AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 88

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Wow such an awesome chappy👏👏...really mza aa gya pdhke😊.. Thank u so very much neil to bechara pyar m pura pagal ho gya ...ab to avni bhi fisal rhi hai uski or😉.. Jab saamne Neil ho toh koi kaise na fisle.! 😉.she was jealous of mithali😃...loved to see that...hope neil bhi jealous ho jaldi hi... Neil's love is too obvious, but Avni's is not so her jealousy will be better enjoyed than Neil's and poor guy is already suffering so much. Let us spare him from jealousy atleast 😊 and their rapid fire was superb yr...dheere dheere feelings express kr rhe hai dono... So glad to know that and u always end it on cliff not fair riya...tum hm pyare se readers k jazbaaton k sath khel rhi ho😳... Hahaa, cliffhangers raise the excitement and anticipation. Some marketing techniques you see.!! 😉 chalo isse phle hmara dimag soch soch k fat jaye ki aage kya hoga plz update😊 Will try my best


Hey,
Thank u so very much for ur amazing words.!
They mean a lot to me.!
Much love.!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Cute update. Thank u

Loved d whole recreation of the first date .How much has changed between d two since d first date... the comfort level has increased multiple folds.But one thing that hasn't changed is Neil's staring at Avni's face. The plan was to highlight the same as u mentioned. How much they have progressed in this 2 months. And yeah Neil wont get tired of staring her, ever.!

Last time v had Riya, this time it was Mitali.Last time we got to see d angry and irritated Avni, this time it was jealousy which was prominent. Haha 😆 Good observation about the girls.! I didnt realise that 😆 Avni has really come a long way and she is still yet to reach where she has to.

The whole beach walk was romantic.Liked d fact that Avni didn't pull back. Thank u for mentioning that 😉

The rapid fire was really cute.And the end was d sweetest with Avni acknowledging dt He loves her d most. So glad to know that u enjoyed those parts. I am obliged

Waiting fr Neil's answer.


Hey Tapsi,
Thank u so much for taking the efforts to read and appreciate.!
You know how much it matters to me.!
Much love.!
Edited by docritu99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

CONTEST : A Millionaire's First Love.!



Hey my dearest lovely Readers.!


As you know our 2nd thread is coming towards its closure and soon it will be the time to welcome a new thread, coz, Picture Abhi baki hai mere Dost.!


You must be aware of My Strange Habbit of not closing a thread without any Tadka. Oh yeah, Remember my prank in last Thread 😆.


So, I am here with Yet another Riya Style Tadka.


Well, i must admit, this was floating in my head since quiet a long time now. And the other thread which included "Writer's ki Dukh bhari Gatha" mostly, kindda gave me a push to go ahead with this Contest.


I was thinking to hold a one shot Contest for A Millionaire's First Love.!


As You guys have read the Characters, known them deeply, seeped through their thinking and behaviour, so much as to guess what must they do or think next in any situation.


Basically what i am saying is, you will have to write a short write up related to A Millionaire's First Love. It can be anything like Epilogue, The ending part, The alternative scenario to any of the other written part as you have wanted it, The coming gift scenario, the date, Riya's mystery, Or spin off kind means from any other character's POV, anything.! You can even write a distinct new scenario or sequence as u have always wanted that to come in this story, which i am yet to arrive at, like their wedding sequence, Avni's Love realisation etc. Like Anything.! Just be Innovative.!


What is the advantage of this.?


Well, It will give me some cool ideas to improve the execution of My Book.!


But thats My Advantage.!


What's your's.?


Yes.! If Your Write up is Potent Enough, then it will be featured in The Novel With Due Credits in Your name.!


Eh.! Cool.! Right.!


So, Here is the big Shootout to Each and Everyone Out there, Silent, Non silent reader, Writers and followers.!!!!


Dont think You are not a Writer kind, that you havent written anything before this, or about any other inhibitions.! I am Not going to Give very Much Importance to The Writing Part, I will focus on the ideas, innovations and creativeness.! Fair enough.?


I would be really happy if The Non Writer gang will show some enthusiasm and will decide to take part.!


This is going to give you a new exposure and who knows in the process you may realise that, you do have that writing stint, to which you have never given a chance. So, give it a chance.!


This is just a vague idea.! I know it may fell flat and wont be appreciated. But then i just tried.


So, how many of you are in for this.?


If we have sufficient numbers, we will proceed with the Contest, and i will post other details. If Not.? Mai toh hu hi.! Millionaire will continue as it is going.! So no disadvantage.!


So, are you ready to try something new.?


Tell me in your comments below.! Lets Start counting the supporters of this contest.l It is completely ohkay If you are not comfortable writing or Busy in ur schedule or anything else, you can let me know that too.


P.S. Only Who are ready to write, will say yes i am ready.! Not like Yeah i am ready to silently read, begin the contest.! Nope.! Nah.! Nada.!


P.P.S I am here to help you out in anyway, incase u decide to write. 😉


Do give it a thought guys.!


Love
Riya

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Posted: 7 years ago
Writers ki dukh bhari daastan 🤣
Lol Riya😆

Abt d contest...great idea.Go ahead.
But I'll be a silent reader dis tym.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: drbeth

Writers ki dukh bhari daastan🤣

Lol Riya😆 Well, it came out to be like that to me 😉

Abt d contest...great idea.Go ahead.
But I'll be a silent reader dis tym. Coming that from a writer is demotivating.! What can i expect from non writers then.?


Though i am not sure whether this is going to happen or not. Keeping my expectations low.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Riya, this might be the first time I am replying to on your thread but trust me I am totally awed and mesmerized with the plot, the characters everything. Love this story and I sincerely pray this story hits the nxt thread very soon. About the contest, I don't know how much of a good writer I am but wiling it be a part of this, let me know when you want to commence it.
Much love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Riya, this might be the first time I am replying to on your thread but trust me I am totally awed and mesmerized with the plot, the characters everything. Love this story and I sincerely pray this story hits the nxt thread very soon. About the contest, I don't know how much of a good writer I am but wiling it be a part of this, let me know when you want to commence it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Much love,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nivi</font>


Awww, thank u so very much dear.!
I am so glad u enjoyed this story.!


Also, Yayyy.!!! We have our first Supporter.!
Hurray.!!!

So lets start the count.!
1.


I will let u know dear.!
Thanks for actively participating.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
I've been a silent reader for so long, but it's majorly been because of the fact that I can't catch up enough on time - so here I take the opportunity to tell you how amazing the whole journey of AvNeil in this whole universe has been, the writing, storyline, everything being so perfect. I'm sorry that I don't comment since you deserve to know how awesome the entire thing is!
Anyway, I'd love to be a part of this contest! :)
Edited by Bhavsss - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
If this contest is going to be continued I am in but I srsly dont know how to publish a story in IF
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99


Though i am not sure whether this is going to happen or not. Keeping my expectations low.!

Demotivating
First toh I'm not really a writer.
Secondly I hate losing.

Ok ...so ... don't count me in...but if I come up wid something I'll turn it in.

And I'm sure dis contest will be fun.

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