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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

rudra apologizing to paro and paro supporting him was nice. she understands him so well rudra saying that he will marry varsha untying his mangalsuthra was emotional. poor paro.varsha saw parud together and is in doubt.hope she knows the truth before wedding.dilsher mala rudra fb was very painful. shocking that mohini poisoned her own sis and unborn baby.hope she gets exposed.rudra is sure about mitra being his sister.paro consoling him was emotional. paro trying to stop mitra was emotional .hope rudra accepts mitra shedding his ego.fb of aman saving mitra was nice.haldi scene was very romantic.now paro has the fear of losing rudra.but she has to hide it because of the promises she made.sad.rudra is determined to stop the wedding.wish paro knows it.paro is in pain sensing all going away from her.hope she gets happiness again


Thank u so Much dear...
Rudra is determined to stop wedding Bt he wouldn't do it...
Bec of Paro's promise Varsha's life is at stake...
Paro'll get her happiness(Rudra) bt nt in good way...
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CHAPTER 38

At pooja room, Rudra saw Paro who is sitting in front of idol & chants goddess name. He thought Paro, I don't want to hurt you, but I need you to recognize your wrong decision. He says it's time to meet Mitra, I need to clear all my doubts about her love with Aman. He come to Sunheri's room, where Mitra is dressed up herself in red lehenga, he thought that this lehenga, I gifted it to her at Raksha bhandan. Mitra saw him & says Bhayya. He signs her to stop & asks her to come to his room. He closed the door, once she came in to meet. He plainly asks are you in love with Aman? Mitra was taken aback. He says answer me. "I.. he she stammered. He says say yes or no. She says yes, but... he cuts her off by asking next question, is he loves you? She lowered her eyes, he hold her arm & shakes her, and she says yes & sobs hardly because of his hold on her tighten. He says then why are you all playing with Sunheri's life, she is innocent, and she is not like your mother, what she will do after knowing this truth about her would be husband. He says you're really cunning like your mother, not even think about others feeling. She angrily says han, I'm cunning that's why I hide this from her, that's why I forced Aman to marry Sunheri jeeja. He says stop acting, Aman is in love with you, then how he'll marry Sunheri, he won't, I know him every well. She says ok bhaiya, what you want me to do now, tell me, I'll do it. He says convey that you're... his phone rings. He saw Aman's number & picked it. Aman says sir, come to BSD HQ immediately & cut call. Rudra is confused & left Mitra.

It's almost three hour, Parvati is chanting goddess name. Maithili is feeling guilty & pity on her little sister, so she calls Shatabdi & handed her glass of milk to give her. Shatabdi come to her & calls Parvati. She didn't react, Shatabdi put her hand on her shoulder & sits beside her. Parvati says Shatabdi, is Rathna fine? She says both of your sister's daughter are fine, but... Parvati says but, what happen? She says their Maasi is not fine. Parvati eyes are filled with tears. Shatabdi says don't cry Parvati, here drink this milk & pray, she insists her to drink it. She says I hate milk Shatabdi. Shatabdi says wait a minute, I'll be back. She bring Sharbat for her, after pushed her to edge of compulsion, Parvati drink it. Shatabdi says that's good, my dear sweet friend. Parvati sadly smiles. Shatabdi says don't smile like miserably, god'll bring all happiness, put hope on god & pats her cheek & left.

At Aman haveli, Diksha is angrily throws the newspaper, Varsha is taken aback by her mother's anger, she take it & saw picture in it & shocked to her core. Diksha says Varsha, don't mistake your parents, we decided to stop this marriage. Varsha says Maasa, this... Suraj says enough Varsha, your love is blind so that you couldn't see the truth in front of your eyes. Diksha says he doesn't deserve you, Varsha. Varsha says don't think much about this picture, I know about this before, this is the part of Rudra's mission to catch criminal, this is fake, I know about it. It was her parent's turn to taken aback & stunned to know that Varsha is madly in love with Rudra, that's why she didn't accept the truth. Varsha says I don't want your permission for my marriage, throw the thought out of your mind to stop this marriage, if not, then stay here with this fake news, I'll go to mandap without you, her voice broken in her last words.

