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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely Update
Finally maaneet met and Maan thought that its his imagination and Geet pinched him to made him realize her real self, eagerly waiiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3...
Awesome...

Thanks for the update..

Thanks for the pm...

Continue soon...

Maan accepted the challenge n took the job ..

He met Samar ..

Finally he met geet ...

This time for real ...

N he also got to know her name geet ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93


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Part 4

An Incomplete Melody






"So , now we are done with the introductions ,right , She said. "I forgot to introduce..., He said but was cut by her ,I know who you are and why you are here , so if you don't have anymore queries than shall we begin ".









"Huh...begin ...begin what ", Maan said confused. "Your practice what else that is what you here for ",She said pointing towards the piano . "Um...why are you here and how come you were in my dreams to ", He asked her . "You sure ask too many questions . Shhh...how I do what its a secret okay , I will tell you ",She said. "Are you a student here ? ...judging by your casual attire you can be a faculty but you look too young to be one ", He questioned again . "You can say in a way I am related to this ...but ...well forget it anyway I want to hear you play ...I am a huge fan of your melodies .Please could you play something for me ", She requested .




" Sure, I will ", Saying this he started playing one of his recent melodies which he was working on , but as it was incomplete he stopped abruptly . Geet heard the beautiful music but was startled by the abrupt stop. "Why did you stop ", Geet asked confused . "I am still working on it...I still can not find the missing pieces to this one, He said . "It is really beautiful. What is it called ",She asked. "The last song ", he said . "The last song ...great .She was about to ask more when they heard footsteps.








"Someone is coming this way , I have to leave ", She said panicking already preparing to leave . "Hey wait , where do you live , where are you from , there is so much I have to know about you, He said grabbing her hand. "Later , I will answer your every query but now I must go and please don't tell anyone I was here,Saying this she left.But..., She was gone before he could complete. He just looked at the direction she went when he heard a lady's voice he turned around to see a young lady there.









"Hello , you must be Maan , I am Arushi ,Samar's wife ,She introduced herself . "Hello , please to meet you ", Maan replied politely . "Samar told me to show you around and we can do it tomorrow. Well if you don't have any other plans today , why don't you join us for diner tonight , as you are still not settled. "I might be a bother , its okay I will find some other way ".




Arushi smiled ,There is no other way , there is no restaurant nearby , and no you won't be a bother , we are to work together , why don't we know each other and be friends.Maan did not know the meaning of having friends he had been lonely for long so he accepted the offer ,Thank you for inviting me , I will be there "."You have many fans , do you know..., She said. "Yeah , I heard this from many people , I am happy they like my music. "So what are you working at ".






"A new melody its not complete but I will play it in the annual concert once it is ",Maan replied . "That's great , be there for diner alright , I have to get going, She said before leaving . Maan found it a good decision to come here the people are cordial . Still every time he played the melody his mind went back to Geet . Who is she ? Geet on the other hand entered a secluded area , standing in front of an old building she opened a portal ,Here I go ", and she got into that and made sure to close it so no one knows. "I know what I am doing can alter a few things , but I couldn't help myself from meeting you ,and I am glad we met ".



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Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
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Part 5

Thinking of You





Next day , after school Maan found it strange that Geet was not one of the students nor anyone of the faculty ...so how did get here he wondered . He walked towards the music room and again heard that faint music coming from it .He went in only to see Geet again there , playing the music flawlessly .She looked serene playing the music , she was so lost that she did not notice Maan standing there . Maan was mesmerized hearing her music for some reason he was invariably drawn towards her , towards a stranger whom he knew nothing of , may be the curiosity is getting him drawn to her that is what he thought .







Geet stopped playing and turned to see him standing . "I..I am sorry , I did not notice you standing there sorry for using your piano ",She apologized .









"Its alright , you not only sing beautifully but you play well too , He said.



Thank you but I am not as good as you ".



"No you are perfect .Can I ask you something ", He asked .


Yes go ahead ".


Where are you from how come you are here but no where around in school , I thought you might be working or studying here but it don't seem to be the case, He asked .



"Umm...I can not answer that ", Geet said .




"Why not ".





"Its because its not the time ...leave that are you done with your song...may I hear it ", She avoided the topic . Maan let it go as she was not ready to reveal her secret to him.He started to play the music which she listened to calmly . "Its great ...so when can I hear the final piece "."Soon ", he answered . Maan wanted to know more about her but it seemed hopeless .

"I am sure this piece will be one of your masterpieces ".



Where did you learn to play the piano like that ", He inquired with the intention of knowing something about her .







"From my mother ", Geet answered .



"Was your mother a pianist too ...what was her name ".


No she wasn't ...



"Still you were playing like a professional Geet what was that song ...I have never heard it before .



Ahh...someone is coming gotta go bye ". Saying this she disappeared again .








Turning around he saw Aarushi standing there . "Hi , is something the matter ...Did I interrupt your practice I am sorry I was just passing by and I heard someone ..Was someone here with you ". "Ahh no , no one , you here for something, He asked . "Yes , here take this, saying this she handed over some papers to him .


"What are these ?, He questioned . "These are the schedules for the exam the students will have, She said . "Okay , thanks. Aarushi left. He thought about Geet , why is she so mysterious . He was getting drawn towards here more each passing day . Her melodious voice still rang in his head . "May be I m getting mad, he thought . The more he tried to sort out her mystery the more confused he ended up being . Geet came back and looked around . She covered the magical piano she found which led her to Maan . "You are too inquisitive, She said . "You will get your answers soon. I'm not from your time Maan .We were not supposed to meet , but what can I do. My dreams always led me to you and then this Piano . No matter where you were. Though manipulating time is a crime but the time I have with you now is really precious .



Precap- Last two parts





Here are the next two parts please do give your honest reviews, the next updates will be its last thank you for liking it


I might be shifting the rest of the stories on blog as I'm finding it hard to update these days ...
Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Awesome double update maan was so curious about geet she was a mystery to him that was driving him crazy he has so many questions but geet is avoiding it as she isn't from his time she has manupilated the time as she wanted to make memories with maan but she can't tell him maan somg is incomplete but he will complete soon maan mesmerized to hear geet sing and play but he can't find geet anywhere among the students as she isn't one geet can't say where she is from as it's too complicated
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for next update. ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow.double update.mazaa aa Gaya.awsm
Edited by priyarthiroy75 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome updates baby... Geet time travel k through Maan se milti hai and he was confused with her identity or presence...
Thanks for pm buddy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow super curious Maan and equally mysterious Geet.. Time traveler ? she is drawn to him .. wondering who is she .. why is she worrying that they were not suppose to meet..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Geet is mystery for Maan
Maan like her song
Maan had too many questions for her
But she is avoiding it
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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