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Chapter 42 :



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"Geet..Baby...Aisa nahin karte...Kiya ho gaya hain tumhe...Shona...hussshhh...Gandi baat...Tum meri acchi bacchi ho naa??? Meri baat bhi nahin maanogi??" Maan looked at his grandmother and sighed relief, "Daadi...Please take her with you...Bohot gussa ho gayi hain hamari Geet..." Maan smiled to make the atmosphere lighter and pushed his loving volcano as hinting her to go with Savitri because the testimony and paperworks are almost done!!

Savitri saw Geet's red face and adored her with utmost affection while tucking her inside the vehicle, "Alee...Beta...Kiya huwa meri shona ko...Itna laal kyun ho gayi ho bacche...Aa jao...Maan abhi thik hain...Dekho...Chalo beta...Abhi ghar jana hain...Kaal se meri gudiya soyi bhi nahin hain naa...Aa jao daadi ke paas...Gussa nahin karte...Itna gussa toh meri gudiya kabhi nahin kaarti??" Seeing Geet's dejected eyes which were waiting for Maan Savitri pulled her cheeks and talked in a conciliatory tone, "Aaj kiya ho gaya...Mwaah...Koi baat nahin...Aap mere saath chalo...Maan abhi aayega hamare sath...Piche doosri car mein!!"

"Daadi maa...Mujhe itna gussa aa raha hain...Main kiya karoon?
Uss ladki ki himmat dekhi hain aapne?? Main usey.." Geet complained cutely to which Savitri chuckled beautifully!!

"Hehehe...Aap toh hamari pyaari si pixie fairy hain... Lovingly touching Geet's face Savitri adored her, "Gussa toh Maan karta hain...Aab aap bhi unki tarha baan jayengi toh hamara kiya hoga betey?? Kaun hamara sath dega hmm?? We are a team naa??" Geet admired her winking and she too gifted her old lady a soft smile!

"Hmm..." Cuddling into Savitri's warmth Geet closed her eyes as the car approached towards the Khurana Mansion while Savitri kept patting Geet's back, cooling her down!!

It was true she never gets angry to this extent but when the question is on Maan's well being it can transform that soft tender Geet into a fierce deadly creature in no time!! For the first time in her life, she experienced such panic where her heart was on the edges of her fingers!! Slipping almost!!

Nobody was telling her anything clearly yet they looked so worried and it's been 3 months that she has been tied the knot with him in secret!! How would she make Savitri understand Maan was not only a mere childhood friend of hers!!

He is her eve...

"Jaan..." His soft voice drifted her back to the reality where she found herself standing in his room, engulfed into his embrace as he was hugging her from behind!!! The last thought of her remained incomplete!! Maybe to be completed through her lips!!

"Aap sabkuch ho Geet ki, jantey ho naa?? Aap sach mein theek ho na Maan?? Uss chudail ne kuch kiya toh nahin naa aapko??" Maan found herself a little distracted into her own zone hence he called her in his long tone, "Shonaaa..." Making her face him as turned her body in his protective cage!!

"I am absolutely alright..." Her face was inside his stroking palms which were loving her endlessly, "Do you want me to strip and see?? Mera matlab hain kapde utar doon?? Tab jaake acche se check karna...??" Maan winked at her to see her mouth wide opened and that she did at the exact next moment!! Flawlessly!!

"Haww Maan...Aap naa... She lightly slapped on his arms, "Par...Baat aisi nahin hain...Mujhe vishwas hain aap pe, aap ne keh diya toh theek hain...
Aur aapko toh baas bahana chahiye kapde utarne ka...Na jaane ye kaun sa shokh hain aapka...Mujhe na kabhi kabhi sacchi samajh mein nahin aatey aap..." She sounded so innocently clueless, little did she know how she seduces him with this type of antics of hers!!

Lately, after their marriage, it's been really hard to control himself!! All he wants to is touch her, kiss her!! But it seems likes she doesn't understand him sometimes and so he just stops himself as she is still his doll, maybe she needs a little time!!

"Good...Kuch din baad tumhe detail mein main aapna shokh samjhaunga...Khair..." He sensed he is getting hard again with his erotic thoughts playing in the background so he again turned her around and hugged her carnally before she could notice the bulge and pester him with those innocent beguiling questions!!

"Now go bring your books, start studying...And Solve all the maths...Kaal accha bahana mill gaya tumhe...Par aaj nahin..." Maan was back on his teacher form, making Geet pout heavily!!

"Maan...Sirrr... She mockingly called him in a teasing voice and tilted her face to look upon his face, "Kaho toh mere sare classmates ko bhi yehi bulaloon??" She was brushing his arms which were clutching over her tiny belly!!

