#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 13

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Posted: 7 years ago
very emotional os di... loved ishra scene ... beautifully written...
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BTW just now I had noticed that both Os's songs had suggested by me wowww harshita kya songs suggests kiye hai 😉 phr toh ye oses awesome hone hi the .. 😎
Hahaha
Ok enough for my joke bt really both oses are just awesome
Waiting for more oses..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Akku...u nailed it girl..
FYi...that is the lamest reason for a breakup..
But if the consequence of such break up is this wild..manjoor hai boss
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Posted: 7 years ago
So emotional...
Thank you for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional update
Song suits very well
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Yeh Kya...this is sad...tragedy story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey
Fabulous work akkuu

Love it

Wonderful Os

Take Care
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Hey
Emotional yet Amazing Os

Love it

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Hi everyone, here I am with my first os in this song os thon. The song is, ek dil hai, from movie Padmavat,suggested by cooldilkaur aka dilpreet.she was the first one to suggest me song, so writing this first,enjoy.

ISHQ BHI TU MERA PYAAR BHI TU


Everyone was sitting on the stairs on their college campus and was busy in discussion when Raman came whistling and humming a song. He settled next to ishita and said -whats happening jaan. He asked casually only to get his hands shrugged.

Raman -kya??

Ishita -as if u don't know raman.

Raman thought for a while and said closing his eyes and said -come on jaan, u r still stuck at it. Arey I was just talking casually. Tu kya chahti hai ki main kisi ladki se baat naa kar, just because I am ur boyfriend. Come on jaan, u r being over possesive for me.

Ishita -maine kab kaha ki tum kisi se baat mat karo. But I don't like how that girl was falling on u. I am not being over possesjve raman, it's just I don't want to loose u.

Raman -kuch bhi, aise koi mere gale mein hang karegi toh I will dump u. U really think so low about me. Really ishi. He was saying when she said -i don't know, but I know one thing, ki tum mujhse itna pyaar nahi karte raman jitna main karti hoon. Tabhi tumhe kisi baat se fark nahi padta, naa mere hurt hone se, aur naa hi mere aansuyon se. She said wiping her tears.

Raman -shit ishi, don't do this, stop this emotional drama. I can't take it.

Ishita -then don't take, I am going. Saying so she was going when one of their friend Rahul said -hey ishita, where u r going?? We have to discuss many things.

Ishita -i told u naa, I am OK with it. Just make sure u consider my one condition.

Rahul -r u sure??

Ishita looked at Raman and said -yes. Saying so she went while Raman look at Rahul and said -koi mujhe bhi batayega kya ho raha hai??

Rahul-arey bhardwaj sir retire ho rahe hai naa.

Raman -toh??

Rahul -toh we r planning to give him a grand farewell.

Raman -cool, toh??

Sheetal-so we r planning to play the drama, story of raani padmavati.arey jispe abhi movie bani hai. That's his favourite topic naa.remember how many times he teached us that particular topic.

Raman -drama, wow, great idea. Toh casting ho gayi. Who will play the lead role.

Rahul -ishita, who else. She is the best to play that role.

Raman -wow, and I will be her husband. Maza aayega, we can have some romantic moments. Bahut saara romance daalna. He said excitedly while Rahul and sheetal look at each other.

Raman -what?? Koi issue hai, don't tell me u guys choosed someone else. Ishita kabhi kisi aur ke saath nahi play karne wali.

Rahul -she agreed, infact she told me straightly not to cast u opposite her as she don't want to play any role with u.

Raman -kya?? Ishita ne kaha ki main uske hubby ka role play naa karun. Matlab woh kisi aur ki padmavati banegi.

Rahul and sheetal nodded in yes.

Raman -holy shit, is she crazy. U stay here only. I am just coming. He said and walked to their classroom and saw her sitting on the last bench looking out of the window.

Raman went to her and said -what rubbish is this ishi??

Ishita looked at him and said -kya hua??

Raman -jaise tum jaanti nahi, u told Rahul to not choose me for the told of maharaja ratan singh.

Ishita -toh problem kya hai??

Raman -problem, really ishi, u really don't know problem kya hai. Jaan they will take all the major scenes from the movie. Romantic scenes will also be there. Tu kisi aur ke saath play karegi. U will let someone touch u. He said with hurt voice.

Ishita -toh, it's just a play. Don't u trust ur ishi, u really think I will dump u after playing romantic scenes with someone else.

Raman -baat trust ki nahi hai, it's just, he was saying when he realised her words and said -oh, so u r playing with me. Just because I talked to her nicely, u r doing this to me naa. Tujhe karna hai naa role, kar, main bhi dekhta hoon, how will u play this role nicely when I will be near u. Dekhta hoon kaise tu kisi aur ke saath confortable rahegi. Bahut shauk hai naa mujhe khud se dur karke tadapte dekhne ka, but sorry to burst ur bubble. I will be unaffected. Effect tu hogi, coz I will play khilji and romance with mehrunisa character, and u know what I will tell Rahul to cast her,shagun opposite me.he said and went from there angrily.

