Marry Me Thread III chapters 159- 167updated on 12/2/2018 pg.105-106 . - Page 47

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello Sam,
Just read the new updates, while reading it all, I had a big grin on my face. Awww, Shivika. Plus the family <33

Anika confessed. Yess. It's Shivaays turn next.
Mrs Kapoor thinking Shivaay will go to them and Tia can get married to him. I can't wait for them to find out that Shivaay is married. I would love to see their reactions.
Beautiful updates. I really loved reading them. Shivika was amazing.
I loved the Shakti-Shivaay-Anika bit too. I loved everything about the chapters.

I can't wait to read more. Eagerly waiting. I love your writing, the way you describe it all, I just feel all the emotions. I just love your story so much. It is brilliant.
I know, I always say it but it's true. This story is just amazing. <33 I am glad I got to know about this story, I feel lucky to have read this. Thank you for writing it. I will be sad to see it finish.

I am glad your Visa issue is nearly sorted. :)

Sarah :)


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Posted: 7 years ago
Sam it's 1.30... u were going to be back by 1.00am
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Posted: 7 years ago
GD I will update five more in an hr or so
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👏👏👏 awesome awesome awesome to the power if tiffany updates . You set my weekend. ..thank you 🤗
Loved you delving into tia background, rarely have I seen a shiw, movie or book go into such details on the villan. Just don't white wash her as they did in the show.

And...they confessed. ..they confessed. ...they know each others hearts now.
Jo sabko pata rha.. ab unki khud bhi pata hai😆..they have fallen in love. I know shivay hasn't said ilu...but what he said is a big thing for him.

The family are gonna have a gala time teasing them, but it's not gonna bother them, they are happy. Smiling away. ...

You ate nearing the end...makes me sad, but would lo e to have a complete looong story to read back, when the show is being a pain.
A lot if ff writer's have incomplete storis for various reasons, am glad this one will have an ending, that will satisfy all of us.

Thank you for being such a brilliant writer...and sharing this beautiful gem with us.
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Posted: 7 years ago
I had some readers PM a question and I guess Rohini had asked it too. Can there be a gag on adult websites?
Yes, last year in June the govt of India had temporarily blocked 857 po*nographic sites.
Websites are media and media can be blocked for endless reasons primarily being the maintenance of national security.
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Posted: 7 years ago
@Rohini: thanks for the detailed explanation 😆

Samiksha : read the updates, on the way to finish off my remaining sleep
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Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

@Rohini: thanks for the detailed explanation 😆

Samiksha : read the updates, on the way to finish off my remaining sleep


OMG!!!! you did not sleep😲 Good night sleep tight
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Someone did not reserve ... I do sleep sweetheart...just not able to sleep today ...
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Chapter 150
Shocking Truths