"Haan??? KIYAAHH??" Maan shockingly mumbled!!

"Uff aap itne lambe kyun ho gaye aur main lamba kyun nahin ho rahi hoon...Gardan dukh gayi meri..." She swayed her head in all directions, "Waise Aapka dimag sach mein kharab hain?? Abhi rest kar lo..Itna bada hadsa so gaya aur aapko mere padhai ki padi hain?? Waise bhi...Main 3 din baad chali jaungi...Tab miss karte rehna mujhe..Aur tab..." Holding his hand she made him sit on his bed and looked at the clock which read 6 Pm...Still, quite a lot of time left for sleeping...Yet!!

"Miss toh main meri Mishti ko abhi se kar raha hoon...Aur tum mujhe ye bar bar jaane ke baat kar kar ke blackmail maat kiya karo..." Maan possessively dragged her towards his half resting frame and she sat beside her adamant newlywed husband, "Waise bhi maine Rano maa se promise kiya hain tumhare upcoming semester ke sare maths clear kar doonga...Tabhi toh ye vacation pe hum sath mein hain naa... Next year toh..." She was loving his touches over her face which he was doing while talking in a somber tone!!

"Hmm...Sshhh...No sad talks now...Main study karoongi par shart hain.." She disrupted him and commenced her side!

"Ye lo...shuru ho gayi tum...Pata tha mujhe..Shart aur dhamki ke bina bhi kabhi kuch bol kiya karo..." Maan pursed his lips and looked away displaying his soft anger!!

"Karna padhta hain, aapka pati MSK hota naa aap bhi kaartey...Khair...Aap sharafat se abhi soo jaaoge...Proper rest..Kha liya hain, naha liya hain...Sab complete hain...Rest now...Chuppp...Koi behej nahin.." Not paying heed to his antics she scowled at her stubborn husband and threatened him coldly!!

"Jaan???" Maan smiled weakly seeing her demands and drew her close into his arms while she happily gave in!!

"Kiya??" Geet asked sweetly, resting upon his broad chest and doing her favorite thing!! Inhaling his fragrance!!

"Tum aaj thoda chirchiri sound kar rahi ho...Kiya huwa hain meri Mishti ko?? Itna gussa?? Mujhe bhi dant rahi ho?? Kaal raat ko tum bhi toh nahin soyi?? Yehi mere paas reh jao naa..." He started threading her hair softly, loving her ever so passionately!!

Feeling loved by her with the same intensity as well!! He knows all her anger has one cause!! His safety!!

"Maan woh...I am sorry...Aapko bura laga hain?? Mishty is very sorry... Mujhe bhi nahin pata..." That doll of his cutely snuggled into him while chanting sorry, then she lifted her head and meet his awaited gaze, "Par uss Misha ki toh main...uska na main... Maan got baffled with the transformation of her voice within seconds from meek to fiery!!

"Baby...ye mera haat hain uski gardaan nahin..." He teased her as she was shaking his biceps violently like an animated character!!

"Oo...Sorry...ppffftt.." Geet humorously looked down at her own clutch and grinned sheepishly!!

"Hehehe..." Maan Couldn't hold his laughter as well and tugged her close he disclosed his desire, "Meri choti si doll...Aab mujhe aapki godi mein ninni karni hain..." Repeating those lines in a cute way which she used to say often to him!!

"Hawww...Ye toh meri lines hain.." Geet frowned and pouted heavily to which he pulled both her cheeks lovingly, flashing his charismatic smile!!

"Pata hain mujhe...Tumne jo mujhe tang kiya hain jaab se tum 1 saal ki thi...Tumhe toh yaad hoga nahin...Aaj thoda mauka mujhe mila hain woh main kaise jaane doon??" He made her slap his arms once again, "Ouch!!

"Main 1 saal ki thi...Toh aap kitney saal ke thhey?? Huh... Mujhe sab yaad hain...haannnhh..." She escaped a doubtful narrow gaze at him!

"Oye jhooti...Tum mere samne payda huwi hoo...Main uss din bahar khel raha tha... sab hospital gayye huwe thhey...Aur Phir what I saw...My god.. A sweet little doll...

