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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
i am finally starting it
who all are waiting


m posting a short teaser first
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Posted: 7 years ago
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oh me plz update eagerly waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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#SHOT 1

He looked very angry with his red eyes and the next moment he just got up and went towards the guy and pulled him up with his collar and without a second thought he just punched him hard on his face. There was so much anger masked with the repentance and guilt that could hardly be seen and he looked at the woman sitting across the man and immediately she stood up.

How dare you? How could you touch her like this, who are to you? how you touch her? Tum hote kaun ho? He questioned with his eyes still glazed and his gaze settled on the girl who was standing didn't deter and she just defended her name.

Hey, hey, dude calm down, you are drunk beyond limits and I think you are mistaking me for someone. Calm down, the guy tried to soothe the anger that was projected towards him and he didn't even know even the reason.

Suddenly he was supported by two people who apologized to them. The man in question was the only son of business magnate Raj singh khurana and he was held back by his two friends. They looked painfully at geet and she didn't even looked at them. She didn't had the heart to confront now and the way today he behaved she didn't know what will happen in the future. She could feel the pain that was behind his angry eyes. No one didn't but she saw the cut marks on his hand with which he punched Arjun. She felt her heart lurched but she didn't let herself feel bad for Maan, not anymore, he was a closed chapter of her life and it will remain like that only she resolved.

I am sorry, he is drunk beyond limits, we are sorry on his behalf. He is not in his right state of mind. I am sorry again, said the guy who was with the young man who was now helplessly dragged by two of his friends. They were taking maan outside but maan was uncontrollable, he was hurt, he didn't know why it hurt so much, what was his mistake. He looked at the two people who were not letting him talk to his geet and were making him move out. He was held by yash and karan was talking to his fianc calling her there as soon as possible. It was only her who could control MSK now.

Leave me yash, leave me. I said leave me I will tell that bas***d today that he can't take what's mine. He can't have her yash, geet is mine. How dare that bas***d touch her, I will kill him. Maan's words were met by a tight slap and he looked at his best friend who was looking at him with so much anger and hatred that made maan flinch.

How dare you?

Maan yelled at the woman and this time he was held back by yash.

Shut up, just shut this mouth of yours, and what did you said tumhari geet, when did she became yours, shayad tum bhool gaye Maan khurana, you left her, you insulted her, Mazak banaya uski feelings ka and you have the audacity to call that innocent girl yours. Now just shut this mouth of yours and come with us, bahut tamasha bana chuke ho Maan khurana not more.

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I will post it like my drabble

So short updates will be posted.

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
thanks 4 updating!

Shot 1

astounding update! well written!

Maan is in pain but he is at fault! Maan is drunk and creates a scene! though Geet loves him she has decided to move on!

Yash was right! Maan now seems to be repenting but he hurt her so much!!

But Maan is also engaged so why does he want Geet? who is Maan's fiancee?

continue soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Maan in drunken sense feels that Geet is still his she belongs to him
he has but all forgotten that he insulted her and made fun of her love
and it also seems like he is engaged and has his own fiancee
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
feeling sad fr geet maan insulated her love her feelings
now he is creating fuss now he is in same boat
geet is very hurt with him n didnt want to see his face
hating maan fr hurting her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting update
maan create sceen in drunken state seeing geet with someone else as he himself hurt her badly n push her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
nice start
Maan already left Geet but now calling her his
he is drunk
may be he now loves her but it's too late
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Why I'm smelling ...i have to cry
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks 4 updating!


Shot 1

astounding update! well written!

Maan is in pain but he is at fault! Maan is drunk and creates a scene! though Geet loves him she has decided to move on!

Yash was right! Maan now seems to be repenting but he hurt her so much!!

But Maan is also engaged so why does he want Geet? who is Maan's fiancee?

continue soon


no maan is not engaged yr

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