SaMunDit TS: Yeh dosti hum nahi todenge; Discontinued; Note on Pg 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: 9211

Hey ! It was too good!

Waiting eagerly for the next update..!!


Sure dear...will try n update very soon😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Awww finally something on my SaMunDit my babies .. hayee I kinda miss their nokjhok .. finally someone has written about SaMunDit .. it was so beautiful I loved it .. ab maza aayega us imported fake dadi ki MunDit maza chakaye gaye

Waiting for next update


yeah i thought of writing something on them as the trio is so special and unique...unpar kuchh to banta hai 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2

So it was evening time...both Munna and Pandit went to the bus stop. But before going Munna called up Naina to tell that he was leaving for the bus stop...as usual she gave them a long lecture on what to do and what not to do... dekho wahan jaaoge to apni Buaji ko pehle samaan de dena... dono wahan jhagda mat karna... Sameer ke ghar waalon se theek se baat karna...kahin aisa na ho wo naraz ho jayen...Sameer ka khayal rakhna...mera letter use de dena...aur ...apna bhi dhyan rakhna...pehli baar itni door akele ja rahe ho...phone karna... mujhe fikr rahegi tumhari...theek hai with this her eyes became moist thinking that now for some days even they wont be meeting in school. Munna understood this and said in his usual tone... haan haan Bhabhi...aap tension mat lo... Jaisa aap ne kaha hai hum waisa hi karenge...bas aap apna khayal rakhna aur rona mat...Sameer ko achhaa nahi lagega

Both of them said goodbye to each other and left for the bus stop. There he met Pandit and both of them boarded the bus. On their way to Delhi both of them were very happy that they would be able to meet Sameer after so many days.

Munna: yaar abhi Sameer kya kar raha hoga? Hume yaad to karta hoga na...

Pandit: yaad...arey bahut yaad karta hoga...tu to jaanta hi hai ki uska wahan bilkul mann nahi lag raha...

Munna: lekin usne itne dino se koi phone nahi kiya? Kahin wo hume bhool to nahi gaya? Wo theek to hoga na?

Pandit: yaar Chhenu to aisi baatein karke dil mat dukha...dekh hum dono usse milne jaa rahe hain...soch zara jab wo hume dekhega to kitna khush hoga... aur main to... Main to khushi se uchhal hi padunga...

Munna: aur main to jhat se use gale laga lunga...main to yeh hi soch raha hu kal se...ki itne dino baad hum apne dost se milenge to apne wo purane din yaad aa jayenge...

Pandit: haan yaar...jab se wo gaya hai canteen ke samoson mein wo swaad hi nahi aata... swaad se yaad aaya...bahut bhook lagi hai...kuchh khaane ke liye laya hai?

Munna: haan Mummy ne theple pack karke diye hain...chal kha lete hain...

Both of them had thepla and then slept after talking about Sameer and their friendship bond...how they were missing him... and Naina...she was missing him even more. There Sameer was having fever and Vishakha was taking good care of him but he was badly missing Mundit and Naina... wanted to talk to them desperately. But Vishakha told him that he shouldn't be calling Munna at this time in the night...she would let him call the next day...this time he needs to take his medicines and sleep well. But sleep was away from his eyes...since the time he has come to Delhi...his Nanu's memories...the void in his life after he left... He being away from his friends and Naina along with the constant torture by Dadi hasn't allowed him to have a peaceful sleep. But the only one positive thing for him here has been the improvement in his bond with his mother...she has been really taking good care of him and this he had been missing since his childhood days. He kept on thinking about the sudden turn of events in his life and under the influence of his fever and the medicines...he fell asleep .

There the bus reached Delhi...both of them got down at the bus stop and took an auto to their Bua's house...he handed her the gifts he was supposed to give and after having light snacks served by his Bua...he wanted to leave from there. She asked them to stay there for some more days...but they told her that they would be staying with Sameer ...their friend. Soon they left her home and came out...Pandit asked him whether he had the address to his new residence. After a few seconds silence Munna revealed that he didn't have the address. Pandit became really upset and angry with him...

Pandit: yeh kya keh raha hai? Ab hum wahan kaise pahunchenge? Tu bhi na...pehle lyun nahi bataya?

Munna: yaar pehle bata deta to humare ghar wale hume aane thodi dete...

Pandit: arey mujhe to bata sakta tha...

Munna: tu kya kar leta bata? Tujhe maloom hai uska address? Bol...

Pandit: nahi...mujhe bhi nahi pata... lekin ab hum kya Karen? Yahan sadak pe khade hokar to address milne se raha... soch kuch... kuchh to dimaag laga...koi to hint diya hoga Sameer ne...

Munna kept on thinking and thinking...haan yaad aa gaya...last time jab phone pe baat hui thi... To usne kaha tha ki Shalimar market ka sab se bada ghar... chal kisi se poochte hain...

