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Posted: 7 years ago
hello wohooo !!! supernatural stufff
thats new n awesome concelt n actually very well written so that rahul n arman r wolves i guess n that good wolves hahaha
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PART 1

Please do check the note in the end.DO NOT miss it, it's really important!

A warm touch sent tingles across my skin. It felt nice, the warmth soon spread through my body, I could feel some warm air against my cheek and then it moved up to my ear. I think somebody was calling my name, softly, laced with care, concern and so much warmth. But suddenly it was lost and strangely my entire body was aching. My eyes opened expecting to see the calm- blue and yellow walls of my room, but instead I was met with a very different sight and an unfamiliar but wonderful scent.

My eyes frantically moved around, I wasn't at my house, this wasn't my room. I was trying to figure out what was happening when the whole chase and run flashed in front of my eyes and my eyes fluttered open. The room was simple but elegantly gorgeous. To my utter surprise, parts of the room- bedroom to be precise, were done in pitch black tone, but the other colours splashing in the fabrics and simple shades of white accentuated the whole look, making it look fresh irrespective of black colour. It was the first time I was seeing black colour in the bedroom, for that matter any room, but I could not deny that it looked just perfect. The room screamed of richness, as the subtle light streaming through the sheer curtains brought an amazing glow to the room. Her eyes then landed on the source of the scent, her side table had a beautiful crystal vase again black, with beautifully set lilies and lilac flowers. The room had a soothing touch to it, maybe that was what helped me to stay calm and relax even after everything that had happened. Or maybe the fact that I was finally in a house, not so important whose house right now; but at least safe and alive!!
"Heyy... Thank God tumhe hosh aa gaya. How are you feeling now?

The voice made me snap my neck and I found my hand in Rahul's hold. That's when I remembered how thankful I was that I had finally seen him;
"Rahul! Hi... Main... Main theek hu ab---- I guess.
He helped me up as I was trying to sit when another voice was heard from behind clearing his throat and Rahul let go of me to look behind just like me to find out who it was? And again I was met with his eyes, and he looked visibly angry, though I wondered why? I looked around once again for any reasons that he was angry about, I mean first of all if this was Rahul's house why was he even here!? But then I noticed how I was tucked in a warm fluffy blanket with my hands and clothes still covered in mud making me cringe. I was spoiling the almost spotless white comforters and bed sheets;
"Oh my---- Rahul I am so sorry... tumhe mujhe yaha nahi lana chahiye tha. Dekho sab bed sheet gandi ho gayi meri vajah se. I should just--- tch----
I slowly pulled the comforter away feeling extremely guilty and embarrassed, but as my feet touched the ground a groan escaped my lips, and I realized that my body was still aching, especially my legs. And next minute I saw stupid Mallik standing right in front of me;
"Stay!!
He snapped almost making me flinch, and obey him involuntarily. The look on his face read it wasn't a time to mess with him. But wait a minute... He wasn't my boss here;
"Tumhe ghussa dikhane ke alawa kuch aata bhi hai? Vaise main tumhe yaad dila du ye office nahi hai, aur na yaha tum mere boss ho toh is liye please mujhe aise ghurna band karo.

"Are you f***ing insane!! Who in their right mind would walk out in the trees all alone, vo bhi aise odd time pe?

The guy had a point, but what the hell I know that there was a wolf sitting there awaiting me!? Itne saalon mein toh kabhi yaha koi jungle kutta bhi nahi dekha hai kisine, poor aka poora bhediya mil jayega ye thodi socha tha maine.
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Riddhima was busy murmuring to herself and cursing him while all he did was glare at her waiting for her answer. So breaking the tension Rahul asked her politely;
"Ok calm down both of you... aur Riddhima tum ye bata ki tum yaha kar kya rahi thi? He actually has a point, it's not safe to be out alone like that you know.
She sighed and bowed her head like a red-handed caught kid. There was no way out of it clearly, so she simply narrated what had happened of course except her dream; and by the time she was done both of them had a stunned look on their face. Rahul seemed clueless on what to say so Armaan broke the silence;
"And Rahul you tell me to go easy on her? Her!? Did you just listen to all the crap she just made up or you are going to justify that too now? That sounds more like a kid's fairytale story, just that it's of a different genre and pathetically buit-up!

