#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 49

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Posted: 7 years ago
Maane tu ya na
by Pooja di
Lovely os di
Ishra bonding is too good
so sweet and cute
waiting eagerly for next part
updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hlw frnds here I'm to post this Os on behalf of "Ishra2015" as she was not able to post it for some reason so she asked me to post it..

Wo Lamhe..wo baatein
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Hey,
I m new to writing song os
I m glad harshiidiv to gave me a chance to write something
So plz forgive me if there r mistakes and not upto ur expectations
This song was suggested by akku di
Thanks di for giving me a chance to write


The plot starts after ishra marriage. Raman declared that though ishita is bhallas daughter in law but can never became his wife..Raman gets a panic attack ..
Though Raman has shouted on ishita but he still is attracted to ishita..He is just angry with her and unknowningly has made ishita away from him ..which is still unknown to him..He currently during his marriage rituals he realised he was dreaming ishita in place of mihika..And he is happy but male ego has stopped from accepting it..
Ishita slept crying in hall only..
Simmi smiled seeing ishitas tears and in hall..
Raman who had woke in mid night feeling thirsty came to kitchen to fetch water ..But instead saw ishita on sofa sleeping with tear marks on her face ..He felt guilty but couldn't voice out anything..He left after admiring her for sometime..He thought to talk to her in morning..
Ishita woke up and did her morning routine and went out of her room before raman wakes up..and went to kitchen to cook breakfast..
Simmi who saw ishita came to tease her..
Simmi: Aur bhabhiji kaisa raha aapka first night..and smiles with a wink ..
Ishita keeps mum
Simmi: kyu kya laga tujhe ki tu aaygi idr aur hum sabko tujhe accept kar lenge ..tu yeh baat apni dimag mai ache se bitha le ki jaise tu iss ghar mai aayi hai ussi tarah tujhe mai iss ghar se bahar phekva dungi ..Just wait and watch..
Ishita who had enough of her banter
Ishita: simmi mai iss ghar ki bahu hu ..yeh mere pati ka ghar hai ..Tumhare pati ke tarah ghar jamai bankar nahi rahete hum..
Toshi: ishita!!! Tumhari himat kaise hui simmi ko iss ghar se jane bolne wali..yeh uska ghar hai .. Yeh koi tumhari tarah gunghat ke piche dhoke se shadi karke iss ghar mai nahi aayi..
Ishita had tears with their words..
But keeps mum and serves breakfast ..
Seeing ishita serviing the breakfast raman, toshi, simmi ,param and mr bhalla leavea the dining table ordering neelu to cook breakfast for them and get that to their room..
Ishita is deeply hurt by their action ..and thinks of their old days ..

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,
Koi na jaane,
Thi kaisi raatein,
Hooo, barsaatein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

Adi ,ruhi ,alia and pihu consoles her and had breakfast ..

Sitting alone Ishita: (thinks)(with tears): Kahin maine ramans se shadi karke galti toh nahi kar di? Kya yeh logo ko yeh nahi dikhta ki pihu itni dari sahemi se kyu raheti hai ? Ruhi apne papa ko mr bhalla bulati hai ,kya yeh unlogo ko galat nahi lagta ?Iss ghar mai sirf ishita hi galat hoti hai baki koi nhi!!!

Ishita cleaned her tears : Yeh logo ko mai selfish lagti hu na toh selfish hi sahi ..Raman se shadi maine sirf pihu ke liye ki hai aur sirf pihu ke liye hi rahegi ..

Na main jaanoun,
Na tu jaane,
(aaah)
Kaisa hai ye mausam,
Koi na jaane,
Kahi se hai fizaa aayi,
Ghamon ki dhoop sang laayi,
Khafaa hogaye hum,
Judaa hogaye hum,

Next morning brings a new ishita who is determined to mind her own business and bhallas can go to hell..

Ishita wakes up and makes breakfast only for her children ..

She wakes up pihu and gets her ready ..
This is the first time in 2 years everyone is seeing chirping pihu again ..
She feeds to pihu and pihu happily chatting with ishita about anything and everything..
Everyone comes for breakfast

Simmi (eyeing ishita): neelu breakfast de sabko..
Neelu: simmi di abhi tak kuch bana nahi hai ..todha time do mai abhi bana deti hu..

