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Wissam_Sy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Great very nice update dear

Lovely it update dear

Thanks for the PM

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Wissam_Sy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Wonderful update Story dear

Lovely it update

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Sad ending dear

Liked it !!

Maan and Geet were careful about Jannat but alas her cancer cells started it's regrowth. Geet was hurt that Maan hid about jannat's health from her. Maaneet are heart broken with the truth. Aman needs his parents attention but they were lost in their own grief and pain.

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: jasika08
Emotional epilogue
Sad for maaneet

hmm

i planned like this😉

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: suni_104
Very emotional update
janaat cancer not fully recovered
maaneet heart broken

thanks dear

its going painful

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: anu5
Sad ending dear
Liked it !!
Maan and Geet were careful about Jannat but alas her cancer cells started it's regrowth. Geet was hurt that Maan hid about jannat's health from her. Maaneet are heart broken with the truth. Aman needs his parents attention but they were lost in their own grief and pain.
Thanks for the pm!
:))

hmm

thank god you liked it😉

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tammana.m
Emotionalll 😭
Kam.se kam.epilogue to happy wala detii
Do write one more part happy wallaa plsss
Thanks for pm
N HAPPY NEW YEAR 😃

ok dear

i try to write one more part

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: love2_soma
i dont like ending so no pressing of like...
u r wishing happy new year dear by giving us a sad ending...😲 😔

so happy ending du kya 😃😉

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Yeh kya tha

Itna khatarnak end sirf aur sirf tuh hi doch sakthi hai...

Muje yeh end nahi chahiye

Badlo iss sd

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

on reader demand

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whenever Aman cry, she take him in few seconds...he stand and come another side of bed, touched her shoulder, he feel little strange, he called her name "GEET...he removed her hair from face and make her lay on support of back...he feel some unknown fear surround him... one side his son crying for mother and here geet not opening the eyes... he placed hand on her cheek ,patted her cheek, he softly take her name GEET...Aman ready to jump from his arms, his soft hand touch her, try to wake own mom...but both not get any response from her...she never sleep like this then how today when Jannat ?