AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68)- Page 12

Originally posted by: deekshitaamidal

Loved it Riya.

Excited for next update

Thank u so much 😊

Originally posted by: Reenaxavneil

Written so beautifully as usual. Thank u so much I'm blushing too, Blushing is a good thing, it increases blood flow to ypur facial skin 😉 I guess I've got second hand embarrassment from reading this, as if I just saw Neil and Avni's scenario with my own eyes. Totally taking it as a compliment.!

Thank u so very much dear.!
It means a lot to me.!
Keep reading and appreciating.!

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

update soon

Thank u so much.!
Will try my best.!

Originally posted by: sreekal

<font color="#6600cc">Awesome chapter dear ... Thank u so much buddy.! I am commenting for the first time ...actually I am silent reader...I can't resist my self from appreciating your work.. Aww, now this is a biggie.! I am so glad you decided to let me know your thoughts about the story and also about the fact that ur very first comment is for my story.! Satisfaction eh.!! .must say your stories are amazing...the way you express the emotions always leaves me spell bounded...you are a amazing writer indeed.. Awww, so sweet of u to say so.! Thank u so much for the compliment.! .pls update next chapter soon...waiting eagerly for the next update. Will try my best.! ..</font>

Hey buddy,

Thank u so very much for ur amazing words and for joining me on this journey.!

Looking forward to hear from u often.!

Much love

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Awsome

Thank u 😊

What are friends for 😆 I loved total leg pulling session and DD's reference to his chachu 😆 He would have not left until she surrendered but Shweta came to her rescue !

Firstly, ek bada wala SORRY; kaan pakadke sorry for being this late.🤔 Secondly, thankuu for this double treat.😳 Chapter 47 was a much needed update and a lighter one also.😃 I loved their cute nokjhok amidst their morning phone call. Both were so pre-occupied with each other's thoughts that it seemed they were just talking in person.😆 And that small small details that you mention are just amazing. I just loved how you wrote that news piece.👏 Not only Avni but also myself have read it more than thrice. And then comes DD with his encyclopaedic mind. Haha loved how Avni barely realise DD was actually there and then suddenly checked on herself.😆 Hmm Koi bohot kuch feel kar raha hai hamare Mr. Millionaire ke baare mein. Tabhi to sochu aisa kya special hai aajkal hawa mein, Are 'Love is in the Air' toh!❤️ Loved how she was being jealous without even realising it. Thanks to DD atleast she would think over it.😉

CONTEST RESULT


Hey Guys.!


You might have been expecting me today.! Right.?


I dont believe in disappointing, so yeah I am back with the much awaited Result of a little Contest i had organised few days back.


I had got a whooping total of 54 Enteries, much above my expectations.!



Thank you all for showing such enthusiam and putting up your efforts in writting those beautiful write ups.



I was amazed by the brilliant thoughts and ideas that greeted me in name of this participating enteries. So much, that i begun to see my own Story in new light.



But as the rule says, There will be only ONE WINNER.


That doesnt mean i cant quote a few more stories that ensured this to be a real tough decision for me.


It was amazing to know how you guys have explored so many different aspects of this story and came up with such contrating stories.


Few have written on Rhea's mystery, few on Abhisheikh and Neil's struggle om finding Avni, few on perfect Ending, few on Buddies gang. Beside's i have got so many options for names of AvNeil kids 😆😆 and the reasons to land up Neil in hospital so that Avni realises her love.!


There was this Particular write-up which was written with such a brilliant idea as an spin-off of AvNeil's story through Aakash's POV, citing the reason that Aakash has been a very close observant of the start of their journey. Utter Innovative.! @lalli36 hatts off buddy.


Then there was this one, which dealt with our AvNeil dealing with the trauma of their First Baby loss, how it had affected their relationship yet how they have managed to find each other again like true Soulmates.!!! Beautiful!! @Bhavss, well done buddy.!!


@princessva1 i loved how you explored Rhea's angle in AvNeil's life.


@Redrose The Registrar in hospital and preponement of Marriage by Avni herself, was a very good idea.


Having said that all, Lets come back to our Main Point.!


The Winner.!!!


She is none other than, @Avneill aka @cutieees


The girl must be confused which of her story won.! Actually she sent me 2, one of which is a winner story.!


So dont forget to catch up on the Winning Story which is updated on Page 1 of this thread.!


And yes i am gonna Edit this and use this in Novel. As promised.! 😉 This is very close my Vision for the Epilogue of this Story.!


Congratulations to the winner.!!!!


And to other participants, I hope this wasnt a waste of time and you might have got some good experience out of it.!


Cheerss.!!!


P.S. The Winning Story is Updated on PG 1 Of this Thread.


P.P.S Dont Forget to Have a Look at the latest Update Chap 48 on PG 13. The new one will come soon.!


Love
Riya

@docritu99