#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 58

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Posted: 7 years ago
Excellent piece of writing by akriti...
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Just awesome superb fabulous emotional OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful come emotional os dear
Love it

Feel bad for Ishu no girl can go through this pain anymore never and ever

Ishu doesn't want to go away from Raman because he can't protect her but she loves him a lot doesn't want him to go through insult because of her but she forgot that his life his Jaan is her

I am really proud of Raman moreover amazed by his love for Ishu

He try to protect her but unable too

He wants to ask her forgiveness but she is disappeared suddenly make him feel more guilty

Mimi always there for ishra

Only mihika words make him to fight for his love as a strength to fight against every odds

Love you for happy ending dear

Finally Ishu accept to marry him

He is ready to die what a true love

It was awesome ever dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb beautiful and emotional os
ishu was rapped and that's why she left him
Raman was guilty for not able to save her
loved it
finally she agreed to marry him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello everyone . .
Here I am back with my 1St os of this song os thon...
I have not been active on this forum from quite few weeks...
But I have been regularly updating my stories on wattpad...
Do follow me on wattpad to read my updates...


Ps: this os is specially dedicated to my sweet sister cum friend TWINKLESOLANKI...
Who suggested this song...
Hope you all will like this os...
Do post your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
- Love viji❤️

Ishra Os_Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahar...

Ishita was beautifully dressed in her favorite pink coloured kanjivaram saree... With gajra on her head and minimal make up just the way her ravan Kumar likes it... She was running around the whole house which was fully decorated, instructing and checking if everything was going on tact...

She being the elder daughter in law, it was her duty to take incharge of this work... And more over today her family is going to witness another punjabi tamil wedding...

Yes her baby sister mihika is going to be married to her own brother in law Romi and now the whole bhalla clan had reached to Chennai to attend the marriage... There was a huge clash between the bhalla and iyer clan... To decide which type of wedding it would be... But finally mrs.Iyer won over mrs.bhalla... Doing all kinds of cheating...

Now as it was Tamil wedding and it was scheduled to happen at early morning muhurtham... But the bhalla's were no where to be seen making her tensed... She knew it was the effect of previous night's sangeet party... They had partied hard the whole night with fully loaded drink and now all were flat in their respective rooms...

Ishu... Ishu... Came running ishita's amma tensedly...

Ishita : kya hua amma... Why are you so tensed...

Madhavi : ishu... Yeh punjabi log kidhar hai... Isiliye I told your appa not to encourage them for sangeet party dekha na what happened last night... Kaise sharab peeke hungama kiya un logon ney... Ayo ishu... Look... All our relatives have started coming and they wanted to meet our in-laws... Are they even ready for the marriage or not...

Ishita : amma... Amma... Just relax... All are ready... They will be coming in few minutes... Aap jao... Mihika ko ready karo na... There is time amma don't worry... I... I'll just go call them... She consoled her amma... But she knows it was not just to call them... But she had a huge task to wake her crazy in-laws and get them decked up for their own son's marriage before her mother would start with another fighting session with her mother in law..

She went to her mother in-law's room, and saw her mother in law in deep dream land holding a bottle of loaded drink in her hand... It was not a rocket science for ishita to guess that she might have passed out being heavily drunk...

Mummy ji... She patted her slowly... To receive no response...

Mummy ji... Utiye na... She shook her gently disturbing her sleep...

Toshi: ishita puttar what are you doing here...

Ishita kept her hands on her hip glaring at her...

Ishita : what's this mummy ji... Today is your son's marriage and you are still sleeping... Muhurat nikal jayega mummy ji...

Toshi : arey yaar... Who schedules a marriage at mid night...

Ishita : mummyji its early morning not mid night...

Toshi : hum punjabiyon ke liye yeh mid night hi hai puttar...

Ishita : kuch bhi... Mummy ji you know what waha amma is making all arrangements and receiving the guests too... she is even taking care of our punjabi guests from pind and everyone one are praising her for being so caring towards them... Aur aapko pata hai... Shaila Bua is very angry not finding you...

Toshi : kyaaa... Hayee rabba mar gai mein... She got up with a jerk... Ishita puttar you please handle her for sometime... Mein Fata fatt... Ready ho jaati hoon...

Ishita : you don't worry mummyji I already told her that you are ready and you'll be there in few minutes...

Toshi : hayee... Yeh hui na baat... Meri sone bahu ho tum... She hugged her happily and went to freshen up hurriedly...

Ishita giggled seeing her plan working perfectly...

She now moved towards romi's room... To see him in deep slumber... She shook her head in disbelief seeing the groom to be in few minutes sleeping like a kumbkaran...

Romi... She called softly patting his cheeks..

Romi smiled like a fool with his eyes closed making ishita frown at him...

Romi uto...

