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Posted: 7 years ago
So Geet is from another time or dimension. She does not meet anyone else apart from him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome double treat of an update. So its spanning between 2 different time periods...And Geet is not of his time...But why is she & Maan always led to one another? Is it from their past lives? How are they connected? Not just Maan I am also too curious buddy...About Geet's appearances and disappearances:):):) And what she will answer to him...Will she bring him with her to her world? After his masterpiece is completed? Buddy my mind is running with so many many questions...But its a very beautiful story and superbly written buddy:):):)
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Posted: 7 years ago
I too feel feel mysterious abt geet n u titled it as last song so I'm having doubt
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Posted: 7 years ago
Poor maan is curious about geet..
But geet only travels in time to make memories with maan..
Maan wants and searching geet among all...
Maan is confused and frustration buddy...
Waise buddy aren't u missing ys forgetting something...
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Posted: 7 years ago



Amazing, lovely n wonderful update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Two Beautiful Chapters

Maan is drawn to Geet though she is a mystery to him and he tries finding out
about her but she seems not to give in
her music the way she plays the piano , Maan really likes that and he enjoys it too
he can't stop thinking about her as he tried locating her but she is neither a teacher nor student
and he is confused especially by the fact that he is not allowed to tell anyone about her
and the moment someone comes she disappears
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 4
Maan met geet n asked her about her whereabouts but she doesn't reveal anything..

She heard him play n left when Aarushi came .

She went to a old building , n entered into a portal.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 5 ..
Interesting..

Thanks for the pm .

Thanks for the update..
Continue soon.

Maan was thinking who geet was as she was neither a student nor a faculty.

He heard her play n he was getting pulled towards her .

He thinks it to be his curiosity. But I think it to be something else .. I guess there is some kind of cosmic connection between them.

She again without answering his queries .

She says she is not from this time n they were not supposed to meet.

N she is playing with time which is a crime.

But I say that if they are not meant to meet then why are they in each other's dreams.
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Posted: 7 years ago








Thank you for your support😃😃








Part 6


Last Meeting



Maan looked out of his balcony . The night breeze always soothed him , but somehow he was stuck with the thoughts of Geet . If shes not from this Academy how can she get here and roam so freely and why the music room , why she left before evening . "I should invite her to diner tomorrow , I'm really curious now . Who are you. He thought before heading to the bed .



Dream
Maan stood in a beautiful garden . He looked around and found hes in this very academy . He roamed further to spot a mansion there . "Was this here from the start, he thought . "May be I did not notice. He went near it to see a beautiful girl basking in the glory of the morning sunlight , "Excuse me, he called her . She did not answer as he went closer , he was surprised to see it was Geet . "Geet , you live here, how come I have never seen this place , what's going on. She turned around with a teary smile . And soon in the next moment everything burned down to ashes .

He woke up sweating badly . "What was that. He looked around to find himself in his room. "Was that a nightmare or a premonition . Everything looked so real and Geet ... He was worried now for her .






He waited for the morning to arrive .





Geet's present



Geet woke up and found herself in her room , "What if he comes to know about me . No I can not see him broken . I should distance myself from him . The time is nearing. She thought back when she discovered this piano , when she played it she was taken to that different time. At first it only took her to the academy seeing how much it has changed and then the date told her that its not her time . Later it took her to him , his concerts and wherever he was . Her power of traversing dreams pulled her to him and then she did what she wanted and made him join here where she was or could have been . She lied down and awaited the morning .


Next Day

Maan was taking the exam . All his students were good but none was near Geet . She was exceptional . As all of his students finished the tests he applauded them . "Very good all of you , I'm happy that you people are serious about learning music , this attitude of yours will make good musicians and composers out of you all , all the best . As for your results , I will be giving them to you by the end of this fortnight . Have a good winter vacation then. All his students wished him back and left the music room . He then sat down to mark his students on their compositions . They were good but some were needing improvement . He sighed after finishing his work . He heard footsteps and turned to the door to find Geet standing there . "You are back . I was thinking if you could join me for diner today , if you don't mind, he asked her . "Yes sure, she answered . Maan was delighted . "Lets go then. "Umm ... what about the song you were composing is it ready , won't you be wasting time entertaining me, she asked . "No its okay , its done almost . I have another request to you.



