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Originally posted by: Iptida


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Sorry Babies..Urgency tapak padi hain mere aur Mp ke update ke beech!!😭
But I PROMISE aaj update doongi..😎
Waise main bhi promises kam kam hi karti hoon aur agar karti hoon toh nivati hoon!! Chalo bohot ho gaya dialogue baji!! 🤣
Shall try to update at afternoon!!

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Didn't think to update this one...But, This update is specially dedicated to Anu5! Happy birthday baby! Hope you had fun! Love you sweets!🤗

(Avoid errors, I am halfway dozed 🤣)

Chapter 37 : No Storm Shall Keep us Apart!



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"Accha ji...Itna bhi buddhu maat samjhiye humein...mana ki aap bohot hoshiyar ho par main bhi toh aapki Geet hoon naa?? Par sacchi puchu ye ishq aur pyaar mein kiya fark hain? Same hi hain na dono?" She sounded genuinely clueless but gasped at his next act as he sealed the distance between their lips quite effortlessly!


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(Flashback continues)

~Mohabbat, ibadat, shikayat
Main jisse karoon woh tum ho~

Maan got fascinated seeing her enlarged pupil while that peck lasted for barely half a second though was powerful enough to freeze his doll into the momentum!

"This is... called
Pyaar..." He susurrate mystically while smiling softly at her dozed face and plastered another feathery kiss on her forehead.

"And
this is..
called...
Ishq...
Then... this is..." Maan trailed those words gradually again followed by briefly by slamming into her delicate baby lips and this instance he properly smooched her for a prolonged period to which she fluttered her eyelashes a little then drowsily surrendered herself inside his arms!

She did not think much! Did not waste time in judging just flowed into his streams!

He nibbled succinctly on her lips and sensed her imitating him the subsequent moment.

~Tumhi ho jaan-e-jaan
Ghuzarish ya khwaahish~

With her closed eyes, she followed her personal mentor of love and pulled his lower lip into her while getting flooded with his sweet nectar!

"This...Is...Umm...Don't know..something mixed" Maan somehow detached those entwined lips sensing the breathlessness, "So miss handa...Aab samjhi?? Pyaar...ishq...Mein fark...aur abhi..."

"Mohabbat??" Her cutesy inquest was directed at him while she was looking profoundly into his dark browns!

"Hmm...Ye hain na mohabbat..." She sensed he attracted her hypnotized mold inside his arms and she felicitously gave herself into him, embracing him tightly!

"Aap itne meethey kyun ho...Sugary...umm..." She snuggled into him more and he was stroking the top of her head politely so much so as if she will melt down if he applies pressure, "Nope...You taste like that...Mishty...My strawberry..." She received another peck on her hair partition by him, "Toh aapki bahoon mein mohabbat hain?"

"Uhu...Meri bahoon mein toh meri mohabbat rehti hain..." She found him looking at her without a single blink which ensnared her into his pupil, Heeding his own reflection into those large hazels he proceeded, "Jiske ishq mein maine apni laavo se uske laavo pe hamare pyaar ka izhaar likh diya..." Maan said with utmost love, making her teenage self frown with confusion! Yet flourished in zest!

"Samajh gai...Ye sab batein mere samajh ki bahar hain...Mujhe ab bhi kuch samajh nahin aaya..." She whined but he kissed the crown of her head again with his luscious smile, "Jarurat nahin hain abhi...Baas ye samajhna that..." Pausing a little Maan tried to determine her reactions,
"I love you doll...Aur...Hamesha aise hi rehna...Meri mohabbat baanke..." Geet lifted her cute face to see his serene happy expressions.

"Maannnhhh...I...umm...Maann...I...lo..Woh..."She wanted to confess out of love but got shy seeing his passionate orbs hence burrowing her face in his chest escaped her blush filled sacrament, "I love you..." making his smile broader and hug tighter! Usually she didn't feel this much shy before telling him those three words! Wonder! What is different today!