Romi : miku... Baby tum aagai... He clutched her hands tightly against his cheeks and pecked her palm... Making ishita open her eyes wide... She pulled her hands with force ... Making Romi fall in the process... He was wincing in pain holding his back...

Romi : bhabi aap?... Sorry woh... I thought its mihika... He said embarrassed... Still rubbing his back trying to hide his pain...

Ishita wasn't able to control her laughter seeing this...

Ishita : tum bhi na Romi... Can't you even differentiate between my voice and miku's voice... Ruko il tell miku this...

Romi : please bhabhi... Don't do that... Woh Ladki pagal hai... You know what happened few days ago she sent me her childhood holi pics with her friends were she was immersed in colors and asked me to identify her... She didn't talk to me for 2 long days for finding it wrong... Abhi yeh baat pata chal gai toh she will definitely cancel the wedding... He said sadly...

Ishita laughed aloud Finding it too cute...
thinking of her brother in law who was trapped with her gundi sister mihika...

Ishita : Romi... Now You get ready soon... Warna miku will really cancel the marriage if her own groom will be late for the marriage...

Romi ran inside the bathroom fearing of his crazy to be wife...

She had a great time waking them up... But now she had a huge task to wake her own husband who was ravan of Ravans especially after what he had done last night she just wanted to give him a peace of mind... She would not mind to throw him out too if it wasn't wedding today...

She entered her own bedroom in her house to see it completely messed all credits to her ravan Kumar... He was sleeping like a baby hiding his face in the pillow in midst of the mess... She could not manage to admire... But her anger took over chasing her love that blossomed...

Ishita : ravan Kumar look how he is sleeping after creating such a big scene yesterday...

Uto... Ravan Kumar... Utooo... She took a pillow beside and hit him hardly waking him up...

Raman : moti madrsan sone dho na... He said irritatedly making her anger reach new heights...

She just pulled the duvet of him and shook him vigorously... Totally pissed off he pulled her above him crushing her in his arms...

Ishita : raman... Kya kar rahe ho... Chodo mujhe... My saree... Ayoo.. Ravan Kumar chodo... She struggled in his arms...

Raman: no ways... How will I let go when my wifey is looking super sexy in this kanjeevaram saree and my favorite gajra... Mmm... He inhaled her fragrance running his nose on her collar bone... To receive a hard smack on his chest... With a deadly glare...

Raman : kya hua... Why are you angry early in the morning madrasan..

Ishita : as if you don't know... Ravan Kumar don't you know what you did last night...

Raman : aisa kya kiya meine... He tried to recall but only to go in vain...

Ishita : haan... What else can I expect from a drunken monkey...

Raman : madrsan... Kya hua... Bolo na aise meine kya kiya...

Ishita : ask me what you did not do raman... You were fully drunk and you were not in your senses... Pata hai aapne kya kiya...

Raman : aise kya kiya meine...

Ishita : you thought vandu akka as me and you picked her in your arms even after she struggling so much... You got her to our room and started dancing in here messing the whole room...

Raman's eyes widened in shock listening to this scaring the shit out of him... He pushed her on the bed beside him and got up with the jerk...

Raman : pagal ho kya tum... Tum... Tum jhoot bol rahi ho... Ishita stop your pranks... I... I know ki meine aisa kuch nahi kiya... He fumbled fearing of vandu... Vadhu was the only member in her family who raman was scared of ... Vandhu being a principal she always treated him like some naughty student in her school..

Raman : oh god no... Vandhu... Vandhu mujhe maar dalegi yaar... He ruffled his hair tensedly...

She couldn't control her laughter seeing his face ...

Raman : ishita... Stop laughing... Sach bolo... Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hai na...

Ishita: I was just kidding Raman... Its so cute to see scary ravan Kumar... You danced messing the whole room... But with me... I was angry on you... Isiliye I wanted to give the taste of your own medicine...

Immediately he jumped on her pinning her beneath him...

Raman : how dare you madrsan... You really scared me yaar... Pehle hi vandu ko dekh ke mujhe itna dar lagta hai... Just imagine what she might have done if I had to pick her in my arms and dance...

Ishita giggled imagining the scenario...

Ishita: vandu akka would have been killed you by now...

Raman : I know... I pity bala... Par madrsan I am not going to spare you for playing this prank on me early morning...

Ishita : ravan Kumar... I was so angry on you...I dint not want to spare you for last night... I know it's your brother's marriage... Toh koi itna peeta hai kya...

Raman : arey chodo na yaar... Y are you angry for that... He asked rubbing his nose on hers Trying to calm her down...

Ishita : aur nahi toh kya... You got drunk and you wanted to romance with me in front of everyone... You picked me up and got to our room ... Without minding any teasings and dekho room ko kya haal bana diya... Ishita dance with me... Dance with me karke...

