Ishra new story' Tujhko Phir se Kar Loon Haasil pt 3 pg 18,30/01 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tujhko Kar Loon Phir se Haasil



Part 1


"see thoshi our kids are very attached to each others...I am so happy for them.."Mrs. Meena verma said to her best friend Mrs.thoshi bhalla..

" I too meena..when I see them together I remember our childhood..bhagvan kare humare bacche zindagi bhar aise hi Sath rehe.."

it was a family evening for both the ladies..Mrs.meena is a widow..her only family is her 3 year old daughter ishita and her best friend thoshi..it was an heart attack which made her husband to leave her forever..in every thick and thin time thoshi and her husband Mr.omprakash bhalla was her supporting system..they never left her or her daughter alone..thoshi's son Raman is the only child for them...he loves ishita very much ..she is his gudiya for her he can do anything..if anyone tries to hurt her Raman will beat them black and blue..he was very possessive for her. on the other side ishita too loves him very much..she shares everything with him..if her mother give anything to eat at first she will run to Raman and share it with him...

thoshi and meena both are very happy with their kids friendship..

"ishu..Raman come here. have this milk.." thoshi called them to have their milk but both are very busy in playing with each other..

"No mumma..we are playing na.. after some time..saying he again starts to run behind ishu to catch her..

" yeah bhagvan...dekho kaise bhaag rehi hai yeah ledki...ishu dheere baba.." meena got worried seeing her daughter running carelessly

"No mumma. luki tho laman pakal lega..." she said giggling...

"Raman puttar..use rokko na baccha gir jayegi woh"

" tension math lo aunty main girne nahi dunga usse...Raman said taking a breath and again runs behind her.."gudiya rukko..."

" nai nai mein nai lukkugi..paklo paklo mujhe..."she said running more fast

suddenly raman 's expression changed into horror when he saw ishita running towards the cliff area where he can see a Restricted area board..

"gudiya stop..wahan math jao. gudiyaaa.. he called her numerous times but his call went to deaf ears...she was running unknown to place fully lost in her run only...he turned to take their parents help but they are a little away from him..so he runs to ishita fast as much as he can..but seeing him running towards her she runs forward turning to her back time to time..soon she reached to the edge but she didn't realized where she is standing...

" Raman got scared seeing her position but he don't want to scare her because he know if she comes to know where she standing she will get scared and it will risk her safety more..."

"gudiya see I m not coming..I lost the game look at me i am standing here...mere pass ajao ..see our mummas are calling..you are hungry na.." he tried to call her calmly..but she was not in a mood to listen him ...

meanwhile Mr bhalla who went to take some food came back and saw the scene..he was horrified seeing them...he was about to call his wife he heard Raman's loud cry...

"gudiyaaa" Raman's vision got blank when he found ishitas balance losing and her falling down to the cliff.. his scream was enough to gain their mothers attention.. both mothers was shocked hearing his cry they quickly runs to side from ere they heard the scream and found Mr bhalla there standing like a statue...

"bhai Saab aap yehan kyun khade ho..bacche kahan hai" Meenas question didn't made any difference in his state..

" bhallaji bolo..kya hua..Raman ka awaz tha na woh...mera puttar kaha hai...it was thoshiji who asked him shaking his hand..

"h..Han...just like he wake up from a bad dream he hummed and at the next second he runs to Raman realizing what just happened...Meena and thoshiji were confused but they too followed him not knowing what is waiting for them ..

soon they reached to Raman and it was an another shock for Mr bhalla when he found her sun unconscious and a piece of cloth in his palm..

" puttar ki hua...thoshiji took Raman head in her lap and cried seeing him unconscious..Meena's eyes searched for her daughter but she was no vwhere..her heart beats raised with the each passing second thinking the wrost. .she was about to take her daughters name that's when she saw the piece of cloth in Raman's hand...like a lifeless body she sat on her knees and took the piece in her hand which has her daughters smell...

"Ishuuu..." her whole energy come out as a scream when realization hit her...

one week thoshiji and Mr bhalla had a very hard time to console both Meena and Raman.Meena was just a lifeless soul after her daughter's death..at the same time Raman was in a shock..after that horrible accident raman didn't utter a word to anyone..he chooses to sit in only darkness..even he didn't eated anything..he covered his room wall with her name...his parents were broken seeing his state..he made his room as his world where he wrote her name only...

days start passing Raman and meenas state was getting wrist day by day especially Raman's...at last Mr bhalla decide to take both of them to an other place where they can get some change.soon mr bhalla along with thoshiji took raman and meena to punjab which was their native place.. but the journey was an another Strom for them..on the way to Punjab they met with an accident ..Meena,thoshiji and Mr bhalla died on the spot leaving bleeding Raman behind...


after 20 year's...

"Appa..I m going..breakfast rekhi hai table pe kha le na.. aur Han dawai Lena math bhoolna.apna dhyan rekhna...shaam Ko jaldi aajaungi mein..ishita said to her appa before getting into her red nano car..

" ji kanna..dhyan rekhulunga...bye.." appa too waved his hand biding bye to his daughter..

ishita iyer is a dentist by profession..a simple girl lives with her father Mr vishwanathan iyer who is a retired government employee..this was their every day routine ..before going to her clinic she will set her appas breakfast and medicines...her appa is Bp patient so he has to have his medicines on time...considering her appas health ishita always make healthy food ...due to her appas morning walk she always gets late because she had to wait for him everyday for breakfast so now a day she will go after setting his bf on table and giving a long list of do and not to do...

