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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Violet_orchid

Okay so I binge read all the parts and I m speechless. . I could literally visualise all the scenes.. n I so wanted that naina visiting sameer's house and that balcony scene to happen in the show. That kiss was ethereal I m totally addicted. .can't wait fr the next part.. plz post soon n do PM me

P.S u r an amazing writer.. keep up the good work

Hey Violet...I missed out on your comment! My apologies for the delay...😊 Thank you so much for your lovely feedback dear, both on this FF as well as the Valentine's day OS...😳 Would definitely PM you...this weekend is my target for the next part πŸ˜ƒ
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Pls do pm me whenever u updates this. πŸ˜Š
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Hey guys...back after the hiatus on this one...The part is not quite long...I had actually penned these down a month or so back in continuation with Part 16...but wasn't finding time to edit it...I had started writing on the next part which is related to Puja's wedding (but then I got delayed and now since we've all got a good dose of it in the show...I would keep it short n precise). 
So this is hopefully the penultimate part of the series. πŸ˜Š
Looking forward to feedbacks!! πŸ˜Š

Part 17: The Dates...

The Temple Dates:

All through their courtship, Naina and Sameer would regularly meet at the temple at sharp 5.30 on Monday mornings. Naina would smartly leave earlier than Bela chachi and Taiji. Sameer and Naina would first do darshan of Lord Shiva and thank him for making the two of them meet. They had found love, happiness and completeness in each other. Sameer would keep his palm over Naina's and they would ring the temple bell together. After all, this was one sign that God had given them; that they were meant to be. They would often do gau maata ki seva together- though they had already gotten each other as their respective manchaha var and manchahi vadhu. After their mandir dates, the two would sit at a secluded, quiet corner of the temple and talk about each other, their lives, their families, their past. These chit-chat sessions would often have to be in secret for fear of being caught red-handed by Taiji and Bela chachi.

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The Balcony Dates:

Naina and Sameer's Aashiqui' was racing ahead with full force. During the day-time, all they could think of were each other. As if a whole 8 hours in school, and 2 to 3 hours of study time were not enough, new Romeo Sameer would linger on under Naina's balcony every evening, hidden from everyone except Naina. The lovebirds would secretly exchange glances and gestures to and from the balcony. Sometimes, Naina would play love songs loudly on their cassette player for Sameer. And other times, Sameer would play songs on the loudspeaker in the shop in front of Naina's home.

The Market Dates:

These days, Naina was forever ready to help Bela chachi to get things from the market. Chachi was surprised at this sudden urge to help in Naina. And during these market outings, Sameer would follow Naina around, and then the two would try to catch moments to be together and talk to each other. Sameer would sometimes take her for a ride on his bike and the two would regularly visit the paani puri stall and eat meethi-wali paani puris to their fill, but yes, always from each others' plates. And slowly the two plates became just one plate. And one day, Sameer gathred courage and offered Naina a paani-puri from his own hands. He hesitated initially, thinking she might refuse, but Naina smiled. She gulped the paani-puri down from his hands. They both beamed at each other at this. And then Naina too offered him a paani-puri from her hands. Sameer happily accepted. Eating from each others' hands became a norm since then.

The Rooftop Dates:

At night, when everyone slept early in Naina's house and in her building, Naina would sometimes invite her roadside Romeo over to the roof-top. She would quietly sneak him up onto the roof. She would take care to put pillows under her sheets, lest someone came looking for her. Sameer's love had emboldened Naina to take such risks. And Sameer, well, he was already bold enough! Sameer and Naina would spend those beautiful nights sitting under the stars, basking in the moonlight, talking to each other, till the wee hours of the morning. Sometimes, they would just lie down there and gaze at the beauty of the star-lit sky; or at each other, whilst their eyes did the talking. They felt grateful to the Universe for making them meet and discover the love they had found in each other. Being in love made the world look so surreal and beautiful, they would think. However, the side-effects of their night-outs would include a sleepy Naina and a Sameer snoring on the school bench the next day. And whenever their late night star-lit, roof-top dates were not possible, the phone lines in Agarwal and Kabra residence would be engaged for a major chunk of the night. The two ring signal was still a secret. Neither Preeti, Swati nor Munna- Pandit knew about it. And about their two cough signal, the duo was to have a good laugh 4 years later, when they saw the movie, "Hum Aapke Hain Kaun! at Sameer's place on the VCR with the gang. Naina and Sameer had looked at each other at the "uhhu uhhu scene between Madhuri and Salman and smiled guiltily. Their love codes had been copied in a movie now.