Rahul just saw with his lips sealed probably still not knowing what to say, that actually did sound unbelievable she knew but she turned to Armaan, now flabbergasted. He had no right to call her in sane he could at least have been polite considering she was in such a poor state;
"Excuse me!! I nearly escaped my death here and you think I am making all that up? Mujhe pata tha ki tum akdu ho, but I did not know you are so insensitive as well, thanks for opening my eyes!

"Sabse pehli baat, I am sure that was anything but "near-death experience, aur agar apne jaan ki itni hi fikar hai toh kisne kaha tha itne andhere mein walk pe jane ke liye vo bhi akele!? Akal kya ghaas charne gayi thi tumhari, itna khubsoorat town hai, par tumhe itne andhere mein hi walk pe jana tha!?

"Haan mujhe yahi jana tha... meri marzi. Main jo chahe karu, vaise bhi tum itne hyper kyu ho rahe ho? Agar mujhse kuch ho bhi jaaye toh that is not your concern!
She spoke out the last bit firma and loud glaring at him; why did he always have to be so heartless!!

Her heart dropped down to the bottom of her stomach, she arched back as he lunged ahead snapping his finger while his voice had again turned to a murderously low tone;

"Never ever talk to me in that tone, and it is absolutely my concern!

"Whoa whoa...
Rahul squeezed his arm and pulled him back as the atmosphere heated up;
"Riddhima tumhe bohot chot lagi hai, I think we should take care of that first. Tum behosh thi so we could only dress your forehead, tumhare haath aur pair pe bhi kuch ghaav hai I suppose, main Suzane se keh deta hu she will take care of it.
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A few minutes later Riddhima wounds were all cleaned and healed by Suzane. Soon Rahul was back with Armaan when she called Rahul closer and finally asked him;
"Vaise ye Mallik is waqt tumhare ghar mein kya kar raha hai? Iska toh koi bharosa nahi, but I thought you were committed to Muskaan!
She smirked at him making his eyes go round and he quickly defended;
"Riddhima!! Actually ye-----

"You should not strain your brain much you know, already bohot naajuk halat mein hai. Kahi bacha kucha dimag bhi bali na chad jaaye.
Armaan snapped at her and she really really wanted to give it back she pulled herself together. There was no point arguing with him, especially not right now when she was barely in a stable condition to pick on a fight. So she chose to ignore him and decided to thank her sweet friend;
"Thank you for everything Rahul, and I am sorry main aise odd time pe tumhare ghar pe is haalat mein hu par fir bhi tum mera itna khayal rakh rahe ho. Seriously Muskaan's a lucky girl, I need to let her know that soon!
She winked at him making him smile;
"Oh come on Riddhima, you are my friend tumhare liye itna toh kar hi sakta hu main. And about that whole... Umm------ wolf you know yaha kabhi kisi aur ne aise kuch dekha nahi hai in years; and I have been living here since past 5 years. I guess you were just really tired or stressed with stuff, so just relax. Because even if it was true log agar sunenge toh shayad majaak udayenge just like a few minutes ago...
He pointed towards Armaan quietly and she knew he was right;
"I am not saying you are lying or anything, par tum ab safe ho right, so you need not worry. And hey if there really is a wolf out there he is not going to get to you, I am not ready to let him take my beautiful friend away you know! So you really need to take care of yourself.
He winked at her making her blush and she nodded.
"Rahoool... I think that's enough!

"What? She is pretty... Don't you think so?
He smirked at Armaan only to receive a harder glare making Riddhima roll her eyes. Did his eyes just turn darker or she was reading too much between the lines, but it did seem like he was jealous. Was he? Yeah of course, in your dreams, dumbo! Her mind answered making her pout so she just snapped;
"I don't think I need his opinion about me Rahul, please! By the way your room is really amazing, bohot ache se maintain bhi ki hui hai. And as much as I loved it here and am thankful to you for being such a great friend and host, I think I should get going now.