Raman : I did so much?.. Mujhe toh yaad hi nahi hai... So why don't we just recreate what happened last night... I am sure... I would have held you by your waist like this... He said running his hands on her waist naughtily... Phir... Aise... Idhar... He moved his hands above... She gave a hard smack on his hand and pushed him back and got up correcting her saree...

Ishita : raman... Now stop your badmashi .. Chalo go freshen up... It's your brother's wedding raman how could you be so irresponsible...

Raman : arey stop it yaar... Don't Start your lecture... Tum ho na... I know my wifey would have made all necessary arrangements.. Haina... From muhurat to suhagrat... Waise madrsan... Don't forget aaj hamara bhi first night hai...

She kept her hands on her hips giving a are you serious look...

Raman : First matlab first night nahi hai... I know... Its... Its.. Erm.. I lost count on the nights but I mean to say... We will also be celebrating our night in a first night set up... Kitna maza ayega na... He squealed happily...

Ishita : besharam... You are father of 2 kids raman... Sharam karo... Kaise baatein kar rahe ho...

Raman : arey what's about being shameless in this... 2 kids aise thodi na aagaye hai... Mehnat kiya hai madam meine...

Ishita : aapse na baat karna hi bekaar hai... Go freshen up now... Warna yeh shadi bhi nahi hogi...

Raman : oh no... No marriage matlab no first night... Shit atleast for my first night sake I should freshen up... Move moti madrsan... Why are you blocking my way... He pushed her aside and went into washroom leaving open mouthed ishita behind...

Ishita : ravan Kumar na... He will never change... She shook her head thinking of his never ending drama and was about to leave the room...

Mamma... There came a voice from behind breaking her trance...

She turned to see her naughty little ravan Kumar all decked up like a punjabi puttar in patani suit, all set to attend his chachu chithi marriage...

Ishita : Adiii...aap itne jaldi ready hogai ho... She picked her 5 year old son in her arms and hugged him to her heart...

Adi: Haan mamma adi is super boy haina... So super fast ready hogaya hoon... Dekho dadu ne mujhe ready kiya aur thatha bhi... Mamma mein kaise lag raha hoon...

Ishita : My baby... Aap toh mamma ki super boy hona... And my super boy is looking soo cute she said kissing his chubby cheeks...

Adi : Mamma... I am not cute... Handsome bolo... He said pouting...

She shook her head knowing from where he learnt this sentence from...

Ishita : my chotu bilkul handsome lag rahe ho... Bas?..

Adi : More than papa?.. asked her jallu son...

Ishita : Haan more than papa... My chotu ravan is the most handsome in the world...

Adi: I love you mamma... He hugged her happily squealing in happiness...

Ishita : I love you more my baby... Chalo chalo lets get others ready too...

She took him out to see all the guests arrived and Toshiji who was now welcoming the guests competing with her mother...

And on the other side param and bala were fighting over the music to be played... making her shake her head in disbelief... Seeing their routine drama...

She went to check on mihika... Mihika was beautifully dressed in a red colored kanjeevaram saree all decked up and ready for the wedding...

Aweee... Someone is looking soo beautiful... Said ishita walking towards mihika...

Akka... She turned giving a bright smile...

Ishita : sachi miku... You are looking damn gorgeous and romi toh ekdum flat hone wala hai...

Mihika blushed listening to her comment...

Romi ko chodo... How about your husband... Hosh aaya ya abhi tak flat hi hai... Came vandhu shooting daggers with little ruhi in her arms...

Ishita just glared at her for leaving no chance for taunting her husband, but her eyes were now fixed on her princess who was squealing in vandhu's arms all set to jump to her mamma...

Ishita : rooh... My princess... She picked her year old daughter who was dressed in a pattu pavadai and gajra on her tiny pig tails looking like a miniature of ishita...

Ruhi giggled and blabbered nothing and everything getting her mamma's attention... After all that drama her papa created last night she had to be with her strict vandhu periamma for whole night missing the masti that she would do along with her papa troubling her mamma and adi bhayya to core...

Ishita : rooh... Aapne mamma ko missie kiya...

Papa... Papa... Ruhi... Tapped ishita's face with her little palm saying that she missed her papa more...

Ishita: papa ki chamchi... You missed papa more huh?... Naught bacha... Papa also missed you chooo much... She tickled Ruhi making her laugh whole heartedly...

Vadhu : papa was in the condition to miss his daughter... Interrupted the strict principal again...

Ishita : stop taunting my husband akka... He was slightly drunk... Isiliye aisa kiya... Warna he is a gentleman...

Vandhu : haan... Haan.. I verywell know about your gentleman husband... He is one shameless person ishu... She made faces recalling all naughty things that raman do to get close to ishita anytime and anywhere...

