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~ THE UNFATHOMABLE LOVE ~

PART 12


The night seems to be long and endless for people in the Malhotra Mansion.
Few were delight , happy, pleased and engaged with each other .On other hand
few were confused, helpless, puzzled and bewildered.
memories don't seem to stop recalling in someone's mind then few flashbacks wont let someone
sleep.whereas someone was preapring for a clear mission on hand.
.
Those irritating snors of his friends were not so powerfull to disturb
the devasted friend.This pleasant night was not so pleasant for a man with crushed hopes.
All his hopes came to end when he recalls the incident at dinner time which shake the lover
to core.
Flashback
jalal was all set to confront his answers from priya(jodha according to jalal since she has similar face
to jodha) about her first encounter with him at evening.he was determine to know why she behaved with
him like a stranger,as if she is seeing him for first time and not only that she didnt even look at him much
as if he doesnot exist..
jalal to himself:why are you behaving weirdly jo.Are you still angry with me? if yes then i will
apologise to you 100 times but please stop this torture..please..
jalal's thoughts were broken with a top on his shoulder by sanjay.
sanjay: where are you lost akbar(as i mentioned i previous chappy jalal changed his name).everyone is waiting
for you at dinning table.
jalal:oh i am sorry.
sanjay: its ok now come.
Having settled himself in seat opposite to priya ,jalal was trying to read her facila expressions
and reations on each questions asked.
Raj:so priya how was your trip to singapore?Did you and ahan enjoyed it.
Priya:The trip was amazing dad.we enjoyed alot specially ahan .He enjoyed it so much that
he slept even without having dinner that day...hahaha..
Sanjay: woow champ .i hope you didnt forget my gift.?
ahan: bhayya i got full bag of choclates forl u all.
Neelam:it means i can also enjoy it haan?
ahan gives a nod to her in agreement.
Raj:And about the deal,is it finalised?
Priya:actually dad there are some lope holes i found, so will look after that and then finalise
it.
Raj:oh ok.
To avoid more business talk sunny intrepted
Sunny:you know Di yesterday we almost lost Ahan.And..(his words stop seeing his dad's angry glares)
Raj,Nilam,Sanjay were giving angry looks to Sunny for blurting that incident.
Priya panic:Lost ahan?? what happen to ahan ?Sunny i am asking something ,will you care
to answer?(raising eyebrow)
Sanjay:relax pri dear.look ahan is here with us so lets forget about it.(to divert the topic raj intrepted)
Raj:yea and did you meet our guest?
with this question of Raj both priya and jalal look at each other.
Priya:yes we met at college but i don't know them.
Sanjay: so let me introduce you to them.This is Abdul,this is Abrar and this one is Akbar.
Priya:Hi.,Umm ..where are you from?
abdul:we are from india.
Priya:oh...india.well i have heard alot about it.
Abrar:India is the seventh largest country in the world.And has second largest Army in the world.
It is surrounded on three sides by water(peninsula).
There are many different languages and cultures in India. India has 23 official languages.
It constitute of many religions like Islam,Hinduism,jainism,christanity,sikhism,buddism and many others.
It is a diverse country with many people stating from Low caste to high,dark color to whitish.
Celebrations are to the core starting from Eid ul zuha(Bakri eid),Eid ul fitr(Ramdan eid),Holi(festival of colors),
Diwali(festival of lights),Saankranti,Christmas,Raksha Bandan(siblings festival),Karva chaut,Ganesh chaturti,
Krishn Janmashtami etc.,The weather is pleasant varying with Summer,winter,rainy,.monsoon etc.
India is a country which cannot be describe in words .If you want to know more then come to our nation.
Priya:sounds intresting.. wish to visit your country soon.
jalal:you talk as if you have never visited India before.?
Priya blankly :No ,i have never visited India.
jalal in sarcastic way: Then you have never met us..i mean any Indian.
Sunny:offo akbar bhai,if Di never visited india this means she never met any india na.
Abrar:but you all look like indians.
At this sudden question of abrar ,priya while feeding ahan his food looks at Raj for answer.
Raj:actually my forefathers are indians and me,nilam and sanjay went to patna to meet our relatives when priya was born
so logically she was born in india but since we are in Malaysia for many years so we belong
to here.
Priya:yea and i have done my schooling from KPS and now am doing my P.G from St.xavier
Sanjay:you know even with her studies priya manages Dad's business very well.
Raj: yea.she is the best daughter i can have.But i doubt about my sons.
listening to raj's statement both sanjay and sunny look at their father with pouts and everyone
laughs at their reaction.
Priya:now you guys tell me about yourself .
Abdul: as you know we are from india and we are in cloth business .we actually cameto patna for some
business but Ahmed uncle(one of jalal's uncle -incident is mentioned in previous chappy) suggested us to stay in malaysia
for sometime .
Priya:great.Then me and my friends will be grateful to show you our country and many intresting
things here if you allow us .
jalal:we will be the luck one to know more.!
Ahan:mumma i full .now i go to play.
Priya:ok baby now you go but dont go out of mansion ok?
ahan: ok mumma.
Priya:well i m done and have some work so good night everyone.
Raj:even me.good night.
sanjay:m full but i guess this Sack's stomach (pointing to sunny ) will never get full.
see you all bye.
and the dinner gets wrap up .
Fb ends..
Why did she say that she never went to india ,forget went she said she never saw me before,
like seriously Is it some kind of joke or what?! she was talking so formally .Ehhh
why jo why?
.
sitting near the desk she tries to engross herself with the work but those little blur flashbacks
were not letting her in peace.How much she try to ignore but they keep repeating like a series
of some fiction or an unknown mysteries.more near to her little but full of live ,she
still cannot summerise anything yet.Lovingly caressing ahan's hair .
priya in mind: why do i feel like i have seen him somewhere,like his presence was always
important for her even though she could recall where and why.His desperate eyes looking
for an unknown answers he never asked at dinner time.But his constant watch at her
was making her uncomfortable WHY? even though she never met him before.Engrossed
in so many thoughts she slept.
.
.
pacing in his room a 40 year old man trying hard to think of possiblities.Can it be possible
? can he be the man ? there are no such proofs but there faces almost match,there eyebrows
like same royal style,there annoyed face and attitude as well.Hmmm .. I need to investigate it before
its too late.


Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata
Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai
Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage
Jaise Barsoon Ki Pehchaan Hai

Kitni Bholi Hai Tu
Kitni Naadan Hai
Dil Ki Baaton Se
Anjaan Hai

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata
Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai
Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage
Jaise Barsoon Ki Pehchaan Hai

Kitni Bholi Hai Tu
Kitni Naadan Hai
Dil Ki Baaton Se
Anjaan Hai

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata
Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai...

Kya Sochta Hoon
Main Kya Chahata Hoon
Hai Mushkil Tujhko Woh Bataana

Maine Suna Hai
Ki Mushkil Bada Hai
Dabi Chahaton
Ko Chupaana

Hey, Kya Sochta Hoon
Main Kya Chahata Hoon
Hai Muskil Tujhe Woh Bataana

Hoo, Maine Suna Hai
Ki Mushkil Bada Hai
Dabi Chahaton
Ko Chupaana

Raaz Tere Sabhi
Khol Degi Abhi
In Laboon Pe Jo
Muskaan Hai

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata
Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai...

Kaise Bataaon
Teri Dhadkanoon Ko
Banaaya Hai Kisne, Deewana

Ajnabi Mujhko Itna Bata
Dil Mera Kyoon Pareshaan Hai
Dekh Ke Tujhko Aisa Lage
Jaise Barsoon Ki Pehchaan Hai

