An Adiya drabble series... #2 updated 07/04 Pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21


Facing The Truth...


Arey tum yahan kyun khadi ho?? Let me guess.. Tumhe kisi ne andar nhn aane diya ?? Am I right or am I right? Aditya says smirking outside the cremation ground.. ( Why are you standing here?? Let me guess... They didn't let you inside? Am I right or am I right??)

Ignoring him, zoya goes towards a side to get a clear picture of her husband's burning pyre... Kyun chale gye aap hume chod ke yash?? She asks and slumps down crying ( Why did you leave me and go?)

Dekheye na yash; Kitne badkismat hai hum jo hume aapko ek aakhri alwida kehne ka mauqa bhi naseeb nhn hua... Ek aakhri baar aapko dekhne ka mauqa naseeb nhn hua hume... Zoya laments silently ( Just see how unlucky I am to not get a chance to say a final goodbye; to not get a chance to see you for the last time...)

Inn aansuon ki koi kadr nhn hai usse jiske liye tum inhe baha rahi ho; bewafa tha wo; haqdaar nhn hai iss pyaar ka aur inn ansuon ka...Aditya tells her ( The person who you are crying for doesn't care for them; he was an infidel... He doesn't deserve your tears)

Aap kyun hume tanhaayi main rone nhn de sakte? Zoya asks him

Hum aapko jaante tak nhn hai; par ek aap hain jo kitne dino se hume humare pati ke baare main anaab shanaab bole jaa rahe hain...Chahte kya hain aap?? She asks him...Kya aapko koi dukh nhn ki aapki biwi bhi iss duniya ko alwida keh ke chali gyi ( Why don't you let me cry in solace? I don't even know you but you have been speaking ill about my husband since the past so many days... What do you want?? Aren't you remorseful to lose you wife)

Nhn hai mujhe koi gam! Ek aisi aurat jo mujhse wafa na kar saki; jo humari bachpan ki dosti ki kadr na saki; uske liye kuch nhn hai mere dil main..! he tells her Aur aapko bhi nhn hona chaheye; agar uss adami ko aapki fiqar hoti toh wo meri patni ke saath aapko cheat nhn karta. Hum dono ne unse shiddat se wafa ki par unhone hume bewafai ke ilaawa kuch nhn diya... ( No I am not! A lady who couldn't be loyal to me; who couldn't respect our childhood friendship...I don't have any feelings for her...Even you shouldn't be! Your husband wouldn't have cheated on you with my wife had he cared for your tears... We both were religiously loyal to them; but they awarded us with infidelity)

Hum nhn maante...She declares ( I don't believe you)

Aapke maanne na maanne se sach jkulaaya nhn jaa sakta.. Wo dono marte waqt saath the; haath pakde hue the dono ne... He tells her ( Nothing changes; whether you believe it or not... They both were together and were holding each other's hand during their last time)

Aapki patni ka hume pta nhn par humare pati aise nhn the; wo humse beinteaah mohabbat karte the...She tells him ( I don't know about your wife but my husband wasn't a man like that...! He loved me with all his heart)

Saara dosh meri biwi pe daalne se tumhara pati mahaan nhn ho jaayega...he tells and sips his drink... ( Your husband won't be any saint even of you blame my wife entirely)

Ek baat kahe aapse; Aap maane ya na maane par aap bhi apni patni ki maut se waise he affected hain jaise hum hain...Agar na hote na toh yun humpar gussa na hote; humpe chillate nhn...Aapka saara gussa asal main aapki biwi ke liye aapka pyaar hai ( Should I tell you something?? Whether you agree to it or not; But your wife's death has afflicted you in a way my husband's has to me... otherwise you wouldn't have been angry at me; wouldn't be shouting at me... All your anguish is the love you have for your wife..)

Aap hume galat aur kamzor keh rahe hain kyunki hum ro rahe hain...Par hum aapko bta den ki rone waale log darpok nhn hote; unme himmat hoti hai apne jasbaaton ko bayaan karne ki...Par jo log apne andar he sab kuch rakhte hain na wo ghut ghut ke bujdilon ki tarah jeete hain...Aage aap faisla kar lijiyega... ( You think a person who cries and expresses is weak and wrong right? But let me tell you that a person who cries has the guts to express his/her emotions.. They aren't afraid of what the world would think about them... Rather the people who keep it all within themselves are the ones' who actually are chicken-hearted... Rest you can decide..)

Allah haafis! Zoya leaves leaving a struck aditya behind...



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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
superb part
well written conversation
i love zoya is vocal here unlike the show
waiting for part 3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
amazing update
thanks for the pm
please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Loved the chapter
This Zoya is better
Thank you for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Fabulous..
Loved it..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Wow it's beautuful...well written convo between zoya and aditya...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: suhaaana

superb part

well written conversation
i love zoya is vocal here unlike the show
waiting for part 3



Thank you so much!!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: rikara94

Amazingly written ayu

Loved it



Thank you so much jyoti😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

amazing update

thanks for the pm
please continue soon



Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Loved the chapter

This Zoya is better
Thank you for the pm dear



Thank you so much 😊

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