Meri maa ki goud mein thi tum...Itni si...roo rahi thi..." He made hand gestures to indicate the tiny little Geet and described further in an enthusiastic voice, "Rano maa leti huwi thi aur sab tumhe ek ek karke pyaar kaar rahe thhey... I asked her, she is my doll right?? And Rano maa ne muskuratey huwa kaha, tumhe chahiye?? Maine sirr hilaya and she said chalo phir ho gayi tumhari...Maine iske baad mom ke goud mein tumhe jhank jhank ke kitnaaa sara pyaar kiya...Kyun ki none of them were letting me to cradle you..Hummpphh...Baad mein diya tha waise...
And tumhe kiya lagta hain tumhara naam Geet kisne diya?? Tum uss waqt bhi mujhe dekh ke haas rahi thi, pata hain tumhe...I remember everything like it was yesterday..." Maan was ever so excitingly sharing the most precious moments of their childhood with a happy face!!

"Tumhari hansi aur rona mix ho rahi thi toh main innocent sa ladka maine bol diya meri doll gana gaa rahi hain kiya rano maa...Tab pata nahin kaha se tumhare Darji ne sunn liye aur..." She completed his words nextly as that tale has been narrated by her family as well, "Aur mera naam Geet rakh diya...Pata hain mujhe...Aapko bohot maza aata hain na mere naamkaran ka credit leke??"

"Bohoottt...Hadd se jayada..." Maan grinned at her vividly!!

"Dekha aapne baat kaise ghuma di Maan...So hisab ye hain ki main jab 1 saal ki thi tab aap 6..." Being no less Geet again tried to trap him!!

"Chupp...Kitna bolti ho tum?" He stopped hed talk in the middle and covered her mouth by his palm to which she glared hard and spoke while removing his hand, "Kiyaahh...Main bolti hoon??"

"Hubby is tired...and ask Ranomaa or daadi tumhe maine 1 saal ke umar se sulaya hain..." Maan rested on the pillow behind him and looked at the ceiling, sounding confident!!

"Nahin...4 saal ke umar se..." Her adamant voice made him look back at her!

"1..."

"4..."

"Ekkk..."

"Charrr"

"Ek...Chotu si geet.."

"Dusht..."

"Pari..."

"Aap..."

"Tummm...Main ladka hoon, pari ladki hoti hain...Accha chalo bohot ho gaya...abhi ninni time..." He realized that amidst their banter he is just a few inches away from touching her lips so pecking those plump devils he drew her into his bosom!!

And she finally smiled after earning that soft kiss!! His kisses always make her calm hence she too didn't argue further and surrendered herself inside his chest earnestly!

"Aur suno aaj tum yehi pe so jana...At least jab tak I am awake I want you...here..." She sensed him increasing the tightness of his hug and taking her petite body more close to his heartbeats!!!

"Umm..." Geet closed her eyes while snuggling into him, "Lekin daadi maa akeli darr jayengi naa agar main nahin rahi unki paas...Aur phir..." She said ever so innocently!!

"Tumhe Daadi maa ki fikar hain aur meri nahin hain??? Mujhe darr laga toh??" As Maan was threading her glossy hair she kissed his chest unknown to the fact what effect that might cause him!!

"Nahin..." Geet's voice was very mellow as she continued in a low tone, "Main hoon na aapke paas Maan...Aapko ninni aaj main sulaungi naa...Aab bolo kiya karoon..Kahani sunau??" He was lost in her soft laudatory voice and suddenly was having thoughts of loving her too much, not wanting to let her go at all!!

"Waise maine toh suna tha Maan Singh Khurana se ulta darr ko darr lagta hain?? Ahm ahm..." That sweet little devil can't keep herself for long from teasing him, can she!!

Suddenly Geet sensed Maan dragged his body up and then taking the spread covered both of them, regaining their previous position and of course maintaining a healthy gap between their lower private parts he spoke, "Hmm...Aab theek hain...Aur kiya keh rahi thi tum darr??" It's getting awfully painful but he has to try and gain a better control on him!!!

"Paar aapko mere goud mein rehna chahiye naa?? Jaab mujhe aap ninni kaarte ho toh mujhe aap aapne goud mein sulate ho naa??" Geet was slowly caressing his face with her soft little hands, filling him with her tenderness!!

"Ohh!! Toh meri Jaan ko ye bhi yaad hain!!..Par baby hubby is big and heavy naa?? You will get tired and then how will you study tomorrow?? So aab mere bahon mein aao aur mujhe ninni karo...Umm haan kahani nahin...Sing for me..." He kissed her hands deeply and explored his wishes!!

"Sacchi??" Geet squeaked in happiness as he cheerfully wants to listen her singing, "Oh no..Aaj I cried a lot naa...Isliye gala thoda kharab hain..." Her chirpy voice again fell down with sadness!!