Kitni Bholi Hai Tu, Kitni Naadan Hai
Dil Ki Baaton Se, Anjaan Hai
(song from 'pyaar toh hona hi tha 'movie. specially for all my friends here)
.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
There can be nothing more satisfying than the feeling of dawn. Nature is at its best and is
the glorious hour. The brilliant beams of the sun give a splendid shading to the mists and
knolls. It denotes the trip of the sun in the sky. At initially, there shows up a little chunk of
light in the sky. It at that point continues expanding in size and sparkle. The brilliant coating
is by all accounts rising and rising. Flying creatures sing to its sparkle. Men and ladies
who go out for morning walk make the most of its blushing magnificence. It is the time when
the day throws away the shroud of night.
The admirers of morning walk stop on their approach to take a look at the dawn. The primary beams of
the sun are cool and support to the eyes. At a slope station, the excellence of the dawn is past portrayal.
The slope tops and the valley beneath appear to be showered in yellow light. All of sudden, the brilliant ball
sparkling in the sky becomes huge in the measure. Milk merchants and daily paper young men are heard calling
their exchange every step of the way of the road.
Somewhat later, little young men and young ladies in the sparkling crown are seen setting off to the school.
As the sun gets higher in the sky, the day's action starts. Plants and trees devour the beams of the sun.
Late risers miss the magnificence of the dawn. It is an uncommon delight to be awake at dawn.
Adding to the voices of our Romantic couple busy in their romance plus exercises
Raj:You look too beautiful today.whats the matter haan?(winks to nilam)
Sunny:dad there is no use of buttering mom coz she wont leave you till
you are done with 15 rounds
Raj in mind:whenever i try to escape this little monkey jumps in huhh.
Nilam:hahaha thanks for comment buddy but you cannot skip your exercise
Raj:comeon nilam its just a day.cant we skip it ?
Nilam:no compromise with health and fitness dear.
Raj:where are rest of members?
nilam:Ahan is sleeping,sanjay went to office early,sunny just woke up,Priya went
out for jogging and our guest may be sleeping.(abdul,abrar,jalal who just came)
Abrar:we are here aunt.
raj:good morning boys.
abdul:good morning uncle
nilam: got up early.going somewhere?
jalal:actually we thought to do some workout .By the way where is priya,ahan,sanjay and sunny?
nilam:ohh..they all are on their daily routine .My workout is done .i'll leave, have to prepare breakfast.
jalal:come lets go out for sometime.
raj:get back before breakfast guys.
abdul:yes uncle.
moving out from mansion the trio slowly moved to a near by park to have some fresh air
when abrar spoke gathering his friends attention.
abrar:Why did bhabhi behaved like that yesterday?
abdul:for a second i thought she is not our bhabhi.
jalal:donno what is going on.i should ask her.
abdul:no no jalal dont do that ,if she gets annoy.lets first wait for her to explain this
abrar:yes jalal,lets wait coz we dont know actual reason behind her beaviour so if
we do anything causing her trouble . lets wait.
jalal sarcastically:huhh wait..since 4 years i am doing that.now again wait.!
suddenly a ball hits jalal's forehead grabing trios attention.few boys of same to their age
came runnning.
Atul:opps sorry buddy .
Abrar:dont you know where to play?
Ajay:Hey relax man.it was just a shot.
abdul:just a shot right.! dude you..
jalal:relax guys its ok.Here take your ball (handing atul ball)
few girls came running to scene.seeing the familiar faces
priya:i am sorry.it was me who hit the ball.i am sorry if i hurt you.
jalal:its ok.by the way what are you doing here.?
before priya can answer anything others interrupted.
kaira:and who are you to question her?
abdul:a well wisher.
Disha:i have never seen THIS well wisher before.
priya:Ahh guys guys ..these are the same boys we saved from Rohit and his gang remember?
ajay:so you were those boys who felt in trap haan.
abrar:excuse me?
priya:yeah and you know guys they are our guest .
kaira:you mean they will stay in M.M?
abdul:yes.
atul:cool.
jalal:yes it is and you know Miss.Priya promised us to show us your country.
~ manly voice interrupted
Rahul: priya's promise means our promise (smiling at priya),so we shall fullfil it.what say.
priya's friends in unison:yes.
priya:let me first introduce you to them.(starting from left)meet him Atul joshi,he is Ajay dewaan,
kaira singhania,disha patel and he is Rahul khuranna.
shaking hands with boys ,jalal felt a tinge of jealous when she introduce rahul to him.
and the boys were shy to shake hands with disha and kaira.
kaira:relax buddy we wont eat you up.hahaha
priya:kaiyuu(glaring kaira to stop)..and guys meet them .He is Abdul ,
he is Abrar and he is Akbar.
Rahul: hi.nice to meet you.
jalal:hmm.
atul:for your safety let me tell you at first note itself that stay away from rohit and his
lousy gang coz they like playing with people,stay away from us as well coz we dont spare our enemies.
and be in our good books.(with this last one priya and her friends laugh)
jalal:you mean we are enemies?
kaira:depends on your behaciour man.(to stop all this )
priya:can we be friends?
jalal:yea sure..friends(when jalal extended his hands to shake with priya ,rahul immediateley
shaked his hands with jalal)
rahul:FRIENDS!
atul:now if we are done with all this shall we go to M.M to meet ahan?
rahul:i just cant wait to meet my little rabbit.
kaira:lets go.
.
At M.M
The entire squad entered mansion talking to each other or say trying to know more
about their new friends.whereas priya left immediately as she knows its ahan's time to wake up.
.
Rubbing his little eyes and nose with yawning indicating that the little master has woke up,
ahan slowly opens his eyes to find his mumma sitting beside him and smiling at his antics.
ahan excited:mumma..good morning(while kissing his mom).