Romi: Toh itni achi khushboo aloo ke parathe ki khana se aa rhi hai..

Neelu : Yeh toh bhabhi ne banaya hai .

Romi:(with fake pout) bhabhi mere liye aapne paratha nahi banaya??

Ishita: Romi tum mere hath ka bana hua khana khaoge?

Romi: kyu nhi bhabhi itne saalo baad jo mil raha hai mai isse kaise miss karunga aur bhabhi mai bhi toh aapka bacha hu mujhe bhi khila do..
Ishita feels happy that atleast someone from the family has not changed ..and feeds him..

Raman who was coming for breakfast has heard it all and feeling jealousy as she is feeding romi and adi not him despite ishita being his wife..
Seeing raman ishita left the dining room .Raman felt bad

Raman realised the changes in his house due to ishitas coming
His house is nomore silent
There was always someone would be laughing or smiling ..

They would running one after other ..
There was no more sadness in his house ..
Everyone seemed happy except ishita ..
He saw the emptyness in her eyes ..
She would never come in front of him..
She never comes to the room which is theirs
Slowly the days started passing and raman has realised ishita is ignoring him..
He started missing the old ishita who is bubbly and smiling always..There was always a spark in her eyes..

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,
Koi na jaane,
Thi kaisi raatein,
Hooo, barsaatein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

(hooo...)
He remembers their rain romance...he decides to confront the ishita ..
Ishita who was passing unknown to ramans presence turns to go away seeing raman..
Raman: Ishita!!
Ishita stands still without turning..
Raman: ishita mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
Ishita stands still without turning ..It angers the raman
Raman : Mai tumse kuch baat kar rha hu..
Ishita turns

Raman: tumhe mujhse problem kya hai ..mujhe aise kyu ignore kar rhi ho??

Ishita: Mr bhalla kuch kaam ho toh batana warna faltu baat ke liye mere pass time nahi hai..
Raman: mr bhalla? Ishita mai tumhara pati hu ..

Ishita(laughs) (with tears)ohho pati ...aap mere pati hone ka hak kho chuke ho mr bhalla..aap sirf mere bacho ke baap ho aur agar waise hi rahe toh acha hoga sab ke liye ..mujhe naa aapse aur naa aapke maa ,papa aur behn aur uske pati se koi rishta rakhne mai koi dilchaspi nahi hai ..And please mai aapke life mai interfere nahi karungi and yeh chahungi ki aap bhi aapne kaam se kaam rakhoge ..Mai iss ghar pe rent mai rahe lungi ..every month on 1st date mai aapko rent pay kar dungi mr bhalla

And with that ishita left the room..
With these raman realised he had lost his rights over ishita though being in his house under same roof and his wife

Saagar ki,
Gehraayi se,
Gehra hai,
Apna pyaar,
Sehraoun ki,
In hawaon me,
Kaise aayeee-gi bahaar,
Kahan se ye hawa aayi,
Ghataayen kaali kyoun chhaayi,
Khafaa hogaye hum,
Judaa hogaye hum,

Raman thinks of ishra days from Budapest..
Ishitas moment as shano..
Their moments in office..

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,
Koi na jaane,
Thi kaisi raatein,
Hooo, barsaatein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...


That's all for this I hope you all liked it so plz hit like button do comments also..

PS - Frnds its her first attempt so plz encourage her..


Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os
End hoga tho accha rehta
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome os
End hoga tho accha rehta



Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Os dear
I liked it
The song us perfectly suits with storyline
Felt bad for ishita
Simmi always taunts her
Glad raman realises his mistakes
If possible so give epilogue for this..

PS - u know I was trying to click like button bt when its open as edit I realized that it's post by me..hahaha how silly me
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os
Loved it
But it seems incomplete
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
But end kuch aur ho to aur accha lagta incomplete lagra hai
Pls ho saka to give epilogue too with Raman giving peace of mind to everyone .
And continue writing
Edited by venu66 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice OS
poor ishita felt bad for her loved her attitude towards everyone raman was not liking ishita ignoring him he confront her loved how she replied him
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb one shot
Liked it
But its incomplete complete it soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome OS 😊Loved it ❤️Poor Ishu 😔Simmi is too much 😡Good Raman realized his mistake 👍🏼But it looks incomplete 😒Do write an epilogue for it

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