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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: katheriene
Awesome update👏
Suraj is a kid by heart, loved his moment with kids😊😊
Why he is running from his responsibilities
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

Agree yaar!

He is really sweet!

Glad you liked this part of Suraj!

We will know the reasons soon!

See you tomorrow!

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Wow..it was amazing sis

Suraj was so cute while playing with the children's..

But y suraj s not taking his responsibilities..

But lil paakhi knows abt his brother very well..

Waiting 4 suraj's answer to his mother..sis

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Sweet update

Loved how Suraj was playing with the children, I guess he prefers their company over the formalities of a palace party.

I think the queen won't be happy with his reason, Suraj should try to balance between his wishes and responsibilities. Vivaan is waiting at the wings ready to take Suraj's place. Maybe Suraj needs an intelligent supportive wife to help him fulfill his responsibilities 😉.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Wow..it was amazing sis
Suraj was so cute while playing with the children's..
But y suraj s not taking his responsibilities..
But lil paakhi knows abt his brother very well..
Waiting 4 suraj's answer to his mother..sis

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you liked it!

Soon you will know his hesitations!

Yep! She know well about her bro!

See you soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Sweet update

Loved how Suraj was playing with the children, I guess he prefers their company over the formalities of a palace party.

I think the queen won't be happy with his reason, Suraj should try to balance between his wishes and responsibilities. Vivaan is waiting at the wings ready to take Suraj's place. Maybe Suraj needs an intelligent supportive wife to help him fulfill his responsibilities 😉.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you buddy!

Happy you loved the kido Suraj!

Let's see what happens next in few hours!

Agree yaar!

Vivaan is indeed is impatiently waiting!

Heee Well the future Queen will do her responsibilities soon, so no worries LOL

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Part 15 (Previous part : Part 14 )

Facing his mother in her eyes, he replied "My responsibility is to be with those kids!"

Approaching her son "A king need more than a simple compassion!" Stopping few steps away from him "You need to be strong Son! You are a leader Suraj!"

Bending his head, as his fingers played with the flower vase by the side of the table "It's just that" and his words trailed off.

"Do you think you are the only one who want to get out of this life?"

"No!" He moved from there "Don't say this Mother!" And took a seat on the sofa "You are the strongest person I have ever know and know."

Following all his actions with her eyes "This year was a difficult one for me. Your father has left us, I tried to be strong for Pakhi without knowing where you were while all I needed was your presence by my side and support me as a son."

Lifting his head "I did what I could!" As Queen neared him, he continued "I did my best!" He again bent his head.

Sitting by his side "I know that you can, I have full confidence over you!" As he saw his mother in her eyes "But you also need to trust yourself and have that confidence over yourself." She finished hoping her son can find his way.

***

And it was time for Pakhi's math class.

"Right one!" Tutor said as she neared the board.

"Now a little difficult one!" Chakor continued "Can you give me an example of hyperbole?"

With her left over the table, giving support to her head on her chin, and right and playing with a pen "Is it an hyperbole if I tell I'm getting bored and my head can blast at any time?" Pakhi questioned.

As Chakor folded her hands, Princess continues "How can you think of me, concentrating on studies when we are just 3 days away from Christmas! 25th December is just in 3 days she said." with a sad face.

"Okay you won!" getting near her student "Would you like to go out for an adventure?" Chakor asked with a smile.

"Adventure?" Pakhi asked more like to confirm for herself with a joyful smile.

Getting the needed things, both got out of the room and stopped at the door as they saw a servant pass by.

"Tell me when the coast is free!" Chakor said.

Checking on both side "Now it's okay!" and slowly they made their way to the other corridor "Speed up!" Pakhi said.

As they got down through elevator and made their way to the main door, they saw Miss. Girija giving orders to a servant and speeded their movement.

"The ball will be happening in 2 days" Miss. Girija said as Chakor and Princess were going out behind her "I want the workers to be all active. There are three things to" and she stopped and turned feeling something moving behind her.

Seeing no one there "Three things you need to get it done!" she said turning towards the man in front of her.

***

In the open space of the nature, with snow filled places, Chakor pulled the wooden sled with Pakhi on it to start their adventure with happy smiles on both their faces!

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Thank you buddies!

Hope you all liked and know why our hero is behaving like this.

See you all on Monday!

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Next part : Part 16

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Amazing update👏

So Suraj doesn't consider himself deserving &scared of taking responsibilities😕

Loved the way Queen supported Suraj😊

Chakor &Pakhi moment was beautiful😊

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Nice update sis..

Something cooking in suraj's mind..wat was tat?

The way queen supported her son was superb..

I think distance btw paakhi and maths was so long..lol

Chakor and paakhi is having a great moment..😊

Waiting 4 next update sis..

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Interesting update

Loved the mother-son talk. Truly appearances can deceive, to the outer world Suraj is an irresponsible playboy, but in reality he's worried about doing justice to the king's role.

Loved Chakor-Pakhi's great escape. The slide scene reminded me of Suraj playing with the kids in the previous part.

Looking forward to the next part.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#130

loved it a lot

hmm serious thinking as why he is not feeling right to take the responsibilities don't feel he is shoving but just that he feels he is not ready for it???

liked the mom and son convo and nice the way she is supporting him/

ChaKhi just love it.

super Maithu