priya:good morning baby.(kisses her loves face)
ahan while cuddling now in his mumma's hug :cocolate mumma..
priya:first brush teeth baby.
ahan with pout:is it important to blush?
listening a cute question rahul enters: yes rabbit.if you dont brush then all your teeths
become brown then you will look a dirty rabbit.Do you want to look dirty?
ahan nods in negative .
rahul:so brush?
ahan:yesh..
priya to ahan:ok so now shall we go to brush teeth?(on getting a nod from ahan)
rahul: see you at breakfast champ.(kissing ahan's cheek leaves)
priya took ahan for teeth brush and the little one followed his mother step-wise slowly
trying to hold his brush when priya added a very little colgate(according to baby required )
then did his brush and the mother son had a fun time while giving ahan bath who splashs
water on priya as a result both get wet.
priya complaining:oh god ahan look you made mumma wet.
ahan:same pinch mumma and laughs.
priya:come on now lets change, your choclate milkshake is waiting.
priya after dressing ahan also changed her self into college outfit and the duo left for
breakfast.
Seeing the cute little steps of ahan descending from stairs ajay went and picked him in
his arms.
ajay:good morning ahan.
ahan kisses all his friends cheeks:good morning
kaira:oh ho today my Boyfriend is looking very handsome.
ahan blushes:thankyou galfrien
disha:will you like to go for a date with me?
kaira:i am your first GF so first date with me.
disha: but i was the first to ask.ahan baby with whom will you go?
little hero got confuse between his two GF and look at his mum for answer
ahan:mumma..(with pout)
and all the rest burst out in laughter
jalal,abdul and abrar's mouth went wide open seeing ahan's blush and new discovery of
his 2 Gfs
abdul whispers: your son made 2 girlfriends at this age.
abrar whispers:i am still single ,ready to mingle but no girl looks at me.huhh
jalal:shutup both of you.He is just a kid.and after all he is handsome like his dad..(with proud)
nilam who came from kitchen calls them for breakfast and eveyone settles down
The breakfast went smooth with priya busy in making ahan eat his breakfast,ajay atul
discussing about their todays test,disha kaira busy with their recent shopping stuff,rahul
busy with helping priya to make ahan eat his breakfast ,raj-nilam busy with hidden romance,
abdul-sunny full on war at tasty food and praising it,abrar busy knowing more about malaysia from
sanjay .Amidst all these one poor soul was sitting jealous watching his wife and son having
gala time with person ignoring his exsistance.This was adding fuel to jalal's jealous
since he watched rahul enter priya's room and met ahan like he is very close friend..(above brush incident)
jalal in mind:Huhh,..i wish to throw you out ,you fool..!
ahan who noticed jalals changing expression asked his mom:mumma i drink coclate
milk with angel?
hearing innocent request the loving mom replied:yes baby,if you want to drink your milkshake
from your angels hand then go..
slowly letting down ahan ran to his angel who picked him even before his reach as it was
a very happy thing that ahan wants to drink his milkshake from his angels hand.
very slowly yet carefully jalal made ahan drink his milkshake when ahan whispered in
jalal's ears:angel angry??
at first jalal was shocked how did he know,but was glad his son that read his mind.
jalal:angry with whom champ?
ahan:me.
jalal:why will angel get angry with his star?
ahan:because i no say goodmorning and no kissi giving na.
jalal:for that i am still angry.so if you dont want your angel to get angry then give a kiss.
listening this ahan quickly kisses jalal's both cheeks and ask:now?
jalal:now i am not angry .
the duo enjoyed their breakfast unaware that few eyes were watching them.
.
soon after breakfast all the friends left to their houses to get ready for college to meet
soon at college.sanjay,raj left for office ,sunny for school.where abdul,abrar,jalal
got ready to leave.
priya to ahan:baby mumma is going to college so take care of yourself,nanu and eat on
time and dont trouble her.ok?
ahan like a good boy:ok mumma.but you come fast you promise icecream today no forget.
priya:yes yes i remember my promise .after coming i'll take you out for icecream.
(kissing his face)be a good boy.
ahan nods and kiss his mothers cheek seeing all this lovey dovey moments between mother-
son jalal wish even one day he will be a part of this hugs
These new friends left for college unknown to fact that a new adventure is waiting for them.
.
someone on phone:hello.yes its me.Did you do your work?Idiot i called you last night
for some important work and you still are on bed..getup soon else you will be fired.huh.
..tit.tit..and the call ends.
~~~~~~~~~.


note: as mentioned in previous chappies priya has same face as jodha but it isnt confirm
whether she is really jo or not.according to jalal and his friends they assume her to be jo.
Is she really jo or just have same face or a twin ..It can be anything.To know more stay
with updates..
About the story i am really very happy and thankful to all my dear friends and readers
who liked it,commented ,continous ask for update and are still asking..This really encourage
me to write update.i hope i didnot let you down and will surely try to update SDWY soon.
And sorry for all kind of errors..and yea i hope i have described INDIA in a way you like,if anyway bothered anyone then please ignore that
.
thanks



Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 7 years ago
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i have tried to write about india in my view and also tried it in indian colors ,since i cannot write in white so choosed black.😛.
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Awesome chappy
First make us sure is she jo or not
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Awesome chappy

First make us sure is she jo or not
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