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Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan
Waiting yar aise math tadpao
Originally posted by: priya_21
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ab dekho update chaiye toh bolonhi toh bs blog pe pw ke sath daal deti hujb yaha target ho jaaye tohg bta dena
Part 43 A
Tears falling from her eyes, and she not getting why, how she respond his touch ... when she never give chance to abhimanyu... then why maan
Ye kaisi kasmkash me thi geet
jo haq usne kbhi usse nhi diya
jo hone wala uska pati tha
toh aaj kaise unse wo maan ko de diya
kaise wok ho gyi uske sath
kaise wo bhool gyi
apni maryada
kaise
.
swal bhut the geet ke mann me
bs utar dene wala koi nhi tha
.
Jb khulenge wo pane
Jo dabe hai ret ki chadar me
Tb kya firse
Milengi rahe maan aur geet ki
Ya is baar biched jaayenge humesha ke liye
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Full night she think only one thing why she respond on his touch, why she always pushed abhimanyu... when he have right and maan...
Last night his broken face, his tear, his hold, his lips own self, fresh in her memories...her eyes get swollen due to lack of sleep and cry...before daadi see her like that she left to washroom for getting ready...
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Another side, around 12, maan wake up holding head in mid of head...
Aah
,
He slowly slowly open the eyes and seen bottle around the door...try to remember ...
Last he seen her in arms of abhimanyu, he kissed her...tears fall down from her eyes...he come to room and start drinking but why he feeling she come to his room...
He close the eyes tightly and
Maan
.
Maan kaha ho
.
maan what you doing
Some blur images, some words ringing in his mind... but he not able to connect with own...
He stands and left to taking bath...
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Maan stand in front of mirror and look neck...
Nail marks
Ye kaise lage mujhe
Kal subh toh nhi the
Ab kaise
.
He tries to think but getting only blur images of night...
tum sch me ho mere pass
.
Now he fearing remembers any last night moment... If he did some wrong with geet
How he seen her eyes once again
Already he given her only pain
.
Now not any more
.
He takes out mobile and call geet...
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Geet already lost, when she hear phone ring shocked to see maan number... some current passed in veins.. Little happiness, little fear...
She picks the call and said hello
Maan : geet mujhe tumse abhi milna hai
Geet : maan par
Maan : geet me ghar aayu
Ya tum aa rhi ho
Geet : am coming
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What he wants to talk
Khi unhe kal ka sb kuch yaad toh nhi
Her fingers touched to lips, she feel burning sensation in own veins, how he hold her
I love you
he bend and touch her lips, she feel unknown sensation in own veins, few seconds those hand try to come out from his hold, now not getting why she pull him more close wrapping hand around his neck ...
Red hue touch to her cheeks, but next moment she feel something broken inside of her...
mein usse bhut pyaar krta hu
He loves own wife...tears fall down from her eyes, she not realizing why she crying...
It's just mistake
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NOTE : only half part posting here
for full part i need to see page no. 120
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