" good morning maam"

" good morning sarika..." ishita wished her reptionist and rushed towards her cabin because she has attend a major case today which was actually her senior Dr.bhatras...

"sarika...where is Dr bhatras patient? send him inside.." ishita ordered to sarika by intercom..

" Sorry Maam patient abhi thak aya nahi hai"

" oh...OK..so send my cases one by one"

"ji maam.." saying sarika starts to send ishitas patients one by one..

it was after half an hour two men get inside to ishitas cabin holding someone..he was wearing some mask on his face and struggling to get out from their hold...his business suit were having blood marks on it..

"Excuse me what is this?" ishita asked getting up from her seat..hearing her voice the masked man stopped struggling and looked towards her but suddenly his eyes got the attention of red color on his white business suite..suddenly he got unconscious..seeing this is hit a got startled and asked them to lay him on her patient chair..they made him lay the chair
and told her that he got hurt on his teeth..ishita nodded her head and asked them to wait out side...

after they went ishita removed her mask slowly only to found his mouth bleeding..she quickly cleaned his face a checked his mouth..his one tooth was bleeding very badly and she fount a cut on his mouth gum.so she has to stitch it...she took a injection and poked it on his mouth slowly..he stired a bit feeling pain..after completing her treatment he looked towards him who was still unconscious...she can see some dried tears in his cheek which she assumed that may be because of his tooth pain...

after that she turns to go to her chair but she stopped there feeling a pull from her back..thinking her sari got stuck somewhere she turns to undo it but found it on his plam...his palms were clutching the edge of her sari pallu tightly but he was still unconscious...she looked towards his face for sometime like there something which is forcing her to look at him...breaking her trance she loosened his grip and walks to her chair..

she called the man inside and gave some prescriptions"

" Now you can take him..and please give him lite food otherwise he will have pain..aur yeh dawai bhi prescription ki hisaab se dedijiyega..." she said

" thank u doctor.." one of the man thanked her and took a leave after taking him with them...

ishita just looked at his retreating figure..not knowing why?

Next day morning ishita took her appa to hospital for routine checkup..seeing some good change in appas health doctor decreased the dosage of his medicine and prescribed new one..ishita made appa sit on the waiting area and went to take medicines...she was passing through the corridor she see him coming towards her discussing something serious with someone..he was wearing a doctor coat along with a stethoscope which was stating that he is a doctor..she quickly recognized the person because he was the one who she treated yesterday..she stood there just looking at him while he passed her way engrossing in his discussion...

two days passed it was the day of ishitas meeting with lawyer pathak..her appa had some land in highway but unfortunately it has some land ownership problem so ishita decides to cross check the law papers of the property for which she is going to meet lawyer.. within an hour ishita completed her meeting and was about to return she found the same man there..this time she was shocked because he was wearing a big black coat looking like a lawyer...ishitas mouth opened with amusement and confusion...like yesterday today also he was walking discussing something serious with someone.

ishita smacked her head in confusion and took a deep breath and left to her home..reaching her home ishita shared her confusion with appa..

" ishu I think..tumne do alag alag inzan Ko dekha hai.." appa tried to clear her confusion

" Ille appa..I am sure who doctor or yeah lawyer dono ek hi admi tha...mujhe acche se yaad hai.?"

" lekin kanna aise kaise ho saktha hai..ek time pe ek admi doctor or lawyer kaise ho saktha hai"

" wahi tho main bhi sochu...kaise ho saktha hai"

"kya patha ab uss aadmi ne dono ki padayi ki ho.." saying appa laughed

" appa..." ishita glared him...


precap

" hello sir how can I help you?" sarika asked sweetly to him

"hmm..Han..I want to hear her voice..call her.." he said removing his cooling glass and tapping his finger on the table..

" Excuse me.." sarika got confused..

" whattt?..call her..I don't have time to waste." he showed attitude..

" si..sss sir..I didn't get u..?" sarika stammed looking at him wired

"are you deaf..I said call her mujhe uski awaz sunni hai?" this time he was getting angry which made sarika scare

" sir..wh..who?" she asked with so much fear..at the next second she found the telephone on the floor breaking into million peaces...


That's all for now friends...I hope it was good..if anyone want to read this story further then please comment..because I don't want to disturb anyone by sending my PMS...
Edited by Muskan193 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Awesome update dii
Chotu IshRa were inseparable
Ishu died.. Raman and meena was in shock
Bhallas took them to Punjab but on the way they met with an accident
All died leaving Raman alone..

Ishu lives with her appa.. she is a dentist
Actually who is Raman?? Doctor or Advocate!!
Update soon dii
Thnx for the pm
Edited by srithika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Update soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Awesome update
Ishra n Raman are friends but get separate due to one incident
Raman parents also died in accident leaving Raman behind alone
After years ishu become a dentist
Two man come for treatment
Precap ravan mode is on
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Really Interesting
Amazing
Update Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Little bit confusing...
Updt nxt part sooon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome and Interesting story...
Thank you for the pm and update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice interesting superb update dear
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting update
Raman lost his whole family
ishu is with Mr iyer
she has become a dentist now
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start
Interesting story
waiting for next update
Continue soon

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