Ishita cried silently and said -tumhe kaise samjhaun raman, I am doing this just to make u realise how much it hurt to see ur loved one with someone else.its been two years to our relationship, Itni ladkiyan aayi aur gayi. I always heard about u flirting with many, but maine hamesha tum par trust kiya, but jab se Shagun aayi hai, tum badal rahe ho.har din ek darr saa rehta hai ki aaj kahin tumhe kho naa doon. Yeh darr tumhe nahi hai raman, tum mujhe khone se nahi darte, kya tum ab mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte. I know may be I am hurting u, but sorry I just want my old loving, caring and possesjve raman back. I can't loose u Raman, I love u alot. She said to herself and cried silently.

On the other hand, Raman went back to Rahul and sheetal.

Rahul -tum dono ka sort out ho gaya naa, u will be playing maharaja's role, he was saying when Raman said -nahi,i will play khilji.

Rahul -khilji?? Phir tera aur uska koi scene nahi hoga.

Raman -i don't care, Infact I don't want any scene with her. Shagun ko meherunisha ke character ke liye lo. And add all romantic scenes, u r planning to add for padmavati and her husband.

Rahul -raman, we r playing the drama in college, koi bahut hot scene nahi hone wala, just few hugs, forehead kisses. Tum log jyada pareshan mat ho. We will show only which is comfortable.

Raman -i don't care. He said and went out of the place.

Rahul -yaar yeh kya hai, college ke sabse cute couple, padmavati aur khilji ban rahe hai. Band bajne wala hai hamara.

Sheetal-let it be, aakhir deepika -ranveer bhi toh couple the. Waise bhi khilji role is more impactful, raman can pull it really well. Aur jahan tak intimacy ki baat hai, woh toh waise bhi nominal hogi. They r just over reacting.

Rahul -actually raman is hurt, as they always played couple in every drama. And he is not able to digest anyone opposite his ishi. Woh hurt hai issliye Ishita ko hurt karna chahta hai. Let's see where this play take them. He said to which sheetal nodded.

That day Rahul and sheetal finalised the cast and told everyone their character along with a copy of their dialogues and scenes.

Rahul -sab koi apna role study kar le. From tomorrow we will start.

All nodded and went out.ishita came out only to see Raman waiting for her sitting on his bike. He started his bike seeing her, but she started walking towards the gate. He got angry seeing this and said -iski toh, abhi batata hoon. Saying so he went to her and said -baitho.

Ishita -main chali jaaungi.

Raman -jis din nahi rahunga, jaana akele. But now I am here, iss duniya mein bhi aur teri zindagi mein bhi. So just sit down without creating any fuss.

Ishita look at him and sat beside him. He started the bike but she didn't held him.he fasten the bike and she held him saying -raman, kya kar rahe ho. Main gir jaungi.

Raman -main girne dunga tab naa. He said and dropped her home. She waved him bye and went.

From next day, the practise start. Ishita got ready as padmavati while he dressed as khilji. She was dancing on ghoomar while he was lost in her beauty. She was dancing gracefully while he has a constant smile on his face but his smile fade away when she start practising on the song Ek dil hai with other boy. He walked out of the place in anger not able to see her act with other boy. Though their moves were graceful but him touching his ishita was making Raman angry. Ishita saw him going and got sad but somewhere she is happy that he is being possessive for her.

Two days passed like this, ishita was practising all her scenes. Though Ishra were coming and going together but we're talking minimum. Both were not liking each other's silence but not initiating the talk.

After Ishita's scene with mehul (the boy playing maharaja role), Raman had to act with Shagun. Shagun grabbing the opportunity start touching raman here and there making ishita uncomfortable. Her eyes turned moist and she turned to go when Raman-kya mere upar chadi chali aa rahi ho. Just because u r playing my wife in this play, this doesn't mean u got a right to touch me unreasonably, be in ur limits. He said shrugging Shagun making ishita smile finally.

Raman look at ishita and said -rahul, can we just concentrate on the proper storyline, I don't think meherunisha is much needed. He said smiling looking at ishita.

Rahul -yeh character toh tha hi nahi hamare play mein, we added just for u. If u don't want we will eliminate it.

Shagun -what the hell, u can't cut my role like this.

Rahul -sorry Shagun, but hamare paas bahut limited budget hai, and all the crew is fed up of ur tantrums .do din se pareshan kar rakha hai but sab tumhe khel rahe the coz Raman recommended u, but as now he too told to cut ur role, we will do it happily. He said to which all nodded.

Shagun went out angrily while all started preparing for the next scene. They practised for maharaja -khilji war scene and finally all call off the day. Ishita went back to her room to change her clothes. She was taking out her earring when she felt his hand around her waist.

Ishita raised her eyes and saw him hugging her from back.