At BSD, Aman come to Rudra's cabin & informs higher officers are came sir, meeting is going to start within few minutes. Rudra asks why this much urgent meeting Aman who says I don't know sir, but something is very serious. Rudra enter into the meeting hall where three higher officers are waiting for him along with V.K. He salutes them. They give newspaper to him, Rudra is shocked to see paper & says its fake news, they are cooking some fake news. Officer1 says so you didn't force Parvati to marry you, he says it was part of mission to make her as witness of Tejawat's illegal. Officer2 says ok Mr.Rudra, you force her to sign against Tejawat, that was ok for BSD's sake, but see next page of the paper. Rudra saw next page & shocked to see it, so many pictures of PaRud, all are taken in Jaipur market place, Rudra lifting Paro, make her wear bangles, feeding ice-cream, sitting in theatre. Officer1 says so this is also part of your mission & now you're going to marry Dr.Varsha, am I right? & today your marriage. Rudra is stunned. V.K says Rudra, every details are reported in this newspaper & women's rights commission & media people are questioning us. Rudra says sir, I won't marry Varsha. Officer1 says that is none of our business, Rudra, now we are here to take decision to regain trust of people & respect. Officer2 says trace who gave this pictures to media & media thinks you are incompetent for BSD, so you can't be on duty till you solve this problem. Officer1 asks him to go, but before that return your gun & badges to BSD. V.K asks Aman to take it off from him. Rudra is very much hurt & gave his gun & hat. Aman takes off his badges. He is eyes are filled with tears.

In evening, Rudra is drinking in some dark place, he recalls their love moments & recalls V.K's words you can't be on duty till you solve this problem. He angrily broke the bottle & says everything is out of my control because of her stupid promise, because of you, I'm going through much pain, you always gave only pain to me, Paro as like as her(his mom), but I don't know why I loved you immensely. He smirks & says BSD asks me to solve this problem, but how can I solve this problem, you need to solve this problem Paro, your responsible for all this mess, you cheated me, I felt, I'm the happiest person in the world when we consummate our marriage, but after that what you did to me was unbearable to me, but I respect you...today I lost my life, yes because of you & your love, I lost my BSD, I hate you Paro. A single drop of tear escaped from his eyes when he told last words.

All are getting ready to go to mandap, Sunheri is restless, and she really want to talk to Mitra before left to mandap. Mohini is tensed and cursed Rudra for not yet showing up till now & she asks Danveer, where Rudra is? He says he will be at mandap on time. Parvati is still in pooja room, Shatabdi asks her to come with her, but she refused. Maithili come to her & give new lehenga & asks her to get ready. Parvati says jeeja, I'll be with you on time but please now leave me alone for some time. Maithili says I don't want to you suffer all alone here, don't be suborn, Parvati. Shatabdi holds her hand & says don't worry, Pari, everything will be alright. Parvati nods with her tear filled eyes.

Most of the family members are left to mandap. Last car is waiting outside to pick Maithili & Parvati. Samrat says come fast Maithili. She says few minutes, Rathna is ready but chotte is not yet, wait please. Parvati is consoling Rathna who is continuously crying in her arm. Maithili come to her & says lets go, Parvati. She says jeeja, I think, Rathna is not feeling well. Suddenly Rathna vomited on her shoulder. Parvati is afraid to see Rathna's condition & cries. Maithili take Rathna in her arm & caress her back. Parvati sobbing hard & says I didn't take care your daughter, Nandu jeeja, please forgive me. Maithili says Parvati don't cry, nothing would happen to Rathna, I'll take her to hospital, you go & change your dress. Parvati says lets go jeeja. Maithili says first you change your dress, me & Samrat will take care of Rathna, don't you trust your jeeja? Parvati says not like that jeeja. She says then go & change your dress, we'll come back to you shortly with well Rathna.