"Saumya why is it taking so long?
Rudra whined impatiently sitting in her home with Bhavya and Ranveer. Saumya had cracked the online vault of Devendra Kapoor's secret world and was going through every file trying to find something of worth and value to them.
"I don't want Gauri or Om unnecessarily going through any more circuses. They have already endured a lot.
Ranveer was a part of Om and Gauri's trial right from the word go, while he did sometimes get irritated at the simplicity that Om exuberated, yet he acknowledged that Om was indeed the kindest of them all. Bhavya was observing the interaction between Rudra and Saumya. The kind of authority he exerted on Saumya did not sit well with her.
"She is trying Rudra you are a bit too demanding.
Bhavya looked red with irritation. Saumya scowled at Rudra and conveyed her objection in her scathing stare, before mumbling her inaudible frustration.
"What can this be?
Saumya scanned a series of endless numbers in the document. Ranveer looked at the screen while Rudra remained distant from the screen as well as Saumya. He sneaked a glance at Bhavya from the corner of his eyes. She was still sporting a furrow on her forehead.
"Something about these numbers screams familiarity.
Bhavya's little furrow between her eyebrows resembled Saumya or vice versa. Rudra walked to their small shelf of precious memories. He picked up a picture which had the entire family and tried to determine the similarities and dissimilarities between the children and their parents. Saumya was a replica of her father while Bhavya resembled her mom. Even as a rising teen she had a formidable frown on her forehead. A low chuckle escaped his lips as he thought that some people are born to terrorize. The child in him kicked in as he gave Bhavya in the picture a snort, successfully catching everyone's attention. He covered up his snort in his fake cough, but Saumya glowered at him and gestured him to put the picture frame back where it was. He immediately complied with her silent command. Bhavya stared at him too with displeasure.
"I am sorry. He mumbled to no one in particular. When Bhavya left to get something from her room, Rudra heaved a sigh of relief.
"I have a feeling that your sister wants to skin me alive and then make a backpack for herself with my hide.
Ranveer snickered at Rudra's comment.
"We were together in our graduation bhaiya.
Saumya sounded apologetic.
"Yeah? Great Bachpan ki mohabbat.
He snickered yet again and Saumya swallowed her protest, there was no point in trying to mask something that Rudy displayed without a second thought.
"These are the number of Mauritian Rupee deposits in his account in Mauritius. We were able to extract the details of his account through mutual sharing of intelligence. The account is not in his name but in Mrs. Kapoor, Tia's mom's name. She carries a Mauritian passport too. From his phone records, we can see that it is he, who operates the account.
"She is a British Citizen!
It was news to Rudra. Britain and Mauritius both allowed Dual citizenship.
"So the money from his illegal land acquisitions and his all corrupt activities in government goes round and round many times before coming back to him in India. He sends it manually to the USA through agents. I have three of them in judicial remand. In the USA they are deposited in the accounts of three companies that have been registering a good amount of net profit with very few sales. These companies were legit startup companies owned by resident Indians, but Mr. Kapoor bought them at an insane price and is keeping them somewhat functional, but their sales have dwindled tremendously in past two years. These are the companies that keep buying some or the other service from Tia's corporation. They deposit the money directly into her accounts, and thus the black money comes back into circulation. The activity has increased multifold since past two months, especially past thirty days. An anonymous tip alerted the authorities Ranveer told Rudra.
"Then there is his pedophilia ring in Mauritius. Mrs. Kapoor has a small furniture import-export business to mask the money influx. Every piece of furniture is overbilled but never sold. It is rebilled up to four times and then sold by the employees for their profit. They change the SKU number or inventory number on the bill every time. From Mauritius, the money goes into stock trading in the UK and stays there. I extracted all the information from the storekeeper and some others involved in bookkeeping for Mrs. Kapoor. The storekeeper was murdered two days back. I am trying to get all the investigation developments of that case.
"Bhavya di did you use the tactics like that the officer in Singapore.
"What tactics? Bhavya snickered at his juvenile question.
"Rudy we all have our methods of gathering info. We don't share them with the public.
Ranveer sentence was cut midway by a loud gasp from Saumya as she clasped both her hands on her mouth. Rudra peeked to see what she was watching so horrified, and he instinctively shut the laptop. Those were po*nographic videos of children under fifteen. She shuddered with disgust, and for the first time, it struck her what all Bhavya came across in her day to day life. Hiding her face in her palms, she wailed loudly.
"Shit that was gruesome. Her words were punctuated and muffled by her sobs and groans.
"Someone must just kill these people. They don't deserve to live.
She clutched Bhavya's shoulder and innocently urged her to deliver justice as if that was easy. Bhavya tried to reach to her, but she had become extraordinarily jumpy and sensitive. The minute Bhavya touched her cheek she removed herself to the other corner of the room, looking blank she succumbed to the floor and hugged herself, rocking back and forth. Ranveer was unable to tune into this sudden outburst, and he just stared at her wondering about the video. It had to be explicit and extremely graphic for a person like Saumya to react like that. She was not a ninny. He switched on the laptop and was appalled beyond limits. He had lots of experience working in the crime branch since so many years, exposed to a lot of absurdity and inhumanity but what he saw, was another level. When he was finding it difficult to dissociate himself from the video and look at it objectively, Saumya was a girl never exposed to all this.
Rudra went numb as he watched the extreme sickness. He looked across at Saumya whose glare was fixed onto her childhood picture. She looked disconnected and as white as chalk, her mouth wide open and frozen in an expression of shock. Suddenly she held on to her stomach tightly and then rushed to the washroom. Bhavya followed and reached just in time thankfully to stop Saumya from closing the door of the restroom.
"Saumya are you alright? Saumya could barely nod in response as she collapsed next to the toilet bowl, heaving and panting. Desperate to throw up the contents that hammered in her skull and she thought probably emptying the stomach would mean the same. Her insides churned and twisted till she felt a knot rising and she threw up all that she had eaten since morning. Her body trembled, and she felt hot. Bhavya had never seen her like that not even when their parents had died. When she tried to hold her hair away from her face, Saumya pushed Bhavya away and stood in the shower, while she tried to gulp in shampoo to get rid of the putrid feeling in her mouth. Bhavya wanted to drag her out from the shower and threw the Shampoo out of her reach, but she panic-stricken and her muscles twitched and quivered. Saumya kept mumbling meaningless words. Rudra and Ranveer waited outside the washroom, they did not want to invade their privacy or embarrass them. When Rudra heard her wail again, he could not stop and entered the washroom. He saw Saumya scrambled to a corner under the shower and Bhavya struggling with her. He tried to pull Bhavya away from Saumya, but the water was running at maximum heat. He turned the shower to cold immediately as he saw Bhavya and Saumya both turning red.
"Ranveer we need a doctor call Bhabhi or Priyanka. He screamed while he tried to hold Saumya and Bhavya down in cold stream.
"I am coming in Rudy. Ranveer warned before entering in.
It did not take Ranveer to put two and two together as he pulled Bhavya to her feet, she looked far better than Saumya.
"She stood under that hot water for far too long Ranveer. Ranveer without a word just glanced at saumya's red face and exposed skin. Rudra still held her forcibly under cold water though she was shivering now. He was online with Priyanka who was already on her way.
"Rudra I am cold It was difficult to understand what she said because her teeth chattered incessantly. She tried to step out of the frigid stream but was held in place by Rudra and backed by the wall.
"Bhaiya keep her in cold water for another ten minutes if the redness subsides we will not have anything to worry. I will soon be there.
"What is she saying?
Bhavya was getting impatient. "Should we take her to the hospital?
"Do you have ice?
Rudy did not respond to her question, and before she could say anything else, Ranveer had already brought Ice in a small bucket. Rudra gestured towards Bhavya who had a sore neck. Her right side of the torso had taken the brunt of the hot stream. Wrapping the ice in a towel, Ranveer put it on her neck.
"I am alright.
She got away from him and asked Rudra again for Priyanka.
"Wrap yourself in this ice. You won't want to endure the pain of blisters. She will be fine I promise you.
Bhavya could hear that Oberoi authority ring clearly in his tone, something similar to Shivay though not as indifferently exerted. Bhavya took the ice pack silently and put it on her sore skin. It did feel good.
Edited by samiksha1993 - 7 years ago
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Chapter 151

