Maaneet FF: Companion Part 8 updated on Page 93/31-12-2018

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Simimaaneet90

@Simimaaneet90

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Risingsun626
Thanks for pm. Congrats for new story. Wonderful charactersketch but i am amazed with ur concept in prologue. Its very deep n touching. All the best.

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Simimaaneet90

@Simimaaneet90

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Part 1

There is hustle bustle going around in the house as today is the big day for them

Lady in her 50's we're running the whole house and telling the decorators to do everything perfectly
The old lady was laughing at her thinking that she is panicking for no reason

Old lady told the lady to relax and said she is running like it's her son marriage, it's just that he is returning from London after completing his project

Lady: Maa he is my son and he should have a grand welcome
Old lady: I really don't understand Amrita what will you do when he will get married
Amrita: I will make it grand, more than this maa

One boy and girl came and sat on the sofa beside their dadi

Boy: yes mom only bhai is your son, me and Annie is nothing
Annie: so True dev mom just love bhai more, for us only dadi is there

Both hugged dadi and amrita were frowning at both kids

Amrita: yeah yeah you all laugh and I love you all equally
Dev: pls mom we all know that you love bhai a lot
Dadi: amrita we all know that you love Maan a lot

Amrita had tears in her eyes, she came and sit near her kids and cupped their face and kissed their forehead

Amrita: I love you both but yes I have special place for Maan in my heart
Dadi: we know amrita we are just teasing you
Amrita: dev Annie, maan made me a mother, he was the one who called me mom
Dev: we know mom and our bro is the best in the world
Annie: yes my brother is the best not like this idiot who always irritate me
Dev: hey I never irritate you it's always you
Annie: Let bhai come then he will tell who irritates whom

A lady was standing at the corner and watching all this and cursing
She came and sit on the sofa beside Annie and Dev

Annie and Dev doesn't like her at all but she is elder so they tolerate her else they would never stand her

Lady: Annie your so called brother will not support you

Annie and dev cannot stand a word against their brother so Annie decided to give her a good response

Annie: Bua ji, my Maan bhai can do anything for me
Dev: yes bua ji, he can do anything for all of us
Sunaina: That's good if he can but amrita tell me one thing why you are doing so much for maan

Before amrita could ans Dev replied because he is special for mom

Sunaina got irritated that these kids are talking to me like this

Sunaina: Dev try to understand Beta your mom always differentiate between you and Maan
Amrita: Sunaina I have never differentiate between my kids but yes Maan had a special place in my heart
Dadi: Sunaina he is the first child of this house so we all love him and had special place in our heart

Before Sunaina could say anything amrita went from there as she can't stand a word against Maan and she want to insult her sister in law in front of her kids and mother in law

Amrita was instructing the cooks to make Maan fav food
She told dev to pick up cake at 7 pm to which he nodded

Annie: mom when is bhai coming
Amrita: His flight will land at 6 so he will be home around 8
Dev: I will pick him up from the airport mom

Amrita blessed her kids and went to her room

She was sitting on the bed, Suddenly there was a tap on her shoulder
She wiped her tears and saw that her husband is there. She hugged him tightly and started crying loudly

Raj can't see tears in his wife eyes so he try to make her calm
She kept her head on his shoulder and hugged him tightly

Raj: why are you crying amrita
Amrita: I don't differentiate between my kids Raj
Raj: who told you this, we all know that you love all our kids
Amrita: I love Maan more becoz he made me a mother and was my first child, he had special place in my heart but that doesn't mean I will not love my dev and Annie
Raj: again Sunaina said something
Amrita: why she hate my Maan
Raj: we all know the reason dear

Amrita couldn't stop crying so Raj told her to take rest
She denied but he told her for Maan she should take rest as Maan will not like his mom to be tired

Raj was very angry so he decided to talk to his sister but amrita told him not to say a word to her as she doesn't want party to get spoil

He went to his parents who were sitting in their room and told them to tell Sunaina not to say a word against Maan as he can't see amrita in that condition
They told him to relax and after the party they will talk to her and will make her understand

On the other hand a girl was sitting in her cabin and was engrossed in her work that suddenly she got a call from her friend that today evening she had to come for her birthday party

She nodded and went to her Dad cabin to convey the message that she will be going to her friend party
Her father was busy in a meeting so she waited for some time

As soon as he completed his meeting, he came to meet his daughter who was busy in her work
He thought that she is so different, why can't be she like a normal girl

Geet sensed that her father is in her cabin so she stood up

Mohinder: Geet you came to my cabin anything urgent
Geet: yes Dad I wanted to say that in the evening I am going to my friend party
Mohinder: Geet you already know that in the evening we have to go at my friend place

Geet was getting irritated so she just snapped that she will not go to his friend place

Mohinder: what is your problem, why can't you understand
Geet: I can say same for you Dad too, why can't you understand me
Mohinder: ok fine but first you have to go with us at my friend place then at 9 you can leave as I know you have late night party
Geet: ok but I will just stay for an hour over there as I don't know anyone out there
Mohinder: It just a matter of an hour and you know ppl out there