At guest room, Parvati is searching for dress to change & found her two lehenga's which are she used to wear at home. She recalls her mother's lehenga which is in Rudra's room. She opened his cupboard & found her lehenga but it's not belongs to her mother's, it's belongs to hers. She caress it & take it out from cupboard, something fall on her feet but she didn't saw it. She says my wedding attire, no not only mine, it's mine & Rudra's wedding attire & sits in his bed. She started imagining what if she married Rudra at mela without any trouble, she recalls that day, how he hold her hand at beginning before we start conversation about that papers, how he stare her when she reached mela. Rudra is sitting beside her & pandit chant some mantras, they take pheras, he filled her mang & tied knot with her. She come back to her sense and sadly says everything is going to be a dream forever, Paro. She wipes her tear & go to bathroom to chance.

At Dilsher's room, Shatabdi hears something falling inside, she rushed in & shocked to see Dilsher is chocking & trying to get up. She immediately go to him & helped him. Dilsher mumbled wa...water. She give him water & says relax, take rest, I'll call doctor. He signs her to stop & he gulped water slowly. She says uncle, don't stress yourself. He says beti, I want to meet my wife. She is confused. He says Mala, my wife, Mala ranawat. Shatabdi is shocked to hear, how he came to know about Mala. He blabbers I heard everything, Rudra, Mitra & Mohini, I heard everything. Shatabdi says uncle just relax. He says bedi, Sumer know about Mala's whereabouts, take me to him. He is about to get up & reality hits him that he couldn't walk without his crutches & says beta, I did mistake by thrown her out of my life, I want to ask forgiveness. She says Bhabusa, don't stress yourself. He says I want to meet her, beti, take me to her & give that crutches to me so that I can able to walk. She give crutches to him. He get up using all his power & slowly walked to door. She says Bhabusa, I know where Mala Maasa is. He smiles at her & asks where she is. She says in mandap.

All are gathered in mandap & waiting for bharat. Mohini is waiting with aarti plate. It was Aman's bharat, entered into the mandap with crackers & musical instruments sound. She welcomed Aman by taking aarti & does his tilak. All are enter into the wedding hall. Diksha stops Mohini & asks where is Sunheri. Mohini says she is in her room. She says then Rudra? Mohini says he is on his way, he went to BSD, and he will be back here soon. Diksha smile faded. Sunheri is getting ready in her room at mandap. Shatabdi's brother & his family also invited by Sumer, are came there along with Mala.

At haveli, Parvati came out of bathroom & walked to mirror. She found some bundle on floor. She took it & opened it. It contains some papers & photos and finally she found a doll. She took doll out, all papers & photos are scattered on floor. She is stunned to see that it's her doll, she sees her embroidery on doll's dress, caress the letter "Pa and recalls how she had thrown it towards Rudra from bus, she says its mine, I had given it 15 years back, this means Rudra is the same guy, what game God has played with us.

At mandap, all are waiting for Rudra. Pandit says good time is started, shall I proceed. Diksha shouts where is Rudra? Mohini try to pacify her, but she create some difficultly, Mohini thinks that only Varsha can able to handle her & calls Varsha. Varsha come to mandap & says Rudra will be here on time so don't worry about him, if you want to start it now, Aman bhaiya is here, do his marriage first & then mine. Diksha & Suraj shocked. Mohini smirks.

At haveli, Parvati hugs the doll and says we are interlinked, childhood itself, because of our relation I have seen you in my dream for many years, she recalls how she prayed that wish my husband would have name of Lord, she says its Rudra, it had to happen, my wish got fulfilled you are my Rudra, you are my savior, you are my fate how I can be away from you.

She talks papers & photos from ground. She sees Rudra's letter & reads, it says Dear Pa, I want to share you something, this is my 12th birthday, my 2nd letter to you, and she stops & take another letter & saw its my 5th letter, took another, it's my first letter, she reads it, Dear Pa, you're my only friend I have, after babu took me here, I'm always alone but I used to talk with you through your gift to me, your doll, thanks for give it to me, its 11th b'day, no one is there to wish me, but I had you, thanks for being with me, my dear friend "Pa. She take his childhood picture & kissed it. She hugs doll & sobs hardly. She wipes her tears and says I have to tell you all this, she comes out running, but stops when she crosses mandir, she turns to mandir in hall. She recalls her promise to Varsha.