Dreams and realities

Saumya's redness had started to subside. Rudra had just stopped the water when they heard the doorbell ring. It took a moment for Priyanka to balance her pacing nerves when she came face to face with Ranveer. Till now she had always met him or practically seen him at a distance, or either with Shivay, it was the first time that she was in his presence this up close. Steadying herself, she went to Saumya and focused on the job at hand. Rudra and Ranveer were removed from the room while she assisted Saumya out of her dress snipping it into small pieces so that they don't strip a large part of her epithelial skin in case if the burn was deep. To her relief, the injury was not even superficial. Except for some small places Saumya was mostly unharmed. She helped Saumya into a loose outfit. Bhavya was a little sorer than Saumya, but even then it was not a very bad situation. Once they settled down, Saumya came out.

"They are alright, Saumya looks quiet shaken? It was more of a question than a statement.

"Don't ask. Ranveer ignored her question and went back to copy the videos and other details they had retrieved from cracking into Devendra Kapoor's laptop and online storage. He was about to shut the computer when he noticed Priyanka looking at the laptop neutrally as she held a cup of tea for him. When she went inside to Saumya, he asked Rudra and Bhavya.

"For how long was she here?

"Quite a few minutes. I tried to warn you.

"Bhavya some of the videos are dated back to a few years ago they have Sunaina in it.

"The girl who turned hostile and is now living in Devendra Kapoor's house.

"Yeah, he has made a trophy out of her. I will make this trophy lodge herself in his gut. The impact will knock away every wisp of air from his lungs. I will make him crave for air till he turns blue in his face and do so a million time, once for every child. Every word that he uttered was coated in such tough resolution that it pelted like hail on everyone around.

