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Waiting yar aise math tadpao 
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Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan

Waiting yar aise math tadpao 


update get ready
now depend you all
teaser mangta ya udpate
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ab dekho update chaiye toh bolo
nhi toh bs blog pe pw ke sath daal deti hu
jb yaha target ho jaaye tohg bta dena


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SAME HERE
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Part 43 A

Tears falling from her eyes, and she not getting why, how she respond his touch ... when she never give chance to abhimanyu... then why maan

Ye kaisi kasmkash me thi geet

jo haq usne kbhi usse nhi diya

jo hone wala uska pati tha

toh aaj kaise unse wo maan ko de diya

kaise wok ho gyi uske sath

kaise wo bhool gyi

apni maryada

kaise

.

swal bhut the geet ke mann me

bs utar dene wala koi nhi tha

.

Jb khulenge wo pane

Jo dabe hai ret ki chadar me

Tb kya firse

Milengi rahe maan aur geet ki

Ya is baar biched jaayenge humesha ke liye

               **********

Full night she think only one thing why she respond on his touch, why she always pushed abhimanyu... when he have right and maan...

Last night his broken face, his tear, his hold, his lips own self, fresh in her memories...her eyes get swollen due to lack of sleep and cry...before daadi see her like that she left to washroom for getting ready...

           ************

Another side, around 12, maan wake up holding head in mid of head...

Aah

,

He slowly slowly open the eyes and seen bottle around the door...try to remember ...

Last he seen her in arms of abhimanyu, he kissed her...tears fall down from her eyes...he come to room and start drinking but why he feeling she come to his room...

He close the eyes tightly and

Maan

.

Maan kaha ho

.

maan what you doing

Some blur images, some words ringing in his mind... but he not able to connect with own...

He stands and left to taking bath...

          *********

Maan stand in front of mirror and look neck...

Nail marks

Ye kaise lage mujhe

Kal subh toh nhi the

Ab kaise

.

He tries to think but getting only blur images of night...

 tum sch me ho mere pass

.

Now he fearing remembers any last night moment... If he did some wrong with geet

How he seen her eyes once again

Already he given her only pain

.

Now not any more

.

He takes out mobile and call geet...

          ************

Geet already lost, when she hear phone ring shocked to see maan number... some current passed in veins.. Little happiness, little fear...

She picks the call and said hello

Maan : geet mujhe tumse abhi milna hai

Geet : maan par

Maan : geet me ghar aayu

Ya tum aa rhi ho

Geet : am coming

 **********

What he wants to talk

Khi unhe kal ka sb kuch yaad toh nhi

Her fingers touched to lips, she feel burning sensation in own veins, how he hold her

I love you

he bend and touch her lips, she feel unknown sensation in own veins, few seconds those hand try to come out from his hold, now not getting why she pull him more close wrapping hand around his neck ...

 

Red hue touch to her cheeks, but next moment she feel something broken inside of her...

mein usse bhut pyaar krta hu

He loves own wife...tears fall down from her eyes, she not realizing why she crying...

It's just mistake

           ***********


NOTE : only half part posting here


for full part i need to see page no. 120