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The First Movie Date:

Naina was getting ready. This was their first movie date. Sameer had requested pink as the dress code for Naina. Naina had wanted him to wear black. Though she felt he looked handsome in any colour he wore, black took his otherwise flawless looks to an all new level. Black contrasting against his fair skin- the thought made Naina turn red in the cheeks. The excuse had been well thought-out. It was to be a Sunday movie afternoon at Swati's house. Most of their class had planned to gather, including Munna and Pandit. Naina was taking Preeti along. Sameer had made an excuse of being unwell in front of his classmates and had backed out at the last minute. Naina was cautious this time. She wrapped her dress carefully into a bag, and hid the accessories and the makeup kit inside. Swati would help her get ready. As decided, the Agarwal girls took leave and reached Swati's house around 12 o'clock. Naina and Preeti met Swati's parents. This was important in case Naina's over-protective family ever decided to cross-check upon her. Swati rushed Naina to her room and helped her get ready. When she came out all decked up, she saw Munna and Pandit were already there. "Whoa!! Bhabhiji...Sameer ki dil ka dhadkan ka to khayal karo! they exclaimed, astonished to see this new avatar of Naina.

The rest of the class was not expected before 2pm. Swati let Naina out secretly through the back door. Naina cautiously made her way out to the next alley, where Sameer was waiting. She had covered up her face, lest anyone would see her there. She reached the meeting point. Sameer was already there in his black polo neck. He was sitting on his bike, looking the other way, waiting for her. Naina came up behind him. Sameer turned around and got scared, "aahhh! Naina realized a minute late that her face was all wrapped up with her duppatta. She smiled and let the duppatta loose.

Sameer stood spell-bound as he saw the pink duppatta give way to those innocent dove-like eyes. (Dekh lo, Hum ko kareeb se...Aaj hum mile hain naseeb se...Ye pal fir kahaa, aur ye manzil fir kahaa...starts playing in background). Sameer noticed that her eyes had again been lined with kajal today. As the duppatta withdrew, her lustrous hair, that she'd kept open, started flowing with the breeze. Sameer blinked as a strand of her soft hair touched his cheek. Her hair had grown longer he thought. His eyes followed the contour of her cheeks, to her dangling, cute pearl earrings, to the curve of her lips. His eyes became transfixed on those beautiful pink lips. Had she put on some lipstick today? That light pink colour- ohh! Naina and pink were a killer combination wherever Sameer was concerned. Sameer could feel his heart throbbing in his chest. He was recalling his dream at Mt. Abu and several ones after that. How he wished they would soon come true!

Naina was smiling coyly, enjoying his undivided attention, his mesmerized gaze. "Uhhu..uhhu..., she coughed twice and Sameer was jerked to the present. He blushed and looked down as he got back on his bike. "Itna saj-dhaj ke aayi ho? he tried to brush it off. "Tumhare liye, replied Naina shyly. Sameer was taken in again. (Kya kahun Mera jo haal hai, Raat din tumhara khayaal hai... Fir bhi jaane jaan, main kahaan aur tum kahaan...plays in background). "Kaisi lag rahi hun? asked Naina. "Ekdum pari ki tarah! he replied, truthful this time. "Ab chalein, late ho raha hai! he said. Naina got behind him on his bike and before he could say anything, put her hand on his shoulders. Sameer felt the familiar sense of assurance. Her love made his world seem beautiful. Off they rode to the theater, where Sameer had arranged for the tickets. After a while, Naina slipped her hand lightly around Sameer's waist. Sameer felt his body go numb. He felt hot. This was the first time Naina had touched him like this. And she had done it of her own will. He collected himself and called out to her, "Naina, yaar agar tum aise mujhe pakdogi to main bike kaise chalaunga? "Kyun? Maine kya kiya? Naina questioned innocently. Sameer parked the bike in the parking of the theatre and smiled at her naughtily, "Acha!!! Toh tumne kuch nahi kiya? Par mujhe to bahot kuch hua! Naina's cheeks flushed with colour as she descended from the bike. Sameer smiled and held her hand. He looked around. The parking seemed deserted right now. He took the risk again. He bought her hand near to his lips and placed a soft kiss on her delicate fingers. He half-expected another slap, but his heart told him she was okay with it now. And his heart was proven right. Naina's cheeks had now turned a deeper shade of crimson. Naina looked over at him embarrassedly and Sameer returned her gaze lovingly. Few minutes later, Sameer and Naina entered the theatre hand-in-hand, for what was to be their first movie together- just for the two of them. (Gazab ka hai din, Socho zaraa...Ye deewanapan dekho zara...Tum ho akele, hum bhi akele, maza aa raha hai... kasam se...kasam se...plays in background).