She was about to give back to her sister...but soon the bride was called to the mandap... Reminding them of the marriage that is to happen...

Ishita and vandhu took mihika to the mandap... while romi drooled at her shamessly with open mouth...

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar
Apnon ka pyar kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha
Khushi ka khumaar kya Kehna

Beta mooh band karo... Teri hi biwi bane wali hai... Teased raman... Making mihika blush profusely...

Khile khile chehron se aaj
Ghar hai mera
Gule gulzaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj
Ghar hai mera
Gule gulzaar kya kehna

The pandit started chanting mantras... Raman was sighing ishita to come near him... She eyed him to keep quiet... But he pleaded yearning asking her to come stand next to him... Not able to see his cute puppy face she with ruhi in her arms went and stood next to raman...


Aye dil laaya hai bahaar
Apnon ka pyar kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha
Khushi ka khumaar kya kehna
Hum tum yun hi milte rahein
Mehfil yun hi sajti Rahe

Ruhi immediately jumped into her papa's arms... He held ruhi in one hand and wounded his other around ishita's shoulder and now enjoyed the wedding happily having his love by his side...

Bas pyaar ki yehi ek dhun
Har subah shaam bajti rahe
Gale mein mehekte rahein
Pyaar bhari
Baahon ke haar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj
Ghar hai mera
Gule gulzaar kya Kehna

Raman : ish... He leaned forward and wishepered in her ears...

Ishita : hmm...

Raman : hum phire shaadi kare?...

She frowned listening to it...

Raman : really ish... I want to marry you again... Just look at romi and mihika... They look like our mini version... I want to marry you all over again... What say madam... Bait jaye mandap mein?... He pulled her by her elbows... Nuzzling her earlobe...

Ishita : raman... Kya kar rahe ho... She pushed him slightly back embarrassed seeing him getting close to her in midst of the crowd...

Raman : Ruhi... See how unromantic your mamma is... Tum Na Bhool Jao... You should adjust with your adi bhayya only... You are not going to get any more choti bhai behan... He complained to his daughter who was keenly listening to his rants...

Ishita : sharam karo raman... Bachi se kaise baatein kar rahe ho...She just smacked him for being as shameless as always...

He tried to pull her closer and give back to her... But he saw vandhu glaring at him standing right opposite to him..

Raman : yeh vandhu bhi na... She's glaring as if I am teasing some random girl on road... yeh principal mujhe baksh kyun na deti yaar... He said hiding behind ishita like a bheegi billi making her giggle at him...

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar
Apnon ka pyar kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha
Khushi ka khumaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj
Ghar hai mera
Gule gulzaar kya kehna

Soon Romi and mihika took pheras and exchanged garland happily... When romi tied mangalsutra around mihikas neck... And filled her partition with sindoor...

Ishita clutched raman's hand tightly entwining her fingers with his.. he knew she was emotional reimmersing their marriage...

I love you jaan.. He said taking their entwined hands to his mouth and pecked the back of her palm...

I love you more mamma... Interrupted adi coming in-between ishra pushing raman little away from ishita...

Raman : pata nahi how he gets to know that I am romancing my wife... My all time haddi is my own son .. Wah .. He said faking smile...

Ishita : kuch bhi raman... Dont call my son haddi... Mera jaan hai mera adiii... Haina... Adiii... She picked her son in her arms hugged him tight...

While adi showed his tongue teasing his dad for getting extra attention from his mamma... raman pouted seeing his mamma's boy...

While ruhi daddy's Lil girl kissed his cheeks as if she was saying she loves her papa the most... Making raman smile the brightest of smiles... He kissed ruhi's pink chubby cheeks and pulled ishita too closer hiding his little family in his embrace... Ishita smiled leaning on raman's chest enjoying the wedding...

Khile khile chehron se aaj
Ghar hai mera
Gule gulzaar kya kehna.

The End.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os dii
Loved ishra scenes
Raman is bheegi billi in front of vandu😆
Loved it
Thnx for the pm dii
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Posted: 7 years ago
raman fell in luv with d orphan ishita.so nice.shocking that ishita got raped by a gang n raman could'nt protect her.so painful.ishra meeting again was very emotional.loved ishita trying to make raman understand that whatever happened wasnt his fault.good that ishita didnt let raman do any blunder.hug was emotional.ishita moving away from raman as she is a raped girl was painful.glad that ishita saved raman again.loved ishita saying that only she can punish him n his punishment is to marry her.beautiful song matched the story.perfect pics
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Posted: 7 years ago
@viji
fabulous and a very happy os
Raman is so naughty
vandu is the strict principal and Raman seems really scared of her 😆
bechara puttar biwi scared him using vandus name
aww love the cute little family 😳
Edited by DikshaN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago

Sorry for the late reply Di

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