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Posted: 7 years ago
Hoping you'll update this story too
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 47

After so long time he enjoyed , he look towards geet and smiled... how much she cried due to me, but she always feel my life with happiness...

Geet : maan aap sun bhi rhe ho

Maine kuch kaha

Maan : wo mein kuch soch rha tha

Bolo na kya huya

Geet : aap na rehne do

Maan : geet bta bhi do ab

He held her wrist and asked geet

Geet : wo mein aapse kbse puch rhi hu which is better

She showed both shirts to him

Maan feel some jealousy to see him , she buy shirt for Abhi, but her next words vanish Jealousy but make him fall in love with her... She not remembers but always she put him always on top...

Geet : maan aapko ek bhi pasand nhi aayi in dono me se

Maine kitni mehnat se pasand ki thi aapke liye

.

She glares him but he smiles to see her cute anger, in actual she is not angry with him...

Maan : I like both

After all you choose me

He takes one by one both shirts...

She smiles and at end both left towards home after shopping...

******

She is so much tensed , her heart fearing for him, why he not picking her call...why he left like this...why he not understand her

How can he leave me?

She is sitting near door waiting for his arrival...

Maan where are you

Aap ase kaha chale gye mujhe chodke

.

How much she happy to spend time with him, suddenly he vanished left the shopping bags near door...

*****

Another side he sitting in some park, crying to losing her... Why god punishing him likes that

Can't he smile for sometime?

Why god

I know I hurt her

I just give her pain

.

I don't know how geet handle this all

But I failed in all this

He closes the eyes but few hours back scene coming again and again in front of his eyes...

He pay the amount to taxi driver and pick bags and coming inside, suddenly few drops fall on his face, he smiled to feel rain droplets and hurriedly take steps towards door and placed bags inside the door...

Geet

Geet

He closes the eyes smiling where geet is, he takes steps towards Garden... his heart misses the beat remembering last encounter in rain at same place, how he comes close to her...

He take more few steps, but at next moment , his eyes fill with tears, seeing her in abhimanyu arms...he holding her by waist & seeing him kiss on her cheek , then shoulder coming down, he turned not able to see her in his arms...

No it's not true

Few tears slipped from his eyes, he try to control cries, he want to run from this place, this is same place , where he come closer to her but difference is little now someone take his place, all mistake is mine... He close the eyes but His heart is crying after seeing her close to abhimanyu, before going he last time turned and seen abhi scoop her in arms and taking her inside the home... he hide behind another tree, don't want her moment , her happiness break due to him...

He silently left from here...

I never want come here but abhimanyu forced me, now see what get to see...

Maan why you crying yaar

This is your entire mistake

Due to your own mistake

She gone far from you

But what I do

I love her

I can't see her in some another one arms

I can't see her with abhimanyu

I can't

He drink remaining bottle in next sip... after drinking full bottle too, his heart crying...

Why I can't forget

Why you coming again and again in front of me

.

Maan i love abhimanyu

He held her by shoulder and said you can't love him

Tum meri ho

.

Nhi maan

Aapne mujhe khud se dur kr diya hai

.

Geet

Stop

Geet you can't go living me here alone

.

Geet I die without you

.

Geett

.

He throw bottle on ground and lay on bench...

I can't have you geet

I can'tCry

********

Another side , when geet come home, she feel someone presence in garden area, she open the door and left to see towards garden, someone hugged her from back and pull closer...she going shout but hear recognized voice, she take relax breath..

He turns her and asked you like my surprise or not

She hit him on his hand and said tumne toh dra hi diya tha

Suddenly rain droplets vanish her anger, she smiles to feel rain, and he lost to see her so much happy like that... He rarely seen her so happy...

He no idea when his hand encircled around her waist, sudden touch make her lost, before she overcome, she feel his lip own cheek , his lips touched her shoulder... She don't want this, some blur images again coming in front of her eyes, her smile , like someone holding her...she take deep breath and feel some pain in heart, her body fall in his arms...


Geet

Kya huya

He scoops her in arms and takes inside the home...

.

.

After sometime when she opened the eyes seen tensed Abhimanyu beside own

Abhi : geet meri jaan nikalne ka irada hai tera pura

Geet : pata nhi mujhe kya ho gya tha achanak

Abhi : doctor ke pass chalte hai

Geet : no abhi am fine

Can you tell me now

Why you are here

Abhi : kya kare

Aapko toh humari bilkul fikr nhi hai

Geet : asa nhi hai

I have some work

Abhi : geet why am feeling sudden distance between both

Itna toh tb bhi tum nhi chupati thi

Jb hum sirf dost the

Now when we going tie in sacred relation

You start hiding from me

Geet : Abhimanyu asa nhi hai

I need sometime

I want sometime spend alone

Abhi : pakka

She nodded

Abhi : take care

Ye hai mere hotel ka address and number

Call me need anything

Geet : sure

Abhi : waise Maan kaha hai

Geet (woh kaha gye achanak)

Abhi : geet

Geet : no idea

Abhi : ok

Bye

*******

Maan where are you

.

He stands from bench and said geet me yaha hu, his foot turned and he fall down on broken pieces of glasses...

Aahhh

.

.

She stands and held door tightly and asked from own self

Why I feeling he is not alright

He needs me

She pick keys of house and car keys, no idea car going work or not, after accident she never drive, she just fold the hand and said god please sath dena mera

Mujhe maan ke pass jaana hai

*******

Note : i post here full part, now want good likes and comment

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
14 feb

khudrat ka khel - part 39 on page 87


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You r mine S#2-part 12 on page 100

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khudrat ka khel -part 40 on page 95


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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan is in pain as he realizes he loves Geet and because of his own fault he lost her
drinking and crying at the park for her while Geet too feels that something is wrong with Maan
and he needs her
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Precap
it seems like Chahat is back and she is going to
create more distance between
Maan and Geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part...
Now Maan is feeling same pain like Geet...
Want Chahat to come soon...
Waiting for more
Update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 47

astounding update, well written!

Maan crying! Geet senses something is wrong and rushes 2 Maan!

interesting teaser!

update soon







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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Muje chahat chahiye jaldi...


abhi nhi
thoda kro intzaar
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