"See that's why I hate crying...Khair koi baat nahin..." Raising her chin by his fingers he melted her lips by his in the attempt at gaining her chirping back, "Baas gunguna do...I love my Mishti's humming...like a soft lullaby..." As she was frozen by his touch, with her closed eyes she felt she was again being blessed by a few more kisses on her cheeks, "Ummaahh...Meri Geet aab mere liye Geet gun-gunayegi...Aaj toh mujhe meethi meethi ninni aana lazmi hain..." That time she could only realize a little bit of the depth in which his loved resided like an amorous shield, full of devotion and selfless love with a little bit of lust probably!!

"Ssshhh..." Geet pressed her lone finger on his lips, "Aab chup chap aankhein bandh aur koi cheating nahin...I am watching it all!!" While removing her finger she too dared to peck the corner of his lips!!! She is usually very shy when it's about kissing his lips!! Never ventured to inaugurate it!!!

But, Today is something special!!!

Her love has always overpowered her shyness!! And this man laying here, that day she didn't know what future stored for them but the meaning of her soul literally residing inside him, this was clear like the cloudless winter!!

Hence a little peck on the lips doesn't hurt!! Afterall he is hers!! And only hers!!

Blushing in her own world and telling herself aforementioned she started humming to invite her tired husband into the world of slumber, "~Hmm mmm... hhhmm...la la...Laaa...~ His lips were being curved into merriment and no, they didn't need those three words to declare their serenity, companionship!! It's one of those moments!! Where the love shouts more into the arms of silence, the valleys of unsaid words!!


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Maan shifted his gaze towards Geet and put a warning tone, "Now madam you sleep...And listen if you need anything you know what to do...Aur agar mujhe baad mein pata chala na toh.. Tumhari khair nahin...Good night DOLL...!" He placed a kiss on Geet's hand and escorted a shaken Sameera out of Geet's room!


Doll! This is the second time he referred Geet as doll. Sameera for the last time looked back at Geet to discern if she really looked like one!


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Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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yeheee its here
double part
will read and comment soon
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Lovely updates
Past funny
That misha got heart attack by Geet sherni
She was so angry
She is too cute in his arm but he is having hard time to control himself from innocent doll
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Posted: 7 years ago
inka toh kuch nehi ho sakta...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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nice update...geet such a possessive wife.
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Amazing updates... Their past was so beautiful... Geet nearly made misha to tie rakhi to maan... Kaash that task would have been accomplished... Waise it will be interesting if after knowing geet made sameera doing the same... It will be a perfect slap for sameera... Maan pampers her so much... Both are so much possessive for eachother... God bless sameera.. she digging her iwn grave...
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awesome lovely updates...
Maan is teasing geet abt her marriage proposal To abhay 😆 But he was terrified after seeing his jaans reaction and immeditely apolozised her ... The one thing which i love in mp is maaneets conversation .. Now a days stories are very less where wen can see maaneet conversing with each other ... But mp se alag wali feel aathi hain ...its really refreshing .. Their lovely conversation is the thing which i love the most in mp ..
Lol misha ko lag raha hain ki maan singh khurana is also a tutor ? Yea he is a tutor only for his geet 😳 Personal suitor and tutor of geet ... Ufff this misha .. I want to kill her .. Maan is consoling horrified geet but geet is really worried abt maan and his well being .. The way she clinged to him and came to search him shows her deep love for him ... 😳 Here we can clearly see the depth of geets love .. This misha is wondering abt maaneet and the bond they shared ...how dare she to say that geet is sis of maan ... How dare she .. I just loved geets reply here and rakhi wali dialouge is fab ... 🤣 bhai ko buri nazar se dekhne wali ... Bhai ko hot kehrahi hain yeh misha lol ... I just loved sherni geet and that dumb nisha convo like anything ... I am still rofling lol ... 🤣 angrez ke aulad ... 😆
Glad that dadi came and maan ne geet ko waha se leke gaya nahin toh boxing dekhne padtha hume ... That would me more fun ... Geet punching that idiot misha 😆 ... Finally dadi calmed geet and consoled her ... Even maan tried to lift her spirits ..
Maaan and geet on the pretext of studying kya kya kaam kar raha hain 😆 I just loved this... Maan even wanted to strip for geet lol .. Besharam bangaya maan ... It is very hard for him to control around geet but he is controlling as she is still like a doll ... 😳 everytime i am awed seeing maans love for geet ... Maan wants to sleep on geets lap 😳 and his cute dialouges .. Mujeh tumhare godh mein ninni karni hain ... I am in love with all these dialouges ... Pure maaneet update ... Wow ... Yu dont know how much i loved this chapter 42 ... Its very beautifully written ... Every line depicts their love ... And i just loved the way maan described abt geets name ...its soo lovely ... Their nok jok ... Their love ...their fights .. ❤️ loving everything abt them ...
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loved geet dialouges and warning that she gave to misha 😆

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