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Thanks for the note dear
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Happy Republic Day



I am updating after long. Thanks everyone for patience and lovely comments.I don't know this part will bore you or not. I typed as per wish of Kiran Di...Last time she asked not to use Puchki for Pihu...This is just for her. Even I also think its right.


Chapter 13


After Breakfast/ Lunch

Pihu still was busy with her Parantha sitting over sofa, ignorant to the convo between two, standing beside her.


" Jokes apart Addi, I think we should leave now its already 1." he wispered.


Addi nodded slipping one hand to side pocket " Even me, that cynic fixed meeting for 3:30 PM, got confirmation call from him."

Smile crept over Maan's lips, as gazed the little girl side wise. Something was going inside his mind.

Addi shrunk his brows, he knew his friend was up to something. Probably some good one, as he was smiling. But prayed God not to make him, his scrap goat to fulfil those strange tasks.

" Abhi kis soch main ho tum ?" he tapped Maan on shoulder.

Maan came out of his trance " I am taking her first time outside, as Maan Singh Khuraana's daughter. Just look at her, she is as innocent as her mother. So what identity I should give her ? Puchki, yes this is mine chosen name...a feeling of a father, craving to love his child from ages...But its like the name, old lady gave her Laado,might be she also loved my daughter with same intensity...or Pihu Maan Singh Khuraana, which is her true identity, and I want to break every tie of her from past, erase each bit of memory, reminding me of anyone related to her painful childhood." Addi's mind boggled with his mysterious answer. But after 6 years of bonding, he could understand, his state of mind.

" Certainly you have decided, then speak up." he tittered in trademark style.

" Yes " his eyes shined bright, reflecting sheer determination.

" I don't want to give her split personality, n will not call her Puchki any more. She will be only Pihu from now onwards, for you and me too..As a father I will fill her life with all my love n care, but for the world, I will mould her as MSK's daughter." he ruffled Pihu's hair. She looked up at two happy faces. Passed same innocent smile.

She climbed up on sofa, stood next to het father. So that he could pick her up in his arms.

" So my baby has done with her breakfast." he kissed her cheek. In counter reaction. She encircled her arms around his neck , resting head over his shoulder.

Addi petted her back " So you also want to walk on Daddi's foot prints. as she made you puppet."

Maan smirked, hugging his daughter much closer " No never, how could I ? What ever happened with Geet n me... Daddi was able to tackle things wisely...If I had told her.. But due to her fear, I couldn't do that, n we became victim of circumstances. More than me it was Geet. Even she asked Mammu to put covers on everything, keeping me in dark. " he was burning with inner agony but couldn't express..didn't want to scare little girl. But for Addi, it was not tough to feel his grief.

" I am sorry Maan, I didn't mean to hurt you. " he rested his hand over Maan's shoulder, to console him.

" No Addi , you put valid question. I want to mould her like me, strong enough to judge rights and wrongs, capable to take own stands, not feeble and helpless as I was.But like as I am...It will be her decision, what she wants to be in her future. I will never force her in family business, but will remain always on her side." after the clarification a sudden smile crept on his face "She is mine daughter, toh isko mere jaisa attitude jaroor sikhna hoga. Yeh to banta hai na boss. I can take this much liberty haa " he winked, both friends giggled.

" There is no need taught her, she has inherited. Not to embrace you, but it is in her genes from generations." stuttering Addi said looking side wise. Making a little gap from where they were standing.

...Half of this Chapter is on Blog


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Edited by Sonia.KN - 7 years ago
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There may be editing mistakes as I edited three parts in one go.Still I am searching to correct..if there is any.


Don't say I left you on cliffhanger.



Sonia





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Edited by Sonia.KN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Maan wants to mould his daughter as
Himself as strong as he is and capable
To make her own decisions
Pihu Maan Singh Khurana is very quick
Learner she was able to understand
And recognize what her father was saying
Even Maan was so careful in telling his
daughter how there r called starting from
Their names and her name as Pihu it's
So we'll written
Pihu is eager to start going to school


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Chapter 14
Rohit Bajaj He is amazing
Somya a mother inside her wants to
Be cautious and she was a bit worried
About the future but she finally agrees
With her husband
Rohit he very well know what he was doing
And how to handle the other person
He is very much confident in his plans
He is a strong pillar to his daughter
Riya wants to go to the park and asked
For his permission but the mother in
Somya was comforting her seeing her
Scared but the father wants her to be
Strong and face her past he agreed
But never to leave her alone

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch-13
Maan is a wonderful father. He craved to be with his daughter. Now he got her. He is moulding her to be strong like him
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Chapter 15
Maan went to the orphanage with his
Daughter she was scared and holding
To maan
Everyone recognize how Maan was down
To earth and even maan enjoyed totally
A different atmosphere he found the
In charge Harjit resembling to geet her
Simple way of dressing as a Punjabi girl
He went through his past how he was
Attracted to geet of her simplicity
His dadima never objected of his ways
Knowing he was never serious
Their friends spiked their drinks and
The result of the painful past
Pihu was a bit opening up and mingling
With the kids of the orphanage
She shared her feeling to her baba
Maan sent pihu with Adi and went to
The place which he was visiting every year
And Rohit accompanying his daughter
To face her past



Happy republic day
Thank u for such a beautiful updates
Enjoyed reading it

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ch-14.
Maan is caring for his biological daughter whereas Bajaj is caring for his adopted daughter.He is ready to go to any lengths to get justice for his daughter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update...
Mann is such an amazing father..he wants his daughter to be strong and independent and Pihu is such amazing little girl..her insecurities are vanishing...

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