AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 65

what an update it was! great writing ! specifically the poetic lines in the beginning👏 

Originally posted by: docritu99

Such a sweet soul u are.! 😊

Please update. I know it's too early to ask. Daydreaming of your story is all going on my life. Can't really focus on work.

Heey Ri !!!! Finally I made it.(comment)





Edited by Kathy_927 - 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Hey Riya Hey buddy.!
Finally was able to catch up last 2 updated yayy.! You are here. ! absolutely beautiful filled with loads of surprises Thank u so much Avneils are couple goals right now inspite of the little difference they managed to come together when they needed the most Yes, you have put them in a very correct frame of words. Loved that another cliffhanger I am loving the last part 😉 , hope both are not tube lights anymore 😆 Hahaaa 😆 Lets be fair, Kabhi kabhi tubelight banna bhi bada faydemand hojata hai. 😉

Much love
Safia

Hey safia,
Thank u so much for taking the time to read and appreciate.!
Means a lot to me.!
Much Love.!

Originally posted by: sushfiza

what an update it was! great writing ! specifically the poetic lines in the beginning👏 Awww, Thank u so much for mentioning that.

so shweta has no idea about the happening bet avneil. yes She is clueless.! Poor soul neela ko laga k avni so gyi hogi? how can avni hav a sleep after all this. avni succesfully made neela believe that she was fast asleep. avni need time to understand everything. Time is a great remedy. Seems like a true case with Avni. And somebody has definately helped her. 😉

whoaso Mrmillionaireis there at avni's house! poor soul what could do.. must b having a restless time after all and he'll b at peace once all these things short out. Yes ofcourse he was restless, only for Avni. How could he have slept wothout cheking on her . jaise hi neil ka naam liya avni ne , neil ko pta lag gyahaaye, heart to heart connection! n how cutely he held is ears tabhi to avni melt ho gyi hogi😉 The deepest of relations do bring out such connections.! 😉

avni is trulya gem of a person , shattered avni still remembers how imp d day is for neil tomorrow. You are so right. Considering tje condition she was in, its hard to be compassionate but she did it

avni is in neil's office? but how come? chamatkar hogya😉bechara neil ab full to energetic hoke presentationde payega😛 Haa chamtkar toh hua hai, jiski thodi details next chapter me milegi 😉

the hug was need of d hour. i can see things ll b bettr from now on .. Bingo.! It was a dwelling need for both of them 😉

hope to have another long avneil update

update soon

ps: the tears paragraph was awesome.👍🏼 Thank u so very much for specifically mention that.

Heya.!
Thank.u so much for ur amazing words.!
They are my real rewards.!
Keep them.coming my way!
Much love.!

Originally posted by: sushfiza

it is from movie tumbin na?

Yes.! Its from Tum bin.!
We were discussing about that movie.!

Originally posted by: radhikrishna89

Please update. I know it's too early to ask. Daydreaming of your story is all going on my life. Can't really focus on work.

Awww, that was so sweet of you to say that.!
But plz focus on your work.!

Also i will be updating in quiet sometime now, so be happy. ! 😉

RemovedEdited by docritu99 - 5 years ago

Finally i have time to comment on this story!! I have to say, the flashbacks were sooo aww-dorable!! I'm in love with Mr Smitten Khanna! All the time and resources put into finding our stubborn girl. Such a romantic! Avni's reaction was expected - the poor girl has just started understanding feelings and then had to face a myriad of them after Neil tells her the truth!

My favourite part was the rain scene. They didn't need words to convey how they felt and they were able to communicate without them with a window and a great distance between them. So beautiful! That was when I thought maybe Avni could forgive him all by herself. But I guess she's not there yet, feelings-wise. Wonder what Bebe said!

Update soon my love 😳