They see an auto there and ask him...: Bhaiya yahan Dilli mein Shalimar market naam ki koi jagah hai?

Auto driver: haan hai...

Both of them jumped with joy on hearing this and asked him to drop them there... Soon they reached there. But on reaching they see so many big bungalows...they didn't have any clue as to how would they find out which one was the Somani residence? They kept on searching here and there but could not make out. After some time the mawali gang saw them...they came close to them and realized that they were new in Delhi...

One of them: lagta hai yeh dono yahan naye aaye hain... Kyun beta? Aaj hi aaya hai chidiyaghar se?

Pandit: chidiyaghar se nahi hum Ahmedabad se aaye hain...apne yaar se milne...

Other one: yaar kaun...

Munna: Sameer...wo humara pakka yaar hai... Kyun ponga Pandit...

Pandit: haan yeh Chhenu sahi keh raha hai... tum jaante ho Sameer kaun se ghar mein rehta hai?

The first one: jaante to hain lekin batayenge nahi...

Both Mundit requested them to tell them about his residence but they told that they would help them only if they smoked cigarettes along with them. Both Mundit refused to do so and told them to stop doing that as it was injurious to health. All of them laughed at their thinking and made fun of them. They even called them Fattu and started moving towards them with cigarette in their hand. Mundit saw them coming close and they stepped back...they glanced at each other and made some eye signal to each other. As they came closer, Pandit fell flat on their feet asking for help...he also told them to forgive him as it was Munna who brought him here...he didn't even want to come to Delhi. They didn't listen to him and asked him to get up...Pandit got up and gave a slight push to one of them. He tried to catch hold of him but he fell down as his laces were tied to each other when Pandit was asking for their forgiveness lying down on the ground. Pandit shouted...Bhaag Munna ... and both of them ran away while the gang tried to follow them. But they hid behind a wall and waited till the gang went away.

Both of them now breathed a sigh of relief but still they had no clue about Sameer's whereabouts.

Munna: kya Karen yaar...kaise pata lagayen? Itni der ho gayi ...bhookh bhi lagi hai...

Pandit: haan ab tere liye yahan chhappan bhog aayega...paise to hain nahi...khayenge kahan se?

Suddenly Munna remembered that Naina had given her pocket money which he had kept in the pocket inside his bag as he didn't want to spend that. But now that they desperately needed something to eat...they went to a chaat stall to have something. While having the chaat they were talking about Sameer which was overheard by Amrita who too had come to get some chaat packed for her home. She asked them whether they were talking about Sameer who had recently shifted to Delhi from Ahmedabad. Both of them were surprised to meet her ...she told them that she was their neighbour and Sameer is her friend. She told them about his residence and both of them rushed to meet him. They thanked her for her help and the door bell to Somani residence rang. Dadi thought who could be there at this time...

Dadi: Keshav dekho zara kaun aaya hai is waqt? (it was around 4 pm )

He opened the door and mundit hurriedly came inside shouting Sameer's name.

Dadi: kaun ho tum dono jo is tarah se ghar mein ghus aaye?

Both of them realized their mistake and went and touched her feet but she stepped back as she wasn't used to such gestures.

Munna: Dadi main Munna hu aur yeh Pandit...hum dono Sameer ke dost hain...

Dadi: kaun Sameer? Yahan koi Sameer nahi rehta...tum dono jaa sakte ho...pata nahi kahan kahan se aa jaate hain?

Pandit: Dadi kahan kahan se nahi hum Ahmedabad se aaye hain...apne yaar se milne...

Munna: aur aap jhooth kyun bol rahi hain ki Sameer yahan nahi rehta...

Dadi: how dare you? Main kyun jhooth bolungi tumse?

Munna: wo to hume pata nahi lekin aap jhooth bol rahi hain yeh pakka hai...kyun ki wahan deewar pe Mausiji ki photo hai jinhe hum bahut ache se pehchaante hain...aur wo humare dost ki Maa hain...

Dadi felt embarassed and by that time Vishakha came there...she was very happy to see both of them and they touched her feet. She told them that Sameer was really missing them and he would be very happy to meet them. She also told them that Sameer wasn't keeping well and that they should go and meet him in his room only. Both of them rushed to his room hearing about his illness and saw him sleeping. They stood close to him and became emotional to see that he had become so weak in so less time. They both sat by his side and Munna affectionately placed his hand on his forehead. Sameer could feel his touch and he immediately opened his eyes. He couldn't believe himself that he was seeing both of them right in front of his eyes.

Sameer: kya main koi sapna dekh raha hu? Tum sach mein yahan ho kya? Agar yeh sapna hua to?

Munna: arey hum dono sach mein yahan hain...hum tujhse hi milne aaye hain mere yaar...

