#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 37

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os akku..
But would be better if u continue this...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely is akku .
Raman loves ishita who is his neighbor .
One day he came to know about her being married having a son .
Loved Raman adi bond
He was heartbroken but his love won as ishita was divorcee and also loves him .

Edited by Divanru - 7 years ago
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Hi Lovelies I am With My First Shot on the Thorn on the Song Bolna halke Suggested by my Pyaar Di Harshita Di
So Guys This Os is on an Old track of Yhm ...Can Anyone Remember the Jealousy Track When Sanjana Entered in Ishitha's Life Saying that She is Mihir's Sister ? ...So The OS Starts on the Room scene after Mihir's Tilak Function ...Hope You Guys Like it 😃

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"Someone bring some water "Raman shouted on top of his Voice..."Raman...Why Do you need water?Ishitha asked confused...Ishitha Can't you see someone is burning over here...Who?...God I can smell too if we do not put down on time ...Then..? he dragged the sentence...Raman She glared at him and narrowed her brows ...Ishitha someone is burning in jealousy "he replied nonchalantly ...Who? "She asked again ...He smiled and moved forward She stepped back ward until she hit the wall..He caged her against the wall ...She was nervous...She was dazed that she did not notice him playing a song .....


Dhaage tod laao chaandani se noor ke

Ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke He pulls her closer locking his hands behind around her waist as he sways along the music ...Both are hypnotized drawn into each other..Their eyes speaks more volume ...


Dhaage tod laao chaandani se noor ke
Ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke


He whispers again "Why were you jealous after Sanjana told that we both loved each other...he Kisses behind her earlobe urging her to tell...She holds his shirt for support as she closes her eyes in pleasure ...


Sharam aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
Ho saanson se uljhi rahein meri saansein


He nibbles her earlobes as his places fleeting kisses across her jaws...He breathes in front of her lips .She opens her eyes ...the close proximity affects her... Sending weird sensations in her...

Bol na halke halke
Bol na halke halke


He places his lips on hers as her eyes went wide ...He pulls apart and whispers ... Honth se halke halkeBol na halke,Bol na halke


He Swirls her around... her back touches his chest as he hugs her from behind ...So you were jealous...No She breathes out...He muses...then why were you angry with me since yesterday...She looks over her shoulder ...She remembers the moment that she was throwing all the clothes out of the cupboard speaking to herself furiously how many girls were their in his life before her.. She shakes her head smiling as the realization dawns upon her...Her cheeks goes crimson .he kisses her on her cheeks ...She smiles lovingly ...So it is " he whispers huskily sending Goosebumps ...She pushes him away "No I wasn't jealous " she glares at him ...He chuckles ..Jhansi Rani this is the problems of girls .. He frowns ...You guys need some other girl to enter to realize your own feelings he chuckles shaking his head...


Aa neend ka sauda karein
Ek khwaab de ik khwaab le

"No Nothing like that " she says biting her lips to control her smile...okay so no feeling I am right ? he aks sternly ..."Yes she says confidently ...He Pouts Cutely... his face falls ...he shows his heartMy Poor heart broke " he sobs...making her chuckle ...Raavan Kumar A Nautanki ..She smiles...He turns on his heels before moving out he shouts "I am gonna get Sanjana She loves me She gapes...before he could go out ...She pulls him close to her...due to the sudden assault they fall on bed ...Raman on top of Ishitha...

Ek khwaab toh aankhon mein hai
Ek chaand ke takiye talein
Kitne dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya
nahi hai isko sula de


"Don't you dare She furiously points her index finger at his chest poking him ...I will ,What will you Do? he asks with a glint of happiness narrowing his brows...I'll call The Tandon in London "...Oh my Goshh ...I am Scared... he fakes his fear increasing her anger ...Has he got horns? he replies sarcastically ...Ravaaan " She shouts "Don't talk bad about my Bhaiya ...bhaiya he replies shocked...then his expressions changes into evil ...He buries his head on the crook of her neck and whispers "Then who I am too You ?...He asks her making her fumble with her words... Bol na halke halke
Bol na halke halke
Honth se halke halke

Bol na halke


"I love you he whispers ...in her ears... her trance breaks as he leans back.. they get captivated... her eyes brimming with tears...He wipes her waterworks with his thumb...She leans up to hug him tighter...

Umarein lagi kehate huye
Do labz the ek baat thi
Woh ek din sau saal ka
Sau saal ki woh raat thi
Kaisa lage jo chup chaap dono
Ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaa dein


They Smile through their tears relieving their moments .Their fight ...he breaks the hug and moves to the headrest as she keeps keeps her head on his shoulder...She giggles...He nudges asking why...