The theatre wasn't that crowded. Sameer had taken care of this thing. He didn't want Naina to feel uncomfortable seeing so many people around. He remembered how guilty she had felt during his birthday, when she had spotted "Chiman bhai from her society at the restaurant. Sameer had got corner seats for them in the balcony. Oh no, not that he had any such intention! It was just so that Naina could be comfortable and so that they do not have people eyeing them with reproach and passing inappropriate comments. Sameer treated Naina like his queen. Naina and Sameer settled down in their seats and held hands again. The movie started. Sameer's heart got pangs as and when Naina turned to face him to discuss a particular scene. More than the movie, Sameer's attention was focused on Naina. He smiled to himself. What had this girl done to him! If a year back in Nainital, someone had said Sameer would fall in love, he would have laughed his guts out. Love! He had seen girls drooling over him, getting lost in him in boarding school. But this was the first time he found himself in their shoes. He always seemed lost in Naina- what Naina said, what Naina did, what Naina wore, what Naina wrote. His life revolved around his Naina. He mentally made it a point to tell Kabir, his bestie in Nainital about Naina soon. Just then Naina caught him smiling, gazing blankly at her. She pulled his sleeves to bring him back into the movie. He chuckled and settled down to watch the film, his hand entwined in Naina's and her head resting against his shoulders.

The movie ended way too soon, thought Sameer. He felt it was the best movie that he had seen till now or rather not seen. Even though his wrist-watch showed 4pm, Sameer felt that time had literally flown away. Each and every moment he spent with Naina seemed magical! But what's perfect in a love story! As they say, the more you try to hide from people, more is the possibility that you bump into someone you know. As Sameer and Naina were about to exit, they came face to face with another couple holding hands. The boy turned and Sameer's heartbeat stopped! "Arjun! he let out. "Sameer! Naina! Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho? Arjun saw Sameer's guilty face and scared expression, and then his eyes darted over to their hands. He...he was holding his little sister's hand!!! How dare he! Sameer saw Arjun staring at their hands and immediately Naina and Sameer withdrew their hands. Arjun was too angry to realize that he had been caught too. "Shefali! called out Naina in surprise as light fell upon the face of the girl with Arjun. It was Arjun and Shefali's turn to feel guilty. Arjun got flustered and he and Shefali too let go of each others' hands. All four looked at each other. Sameer was relieved. He was safe. Arjun too had come to watch the movie with his girlfriend. "Kya chal raha hai tum dono ka? Arjun demanded from Naina. Naina hardly registered his voice and instead asked, "Bhaiya, aapka aur Shefali ka kya chal raha hai? She was totally taken aback to see her meek, obedient brother going out with her friend. Sameer and Shefali looked at each other and giggled guiltily. They both knew the brother and sister would have to keep each others' secrets safe and their respective love stories could continue without any hitch.

