Amorous Elixir!#T2*UPDATED CH16@Pg46 [CH14,15@Pg7,37] - Page 22

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Posted: 7 years ago
Yeh apney baap k sath bath Kar raha Tha k dushman k sath
Msk ka attitude
Uff
Geet get scard seeing this side of her scooy aur koi naam nahi mila tha
Well awesome update
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Posted: 7 years ago
CH 14
Nice Update
Maan opened Geet,s diary and was shocked finding that there were only few entries after his departure and the entries were very painful, Maan is in so much pain and got lost in memories of 3 months back when they shared a hot and passionate kiss, that kiss was evoking the desire in Maan to kiss her again, Geet again started accusing him and Maan was surprised ki ye tu unke bachpan ki baat hai aur wo ek prank tha Maan was playing J game Uff!!!!!!!!! bachpan mein ye haal Maan ka, when Maan talked about prank Geet again accused him that its his habit of playing pranks and this time he played prank by sending Rahul to her and Maan was deeply hurt with her accusation and asked her ki wo aise kase bol sakti hai aur wo khud aise kaise ker sakta hai jab Geet uski sabsa prised possession hai, God ka diya hua hai Gift hai but when Geet did not believe him Maan was so hurt and vowed ki wo tab tak baat nahi kerega jab tak Geet apologize nahi kerti
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Posted: 7 years ago
CH 15
Wonderful Update
Maan was all lost in his beautiful childhood memories with Geet and was smiling , poor Maan khush rehne ke liye abi uske paas sirf childhood memories he hai, Maan took panga with seniorrs for the sake of a kid of class 7th, unki bhi dhulai ki aur khud bhi injured and got suspended for 1 month, Maan,s father really gave me shock, its the first glimpse of his life in his home ,one side Maan is deprived of his parents love and other side at present Geet is also far away from him but Geet first time came face to face father-son clash and got to know that his father took him away from India forcefully that time he was little but this time he is rebellious teenager , I hope Geet ko ab samajh aa jaye ki how much Maan needs her
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Posted: 7 years ago
when will you update again
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

when will you update again

This one?? Very soon!! The update is pretty much ready!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
thank god bch gye
ek hi part piche thi mein
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Posted: 7 years ago
i loved childhood gif
ye kaunsi movie ka scene hai
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

i loved childhood gif

ye kaunsi movie ka scene hai
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Glad that you liked the GIF!
It's not any movie scene! Found it in net!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Reserved for chapter 16



Before we dive into the chapter, well Roopa I know I have been eating your head from last 5 months with Zack's latest song but that chapter is still a few steps away yet couldn't resist myself from putting his new song!! 😆 Oh I love pestering you!! ❤️

Hope My other dearies enjoy it!! This just goes goes with the situation!! 😆

No time for error checking and Proof reading so ignore any inconsistency or errors please!

Chapter 16 : The Distinctive Changes!!


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She wanted to run just then Adarsh's voice stopped her and she had to look at his direction with fear playing inside her hazels behind those spectacles which she tried to adjust, taking a heavy breath meanwhile!!


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PART 1


"Areh...Gudiya...Kaisi ho beta...Udhar kyun khadi hoo...Aandar aao...!!" Adarsh immediately swapped his tone and stretching one of his hands called for Geet, giving her all the familiar endearing gazes which tried to comfort her slightly!!

"Hello uncle...Aap kaise hain?? Main woh baas yaha...Maan...!!" Shuttering somewhat, Geet moved her legs and entered the huge mansion's drawing room!!

She didn't want to embarrass any of those elderly people yet seeing no choice she had to enter there with a meek smile!!

Adarsh too understood it very well by her timid behavior that she might be fearing him! So he tried to ease things up a little while smiling pleasantly, "Aab yaad aayi hain uncle kaise hain?? Hehehe...Absolutely fine beta...How's your study going?? Hows mama papa?? You came alone beta??" As Geet looked at his smiling face she felt a sense of relief and finally she was coming back to her chirpy self!! As that's the father of Maan she has always been seen!! Warm and kind!!

"Mom dad are fine uncle...Study is also going good..Nahin was going good but junior Khurana ne mujhe maat de di uncle..." Adarsh chuckled seeing her pout on the mention of Maan and Geet just reciprocated into the side hug which Savitri and Adarsh offered!

She kens Maan has similar temper issues as Adarsh but with her, he has always been considerably caring and mellow!! It's just that she got stiff because of barging in at the time of their private ongoing moments!!

"Main yaha se guzar rahi thi...woh Maan aapni kuch books chodh ke aaya hain...So socha ki usko de doon!!
But fortunately ya unfortunately kahoon?? Aapse mulaqat ho gayi...Aap toh ghar pe hote hi nahin hain!!...!! Aur ek Maan hain usko gussa aata rehta hain aab aap bhi uske tarha chillam chilli karne laage hain..Mujhe toh laga galat ghar mein aa gayi hoon!!" She talked in her cute scolding tone while making Savitri chuckle in the process and transitioned the heavy ambiance into a lighted one!!