"Tum kahi nahi ja rahi, tumhe aaram karne ki jaroorat hai.
There he goes again, she wasn't even talking to him and for the love of God could someone please explain what was he doing here!?
"Armaan really... you need to stop bossing me around, any way tum yaha kar kya rahe ho? Actually don't bother answering that, cuz I don't care, just like you should not either.

This girl just knew getting on his nerves perfectly, no one ever dared to talk to him in that tone, his surname in itself was enough to keep people in their place. Especially no girl had ever disrespected him like she did, because half of them would either be too scared and others were too busy swooning over him to deny anything he said or asked for. But this girl... she was just something and he couldn't really do much about it other than giving it back verbally so that's exactly what he did;
"Actually on second thoughts, you know what Riddhima? I think you might be saying the truth, there must have been a wolf chasing you I bet. Par usne tumhe chod diya hoga, you know why? Because jaanwaron ki sensing abilities bohot high hoti hai I have heard, and apparently he must have sensed your stupidity. Isi liye usne socha hoga ki kahi tumhe khake uske dimaag par asar na pad jaye, is liye usne tumhe chod diya. Great... Congrats Riddhima, you have outdone yourself!

"How dare you Mallik? Tum khud ko samjhte kya ho... tumne mujhe stupid kaha? And what do you think you are!? Tum jaisa insensitive, akdu, heartless and hopleless insaan aaj tak maine nahi dekha hai. Meri aisi haalat mein bhi tum fikar karna toh chodo, mujhe taane maar rahe ho. You are pathetic Mallik... and I am never going to let you boss me around. Mujhe ghar jana hai ya kya karna hai vo main decide karungi! You do not have any say in it... Tum mere boss ho, alright! Par apni personal life mein main kya karti hu isse tumara koi lena dena nahi.

"I am definitely going to tell you, and guess what sweet heart you are going to listen to me too! Mujhse jyada behas mat kiya karo tum, I don't like people snapping at me. You are lucky enough to still be able to open that mouth of yours, don't make me shut it right away because trust me I can!

Riddhima wasn't one to be easily scared, but this guy looked ready to kill and his eyes shouted that he meant every word making her gulp. He had walked up closer while warning her and was literally hovering her tiny body now. But as always Rahul came to her rescue pulling Armaan away and she let out a deep breath she had not realized yet she was holding in, but his next words caught her completely off guard.
"Kya kar rahe ho bhai, let it go.

"Bhai?
She uttered with a blank face stunned to say the least. Did she just hear him say bhai? Or was he just saying it... like in a friendly manner. She looked at Rahul in a questioning manner, her eyes going to and fro between him and Armaan.
"Did you just call him... "bhai?

Rahul chuckled at her shocked face while Armaan straightened himself;
"Haan Riddhima, Armaan mera bhai hai... aur by the way ye kamra mera nahi Armaan ka hai.
She slapped her hand against her mouth, her eyes wide and her heart was thudding loud against her chest, loud enough for the whole town to hear. She was having a heart attack, definitely that was what it was. What did God even want from her... so many shocks in a single day? Why was he doing that to her poor heart? In what world did these two look like brothers? Yeah okay they were both very good looking, but not similar in any way. And their behavior was definitely two opposite poles. But what's worse was, she sat in HIS room, correction, she was lying in HIS bed covered in mud and all this while snapping at him in his own house! Brilliant... the day just couldn't get any better.

It was Armaan's turn to smirk seeing her mouth zipped in an instant and he had no intentions of hiding it. What was she to say? She couldn't snap at him now, not after knowing that e owned the house and the room where she was practically being an invited guest in. Rahul shook his head at the sudden turn of tables and pin drop silence after the big revelation;
"Now... jaisa ki bhai ne kaha you should take some rest. Thodi der mein naashta vegera ho jaye toh main tumhe drop kar dunga.

"No!
Armaan had once again retorted but this time making both of them frown at him;
"I mean... tujhe kahi jaane ki jaroorat nahi hai. Tu aaj gar pe hi reh ke kaam karne wala tha na, so don't change your plan for her. Main... main drop kar dunga use.