%Flash back%

"Parvati, I don't know what you mean to Rudra, but I felt you're in love with... said by Varsha. Parvati cuts her off & says no bhaisa, it's not true. Varsha says the way you pacify him, because of you he didn't send Mitra out of haveli. Parvati says may be, he respect me, I helped him to solve Tejawat's case, so that he must be listen me. Varsha holds her hand & says promise me Parvati that you're not in love with him. She says I promise you, same time she thinks that I'm going to give up my Rudra for you, but I'll love him forever. Varsha smiles & hugged her.

%Flash back %

PRESENT

At mandap, kanyatdaan ceremony is started, Mohini & Danveer give Sunheri's hand to Aman. Aman smiles at her. Sunheri's face was covered by her red duppata. Varsha is sitting in room, a lone tear escaped from her eyes. Aman & his bride took phera around scared fire. He tied knot around her neck. Mohini & Danveer smiles seeing their daughter's wedding. Finally Pandit asks him to fill her maang with sindoor. Aman lifts her veil & filled her maang. All are shocked to core.

Mohini angrily says how dare you? Couple stands up. Mohini come & stand in front of her. Aman holds her hand. She says how dare you to sit in my daughter's place. Danveer asks beda, what is going on here? Mohini shouts open your mouth. She holds Aman's arm tightly. Mohini try to slap her but Aman holds her hand, Mitra hides behind him. Aman says she is my wife, how dare you raise your hand against her. Suraj says Aman, what is wrong with you, your marriage is interlinked with Varsha's. Aman says Varsha know about my decision, not only Varsha but also Sunheri too.

%Flash back%

Sunheri drags Mitra with her to Dilsher's room where no one is there expect her Taausa. She says I want to ask you something but I need truth from you. Mitra says ok, ask me jeeja. She asks are you in love? Mitra says jeeja... She says don't get fear, I want to know, say it. She says yes jeeja. She asks with whom? She says jeeja, it's not necessary now, we are getting late jeeja. Sunheri says Aman, right, I know everything last night I heard your talk with Aman & Parvati bhabisa. Mitra is stunned, she shakes her & again repeats her question. Mitra says yes jeeja but... Sunheri says ok, then marry him, I don't want to marry him.

At mandap, Sunheri gave her wedding attire to Mitra. Mitra says it's not fair, jeeja. She says no more arguments, enough of it, go & wear it, it's my order. She calls Aman who is on his way to mandap & told him about her plan. He felt relived because he decided to tell everything to Sunheri but here she itself helping him to get his love back. Varsha saw Mitra in wedding attire & shocked. Sunheri explained everything to her. Varsha nods as agree and smiles at Mitra.

%Flash back%

PRESENT

At bride's room, Varsha waits for Rudra & calls him so many time but he didn't attend her call. Outside all dramas are going on but Varsha came to mandap & shouts enough & says its Sunheri's decision so all of you please, don't fight with each other. Diksha says beta, Rudra... Varsha says he is on his way, I called BSD, he left BSD an hour before, and he'll reach anytime.

At haveli, Parvati kneel down in front of goddess idol & says what game you have played with us. She sobs bitterly & says I want my Rudra back, he is mine, he needs me too, please do something, I want my Rudra back, I can't able to break my promise. She hugs her doll tightly & sobs. Rudra comes home drunk and shouts Paro. She was taken aback by hearing Rudra's voice.

Varsha says Pandit ji do pooja's for my marriage. Pandit nodded at her. She sits in front of fire & folds her hand & pray. All guests are settle in their places. Mohini come to bride room & slaps Sunheri for her stupid decision. Sunheri cries. Sumer comes in between Mohini & Sunheri. Danveer stops Mohini & says leave my daughter because of you, everything happened, you cheated Parvati beta, so here my daughter is suffering, you're the soul reason for my daughter's current state Mohini.