"Pata hain mujhe...Now...Baby, pleaseee...Aab toh bolo Dev se baat nahin karogi??? Accha theek hain..Baat karogi lekin kaam kaam..." Maan was back in his own track vowing to one conversation he had his younger brother!

~Farmaish main jis-se karoon woh tum ho
Tumhi ho sathiya~

"Phir se Dev...!!!! Kaha aapke bahoon mein hoon main aur aap phir se Dev..." She sounded irked out instantly but controlled her fierceness as it seems like Maan is serious on Dev's issue hence therefore much resolute!

"M a a n..." He heard her soft invocation as she looked at him offering her abounding faith, "Aap jaante ho na aap kiya ho mere liye??...Aur Dev...Wo baas... srif ek dost hain mera...Aise kaise baat naa karu...Aap samajh kyun nahin rahe hain?? Dev ne baas majak kiya tha..Sahi mein ilu thodi na bola...Samajhne ki kaushish kijiye...Naa..Aapke school mein woh uski kisi dost ne naa aise hi ladkio ke sath prank kiya hain tabse sabhi kaar rahe hain... toh usne mere sath bhi masti masti mein aisa kaar liya na...Uss waqt bhi bohot mushkil se 2 min tak aapni haansi rok ke rakhi thi usne...Mujhe toh uske shakal se hi pata chal gaya ki pakka majak kar raha hain...
Maine bhi toh usey mana bhi kaar diya tha turand hi...Umm...turand nahi shayed thodi der baad...par... Aapne.. pata nahin kiya dekh liya jo aise..." Geet once again tried rendering the truth to her adamant and extremely possessive would be husband who gasped a shocking voice, "Kiyah...Toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya??? Tumhe pata hain main sari raat soya nahin hoon iss chakkar mein..." To calm him down a little she in silence ended up kissing his hands respectfully, childishly trying to let him know how she feels,"Oho...Aisa kiya..Hadd kartey hain aap bhi kyun nahin soye??" His stares at her lips made her skip a few beats again!! How will she ever recover from the delightful shock he plastered on to her lips today if he keeps doing such antics!!

"Aur usne tumhara haat kyun pakda huwa tha..." Unknown about her inner plight an annoyed Maan cribbed like a small child whose toys are broken by someone else!

She suppressed her smile looking at his pouty face and cute possessiveness, "Offoo...Haat toh awvei bato bato mein pakad liya hoga...Isme kiya hain..
but I am too... sorry na...Paar main kiya kaarti??
Aapne mujhe bohot sataya hain...Main batau sabkuch aapko... itna mauka diya aapne?? Kaal se sidhe muh baat ki aapne mujhse?? Silent mode pe ho kabse...Aur baas ghoor rahe ho...Jab mauka aata hain apna haq jatate ho...Par itna nahin keh saktey ke kyun haq jatate ho..." While she spoke, Maan was looking at the ground with a guilty cute face to which she pulled his cheek, "Waise Maan...Inn sab ke bich...Kahin koi delhi wali aapko mujhse chinke le gai toh??? Mera kiya hoga aapke bagair???" Putting a sad sobbing voice she waited for his reaction, waiting to meet his affectionate eyes!

~Chehra tera maange aakhein meri o jaana
Teri zustoo zu mein kat'ta har din mera~

Making her anticipation right he smiled beautifully and spoke, "Pagli..Yahaan aao...Hmm..." drawing both her hands close to his lips he commenced, "Toh meri shararati doll ko darr hain koi aake aapse humko judaa na kaarde???
Baby you know it well...Can you see your reflection?? Meri aankho mein baasti ho tum...You little devil aaj toh mujhse bulwa liya tumne...Paar tumhe bohot acche se pata hain pehle se hi I know...Phir bhi...
Khair...Tum jabse paida huwi ho naa tabse tumhare babaji ne tumhe mere naam kaar diya tha...Meri Geet...Maan ki Geet...Meri shararati choti si billi...Yaad nahin hain?? Rano maa ne bhi toh kaha tha na...Tum meri dulhan ho???" Reaching to his charming eyes those curved lips shared their joy with his beloved, "Tabhi toh itna haq jatata hoon tumpe..." His fingers traced from her cheekbone to that cutest chin then he lifted her beautiful face to capture her gaze!