"Like hell I am going to go with that freak!
She muttered under her breath; already she could not figure out a way to behave in front of his bipolar behavior. For a minute he was all bossy, then he would be all quiet, keep snapping at her like she was the most hated person on his list but still be bothered to let her be, and very rarely he would even care, not in a very sweet-kind way, just his own stupid annoying way but he did. And that would just leave her even more confused. Everything that he did or did not do, just left her thinking about him but she did not wish to so she instantly retorted;
"Nahi... I think main khud manage-----

"Tum akeli nahi jaane wali, if that is what you are even thinking of suggesting. Other than that... any problem?
There goes another command by her Boss, but could she do anything? Well looking at his stern face and the finality in his tone, it did not seem like a brilliant idea. She rolled her eyes muttering under her breath when her gaze caught the flowers on the side table;
"Well that proves this definitely has to be your room, cuz I am sure Rahul ko aisi aadatein nahi hongi!
She said looking at the pretty flowers and then looked up at him. He had so many plans on how to shut her mouth right away... Maybe forever, but he decided to let her go for once and left the room rolling his eyes at her. Rahul chuckled as she lied down cursing him, she was too adorable, a little too much for his brother to handle;
"Tum bhi na, vo phool tumhare liye laaye hue the. To make you feel fresh when you wake up.

"Really? That's so sweet Rahul, who got them though? Kyunki I am sure your brother isn't sweet enough to do such adorable things.
Her eyes wide in horror at even the unbelievable thought, then turning to him for an answer;
"That's not important who got those, par seriously Riddhima you should never and I mean really NEVER talk to him like that. He is just being easy on you, just don't test him.

Riddhima looked at him baffled, it was almost as if he had stabbed her causing a huge pout on her lips;
"Main---- maine kab...? I didn't even do anything, it's he who keeps annoying me. Mujhe dhamkiyaan vo deta rehta hai, aur tum bhi mujhe hi bol rahe ho. I mean I know he's your brother, par this is not done Rahul. Maine toh use kabhi kuch kiya bhi nahi hai... not intentionally at least.

"Hmm... That's true, par I am just saying you know, just try not to snap at him. I know he can be difficult at times, but he is not a bad person Riddhima. You have the right to speak out, but I am just saying don't try to mess with him for no reason, use bina vajah ghussa dilana is not such a great idea. He just has some anger issues you know so----- *sigh* Anyway, chalo ab tum aaram karo, I will wake you in a while once the breakfast is ready.
He left the room giving her a warm smile but she just stared at his retreating back stunned because he sounded so serious for the first time. Maybe his brother actually had some anger issues, he was right. But what bothered her was, why was she his favourite target most of the times? It was as if her face, heck her presence alone triggered him. Why did he hate her so much for?
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Had I killed him in his previous life? Yes that might be the reason. Nah... use ab tak yaad thodi hoga! Aur agar hua bhi toh uske paas kitne chances the to kill me, why would he wait!? Vaise bhi he is "The Armaan Mallik, koi uske khilaaf kuch bolega bhi nahi! Par aise --- *snap*

"Earth to Riddhima!! Kya soch rahi ho? Kabse khoyi hui ho.
Aanchal snapped her fingers at her as she was so lost in her thoughts while they all merrily discussed their plans for the weekend. Now there were so many things she wanted to discuss, but could she? No! She just changed the topic and asked them about what they were planning, as she found that they were planning for a movie weekend she lost even the tiny bit of interest that she was left with. She wasn't a movie freak, and the movie too wasn't to her likes so she declared she was going to laze around at home or just meet up Grace (one of her closest friend).

Returning to her desk she got caught up in her work, and all her other thoughts disappeared. On the other end, his eyes only followed her every little move through the cabin's only glass wall. Though he liked his privacy, just the wall next to his door was partly in glass so that he can keep a watch on his team just in case needed. He usually kept that shut too with the blinds, but he was thankful for that glass wall today, he had the perfect view that he needed through it. Her eyes narrowing in confusion as she read the files, the pencil curled delicately in her fingers in between making it lucky enough to be tucked in between her teeth as she would be lost thinking over things. Her long lashes shutting tighter as she would sometimes crack her neck feeling tired. A small smile playing against her lips when she would get certain things done the way she wanted. He had tried his best to avoid her, distract himself getting busy deep neck in work but apparently nothing really helped. Though he had managed to stay away the last few days, not seen her face, not had a word with her, however hard it had been but he had been successful. But that was only what he thought, the minute he had seen her again after a week long, all his efforts were down the drain and he was instead busy cursing himself for being away from her, regretting to have missed on her beautiful face, her mesmerizing voice and tantalizing fragrance for so long! Oh boy...this was not how this was supposed to be. This could not work if he felt so weak just by looking at her, but he did not have many choices because try how he may, he just could not stay away for long.