"What is it. "Would you please ...please sing you song when I play my music at our annual function.






"I ...I can't , I'm sorry, she apologized . "Its okay , I'm sorry for being so abrupt, he said sadly . Geet looked at him dejected , "You can record my voice if you wish , but I don't think I can be present in person there.






"Is it fine by you , but I have to give credit for your voice so can I announce your name, Maan hoped she will say yes but she denied , "No I told you not to tell or ask anyone about me , remember. "But why. "Its a secret."Why is everything a secret about you . I want to know about you more. "You will know everything , are you going to keep questioning me or give me something to eat too , I'm hungry, Geet said diverting the topic . "Okay I guess you won't tell me anything no matter what . Let's go.

"Umm ...I might be seen if I walk around the faculty dorms, she hesitated . "Don't worry Arushi and Samar have gone out for day in the neighboring city , so theres no one around, he said assuring her . She breathed a sigh of relief . "Then I'm in ,she said finally walking behind him . "Your house is really neat and clean . How do you get time to do all the chores from that busy schedule, she said looking around . "It takes no time , I like taking care of my things. "You need any help . Not much but I can cook a little too. "Nah , I will do it myself , you just make yourself comfortable, He said . After a few minutes he bought out the food . Geet looked at the delicacies and then to him , "Please have it . I don't know how it turned out as I'm used to living alone.








Geet took a bite and grinned , "Its delicious . Thank you for this. They ate and had a little chat with Maan revealing more of himself but Geet talked the minimum . They bid bye , Maan made her promise to come by tomorrow and listen to his Sonata before he plays it in the annual function . Maan watched her leave disappearing into the mist .
Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
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Thank you for your support 😃







Last Part and Epilogue

Together with You







Geet's Present


She came back to look around and was in her time. I broke a rule again', she thought ."I can not fulfill our promise Maan , I'm sorry. She thought about the time she got this piano . This piano was found by her in this old storeroom . She found that incomplete music piece with it. At first she tried but did not succeed , but later learned to master the piece . As she played it she came to this new world . Later she recognized the place . as her place but not her time, she knew it after going around a little . She understood that something has happened. Then strangely she got to the places where Maan used to be , by her dreams mostly and through this music too .








She had been his fan even though he did not show she existed , so just for once she wanted to let him know she did and that is why she called him to this very place but now what . "Its hard to let go when you are here , but I know its time to do so as there is no other way . You can't change anything anymore.

Maan's Present

The next day he waited for the arrival of Geet but she never came , he thought may be she is stuck up but then it happened the day after too . He started to miss her badly , it was then he realized that he has started to fall for her. His condition was getting worst and now he was getting worried . He fell asleep in the music room itself while giving the final touches to his piece .





Dream


He was again in that beautiful garden and he again heard the same song Geet hummed . He started walking towards the direction , he saw her there standing in the middle of those flowers and someone with her , someone familiar , he called out , "Geet. He heard her say something to the person with her and as soon as the person went she turned around just like the last time, "I'm sorry Maan, I could not fulfill my promise , Goodbye. And she was gone in a blinding flash .



"Geeettt, Maan woke up panting realizing hes in the music room . "Maan, are you alright, he saw Arushi and Samar looking down at him worriedly .








"I'm scared for her , I looked for her everywhere and now I can't find her , what should I do. "Who are you talking about Maan . Can we help, Samar asked . "Geet...Her name is Geet, Maan spoke . "What...What did you say, Arushi asked . "Geet...Please tell me if you know her, Maan asked . "Do you mean Geet Handa, Arushi asked . Maan nodded , "Yes do you know where I can find her.








"Maan is this some sort of joke , if it is I don't like it because she was my best friend , I still regret not saving her, Arushi said breaking down . "What do you mean by that, Maan queried .









"Shes saying that because the Geet you are talking about died in an accident three years back, Samar said shocking him .