All 3 of them hugged each other and Sameer was so happy and relieved to meet them after a long time. Vishakha came there with Rohan and Deepika...she introduced both of them to Mundit and also asked Keshav to serve snacks to them.

Sameer: Mummy kya main bhi kha sakta hu? Mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai...

Vishakha knew now he would soon be fine as his best friends are here...she allowed him to have some but asked him to be careful. Rohan and Deepika too sat there with them and while Sameer started having snacks ...he coughed ..and Munna offered him water and later he himself served him affectionately. Rohan was surprised to see the bond between them...the way they were taking care of him... No wonder Sameer was missing Ahmedabad so much without them. Both Rohan and Deepika left from there after that so that they could spend time together.


The end to this part😊
Sorry for being late...I would try to finish it in the next part but if it becomes long...i might convert it into FS😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Res...

Unres 😃
Finally mujhe time Mila or padhli 😃😃
Awesome chapter it was 😳👏
Ohh their struggle to reach their friend 😳
Starting from sweet Naina who cares for her close one. Now mundit is also her close one.
Her instructions to them like a mother waise bhi bhabhi maa saman hi Hoti hai 😆😉
Mundit trip sequence and discussing about Sameer was beautiful 😳
Munna toh hai hi Kamal ka Bina address ke pahuch Gaya 😆
Pandit trick to escape from those boys are superb 😆
Amrita toh sabki life me khushiya Lati hai 😃
Finally samundit meet..
Update soon!
Edited by Anmol333 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Amazing update manisha
Mundit even without knowing the address, were ready to take the risk... They can really go to any extent for sameer... How excited they were to meet their yaar... Mawaali gang reached to trouble them... I loved the way they tackled the mawaali gang... Just like how sameer did during mt.Abu trip... Bhai se inspiration liya hai dono😆... Amrita being a good friend to sameer did help them... Daadi and her antics... It was so daadi style... She tried to mislead them... I so hate her.. The way mundit gave it to daadi was amazing... She cant fool them like that... They could recognize their maasi's photo... Very well written... Sameer's excitement seeing his jigari dost was too good... The best medicine for him is their presence... Loved vishakha understanding and acknowledging the importance of these two in her son's life.
Too good yaar.
Thanks for the pm dear... Will be waiting for the next update.
Edited by angelic567 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
That was such an endearing one Manisha😳
Especially d last part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
This was an endearing update.
The concern Naina had for Mundit.
Amrita helping Mundit find Sameers home and Munna putting Dadi in her place.
The trio's reunion was also cute.
Thank you for the pm and cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
So beautiful Manisha di!
The struggle in the new city was very realistic...the mawali gang troubling them but Pandit used his brains and tied their shoe laces😆
Naina at the start of the update asking them to take care and getting teary eyed was❤️ The bhabi-devar bond has developed in the show too😳
Amrita turning into a saviour not only for Sameer but to MunDit too..
That Dadi and her puppet Keshav🤢It's better I don't say anything
Rohan and Deepika being introduced to MunDit and Rohan being amazed at SaMunDit's bond..Well, we are amazed and admire the pure and precious bond too😳Munna's caring nature, you have shown well👏
Thank you for the PM and will be looking forward to seeing more of SaMunDit bond in the next update!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Aww..Naina advising Munna
And he advising her...Bhabhi-Devar goals..
Mawali boys door raho mere Mundit se..
Thank God..Amrita to the rescue..
Dadi..why can't she tell truth once..I will be very happy..
SaMunDit scene---😭
Emotional kar diya..
Munna always behaves like Mother to Sameer..
Now that MunDit are there..My boy will be fine..
Sorry for late reply.
Thanks for the PM.
Keep writing like this.

Lots of love
Sweety
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: angelic567

Amazing update manisha

Mundit even without knowing the address, were ready to take the risk... They can really go to any extent for sameer... How excited they were to meet their yaar... Mawaali gang reached to trouble them... I loved the way they tackled the mawaali gang... Just like how sameer did during mt.Abu trip... Bhai se inspiration liya hai dono😆... Amrita being a good friend to sameer did help them... Daadi and her antics... It was so daadi style... She tried to mislead them... I so hate her.. The way mundit gave it to daadi was amazing... She cant fool them like that... They could recognize their maasi's photo... Very well written... Sameer's excitement seeing his jigari dost was too good... The best medicine for him is their presence... Loved vishakha understanding and acknowledging the importance of these two in her son's life.
Too good yaar.
Thanks for the pm dear... Will be waiting for the next update.


Thanks a lot Simi... Mundit going to any extent for Sameer is the best and unique thing shown in this show👏😃
Dadi is such a hopeless character and I hate her...thats why i presented it that way😛
Vishakha has come close to Sameer and this is the only positive aspect of Delhi track😃👏
Glad that you liked it... thanks once again😃🤗

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