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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

You are only getting better with each update...how is this possible??? 😳


Thats just the way you percieve things😛
I'm happy if you feel so😛

Thank you so much😃🤗
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Part 12



The days were passing by and Ashu was taking good care of the little girl and her Mom while Nidhi was busy looking after her Baba and her job. There Aman wanted to know what was that which was troubling Nidhi and which led to such a drastic change in her. He called her many times from Chandigarh and tried to ask her...but everytime she ignored the question...she managed to divert the conversation or disconnect his call on the pretext of something urgent to do. He wasn't able to figure out anything and this was making him anxious...he decided to visit Lucknow and find out all the answers to his questions.

Nidhi who was unaware of his plans...she used to regularly take CV for follow ups to Dr Ashutosh...he never told her about his visit to his house. Nidhi didn't ask him anything as she never expected in her dreams that he would ever go and meet him. But CV was still in his dilemma as he could clearly see that she wasn't happy...and he was the reason behind her state. One day Nidhi received a call from Nidhi (J) that she wanted to meet her and she couldn't say no. Nidhi (J) came to their house along with Aarti and she told Nidhi that she was to undergo surgery the next week and she wanted to meet her. Nidhi was very happy to meet her as after so many days she could be herself in her company.

While playing with her Nidhi (J) saw the Ganpati idol in the small temple there which was same as the one at Ashu's house.

Nidhi (J): Didi aise Ganpati Ji to Doctor Uncle ke ghar par bhi hain...

Nidhi: aapko kaise pata?

Nidhi (J): Hum wahin to rehte hain...aapko pata hai...wahan par na unke room mein aapke pictures bhi hain...itne saare...

Nidhi wasn't able to understand how she knew so much about his home and they are staying there...how and why? She thought. Aarti came there and Nidhi asked her...she told her about the circumstances in which she had to call him and how he brought them to his house. Nidhi was once again impressed with his helping nature and his resolution to be there for everyone. But she was upset at the same time when she was told that he still has her pics in his room...that means he still hasn't been able to forget her...that also means the strength he shows in front of everyone is not his true self...he is smiling in front of others...fulfilling his promise while he is breaking down every moment inside. He won't ever reveal anything to anyone and keep suffering himself alone. But she also knew that he would do everything what she wants him to...just like he has been upto his promise till now. She would meet and talk to him...she needs to make sure he is fine and not suffering because of her like this...how could she see him like this?...no ...never...she was deciding in her mind when she was brought out of her thoughts by Aarti.

Aarti: aap se main ek baat poochu?

Nidhi: hmm...

Aarti: mujhe koi haq to nahi hai fir bhi poochna chahungi...ki kya aap khush hain? Unse door reh kar?

Nidhi was surprised at this question...a question which had a very obvious answer evident on her face... But she wasn't able to say anything in reply to Aarti's question.

Aarti: main itna to nahi jaanti ki past mein aap dono ke beech kya hua...par ab jab unhone mujhe apni behen maana hai aur main unhe itne dinon se dekh rahi hu... itna to samajh gayi hu ki wo aap ke liye jee rahe hain...wo bahut akele hain... bahut suffer kar rahe hain... Aap ke bina... aap ke liye... aura apse doori jitna unhe pareshan karti hai...usse zyada aapki khamoshi unhe andar se tod rahi hai...maine kitni baar unhe aapki photo se baat karte dekha hai... kya aap ko nahi lagta ki aapko ek baar unse milna chahiye... Unse baat karni chahiye...shayad isse unki takleef kuchh kam ho jaye...

Nidhi (J) who was playing with toys wasn't interested in this serious conversation but Nidhi realized that she definitely needs to meet him... She told Aarti that she would meet him and try to settle things...if that is in her hands. Nidhi (J) asked her to play with her and both of them had a nice time together... Nidhi (J) also showed her some paintings that she had recently done before they left from there. Nidhi decided to go and meet him the next day while Aman was also planning his visit to Lucknow in a couple of days and he had applied for his leaves. All the three people who were connected by destiny but none of them knew what was coming to them in future. Next day Nidhi got ready and left to meet him...CV asked her whether she'll be back home from duty for lunch...she told him that she would inform him if she was coming. She couldn't tell him that she was going to meet Ashu... as this would aggravate his anxiety and this could be harmful for his health. She went to the hospital and waited outside his office for him to come there.

Ashu came there after the rounds and was shocked to see Nidhi waiting for him outside his office...

Dr Ashutosh: Miss Verma aap yahan?

Nidhi: hmm aap se kuchh zaroori baat karni thi...

Dr Ashutosh: aaiye andar...

He took her inside and asked the peon to not let anyone inside...he offered her a chair and took his place...

Dr Ashutosh: kahiye Miss Verma...CV is fine...unhe koi problem to nahi?

Nidhi: aaj main yahan CV ki daughter nahi Nidhi ki tarah aayi hu... To achha hoga agar aap mujhe isi naam se bulayen...