It was evening whole khurana mansion was decorated like it seems it's someone's wedding

Geet was amazed by the decoration, she told her mom that is someone's wedding or what

GEET DRESS

Her mother told " their son is back from London so they have thrown the party

Geet thought people can be so wiered that they are throwing party for someone coming back

Khurana's welcome Handa's as both are family friends but their kids are not in touch much

Amrita told Annie to take care of Geet but Geet was annoyed so she told her to leave her alone

Geet just took a glass of wine and stand at the corner becoz she was not interested in the party, she was just waiting for an hour to finish so that she can leave for the party

Mr Handa and Mr khurana we're talking about their business

Mohinder: where is your son Raj
Raj: He is getting ready so he will be here soon
Mohinder: Any plans for his marriage
Raj: not yet Mohinder, what about your daughter
Mohinder: she is not interested, she is very straightforward
Raj: That's good, people should be like this

Before he could response his wife came and told him that Geet is leaving the party
He replied let her go as she had another party to attend
Rano doesn't like this kind of behaviour of Geet and decided to talk to her once she reaches home

As soon as Geet left Maan enter the hall in a black three piece suit

All girls were looking at him with open mouth but he ignored them
He went and took blessing from his grandparents then from his parents
They all blessed him but Sunaina doesn't bless him

He was sad but his siblings took him to the stage where he was suppose to cut the cake
His father took the mike and addressed everyone

"Hello Everyone

Thank you all for coming to the party and giving your wishes to my son
You all must be thinking why we have thrown party for him
I will tell you all, we were having problem in our London branch and it was on the verge of closing down. If it would have been closed then we would have been in a big loss
My son went over there and dealt with all the problems for one year and today he came back by making it again no 1 in UK
I am really proud of you my son

Maan was overwhelmed by his Dad speech that he hugged him tightly
His mother came and give him blessings
He was told to cut the cake and he cut it and first bite he gave to his mom and then to his dad

All were enjoying the party but dev was sitting in one corner and was busy in his phone
Annie came and snatched his phone, dev wanted his phone at any cost

Dev: pls annie give me my phone
Annie: you were talking to Meera
Dev: yes now pls give it back to me

Maan saw his sibling and heard meera name so he came and asked about Meera
Annie was about to say who is meera but dev gestured her to keep quite

Annie: no one bhai, one of my friend
Maan: okay but why dev is so tensed
Dev: nothing bro
Annie: leave him bhai but you tell me have you bring my gifts
Maan: of course bacha

One of his business associates called him so he left
Dev snatched his phone from Annie hand and thanked her for not telling anything to Maan

Annie: why don't you tell bhai about Meera
Dev: becoz if I told anything to bro then he will definitely tell mom
Annie: so what let it be
Dev: no not now, first I wanted to achieve something in life like bro then I will tell
Annie: ok

Party was going in full swing and everyone was enjoying it to the fullest but only one person who was not enjoying was Maan
His mother came and asked him that what happened to which he replied that he is very tired

Amrita: go and take rest Beta
Maan: no mom it doesn't look nice
Amrita: we will handle you just take rest
Maan: no mom I am fine you enjoy

She kisses his forehead and blessed him and announced everyone that dinner is served
Maan just had his dinner and went to his room and slept as he was very tired

Next day it was Sunday so everyone was enjoying their holiday
Raj called Maan to his study as he wanted to discuss something

Maan knocked the door, Raj made him sit on the chair opposite him

Raj: I need to talk something imp son
Maan: yes Dad
Raj: Do you have anyone in your life Maan
Maan: pardon Dad
Raj:are you seeing any girl
Maan: no Dad but what happened
Raj: There is a proposal for you
Maan: Dad right now I am not ready
Raj: ok in the evening just meet her and see if you like her then we will proceed further

Maan just nodded and went to his room, he had no one in his life but he does not want to get married but he doesn't want to let down his parents so he decided to meet the girl

PRECAP: MAAN AND GIRL MEETING

NOTE: THIS UPDATE IS OPEN BUT NEXT WILL BE ON BLOG WITH PASSWORD

SO IF YOU WANT TO READ IT FURTHER THEN PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS PART AS WHO WILL COMMENT WILL GET THE PASSWORD

Disclaimer :-This story n its concept is purely mine if there is any similarity then its purely co-incidence ...Any character any incident r purely coming from imagination...

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Will read and comment soon baby

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Lovely update

Waiting for next update.

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Superb start buddy !
Maan is the one who is concerned about all his family members while Geet doesn't care much
Maan's parents and all family members are proud of him and love him except his bua, Sunaina. Why so ?
Maan's father spoke about his marriage and meeting a girl for that and Maan could not deny

Continue soon...

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

wow my favourite
I will read and comment

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chavi12345

@chavi12345

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Woh nice update ... Why his don't like Maan ... Love Maan mom live to him... Geet is wiered...no maaneet meet... Waiting for maaneet.,.. is it geet meet Maan for proposal... Loved Anni and Dev love for Maan...