Shatabdi reached wedding hall with Dilsher. She says stay here, bhabusa, I'll bring her here. Dilsher nods. Shatabdi come to Mala who is hiding herself by veiling her face. She brought her out of wedding hall. Dilsher waits for them at car parking area. Shatabdi bring her to parking area & says congrats, Maasa, take good decision & left her. Dilsher came out of car when he saw Mala in front of car. Mala is shocked to see him.

Geethanjali asks V.K, where is Rudra? He says not only Rudra, Parvati is also missing. She says even Samrat & Maithili is also missing. He says something wrong, we need to go to Rudra's haveli. At hospital, Maithili caress Rathna who is sleeping on her shoulder & says it's too late, hope Rudra married Parvati. Samrat says I'll call Bhabusa. Danveer picked Samrat's call & says go back to home & cuts call. Samrat is confused. Maithili asks what happen. He says we need to go to home. She says but... He holds her hand & leads her to car.

Pandit says beta, mukurth timing is going to end, where groom is. Varsha felt heartbroken & alone tear escaped from her eyes. Diksha says Varsha, morning itself I told you to stop this marriage. Mohini came to mandap. Diksha stops her & says because of you my daughter is in drastic state, what you did Mohini ji? You told that Aman loves Sunheri but here he got married to Mitra. Mohini glares at Varsha, her evil brain once again works evilly. Varsha sits like statue. Aman came to her & holds her shoulder. Mohini says you want to see your daughter's marriage now, I have an idea. She come to Sumer & drags him to mandap. All are shocked.

Aman asks what you are doing. Diksha says stay out of my family Aman. Aman was taken aback, his fear of losing his family, happened because of his love. Diksha asks what are trying to do Mohini ji? Again you want to break my daughter. Mohini makes Sumer sits beside Varsha. Sumer angrily says Maasa, stop this non-sense. Mohini says pandit ji, start wedding rituals. Shatabdi is shocked to see Sumer with Varsha. Sumer sadly looks Shatabdi, everything happened within a minute.

Varsha stands up & started walking out of mandap. Mohini try to stop her by convincing her but she didn't listen anything, without saying anything, she is leaving. Diksha & Suraj leaving mandap with her, Mohini followed them. Danveer & Sunehri come to mandap. Sumer come to Danveer & says Bhabusa, I want your support to take a decision. Danveer nods at him. Sumer come to Shatabdi's brother and asks him to give his sister's hand & explained their love story to him. He agreed but he want Sumer's family's permission. Danveer witnessed everything & says don't worry beta, Shatabdi is also like my daughter. Sunehri wipes her tears & says I give you permission bhaiya. Sumer hugs Sunehri.

Sumer & Shatabdi sits together. Mohini come inside after Varsha & her family left, shocked to see Sumer with Shatabdi & shouts his name. Danveer says shut up Mohini. They took phera. Mohini is stunned. Sumer tied knot & filled her maang. He holds her hand & says I'm always yours Shabi, I couldn't see your sad face. She smiles at him & asks how dare you to sit with Varsha? Pandit announces they are husband & wife. Sumer smiles at her & whispers sorry Shabi. Mohini gets irritated, all her plans are back fired, drags Sunehri & left.

At haveli, Rudra come to Paro who is thanking god. He holds her arm & drags her to mid of hall. She says Major saab, I want to tell... he cuts her off by placing his finger on her lips & says shhh, I'll talk tonight, not you, you have to listen and asks what things are needed for marriage,... she is confused. He says don't you know Paro, but I know, few things, fire, we need fire. His anger emits from his eyes & he is drunken too, she thought.

He take a pot & put it in front of her. She says Major Saab, what... he angrily says shhh Paro, don't & put some cloths in it & says havan kund is ready. He thinks & says is wood necessary Paro. She says Rudra, stop... again he cuts her by saying enough, you talked too much but not now. He break chair, Paro is shocked & stunned to her core. He lit fire in havan kund & says marriage of Rudra and Paro.