Unknown to his deep turmoil and thoughts she had been busy with her work, but sensed a strong gaze on her which made her look up. He instantly looked away as he sensed the change in her and she continued with the task at hand considering it to be just another imagination like she had been having lately. But then her mind was back to the stupid thoughts... HIS thoughts. She remembered their ride as he had dropped her home declaring that she would take the day off as she did not look fine and she had just no say in it!
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For almost half the way they sat in a terrifying silence, they could almost hear each other's breath as there was no other sound made by either of them. But finally she broke the silence as she could not take it anymore;
"Tum itne dino tak kaha the, office kyu nahi aa rahe the?

For the first time she would have even been glad if he had snapped back; but she was met with pin drop silence. He had heard her question but just given her a look, that trademark Armaan look- with an eyebrow raised; making it clear how unimportant he thought of her question. His behavior was just getting too much for her to handle, she hadn't asked him for a ride or any sort of help for that matter, so she did not need to tolerate this behavior she decided; and asked him to stop the car right away. Obviously he did not give in but finally decided to at least talk to her normally;
"Ok fine... is mein itna naaraz hone ki kya baat thi! Anyway, main bas----- I had some work if that is what you wanted to know.

"Hmm... Vo tumhara kamra, I mean tumhari sari bedsheets maine spoil kar di uske liye sorry. Par Rahul bhi na, use pata nahi kyu mujhe tumhare room mein rakhne ki kya jaroorat thi? I mean main couch pe----

"Aaram se nahi reh paati isi liye vaha shift kiya tha tumhe.
He justified but wasn't really happy with her apology, but having missed that on his face she continued;
"Haan toh guest room mein tha, itna bada ghar hai kahi bhi aur le jaata par na----

"There wasn't going to be any slightest possibility ki mere ghar mein hote hue tum kahi aur hoti!
That reply not only took away her capability to retort, but the finality he held and the way he looked at her, left her baffled. This once she was sure she had seen his eyes turn black, it was no imagination of her but she did not have the guts to say anything anymore. Though she grew quiet it wasn't the end of shocks for her, what had followed next, his words as he had dropped her home were something she would never ever forget in her life.
As she got down his car he did not bother to wave a bye, neither was he out of the car, he just sat still looking ahead. That shouldn't have for there was no fcuking good reason, but it did hurt. Well obviously, she was a nobody to him, and she wouldn't have it any other way either right, so why was she even bothering to think about such a petty thing. She just shook her head at her own stupidity, and unreasonable expectations turning towards her house. Luckily she had a spare key kept with her neighbor, she used it to unlock the door as she had obviously lost her key in the chasing game last night. The door had just clicked open when she shrieked feeling a hand on her wrist. Not only was it sudden but her body's tingling reaction to the touch had caused the shriek, and very unexpectedly she was now staring up at Armaan who held an unreadable face at the moment which scared her further more.
"Ar... maan?

"Never EVER again step out in the dark alone! Is that clear?
Her poor heart was too busy pumping hard and trying to stay in its place to say anything which was bad as it led him to take a step closer. He continued in a low but firm voice laced with a tinge of agitation at her lack of response;
"Agar kahi jana hi ho toh call me right away, I will be with you, any time anywhere that you wish to go, par akele bahar mat nikalna, samjhi!?... Answer me Riddhima!!
All she finally managed was a small nod and he finally stepped back but his eyes never left her. For another minute he kept looking at her square in the eye and then abruptly left uttering a small- "Take care. It was either her disturbed mind or the uncanny events, but she felt as if he had changed his words at the last moment, there was something more to his words but maybe that would never be answered.
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The goose bumps were back and so were the shivers running down her spine just recalling his words and the look he held. That had been the closest he had been to her until now, it wasn't even a touch but still she had not yet been able to forget it. The effects he left on her were just unbelievable, but she wasn't going to deny them She did not want to! Past 48 hours had definitely been a roller coaster ride and she had discussed it with the only person she had Grace. Riddhima had lost her parents a few years ago in an accident and since then she had been living on her own. She did have a very loving aunt but she stayed all the way in Canada and she did not wish to shift. So after staying with her for just a few months, she had returned to her hometown and her own house which held all her memories with her parents.