"Haan...Paar dulhaan toh uski dulhe ki sath rehti hain na?? Main kaab aapki saath rahungi?? Kaab hamari shaadi hogi...Filmo mein jaise hoti hain?? Kab hum woh saath phere aur saath vachan lenge...7 promises...Kaab hum sath mein ghumenge ek sheher se dusri sheher...Aur mujhe ifel tower dekhni hain...Aapke sath...Din raat rahenge na taab ??Kitna maza aayega..." Her eyes were the reflection of her heart where he could clearly read her innocent dreams are being brewed up! And to fulfill her promises...Those innocent dreams he was ready to do everything! Simply ready to achieve everything she uttered!

Any word escaping her lips and him not fulfilling them was as if working against the laws of the universe!

Call it his immaturity...His stupidity or foolishness! But his love was fathomless as well as pure in nature from the very beginning!

"Ohh meri bilkul pagli si Geet...Hoga sab hoga...Tum aapni padhai pe toh theek se concentrate karo..." Her childish stubborn neurons fired up with another round of cribbing hearing his words of consolation!

"Padhai padhai padhai...Iske alawa kuch sochtey bhi ho aap...!! Mujhe nahin padhna...Kuch nahi karna...srif aapke sath rehna hain...Bohot sara chuppan chupai khelna hain...Aam churana hain...Patang bhi nahin udaai na kitne din humne saath mein??...Woh karna hain...Goley khane hain aur phir hamesha ki tarha aapki shirt pe muh pochke aapki jo baccho wali shakal hain na woh dekhna hain...
Aur...Khoob sara...Masti karni hain..." She clapped in joy reminiscing their lovely bond!

"Paar...Aap toh kuch hi dino mein delhi wapas chaley jaoge...Mera kiya hogaa..." She sounded a little sad by the near end where at present Maan kissed Geet's forehead while remembering her cute teenage version and repeated her last lines, "Mera Kiya hoga??? Hmm??!!!" Geet witnessed her husband's lips were curved into a sweet smile which made her smile as well!

"Kuch nahin...Fikar kyun kaarti ho...Baat toh hogi na hamari..." She too joined in the enactment and replied by tapping his nose, mimicking his gestures!

"Hmmm...Srif baat...Mujhe toh dekhna hain aapko hamesha..." Maan cupped her face and ogled at her openly with his flirtatious eyes which she ignored lavishly that too with some attitude!

"Mujhe bhi toh...Tumhe satana hain...Hamesha saath rehna hain tumhare..." She toned her voice flat to sound like him!

"Chalo na filmo ki tarha hum bhi bhag ke shadi kaar lete hain??" Maan being no less drawn her soft palms and dragged her inside the act to which she stopped him by drawing him back.

"Ummm...Interesting...Idea bura nahin hain..." Geet rounded her arms around his neck, giving amusing smirks at her!

~Jaana ve, jaana ve
Mohabbat karte rehna re
Ho mausam chaahe kaisa bhi
Hamesha mera rehna re~

"Hain naa??? Chalo na phir shaadi kar letey hain...Kitna maza aayega...Mujhe pura pura aab certificate mill jayegi aapka sir khane ka.." Maan grinned hard this time making her form her mouth into an o shape like she always does at his antics!

"Hawww...Ye nahin kaahi thi maine...you chalak...Jhootey..." She literally hit his chest furiously but he found that extremely cute and thought to pester her more!

"Nahin...Kaha toh tha tumne...Baas tumhe yaad nahin hain...bohot choti thi na tum...yaad nahin hoga tumhe..." She saw him trying hard to suppress his smile as he was looking away at the ceiling!