Bol na halke halke
Bol na halke halke
Honth se halke halke


"I was thinking about our fights ..we fought for silly reasons Mr.Raavan Kunaar she chuckles..When you hugged me in the rain I just wanted to stay like that forever in your embrace it felt homely ...She says honestly...Hmm in that case even I wanted to stay under the shower like that forever holding onto my destiny " he winks at her making her blush...Thank you for giving me a Family ...I never thought I could marry someone ..be a mother... she cries ...he hugs her "You are ruhi's ishimaa ,If my Ru sees you crying she will stop talking to me thinking that I made you cry he pouts making her smile...



"Our wedding was my Favorite Event in my Life " He says relieving the moment ...She throws her arms around him pulling him closer "But Raavan kumar Ours was different "..How?...Like other couples we were not lovely dovey ...we were fighting " she giggles ...I want to marry again he replies ...Why ?...I want you to enjoy the moments Ishitha ...No I am not Gonna marry again Our wedding was the best let it remain like that Mr.Raman "...As you say maam...



Dhaage tod laao chaandani se noor ke
Ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke

A Lone tear slips from his eyes in ecstasy ..How could he be lucky to get Someone like his Jhansi Rani in his Life after Shagun's betrayal he lost faith in love he started hating everyone ..he distanced himself from his Ruhi when that Poor Child needed his Attention ..He hated Women ..He never thought he could fall in love again but His Ishitha His Jhansi Rani Changed him ...She came into his life as a new morning dew ..She made him Love himself ..Her selfless nature attracted him ...She gave him his Ruhi back to him ...Raman pulled Ishitha closer placing an affectionate kiss on her forehead..His way of thanking her ..Ishitha knew his inner turmoil right now ..To make the situation light she spoke "Aww Mr.Raavan Kumar is crying " she makes fun of him...No I am not crying can't you keep the room clean it is so dusty . he tries wiping away his tears...She goes awe...Aww You are so cute .She cups his face and wipes of his tears ...Don't you dare go and say Mihika that I was crying...her mouth goes O shaped..You were eavesdropping she accused him ...then she chuckles "You are sensitive ..cry baby ... ...I am not a cry baby ...Okay " he reasons...he smiles "Yesterday we were fighting for the remote and sleeping in two places but today " he pulls her closer...Thank you for coming into my life "She kisses on his cheeks ..


Sharam aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
Ho saanson se uljhi rahein meri saansein

He makes her lie on her back and kisses on her collarbones sucking and soothing making her arch against him ...He whispers "Bol na halke halke, Bol na halke halke, Honth se halke halke, Bol na halke......


She smiles pulling him closer as they passionately kiss each other He sucks her upper and lower lips coaxing her for entrance she parts her lips inviting him ... "I Love you Raavan Kumar " She breathes out ...Their foreheads touching as they looked at each other with desire and passion ...he captures her lips this time gently conveying his love for her through his actions...and they cuddle to sleep with happiness and blissfulness ...


Bol na halke halke
Bol na halke halke


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Edited by sh_aarohi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os arohi
Raman took d chance seeing her jealousy n both ended up confessing their love
Liked ishra ride to d past n how she said their marriage was the best thing
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely updt aaku
Raman fell for ishita and wanted to confess his love but came to know about her having kid
Knowing this he step back
But later got to know that ishita is divorcee
At last everything got settled
Lovely end
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Posted: 7 years ago


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago


Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os akku di...
Ishita is divorcee and have 4 year son adi...
Raman loves Ishita...he admires her a lot...
Ishita is his neighbour...
Raman want to confess his feelings to her he got ready to confess...but he got to know Ishita us mother to adi...he was shattered...
He was angry on himself for loving her...
Loved raman and adi bonding...
Adi is so cute..ishu loves him a lot...
Adi bonded well with Raman...he likes Raman a lot.
Ishita admires ramdi bond..Ishita was forced into her marriage...she got divorced from her husband he don't want to take adi's responsibility
Loved how Raman took stand for his love... toshiji was angry but he confessed his love...
Finally ishra confessed their love... beautifully written di
Thnxx for pm
Edited by Amreen99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maane tu ya maane na...
Beautiful os di...
Ishta are childhood friend...
Loved their comfort level..
They love teasing each other...they are cute together...
But ishra are already engaged with Avinash and Anita...but they are so much into each other...
Their fiance don't have time for them...
Loved ishra how ishra kept signature song for their friendship...
Raman loves to tease ishu...ishu never celebrate her birthday without Raman...
I hope Ishra realize their love...they are incomplete without each other...
Raman can't see Ishita sad...Ishita got Happy knowing Raman came leaving his work to celebrate her birthday aww...
Pooja di I want u to continue this os further...want to read more..
Thnxx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb os
Aarohi di
Update next one soon
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