Raman -i am sorry, maaf kar do. He said keeping his chin on her shoulder making a baby face.

Ishita turned to her and he cupped her face -i am really sorry jaan, that I hurt u again and again because of that stupid Shagun. Mujhe kabhi samajh mein hi nahi aata tha that how u can actually feel so jealous and possessive. I always thought ki Itni choti si baat par itna kyun react kar rahi hai tu. Kabhi nahi socha that u can actually felt bad seeing her so near to me. But jab pichle do din se tujhe uss mehul ke saath dekh raha hoon and I felt jealous, though I know u r just acting, then I realised how much it must be hurt u always.and when today I saw u going out with moist eyes, I just can't take it anymore. Koi cheez jisse meri ishi dukhi ho usse raman kaise khush ho sakta hai. Sorry bachcha, sorry I really hurt u. But trust me jaan, main sirf tujhse pyaar karta hoon. Aur meri zindagi mein teri jagah koi nahi le sakta, koi bhi nahi. Naa koi Shagun naa koi apshagun. He said making her burst into tears.

Ishita -tum bhool rahe the mujhe raman, hamesha usse praise karna, jarurat se zyada usse importance dena. Uske saath itna time spent karna. I just can't take it Raman. I love u alot, I can't afford to loose u. She said in between her hiccups and he hugged her tight.

Raman -shh mera baby, chup. Aise nahi rote. I told u naa, I am sorry.

Ishita -mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jaoge naa.

Raman -tujhe chod kar kahan jaaunga, mera ishq bhi tu hai mera pyaar bhi. Actually, Ek dil hai, Ek jaan hai, dono tujhpe kurbaan hai. He said smiling and pecked her forehead while she just closed her eyes feeling his touch.

Both remained in each other's arms for sometime and then ishita said -i am sorry too.

Raman broke the hug and asked -for what??

Ishita -for not letting to act opposite me, I know u r hurt seeing that mehul with me, but I just, she was saying when Raman closed her mouth with his hand and said -let it be, waise bhi yeh khilji ka role, uss maharaja ke role se jyada promising hai. Aur drame mein tu kisi ki bhi padmavati ban but real mein toh meri hi rahegi.he said and pulled her for a soul searing kiss. He start kissing her softly while she closed her eyes to feel his lips on her as they were kissing after three long days. Both kissed each other for long and finally broke the kiss in need of air.

Raman -waise Ek baat bolun, tu lag bahut sundar rahi hai. Mann kar raha hai tujhe aise hi utha kar le jaaun aur shaadi kar loon.

Ishita smiled and said -khilji ho kar padmavati se shaadi, aisa hum hone nahi denge. She said in royal style and both laughed.

Ishita -ok go and change, u r looking awful.

Raman -achcha, abhi kiss kiya tha toh awful nahi lag raha tha, chal wapas kar mera kiss. He said trying to capture her lips again.

Ishita pushed him and said -raman, go.

Raman -achcha, jaa raha hoon. He said and was going but came back and hugged her again. She too hugged him tight and he pecked her temple softly.

Raman -i love u ishi.

Ishita -love u too raman. She said and then both went to change.

After an hour, they were going back when he stopped seeing the swing.

Ishita -kya hua??

Raman -mujhe bhi tujhe jhula jhulana hai, just like that mehul was doing. Let's play the song and enact. He said to which she nodded.

He made her sit on the swing and played the song. He started moving the swing slowly while she smiled.

Ek dil hai
Ek jaan hai
Dono tujhpe.
Dono tujhpe qurbaan hain

Raman went on his knees and kissed her feet. She smiled and closed her eyes feeling good.

Ek main hoon, ek imaan hai
Dono tujhpe haan tujhpe
Dono tujhpe qurbaan hain

Then he sat next to her and hugged her tight.

Ishita -yeh toh play mein nahi tha. She asked innocently making him smile.

Raman -but yahan toh hai, as it's just we too. He said taking her in side hug. She rested her head on his chest and he started caressing her long hairs slowly.

Ishq bhi tu mera pyar bhi tu
Meri baat zaat jazbaat bhi tu
Parwaaz bhi tu rooh-e-saaz bhi tu
Meri saans nabz aur hayaat bhi tu

Mera raaz bhi tu
Pukhraj bhi tu
Meri aas pyaas aur libaas bhi tu
Meri jeet bhi tu, meri haar bhi tu
Mera kaaj raaj aur mizaaj bhi tu.

Mere ishq ke, har maqaam mein
Har subah mein, har shaam mein
Ik rutba hai, ek shaan hai
Dono tujhpe haan tujhpe
Dono tujhpe haan tujhpe
Dono tujhpe qurbaan hain

Ek dil hai
Ek jaan hai
Dono tujhpe.
Dono tujhpe qurbaan hain

The song ended and both got lost again in kissing each other celebrating their togetherness all over again.

That's all, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Updated the os, have a look.

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