"Maan...Nakul kaka ko bulau??" Geet vocalized her wish with a threatening mocking voice!

"Kyun..." He looked at her innocently, so much innocent, to the extent of being sinless almost!

"Jhaaru laane ke liye...Aisi pitai karoongi naa aapki...Kitna jhoot boltey ho aap..." He gulped his saliva and looked at her shaking finger in front of his face!

"Dekha Geet ki babaji dekha...Ye kaise kaise zulm kaarti hain...Mujhe khud ke paas toh aane nahin deti...Mujhse rooth jaati hain aab...Aab toh pitney ki baat kar rahi hain..." Looking up Maan again complained making Geet open her mouth in sheer amazement once again!

"Aap babaji se meri shikayet laga rahe hain...Hawww...Kitney burey ho na aap Maan...Ek toh khud jhoota ilzaam laga rahe ho mujhpe...Aur aab mere hi babaji se mere naam ki ...gggrrr...Dust.
..danav..." As she uttered under his innocent provocation but then that DD invocation made her cover her mouth immediately, leaving his embrace! He sometime gets really mad at that summoning!

"Accha main bura hoon?? Aur kiya kaha tumne mujhe...Dust...What?? Dusht...Danav..Right...Fine..Huh...!" Just as her apprehension he indeed sounded mad now with the cutest pout possible ever also those hands across his chest!

~Khayalon mein maine tujhko buna tha
Haqeekat mein mujhko tu mil gaya
Yehi soch ke main khud hairan hoon
Rab ko yeh kaise pata chal gaya~

"Maan...Maan...Main toh mazak kaar rahi thi na..." She inclined closer to his face but he moved his head away manifesting his cringing, "Dekhiye naaa...Maaannn...Dekho na jaan...tang maat karo na baby..." She was adorably following his movements as he was not looking at her to prove his cute sulking!

"Jaan...See mishty is sorry...You are the sweetest shona...Me...I...Was joking naa hubby..." She put her sweet baby voice and tried to pacify his sulking. Pacify or cribbed more with her childlike antics that's a mystery but whatever it was Mr. Romeo was flat out gone on her!

"Toh main kaun sa serious hoon..." Maan moved his face back at her and caressed her cheeks while throwing a serene smile , "Do you know..Mrs Maan Singh khurana..." She faced a heartbeat stopping pull from his side as he trapped her in his arms, "My precious...My little doll jo aab baki hoke mei neendein haram kaar rahi hain baas..My everything...My boundless Universe...I can't even take a breath without you???...And...So" Thought Geet did gawk at her husband for a few seconds but then she too brightened his soul with her profuse smile, kissing his palm which was rubbing her cheek just like always!

"So...Now..Tell me what is my punishment..." Maan asked her out of the blue and she stared deep into his eyes with a little frown, "Punishment???" She already forgot that she was angry at him this whole day!

"Hmm...For hurting you. For breaking the promises...I promised myself...to never hurt you..." his slender fingers threaded her locks lovingly as his voice sounded extremely affectionate towards her.

~Likhi thi mukaddar mein
Chaahat teri oh jaana
Ke tu jahan mein mera ho hi gaya~

"Ssshhh...Chup..Bilkul chup...Aisa kuch bhi nahin hain Maan...I...I just...love you...Love you the most...More than anything exist in this world...Aur aapki gaalti bhi hain...Kyun itna pyaar kaartey hain aap mujhse?? Aap hi ne meri aadat bigadi huwi hain..." She threw a tender gaze at him, "Isiliye aapke shayed na chahte huwe bhi kabhi kabhi ye dill thoda sa kamzoor padh jata hain...Aapne jaan bujhke thodi na mujhe sataya hoga...Aap to wo ho jise meri choti si choti takleef se gussa aa jata hain...Even agar wo koi bejaan si cheez ho tab bhi..."

"Uhu...I know how much you love me...Aur kitni najuk ho tum...Aur isiliye mujhe aur jayada careful hona chahiye tha...I am so sorry Mishti...I did not do in purposely but still..." He tucked her loose hair by her ears, making her shiver a little!

