RishBala FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02 P : 74)

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Nice update

Thank you so much dear!

Keep on reading!

See you soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

nice.. and lovely update...

rk is Skeptical about the whole thing..

guess there is an deep dark reason behind it..

wow.. they are going for outing ..

hope nothing unpleasant happens there..

thanks fr pm maithu..

Thank you so much dear!

We will know it slowly but for sure we are already seeing a glimpse of it!

Hope all is well in the outing!

Thank you so much dear!

See you soon with the next part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Fab update. Rishab is not yet ready to take up the kings position. Why is he lacking confidence?
Madhu took pakhi outing. There's a ball coming up. Thanks for the pm. Do update soon. Hope you'll give a longer update.

Thank you buddy!

Glad you liked this part!

Yup yaar

He is not yet ready

Yup A small ball on its way!

I will try my best to give longer updates dear!

As it is a daily one, taking my time and doing short Heee

See you soon with an updated

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Varsha15778383
It was a sweet update
Sorry for not commenting I was little busy with exams
Thanks for sending pm
So dipali and RK had a past and now dips want to get back with him but RK is not interested
Pakhi and madhu friendship is so nice and caring
RK have different shades other than a playboy which outside people think about him and madhu is behind him to know the real him
Madhu had a escape from bittuji but I think eventually he will find her real identity .Its just my guess
Why RK is always backing from becoming king?Waiting for his reasons to always run from this responsibility

Oh dear!

No need to say sorry!

I can understand that we get busy time to time!

And studies come first!

Glad you liked the way the story is moving!

Yup Madhu will for sure know the real RK and then let's see what happens!

Soon we will get to see all the things dear!

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Part 16 (Previous part : Part 15 )

"We are finally here!" Madhu said to Pakhi who was on the wooden sled "Are you ready for some fun?" she asked as they stopped at some point.

Seeing the little Princess face to fall apart, Madhu got to her level "What's wrong?" she asked.

"It's just that I don't know if I can do it!" the little one said seeing the slopes from distance.

With a smile "If you ask my opinion, I will say that you can do everything you want to." giving her a small push on her shoulder "You are not a china doll!"

With a sad face "It's not that!" seeing the snow spread across her "What if I end up even more more broken than I already am?" eyeing her legs.

"Pakhi! You are a lot more away from being a barren if it's what you think!"

After a small pause, lifting her head as a smile started to cross it "I will be on the front!" Pakhi said lighting her friend's face too.

"If you want!" getting up, she sat behind her student "You ready?"

"Yes!"

"Let's go!" as they pushed the sled forward "Hang on!" it started to slide as both started to enjoy and laugh "Be careful" Madhu said as they passed an area.

"Ohhh!! Speed up!" came Pakhi's joyful voice.

"Whooo! "Yeaaahhh" both the ladies enjoying their little adventure!

"Oh my goodness!" the elder.

"Faster! Faster" the little.

And by that time, Rishab came there in his horse and stopped seeing the ladies.

Seeing them laughing, a smile appeared on his dull face.

"Be careful!" Madhu's voice.

"Oh no!"

"Turrnnn!"

"Ohhh!" and Madhu skipped out of the sled automatically as the sled moved forward and Pakhi was pulled in to the snow with her face on it and their sled stooped at a distance away from them.

As Madhu got up, all she could here is Pakhi's panting and the little one calling her friend's name in a little voice "Madhu! Madhu !" Nearing her, the tutor called her student several time and as she touched her shoulder

"Shall we go for a second round?" Pakhi asked smiling as she turned to face her tutor.

"You prankster! I'm gonna get" and even before she could finish her line, a snow ball hit her.

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Thank you for reading!

Hope you all liked it!

See you tomorrow!

Next part : Part 17

- Maithili

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