Wrapping up for the day she caught the lift just in time before it shut, but maybe should have simply waited out she thought as she saw him, the only other person in the lift... Both stood in awkward silence as the lift started but just in another few seconds the lights were out. The lift stopped had stopped working and there was absolute silence for 5 seconds with an hope that it was just a momentary problem but another 10 seconds later when nothing happened and she realized Armaan was trying to press the emergency button desperately she realized it was not a good sign;
"Ye... ye kya ho raha hai? Lift... band kyu ho gayi?

"Kuch technical problem ho gayi hogi... relax, lift man ke paas alarm chala gaya hoga, technician aa jayega.

Obviously it was too easy for him to say than for her to be. For a few minutes when nothing happened she decided to pull a conversation as the situation and the darkness was eating her up;
"Boh--- bohot jyada andh----era hai yaha!
But there was no reply;
"Okay I know you hate me too much, par can you please just talk to me as formality! Mujhe ----- bohot jyada dar lag raha hai Armaan. Mujhe andhera padsand nahi... Aur upar se ye-----ughh----
She gasped as the lift shook almost taking her breath away. She tried to hold onto the bars and in an attempt to be steady her hand hit against it causing her wound to open up making her shriek. The pain stung her just for a second as next moment Armaan had wrapped her in his arms leaving her stumped. She was too shocked to realize anything that followed, because all she could sense was his hand that took hold of her wrist delicately checking on her wound. He had being saying some soothing words she guessed, but her head felt lighter than air as he held her close to his chest probably so that the turbulence that was happening did not harm her in any way. The thought that he was trying to shield her, warmed her heart too much to pay attention at anything except him. Though it was pitch black but she could feel his gaze stuck on her face which made her look up unknowingly.

"I am never going to let anything hurt you!
His words laced with some strong emotion she could not conclude of, fluttered her heart. The proximity they stood in should have bothered her too no ends, and it did too, but only in a good way. The voices of someone outside could be heard, supposedly someone trying to fix the lift but the two people stuck inside were least affected. Unknown to her, her hand caught hold of his arm when his other arm caged her with the lift wall. Suddenly the darkness did not seem so frightening, but the proximity did! This was inappropriate to so many levels but she could not bring her to push him away as he stood holding her pinned to the wall gazing down at her without a blink. His minty breath and warm touch rendered her incapable to think straight and she drowned in unknown feel that the proximity created. With no one and no sound around they could hear each other's breathing clearly, and the loud heart beats rang in their ears. Forgetting every why, what, who and how, her hand moved up to his face as he leaned in; his hot breath fanning her lips and eyes locked with hers. For a few seconds it seemed like one step forward two steps back, but soon the distance only reduced more and more as none of them seem to object, especially her and then everything just fit, her eyes shut as their nose brushed and he gave a heart-flipping husky growl leaving her in a puddle. His lips slightly brushed hers and there were sparks flowing through their veins. But abruptly as the lights were back reality came down crashing on him and he bolted away. He looked like splashed with cold water, his face was horror-struck as she opened her eyes and the sight broke her heart to million pieces. Not that she wasn't thankful nothing happened, but his reaction was a bit too harsh to take in. And just while in the middle of comprehending the situation, he dashed back at her, his hands causing a loud thud against the walls as he caged her in his arms while his other hand a little more than needed tight grip against her waist. His eyes, she had clearly seen turning dark almost taken aback at how that was even humanely possible but the proximity and the fire in his eyes did not allow her to say much. His hand came up to cup her cheek while he nuzzled her neck which felt more like he was taking in her scent but he also looked as if he was fighting himself over something when he spoke up huskily. His eyes were shut and his voice but firm as he spoke through his gritted teeth;
"NEVER EVER DO THAT! NEVER AND I MEAN NEVER TOUCH ME OR COME CLOSE TO ME LIKE THAT AGAIN.
Riddhima was left stunned by his words, more so warning. The lift doors opened up and he had zapped out running a hand through his hair, frustrated.
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NOTE: So guys, first things first, I have no idea when the next update will be, owing to my weird schedule these days. But the note is not about that...I think I had put this up even earlier for this thread and I guess I'll have to repeat myself unfortunately. I really really love AR but I am already losing interest in writing, that is also why I am hardly able to update even when I find some time. Now in this situation I had really appreciate if you guys, like at least 50% of people who get the PMs revert back with good/bad whatever comments that u feel about the update on the OS/ any other thing that is posted (and I don't mean like just a single word comment). Because this is most definitely the last time, if you guys really are not interested in the thread I might as well stop writing or posting anything here. So do let me know about that and also the next update will be IF and only after I see the response (apart from when I get time). And yeah regular readers and people who do usually comment can ignore this. No offense to anyone,and don't mean to be rude or too demanding but I guess this is just how it works. Thank you, and love all you guys who keep supporting and waiting for the updates. 😊