"Maan...Stop saying sorry...and I am not najuk.." Her warning was received by him loud and clear yet he smiled impishly!

"You are..." His nose tip rasped her soft cheeks, giving control of her pounding heartbeat to him!

"Maaannn..." She thought she sounded stern inside that invocation which in reality ended up articulating as a deep moan!

"Geeetthh" Making her breathing irregular to an extreme level he sucked deep into her cheek, showering his profound love!

~Teri aarzu mein kabse jee raha tha
Teri Zustzu thi mujhe bepanah~

"Choro naa..." Geet knew she can never win inside his intoxicating arms as he kept torturing her with his impassioned kisses!

"Umm...My precious queen...Iss gunehgaar ke liye...Aab bolo na kiya saza hain ??" He sounded strangely weird to her!

As in lovingly guilty! Amourous yet filled with remorse!

Her desolate state seems to affect him greatly!He saw her flashing a mysterious smile on her lips being a little crooked!

"Ruko...Deti hoon..." Geet said nonchalantly while disentangling herself from him and went to her wardrobe.

Maan saw her fetching out a quite big rectangular box wrapped in shimmery material and coming close to him.

"Maine sochi thi ki aapko surprize doongi...Plan karne wali thi aaj raat ko...Par phir...subha...Woh...Khair...Socha ke special moment honge hamare bich tab doongi ye aapko magar Maan...Aaj maine ek nayi cheez sikhi hain..." Inching towards him she expressed her feeling, brushing her fingers over that cold dazzling box a little.

"Accha??? Aur woh kiya??" She looked at his soft smirk as he was waiting anxiously with an amusing expression!

"Woh yehin ki aapke bagair bitaya huwa haar ek paal jaise mere liye kisi tadap se kaam nahin hain thik waise hi...aap ke sath bitaya haar ek paal kisi khaas paal se kaam nahin hain...Aur isiliye koi khas paal ke mohtaz nahin hain hamara pyaar..." Her mellow voice faded inside his mind slowly and inscribed their place permanently inside his heart!

~Nigahon se meri tu door na jaana
Baahon mein meri ghar hai tera~

"Idhar aao...Pagli..." He stretched his arms gesturing to surrender herself into his bosom so she did, without blinking, "Aur ek baat samajh jao...I can't tolerate...itna sa bhi doori between you and me..." Maan gestured Geet the amount he is talking by knotting his thumbpad and index finger, "Samjhi???" his voice soothed her senses as she was side hugging him.

"Oh mere filmy hero...Dialogue baaji bohot ho gaya...Aab jaldi se kholo na..." she cutely whined at him to open the box while he gave away his gorgeous smirk and took the box near his ear!

"Bomb se maarne ka irada toh nahin hain..." He scrunched his eyebrows and faked a suspicious tone!

"Shayed...Ho bhi sakta hain...Par main bhi yehi hoon...Aab kholo bhi..." She tapped her fingers and threatened him further!

"Accha baba...Bilkul impatient ho tum..." Maan chuckled seeing her fickleness!

~Meri har tamanna hai poori huyi oh jaana
Mehka hua hai har lamha mera~

"Awww...Baby...Nunchaku...
Aur ye kiya...Wow...Is that a broach..." Sounding like a child he jumped with joy, making that little wife of his feel the happiest living being on the planet!(Nunchaku is a martial arts property which Maan uses during his exercise sessions)

For this happiness on his face, she can literally die thousand times! Sometimes material things do tend to make the moments more beautiful!

Most of the time those are the most trivial things. Not something flashy nor highly expensive!

For him, it was from her. She touched those. Her thoughts are wrapped inside all the fragments. His little Geet. Does she also thinks about him all the time? When did she grow up so much all of a sudden!

"Pasand aaya aapko??" Exhibiting a huge smile she asked him to which he pecked her cheeks instantly vouching his zest.