"Ranveer cool down, we cannot be callous with any evidence, and there is code that we follow.

"I don't go by any code, I believe in like treatment of people. He spoke with fervor and got up on seeing Priyanka approaching.

"Are you all right?

He stopped in front of her.

"Yes thank you for asking.

She went to the kitchen to put back the teacups while Ranveer looked at her composed state with confusion. Either she is a seer who has acquired some power over her reactions and responses or she was an insensitive wealthy socialite. Assuming the later, he shook his head in displeasure.

"Bhavya didi I can stay back for the night if you want. Saumya is sleeping, but she is doing good. What happened, why this sudden panic attack?

"She watched the same video that you did.

Priyanka had caught Ranveer's attention for the first time. He had seen her on a couple of occasions. She never affected him like today or rather her apparent apathy towards the victims.

"I can understand.

"So generous and understanding of you.

He gave her a lopsided wry smile. Priyanka scanned him thoroughly from toe to head stopping at his lips for few extra seconds, sure that his smile carried the extra weight of scorn for her, undeterred she returned a knowing smile to him, this was not the first time someone judged for her strength. She gave him an acknowledging nod.

"Heartfelt thanks, one does not come across such open appreciation and acceptance every day.

She supported her cheek on her palm, her lithe and nimble fingers un-manicured and in their bare natural state without any nail-color, nails cut deep up to the skin, did he become impatient in his judgement.? He was shocked by his sudden interest in Priyanka, she was not a woman to be messed with especially given her legacy, yet he found it difficult to pull away from his eyes from her face. She is beautiful without any doubt and carried herself with poise and dignity particular to girls of the class she belonged to, and Ranveer despised, yet she held his interest for more than a few passing seconds.

"What is exactly going on Bhavya didi? Rudra tried to comprehend the dark undertones that marked both Priyanka and Ranveer's countenance as they held each other's unyielding stare.

"A staring contest I suppose.

"I bet hundred Rupees that Priyanka will lower her gaze first.

"Rudy I bet my entire savings that Ranveer will lower his first.

"That convinced about our timid and mousy Priyanka?

"I was not convinced about Priyanka, but about Ranveer, he will never cross an Oberoi.There was a tinge of a sneer in her tone, and it took Rudra every ounce of his tolerance to not give her a curt response. He did not want to increase the gap between Oberois and Rathores

Rudra had hardly uttered the last word that Ranveer not only lowered his gaze, but he also removed himself to the balcony attached to the living room. It was imperative that he cleared his head of this sudden fog that had clouded his mind. If someone asked him what this mist was, he would never know the answer. All he knew was that his prejudice and logic were at war, the bias said that she was a spoilt, rich, brainless, self-absorbed girl as most from her class were. Born with silver, no gold spoon and have nothing but a lineage to fall back on, whereas logic said a lot more was there to Priyanka Singh Oberoi than what met his eyes. Still, waters run deep, she looked calmer and composed than many in her position would be, A woman who could keep her head on her shoulders under challenging circumstances. Had she not reacted the way she did to the video Ranveer would have never as much as spared a glance at her. Her composed and level-headed response struck him; his prejudice said she was least concerned about the plight of people while his logic said she had learned to keep her reactions guarded. An urgent need to know more about her crazed him but he stilled his mind, she was Shivay's sister and any entanglement with her would be disastrous. Determined to keep his tongue, mind, and heart in check he walked back into the room.

"I will leave Bhavya. I thought you would join me for interrogation of the three musketeers, but I think I will have to go solo.

"I can stay back with Saumya, and I will not bat an eyelid till you come back I promise, Pinky promise She hooked her little finger with Bhavya's trying to reassure her and Bhavya could not suppress her smile. She looked at Rudra skeptically.

"I will leave before you go. He got up with a jerk and took long strides to the exit door following Ranveer. He had masked his disapproval towards Bhavya's attitude deftly, though his tightly drawn lips gave him away to Priyanka.

"Rudra given Saumya's condition I don't think they should stay alone...

"Bhavya didi, Saumya is fine and sleeping. I will manage don't worry. Rudra shrank his eyes for a fraction of a second to thank Priyanka for her quick thinking. He no more wanted to confront Bhavya for today and staying back was out of the question at least for now. ...

Edited by samiksha1993 - 7 years ago

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