Devil's Bride Samina ff Chapter 60 on page 144 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: moumita04

The update is amazing dear... and heart-wrenching...

There is so much pain in both of them... and it does look like everything is a misunderstanding... whether natural or created by someone is a mystery yet...

Sameer hates women because of his mother and Pooja... but that doesn't justify him bringing different women everyday.. .although he loves Naina deep down, so the daily affairs seem to be a facade of his arrogant self...

Naina, poor dear, she is under so much stress... and she is pregnant... bearing all those taunts and insults of being characterless... but they say that once you lose everything, you have no fear left... that exactly seems to be the case here... She lost the relationship, her husband, and I do feel she loves him dearly... but now she is on the verge of losing her child and no mother would bear that... so the harsh words spill out of her...

I am touched by the underlying emotions in this story... It is difficult to say hurting words to someone you love... you end up hurting yourself somehow.. and they are both in this situation...

I am looking forward to read more eagerly...!!
As for Naina's ex-bf, I hope you bring in some new character... I don't think I can see anyone from MunDit as her ex... or you can use Sanjay Tibrewal from school... completely up to you... 😊

Please PM me for next update..!

Thank u so much for the comment and i m glad that you love the story line and plot will update regularly for sure and will give you all the answers you want through the story only 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: msdfan

It's really an amazing concept 👍🏼

I liked this part very much.. it was superb

So there is lot of misunderstandings between them..

I have a lot of questions in my mind.. hope so, will get soon that 😊

Looking forward to the next update..

Please update soon.. If possible please do PM me

For pms you can add me in your buddy list will surely pm you and thanks for the comment i m.glad you like it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

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Edited by acwriter - 5 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Thanx for the early update my dear
So now you are slowly unfolding the story ..
Well Naina is such a nautanki ..so sanjay is her dream boy ..no dear its Sameer ..wait and watch
Her boss is a human or a machine ..omg so much rukes and regulations ..poor Naina ..
Naina and her boss encounter was really nice to see ..
But who is he ?? Name ..
Well I think in next update you'll unfold it a little more ..
It was superb reading this update
Keep up good work dear

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Thanx for the early update my dear

So now you are slowly unfolding the story ..
Well Naina is such a nautanki ..so sanjay is her dream boy ..no dear its Sameer ..wait and watch
Her boss is a human or a machine ..omg so much rukes and regulations ..poor Naina ..
Naina and her boss encounter was really nice to see ..
But who is he ?? Name ..
Well I think in next update you'll unfold it a little more ..
It was superb reading this update
Keep up good work dear

Love
Laalchi reader

you are the first one to comment thank you for the comment i will try to update regularly
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Just read the prolouge and both the parts.
Nice storyline. Something unique and different.
Why do i have this feeling that her boss is none other than Sameer.
Edited by chaaru26 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
OK, so that's a flashback!!
Plz mention that in the beginning, it will make it convenient for the readers to understand that😊

So she dreams of Sanjay.. As in Tebru😆

Her boss was definitely a devil!! Aise kaun chhutti kaatta h yaar😡 Lekin Naina k karname bhi kuch kam nhi😆

Devil ka naam bhi reveal krdo😉

Hopefully this punishment brings devil n his employee close😉

Update soon
Edited by Anjali33 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Hey your writing is beautiful and very I interesting keeps one hooked. Please continue and update fast.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Naina's Boss is Sameer...please update soon...beautiful update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you for this late night treat...
So this update was a flashback..please do mention it..
Well if you have given such importance to the boss then I do have a feeling the devil aka boss is Sameer😉
No sympathising here🤪Naina's actions are such that she is inviting the punishments..ek hi din mein itna punishments😆
So Sanjay is her dream boy
Update soon!
Thanks for the pm.
Love,
Shreya
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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