Devil's Bride Samina ff Chapter 60 on page 144

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Sindhujalincy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow amazing different concept loved it looking forward for ur updates good luck😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Samainadeewani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Amezing dear ..

This plot is really attracting me like anything

The way you are very slowly planning to reveal the depth of the character is beautiful .. The confrontation between samaina was just Wonderful my dear .. Both have their own issues and grudges ..storyline is very promising ..

The update made me really anxious to know their back story ..

The happenings in their past.. When they were tied together for life long ..

Waiting for story to unfold ..it would be very nice if you update soon ..

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

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So there's a lot of misunderstandings to be cleared amongst the soon to be parents

Bacche k ane se pehle hi uske liye lad rhe h

What effects would these fights hv on their unborn child!!

But I hope this baby would bring them close n make them sort their issues😳

Update asap..you can update as per your convenience but I would love it if u update twice a week😳

Edited by Anjali33 - 8 years ago

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acwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
Amezing dear ..
This plot is really attracting me like anything
The way you are very slowly planning to reveal the depth of the character is beautiful .. The confrontation between samaina was just Wonderful my dear .. Both have their own issues and grudges ..storyline is very promising ..
The update made me really anxious to know their back story ..
The happenings in their past.. When they were tied together for life long ..
Waiting for story to unfold ..it would be very nice if you update soon ..

Love
Laalchi reader

thank you for the comment glad you love the update I will update soon

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acwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anjali33
So there's a lot of misunderstandings to be cleared amongst the soon to be parents
Bacche k ane se pehle hi uske liye lad rhe h
What effects would these fights hv on their unborn child!!

But I hope this baby would bring them close n make them sort their issues😳

Update asap..you can update as per your convenience but I would love it if u update twice a week😳

thank you for the comment glad you like it well story have many more things to unfold and I will try to update daily or soon as I can😊

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MSK04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

The update is amazing dear... and heart-wrenching...

There is so much pain in both of them... and it does look like everything is a misunderstanding... whether natural or created by someone is a mystery yet...

Sameer hates women because of his mother and Pooja... but that doesn't justify him bringing different women everyday.. .although he loves Naina deep down, so the daily affairs seem to be a facade of his arrogant self...

Naina, poor dear, she is under so much stress... and she is pregnant... bearing all those taunts and insults of being characterless... but they say that once you lose everything, you have no fear left... that exactly seems to be the case here... She lost the relationship, her husband, and I do feel she loves him dearly... but now she is on the verge of losing her child and no mother would bear that... so the harsh words spill out of her...

I am touched by the underlying emotions in this story... It is difficult to say hurting words to someone you love... you end up hurting yourself somehow.. and they are both in this situation...

I am looking forward to read more eagerly...!!

As for Naina's ex-bf, I hope you bring in some new character... I don't think I can see anyone from MunDit as her ex... or you can use Sanjay Tibrewal from school... completely up to you... 😊

Please PM me for next update..!

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Shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

A fight has given birth even before the baby's birth but I would love to see how this baby will bring them closer too as I can sense this baby will play a big role in Samaina's life- for better or worse, let's see

A pregnant lady should never put to stress and the reverse is happening here..

The consequences of this series of misunderstandings is what I would love to read and how they overcome it😳

If Sam was tieing the knot with Pooja, then how come Naina became pregnant with Sameer's child? I understood it is a forced marriage but to be pregnant, intimacy takes place isn't it? Or did love happen during this phase of forced marriage and then they made love and suddenly this so called affair came up?

Sorry for the predictions😆I will slowly wait for you to unreveal the mysteries and their backstory..this story is keeping me intrigued

And about the character to be introduced as Naina's ex, I would suggest one of the bet boys in the show, Pankaj😆or maybe introduce a new character so we will see him only in how the your story potrays him..your wish dear

Do update soon dear! Thank you so much for the PM...

Love,

Shreya

P.S. What's your name?😊

Edited by Mayashika - 8 years ago