"Aab mujhe daanto maat...You know na beta...Elections are close isiliye waise hi pareshan hoon...Warna Mohindar ne toh kabse bulaya hain Maa aur mujhe dinner pe...Par accha huwa tum aa gayi beti,isi bahane dekh toh liya meri gudiya kaisi hain!!
Anyway Maan ne tumhe chocolates diye thhey naa?? I ordered them specially for you beta...!!" He expressed his love in an endearing voice followed by looking at Savitri he stated, "See I was so angry...That's why I miss a daughter maa...Geet ko dekhte hi I forgot all my anger..." Savitri nodded seeing a serene smile floating on his son's face, "Geet, ye mere sahabzade ko thoda samjhao beta...Tumhe toh pata hoga naa...What he did in school today??" Adarsh was again entering into that realm of disappointment to which Geet instantly moved her lips!!

"Haan...Uncle...Paar Aap fikar kyun karte ho??..Main samjhaungi naa...Ye daantne kaa kaam mujhe saup do...Expert pe bharosa rakho thoda!!
But he is not at total fault uncle...Still, main Maan ko acche se daant doongi...He made you angry naa?? Bad Maan...Bad boy..." She spoke in her animated way while popping her big eyes, easing Adarsh up on that whole topic!!

Even though Maan and his father don't get along but she knows he deep down does love Maan...Probably they both are a lot similar and which is why unable to express their thoughts to each other!! Also, Adarsh's busy schedule is another hurdle which made things more adverse but they have got so much sore that was a new sight which she perceived today!

"That's why tum gudiya ho hamari...Ok beta...Now you go inside...He must be spiraling..." Geet's thought hindered by Adarsh's voice and she found him taking his files, "Waise kaam kaam daantna maine kuch jayada hi bol diya shayed, aur uski chot dekh lena, main kuch bhi kehta hoon ulta gussa ho jata hain!...I will call you when I am free...
And Maa Geet jo chahti hain ice cream, chocos, taco...mangwaiye uske liye...
Ok, beta mujhe aab nikalna padega...Take care!!" Trailing his words he prepared himself to leave!

"Ok..Bye uncle...See you later...Don't worry. He is fine...You too calm down!!
Thand pao...Tusi buddhey ho jaoge, awvei fikar kartey kartey, toh main handsome kisko bulayoongi!!" Straightening the broach at Adarsh's attire Geet spoke with a smile and got a pat on her shoulder in return as Adarsh went outside with a huge smile flourishing his face!!

Looking at the way of Maan's father's exit Geet saw a few men immediately joined him when he walked away in the lawn and was escorted to his car, with a sigh Geet turned her head and after sharing few more words with Savitri she was headed towards Maan's room!!

Maan was not in his room so Geet marched towards his gyming room and her anticipation was right!!

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The more she was closer, she could hear intense music was coming out towards his gym practicing room!!

~/Tu har vele kehndi tu down down for me (You always say you are down for me)
Ni mere jaya varga labke dakaja (Try & Find someone like me)
Baby tu/~

That wounded bestie of hers went all berserk and engrossed himself in some rigorous Tai-Chi session which is caused him to bleed his fresh wounds open!!

~/Ke eve tanu miliya murke tu aja (What did you gain by leaving me)
Tu har vele kehndi se down down for me
Ni mere jaya varga labke dakaja (Try and find someone like me)
Baby tu/~

"Maann!!!" She called him but that faintly got lost amidst all the loud music!!

~/Ni kurieh pul na ja (Oh girl do not forget)
Saade pyaar diya mulaqata (All our lovely meetings)/~

He sensed her definitely but was in such mental blizzard that she got royally ignored which made Geet shower her high decibel at him next, "MAAANNN..." Her loud yell perfectly annoyed the hell out of his ears hence he finally decided to reply her!!

~/Ni kurieh pul ja wa (Girl Should I forget?!!)
Teriya galtiya nuuu (All your mistakes)/~

"I am busy!!" She was standing just next to him and those cold words were loudly grasped by her!!

Is he showing her attitude?? Really??

"Turn the music down damn it..." Maan received another fierce yelling from her as she was looking at him with her narrowed gaze!


"Bolo..." Turning the volume down a little he spoke while focusing on her frame finally!!

~/Tere naal kitiya jo (Whatever I have done with you)
Jaanke ni hoya (That was by mistake)/~

However, the music was still quite boisterous and the choice of his song literally made Geet inquisitive and amused at the same time!! The lyrics were somewhere pricking her heart for no apparent reason and that irked her!! Sincerely!!

Dekho aab kaise bhao kha raha hain..Tabhi nahin aana chahti thi main...Aur pata nahin kiya ho gaya hain Maan ke taste ko ye mere jaise gaane kyun sunn raha hain!! Kiya insaan itna badal sakta hain?? Jaroor some of his GF must have hurt him lol yeah!!

"Tumhe chot haat pe lagi hain ke sir pe?? Ye kiya Devdas Ranjha types song hain?? Please turn the freaking volume down..never mind, main bandh hi kar deti hoon..." Not bothering to finish her sentence she approached towards the sound system but just to be enclasped by him!!

~/Tenu meh samajavan (I am telling you this can be sorted)
Meriya ghaltiya nu tu pul jaa (Forget my mistakes)/~

"Don't even dare...Fine, I...Turned the volume low, changed the song as well...Happy now??" Holding her wrist firmly Maan spoke as he turned the music down rapidly yet kept it audible and was spitting coldness from his aggravated dark browns!! She was instantly lost in his eyes for a few seconds!!

(For readers reading convenience the whole chapter is split into two parts)

Make sure to like both the parts!!

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