Dr Ashutosh: wo haq shayad mera ab nahi hai... Wo aap khud kisi aur ko de chuki hain...isn't it?

Nidhi: wo haq kal bhi aap ka tha... Aur aaj bhi hai... hum saath ho ya nahi...aap se use koi nahi chheen sakta...

Ashu: oh really...is it? ...ok... as you say...to batao...aaj kya permission lekar aayi ho apne Baba se?

Nidhi: nahi...

Ashu: unhe pata chalega to bahut naraaz honge...unhe achha nahi lagega... Tumhe aise nahi aana chahiye tha...

Nidhi: jaanti hu...par aaj mujhe aana hi tha...

Ashu: but CV...

Nidhi (irritated): aaj main yahan aap ke baare mein baat karne aayi hu...kya hum please Baba ko apne beech se hata kar kuchh der baat kar sakte hain?

Ashu: apne Baba ko humare beech tum hi layi thi na... infact wo humare beech humesha se the...hai na...

Nidhi: jaanti hu...sab jaanti hu... Lekin please kya aap mujhe kuchh bolne denge... (she had anger and grief on her face at the same time...her eyes became moist by his constant accusations...she knew her Baba was responsible for they not being together but never before had Ashu talked to her like this...). He understood that she is really upset today and he had unintentionally vented out his anger and frustration that was there in his heart since the time CV had come to meet him and asked him to forget her . He had not been able to come out of that till now... he refused to help him in his unusual expectations that day but his tubular vision and thought process had made him really upset... How could a father not see his daughter suffering so much? He thought since then...but today he took out his anger on Nidhi who was unaware of anything... He saw her tears and realized his mistake. He offered her water and asked her to calm down.

Ashu: I'm sorry... Main kuchh zyada hi shayad...

Nidhi: nahi...aap ki isme koi galti nahi hai... jo kuchh hua wo hum dono hi jaante hain...

Ashu: to aaj kya purane din yaad karne aayi ho? Please wo sab yaad karke koi fayda nahi hai... isse hum dono ki takleef kam nahi hogi balki badegi...

Nidhi: nahi... main aaj aap ke liye aayi hu... jaanti hu ki na aap aur na hi main un baton ko bhool paye hain... Kal main Aarti aur Nidhi se mili... unhone mujhe ...

Nidhi said this and he immediately understood what she must have told her...

Nidhi: kya aap mujhe bhool kar apni life mein aage nahi bad sakte? Main aapko aise suffer karte huye nahi dekh sakti...please...aap meri yeh aakhri request maan lo...

Ashu: tum sab mujhe is baat ke liye kyun force karna chahte ho? Jo tum chahti thi wo main sab karne ki koshish kar raha hu... ab tum mujhe meri yaadon se bhi door kar dena chahte ho? Nahi... main iske liye tayaar nahi hu... meri yaadein mere jeene ka sahara hain... Main unse door nahi jaa sakta...

Nidhi: tum sab se matlab? Aur kaun? Aarti?

Ashu: main jaanta hu ki wo bhi mujhe khush dekhna chahti hain... isliy unhone tum se wo sab baatein ki... lekin unhe pata hai ki meri yaadein mere liye kya hain...

Nidhi: to fir kaun?

Ashu: tumhare Baba... Aaye the wo mere paas... yehi baat karne ke liye...

Nidhi: Baba aap ke paas aaye the? Kab?

Ashu: discharge ke baad... Lekin maine unhe saaf mana kar diya ...aur main tum se bhi keh raha hu... Tumhari yeh baat main nahi maanunga...

Nidhi couldn't believe that her Baba went to meet him and he never told her anything... She understood that the reason for his dilemma and his sadness is what she just came to know...

Nidhi: lekin main aap ko aise udaas nahi dekh sakti...mujhe bahut guilty feeling hoti hai... mujhe lagta hai jaise main aapki har pareshani ki wajah hu... meri wajah se aap andar hi andar tadap rahe hain...please aisa mat kijiye...main aapko khush dekhna chahti hu...

Ashu: main...main khush hu...don't worry... chalo tumhare liye... main tumhari baat manne ke liye tayaar hu...magar meri ek shart hai... Ki tumhe bhi meri sab yaadon ko apne dil se nikalna hoga... Aur wohi pehle wali Nidhi banna hoga... Bolo kar sakti ho...?

Nidhi had no answer to this...

Ashu: jawab nahi hai na... dekha kitna mushkil hai is tarah ki baaton ko manna... tumhe laga ki jaise maine pehle tumhari har baat maani thi...ab bhi maan lunga... lekin maine wo sab karke dekh liya... Maine tumhe khud se door hote huye dekha hai... Aur isse zyada takleef mujhe aur kisi baat se nahi hoti... Maine tumhare liye khud ko bilkul badal diya lekin tum wo ban gayi jo main tumhe bante huye kabhi nahi dekh sakta ...isliye ab kisi ke liye bhi... Chahe wo tumhari hi ichha kyun na ho... Main is tarah ki kisi baat ko maanne ke liye tayaar nahi hu...