"This is custom made...Oh.. do I see some perfume as well...Jaan...Ummaahh...My God...Meri mishti toh sach mein badi ho gayi hain...
Main toh tumhare liye baas ye bangles hi le paya...I have some more things...But unhe abhi sath mein yaha nahin laa paya..Mere kamre mein hain..." He pulled both her adorable cheeks with his profuse serene curved lips!

"Maan...Aap pagal ho??? Aap hamesha toh itni itni gifts detey rehte ho mujhe...Gifts se thodi na tola jata hain pyaar...Aapne jo ye gulaab aur kangan mujhe diye hain naa ye mere liye Jaan se bhi pyaare hain..." She melted inside his frame, pecking his chest under her overflowing emotions!

"Aur Main??" Her kisses got interrupted briefly but then she sucked deep into his neck, her favorite place to torture him!

~Jaana ve, jaana ve
Mohabbat karte rehna re
Ho mausam chaahe kaisa bhi
Hamesha mera rehna re~

"Aap toh meri sabkuch ho na..." She whispered inside her torturing session, made him aroused and left in the middle as well, "Chalo abhi pehnao yeh kangan...Aap nahin pehnaoge toh main nahin pehenne wali..." She covered her smile with her palm seeing his closed eyes which clearly indicated he was floating over the Geet land.

"Haan??" Sensing her absence he snapped open his eyes and tried perceiving those last words spoken by her!

"Kiya haan?? Kangan?? Pehnao na Maan..." She gestured him with her eyes towards those bangles he gifted her while he drowsily sat on the bed.

"Ohh...Haan ji...Madam..Waise ye aapko kehne ki jarurat nahin hain...Main waise bhi aapko pehnane wala hoon...And this broach..." He didn't need to pull her this time as she herself submitted into his lap, rounding his neck by her arms.

"Ji Maan Sirrr..." She dragged her voice a little at that invocations, "I will also...Main hi pehnaungi...Aapke birthday ke din...Yeh pehnoge aap...Waise suno...Kaal woh coffee color ki jo shirt hain na...Woh pehnoge..." Started with a dramatic tone yet ended with her warnings, typical Geet!

~Jaana ve, jaana ve
Mohabbat karte rehna re
Ho mausam chaahe kaisa bhi
Hamesha mera rehna re~

"Jaisa Aap kahein Mrs. Khurana...Waise Maan sir...Umm sounded so yummy from your mouth...Aisa laga jaise I have heard this a lot of times.." He brushed her hands lovingly where she specifically felt the burns.

She could sense his gaze was becoming softer. Is he remembering that hot water incident?? No no no!! She won't let him enter into some sad zone now!

But before she could commence her chirpy talk he very gently slid one of the bangle in, which embellished her pretty hand perfectly, "Mujhse kabhi door maat jana..." She earned a few beautiful kisses from him on both of her palms at the end when the second bangle was also being done ornamented by her beloved with a captivating bolt!

She forgot to blink, looking at him with her content filled gazes. As if trying to capture this serene moment.

Can't he always be with her? Spend all the moments time has to offer with her? She found herself wanting to manifest their pure relationship overtly to all, once again!

Can't she seize him and retain him as hers only???

~Jaana ve, jaana ve
Jaana ve~

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Precap : The enigma!
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Done!!
PM & errors shall be done later!!
Please guys try to be a little elaborate with you comments!!
Thanks!!
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Finally maaneet Mein sab thik Ho gayea nice update
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Beautiful part... How much deeper their feelings are for eachother it was so marvelously shown...
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Lovely update
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Thank you for the dedication and warm & sweet wishes Ipti dear. 🤗 ❤️
Had a lovely time with my family and friends.
Maaneetians wishes made my day more eventful and memorable with their love.
Love you too sweetie !!
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Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago
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Finally update mil hi Gaya...
Flash back continues loved cute geet
And possessive maan...
Which incident is geet thinking about???when she called him sir?

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