The four of them moved out of the theatre to talk. "Tune mujhe maaf isliye kiya ki tu meri behen ke saath..., Arjun's rage was building up. "Aisi baat nahi hai Arjun! Wo ek alag kissa tha. Main jaanta hu tum uske bade bhai ho aur shayad tumhe ye acha na lage. Par sach to ye hai Arjun, ki Naina aur main ek dusre ko pasand karte hain! And I promise, main tumhari behen ka pura khayal rakhunga. Use kabhi dhokha nahi dunga. Koi taqleef nahi pahunchaunga! said Sameer. Naina was admiring Sameer's courage and cool-headedness in such a situation. She really adored this about Sameer. Whatever he did, he was never scared of anyone, especially when he knew he was right. He had stood up for her and shielded her, yet again. And he didn't even question Arjun on being caught with Shefali. Shefali too was impressed with this and looked at Naina in approval of Sameer.

"Arjun, said Shefali, "jis tarah se tumhe aur mujhe pyaar karne ka haq hai, Naina ko bhi hai na. Sameer ko bhi hai. Mujhe pata hai ki Sameer ek bahot acha ladka hai aur Naina ki bahot care karta hai. Please is cute si love story me taang na adaao! "Hmm..., Arjun looked at Naina and then back at Shefali, "ek second...tumhe pata hai matlab? Tumhe pata tha is sab ke baare mein? Tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi? he questioned Shefali, shocked that she knew of his sister's affair, but had kept it a secret from him. "Arjun! Pata tha, par agar tumhe batati to tum aise hi gussa ho jaate. Aur Sameer acha ladka hai. Tum uspe bharosa kar sakte ho! said Shefali, as she tried to pacify Arjun. Naina smiled and thanked Shefali through her eyes. So this was why, her always-conforming-to-the-rules older brother had become so bold and confident recently. Deep down, she felt happy for her Arjun bhaiya finding love in a great girl like Shefali.

Arjun agreed reluctantly. He too knew Sameer was a good chap at heart, but then his older brother instincts made him very protective about Naina. He guessed it's a part of growing up and he would have to get used to it. "Theek hai...Naina tu agar khush hai Sameer ke sath...to theek hai. Aur haan Sameer. Hum dost hain! Par meri behen ko zara si bhi taqleef huyi na to main sab bhul jaunga samjhe? said Arjun. Sameer nodded. "Aur haan, ye...ye sab...haath vaath pakadna nahi chalega, Arjun muttered as Shefali rolled her eyes at him. "Acha acha theek hai, lekin apni hadh me rehna samjhe tum dono? Arjun concluded. Sameer and Naina looked at each other embarrassedly and nodded. "Aur hum dono ke raaz, raaz rehne chahiye! said Arjun, and all four of them promised to keep their respective secrets.

As they were about to part, Naina smiled at Arjun and he couldn't help but smile back. Arjun too felt happy for Naina that she had got someone like Sameer, who would care for her more than anything else. He didn't know how- it was probably a boy thing; but Arjun somehow knew that Sameer was extremely serious about his sister. Soon, Arjun and Shefali left in an auto, while Sameer and Naina rushed back towards Swati's place on his bike. Naina called Swati's home from the nearby PCO, to check if the movie had finished and everyone had gone. Swati told her that only Munna, Pandit and Preeti were remaining. All others had left. Swati ushered Naina unseen through the back door. Naina went over to the balcony and saw her Romeo waiting for his goodbye on the road outside. Naina waved back at him. He smiled and winked at her. She saw him ride off and went in to change. The look on Naina's face told the others that the date had been an exciting event. 

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Posted: 6 years ago
LOVED IT !! LOVED IT !! LOVED IT!! especially movie date..
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Super awesome glad u updated it ..  thanks for the pm .. 
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Superb... Awesome... The wait was fruitful... Loved the movie date of samaina and shefjun.. Finally arjun knows about samaina... Arjun supporting samaina is like dream come true...samaina hand kiss😳...  Mundit as always lattoo over their bhabhiπŸ˜†... Overall a wonderful update β€οΈ
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 Awww.. Such a sweet update!! Especially loved the movie dates and the two couples running into each other πŸ˜³
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

LOVED IT !! LOVED IT !! LOVED IT!! especially movie date..


Thanks dear...😳
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Super awesome glad u updated it ..  thanks for the pm .. 


Thank you so much dear...😳😳