drama but still so much fun...
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Posted: 7 years ago
lol
Naina ne kya bhaga kiya uss ladki ko! Ekdum gutsy move!!

🤣Sameer will not be able to find any willing partners after the news of his AIDS gets out.. banda aur bhi frustrated hone wala hain
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Again it was a nice update.. really liked it!! 👍🏼

Sameer is a HIV patient.. that was hilarious 🤣

I'm loving this Naina day by day.. 😊

That girl was total drama.. it was so much fun to read 😆

Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

Hahahaha! You are doing a swell of a job with this one! It's entertaining and gripping and every time I see an update my insides do a somersault! Hahahaha! HIV hahahaha! That cracked me up but serves him right given the torture that he is trying to put naina through is disgusting, especially when there's no fault of hers. He needs to be taught quite a few lessons before he actually realises his wrongs. Sameer's bitterness is well ingrained and sometimes it's hard to fathom his hatred here. He sure does have feelings for naina , somewhere down the line he is attracted to her physically and in the earlier updates too it's quite evident that he is jealous because she has the hots for some other guy. Then why this? I guess he needs to get a reality check because it is not hatred that pulls him to her but sheer love that he harbours deep down within . Am sure that too would come to the fore given your brilliance in the art of imagination and I have full faith in your prowess as a story teller. You have me terribly hooked and booked.

Naina's bold avataar is something am loving. For every lewd move she has a befitting answer and every time it's leaving mr maheshwari stumped and badly bruised. I would love to see more of such bruises come to him. He is shocked but am locked with this naina! This naina definitely has it in her to live up to the challenge of this marriage and tame this wild bull straight by locking horns with him taking him head on !

Lovely part
Will.be eagerly waiting for the next part
Please please update soon enough.

comments like this boost me to write more and more I really love your comment you made my day with this glad you people are liking the story a lot I feel blessed 😊 thank you for your support and will come back with another update tomorrow
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: moumita04

Again made it today... Hahaa..!! 😆😆

Just so you know, I will not be able to do regular comments next week, because I will be on vacation...

Now for the update.. I am loving this Naina... 😃

She managed to leave the Devil speechless... Hahhaa.. Do you know what I loved the most? The reverse psychology she played on the topic of making love... She decoded him so perfectly... He is portraying to be evil, but in true nature he isn't... So even after she offered herself, he couldn't take it ahead and accepted defeat...
Ah, when she rubbed her fingers on his lips... ☺️

The game of chess in onn... he wanted to fire her, she didn't let him... He decided to humiliate her, make her jealous... He ended up being humiliated himself... The office sequence was light and comedic... no hatred... just the enjoyment of bugging each other... Loved it...!!

Looking forward to more...! 😳


I would be sad if you will not comment you like reading my chapter I like reading your comment you wait for my update I wait for your comment 😆 your review sounds like a Imdb review to me and I love it helps me to understand how story is going but I can understand your problem but when u will come back give a big comment I will be super happy till then enjoy your vacation😊

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