Nidhi understood that he wouldn't agree this time and tears came to her eyes in disappointment at not being able to do anything for him...but at the same time she was surprised at the depth of his love for her...

Ashu: aap pareshan mat hoiye Miss Verma...aap apne Baba ko next week check up ke liye lekar aa sakti hain...

Nidhi (wiping her tears): thank you doctor...I think I should take your leave now...main unhe lekar aa jaaungi...

She went out of the room and towards her car... His words kept on echoing in her ears and she wanted to ask CV ... Why did he go to meet him and didn't even tell her anything... How could he? She went back towards her home to talk to Baba. There Ashu reconciled himself and carried on with his work.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome and too emotional di 👏👏
Will come back next time, Loves ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice and emotional update enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
An awesome update Manisha 👏
Too good really!
The convo of Nidhi with Aarti, and Nidhi with Ashu - both took away my heart today! i cud not believe AshNi were talking and like this?
What a palpable situation they both are in. I felt the anger straight into his heart, and his soul was crying hard. I cud see Nidhi juggling between her life and her family and her responsibilities. I saw a Father, whose life surrounds his daughter and he is the reason for her tears.
Very emotional, and too delicate the moments shown ⭐️
Narration i loved, words and dialogues used are full of emotions, and heart to heart talk! t
Sometimes it's hard to make others do something, that we ourselves are ignoring. This is what Ashu noticed and told Nidhi, as how is it difficult to forget each moment of love and happiness, where she herself is not able to forget ever.
I wish what Aman has in his thoughts, he feel the reality and come out with some solution, that can be a rescue for one and all.
Am looking up to Aarti too, as she has done a great job taking up the initiative to meet Nidhi and talked to her.
Well woven the plot, a tearful meeting of AshNi and the discontentment complexes. Only can we wish for the good coming out and things start falling into their places. Let's wish for that! Just one more wish that Nidhi don't get much annoyed with Cv, he needs to be taken care of! I know you will take care of this, but just wanted to make sure from my side, as am very concern for his health - So must be Nidhi, Ashu and everyone here along with you. Just.. 😳
Thanks for the benevolence yet once again Sweetie, luv ya to the core ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Awesome and too emotional di 👏👏

Will come back next time, Loves ❤️


Thank you Shona😃🤗
Its ok...take your time...its always a pleasure to read you😃👏🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you Bhaiya😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatanu

Very nice and emotional update enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much.


Thank you Sneha🤗
when your work gets appreciated...its the most precious feeling one can get😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

An awesome update Manisha 👏

Too good really!

Thank you Bhabhi😃🤗

The convo of Nidhi with Aarti, and Nidhi with Ashu - both took away my heart today! i cud not believe AshNi were talking and like this?
What a palpable situation they both are in. I felt the anger straight into his heart, and his soul was crying hard. I cud see Nidhi juggling between her life and her family and her responsibilities. I saw a Father, whose life surrounds his daughter and he is the reason for her tears.
Very emotional, and too delicate the moments shown ⭐️

Thanks once again Bhabhi...what I felt was...every time we ask our loved ones to do something for us... but when we ourself have to do that...we cant... she asked him to stay as she wanted him to... but herself she became silent...and now that he knows what she has gone through and ended up as... he shouldn't bow down to any such request from anyone... even if it is from her...bcoz its about his love... his life...as it would further cause her to suffer more...when she is protected by his love...she resides in his heart... noone has any right to take her away from there😊
This is what I tried to present...glad that it came out well and you liked it😃

Narration i loved, words and dialogues used are full of emotions, and heart to heart talk! t
Sometimes it's hard to make others do something, that we ourselves are ignoring. This is what Ashu noticed and told Nidhi, as how is it difficult to forget each moment of love and happiness, where she herself is not able to forget ever.
I wish what Aman has in his thoughts, he feel the reality and come out with some solution, that can be a rescue for one and all.
Am looking up to Aarti too, as she has done a great job taking up the initiative to meet Nidhi and talked to her.

All the characters are introduced with a purpose...or rather should say will be made to serve our purpose...as its our fiction😉

Just wait...even i dont know what ill write next😆
Well woven the plot, a tearful meeting of AshNi and the discontentment complexes. Only can we wish for the good coming out and things start falling into their places. Let's wish for that! Just one more wish that Nidhi don't get much annoyed with Cv, he needs to be taken care of! I know you will take care of this, but just wanted to make sure from my side, as am very concern for his health - So must be Nidhi, Ashu and everyone here along with you. Just.. 😳
Thanks for the benevolence yet once again Sweetie, luv ya to the core ❤️ 🤗
Thank you Bhabhi...loved to read you...will take care of everything...dont worry😃🤗
Bless you Bhabhi😃

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