"No , it can't be true if that is so , then who have I been meeting all this time for one year now . You people are wrong shes alive . I have met her in my dreams then in reality , she was here all the time . Remember you asked if there was someone here , it was her, Maan revealed . Arushi searched her mobile and showed him a pic , "Is this the girl you have been meeting. "Yes that is her. "Shes dead Maan , she was your biggest fan , she always wanted you to join this academy her father built but then in an accident three years ago , she died in flames . I wish I was with her when that happened , but I was too late .Her father left this academy giving the responsibility to me and Samar . I was the only who asked Samar to fulfill Geet's last wish for you come to this academy.


Arushi remembered something , "Geet used to tell me something about a power she had though I never believed her but I guess she did have the power to traverse dreams. She said she used to watch you silently from afar and will reveal herself and bring you here to this academy. "Please Arushi , tell me where she lived in this campus , shes in trouble, may be we can save her and change her fate , I beg of you, Maan said desperately . Arushi nodded even if there was a slightest chance of what Maan told her to be true she will take this second chance to save her beloved friend . Samar consented as he wanted his wife to be happy . They went to the other side of the academy the same secluded area Geet went to . They went in and discovered everything was burned to ashes , but there they found a golden Piano . "How come this is not burned , they checked it and found the piece there which Geet played . "Its the same piece I heard her play . Let me see if this thing still works. He pressed the keys to check and it did work . He sat down and started playing this piece finding it similar to his piece , the last song. He read the title of this piece it was the same , first starting at a lower tempo he increased it , suddenly his surroundings started changing and he found himself in a huge room .



There he saw the person he has been waiting for desperately , "Geet, He said making her turn around .









"How come you are here, she asked nervous now . "Arushi told me , she wanted to save you , why you did not tell me anything. I wanted to tell you I love you and you decided to leave me. Before Geet could answer they heard the fire alarm , "Maan you should go , please I don't belong in the future but you have one there so let me succumb to my fate, she cried worried for him .







"No , you have a future with me , now come on Arushi and Samar are waiting for us, Maan said pulling her as the fire was now spreading they could Arushi's crying voice to save Geet . "Do you know how troubled she is once you are gone , you are lucky to get a second chance Geet , don't let it go , the future is waiting for you. She took his hand , she has seen herself how Arushi will cry and now she can't let her friend regret something which wasn't her fault it was an accident , Maan is right she has a future and she won't let it go . Maan played the piano but nothing happened . "You have to play it in a different way , wait, she said playing it , now the surroundings changed to the present and the room looked renovated . They heard a knock , "Geet dear hurry up , you will be late for your classes .Today you have to demonstrate the students together with Maan . She looked outside everything had changed shes a part of this future now .






She turned around to look at Maan . "You are a part of the future now Geet , lets start afresh, he smiled . "Its all because of you, she smiled.






Epilogue





Maan played the last song at the annual function it was a mesmerizing piece which was loved by the audience. The music was more appreciated when Geet's beautiful melodious song mixed with it , it looked like her song was for his melody just like she said in their first meet . It was strange as now Geet lost her power to traverse dreams , like she only had that as it lead to her destiny , Maan . Maan and Geet got married to have a beautiful future together. "Geet what are you thinking, Maan asked his wife. "I wonder from where that piano came from and why it always led me to you, She said . "I think the same too. Well it made us meet so I think whatever its purpose was was served ,He said . "I think so too but where do you think it went. "I guess to the rightful owner. Geet nodded resting her head on her husband's shoulder. Maan hugged his wife to himself.








The Piano disappeared and so did the mysterious sonata with the last song with it never to be found again .





In another time and place ,a man played the piano in a quiet mansion . "I composed it for you to save her as I could not. He looked at the piano, smiling, closing it moving out of his music room. As he left the Piano was touched by a beautiful hand , "I am always here Maan ".





Maan and Geet were blessed with a baby girl whom they named Prati,who filled their lives with happiness, glad to have found one another . Their musical journey of love had just begun and it continued to blossom for decades to come .

**********The End*****

So here I complete this story the next to be completed will be Beauty and the Priest and You got a Friend followed by Beautiful Stranger , please do give your honest reviews 😃😃






The Ending is of a parallel universe ...The Person playing the piano is Maan while Geet is deceased in his time ...I hope it makes it clear



Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago

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