Edited by arima_mallik - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res:
this 1 too In Res. List..
God Update Pe Update..

Sorry, fir my pagalpanti for reserving.. But My mismatch time Is not allowing me anything..
Will be back in a week 2 tab tak jhel lo..

Thank you in advance ..
Loads of love.
See you soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
U scared with That "please read the note" waali line se
ek toh ammy scaring ridzi too much
upar se u ki dhamki
waah kya baat😔
IF is not active these days
aur sab bade bhi hogaye na
i mean sab busy hogaye isiliye bahot kam comments aate hai
mai apni baat karti hun
i read most of the stories aapke bhi aur sabke bhi jiske pms aate hai
but comment karna is another task
stories r like bedtime lullaby
neend aane ke time padho maza aata hai
i know less response ki wajah se likhne k dil bhi nahi karta aur ab toh pehle ki tarah AR imagine bhi nahi hopate likhte time
i can understand
but aap isko toh atleast continue kardo please
isko padhkar pyaar ki ek kahani waale abhay piya ki yaad aagayi
its fresh n mast
please continue it
mai comment paka karungi
continue kardo isko please
please pleaze pretty please


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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg like awesome part but
App na to dara hi diya by saying that you never able to read like breathtaking lakin
Part is amazing i like that scene when ridzi is thing k us previous life ma armaan ka muder kiya tha😆 and then jab armaan riddhima to ghar drop karna jata ha like riddhima ki trhan iwas also shocked k achanak sa ya annoying and bossy armaan careing or loving sound kasa karna laga😉 and finally the lift scene sooo romentic like (oye hoye)but phir achanak sa rude but well is ka b koi funda ho ga cant wait to read more loveee the update
Plzzz dont stop writing love your writing so plzzz don't stop
Love you
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow awesome part.part ki liye bohot sukriya.thanks for pm.beautiful outstanding story.di apne to dara diya note dege.love the part.love AR.bohot enjoy kiya part ka.well done di.pls post the next asap.eagerly waiting for next part❤️😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part was awesome... Very nice... Lift vala scene was great. Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
I was a silent reader for a long time but your threat make me think that its not gonna work anymore, i have to comment otherwise my favourite writer is gonna stop writing and that's not what i want...i just want to read your stories all the time..eveytime my notifications pop that you have one private msg i i hope it your's so please continue what you are doing coz your ff's are the only thing i want to read these days coz they are amazing so please continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yaar, I'm really not liking Armaan in this. He is so bossy and controlling. It's the wolf in him, isn't it? This is one of the reasons why mujhe aisi stories zyada pasand nahi hai. The guy is always too controlling and looses his cool at the drop of a hat.
Armaan hota kaun hai, Riddhima ko itni badly treat karne wala? I don't like him, at all. Granted, he's a nice guy and he seems to care a lot about Riddhima, but he is always so rude and mean to her and he likes to control everything she does as if uska khudka dimaag hi nahi hai. That's not cool. At all.

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