He saw his watch & says you want me to marry you in front of other, wait for few minute, all Ranawat's are may be on their way to haveli. He take dupatta & put it around his neck and ties it with Paro's saree for gath bandhan. She tries to stop him but he didn't listen her & holds her tightly. He says because of your stupid promise, your facing all these things Paro. She was taken aback.

Rudra holds Paro's hand tightly & started taking phera. Maithili & Samrat reached home first & shocked to see Rudra dragging Paro around fire. Maithili says Devarjisa, Samrat stops her & says Rudra, what are you doing. Rudra says Paro, our guests are started coming & smiles. Samrat come to him, Rudra pushes him by one hand & says stay out of it, Samrat, if you want your respect stay out of it. They taking Phera, it was last phera, Paro said by Rudra.

Geethanjali & V.K reached haveli & shocked to see Parvati's state, V.K about to say something. Before that Rudra says your parents came Paro, welcome maamuu & maamii, he smiles at them & says you reached before last phera. He left Paro's hand & hugs her & whispers in her ear, last phera and only one promise Paro, you didn't get my love back ever in your life. Paro is crying. Geethanjali says stop it Rudra, what are you doing? He coolly says marriage.

He take off his dupatta & goes to mandir & bring Sindoor. He says you always want me to fill your maang, now I'll fill your maang but without love. He fills her maang & throws box. Mohini & Sunheri reached home followed by Danveer, Sumer, Shatabdi & Aman, Mitra. Rudra says all are here with us Paro & he shows her red thread and says I gave you, mangalsutra but you didn't give any importance to it so here is new mangalsutra especially for you. Paro is in tear, he tied it around her neck. He says thanks for coming in marriage.

Unexpected events are makes Paro dizzy and falls on ground. Geethanjali holds her & ask them to bring water. She sprinkle water on her face, Rudra smiles & says happy married life Mrs. Rudra Pradap Ranawat, he leaves to his room. V.K says Parvati, let's go home. Paro holds Geethanjali's hand & shakes her head as no. Geethanjali says let's go V.K & left.

Precap:PaRud first night, oh ho sorry sorry, two more couples are also there.

Dear frnds, pls forgive my grammar, spelling and sentence mistakes.

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Hi Bhavya
Awesome chapter loved it.
Thanx for pm

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Loved the update.
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YEH TO MERA HAI
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Dear Bhavya, thank you for a fantastic and exciting chapter!
You were right, lot of unexpected things happened. A very dramatic chapter with lot action.
You showed every character feelings and situation really nicely.

I feel sorry for mitra to start with but then I'm happy for her later when Aman marries her.
I hope his family will accept her.
And Varsha is blinded by one sided love.
She needs to remember she has self respect and many options. She is very educated and beautiful she can get a wonderful husband who wants to be with her.

I love how you created a different angle from that one of BSD suspending Rudra, because of Paro photo in paper. You been so clever and built a totally fresh scenario which made Rudra feels angry and upset at Paro for being the reason for it.

I love how Maithli and shatabdi are looking after Paro.

Paro is already so emotional then she finds that doll and realised her childhood meeting was with her Rudra.
The letters written by boy Rudra are touching and a genius idea.

TOTAL SHOCK about Amans bride!!!!!
I'm so happy for them both and I love and respect your Sunheri for her unselfish decision. She corrected her mothers wrong.

Mohini is very devious, she tried to get varsha marriage with Sumer instead but I'm relieved that varsha rejected it. Your Sumer found the courage to ask shabti brother for her hand and his family supported him. I'm pleased to see mohini getting what she deserves. 😉

So we had two surprise weddings and if THAT wasn't enough here comes very angry and drunk Rudra to have a public wedding with Paro!!
He promises her NO more LOVE. He is so hurt that he will hurt her now.
She has pushed him too far in her stubbornness and so the Jallaad is back tonight.
It Be very interesting to see if he stays or Rudra can return once he is sober because he DOES love Paro and tells her often. I can understand his pain though.😭

Paro should have told Varsha the truth to begin with, she always thinks she knows best but she doesn't and she thinks she needs to sacrifice her own love and happiness without thinking how it will affect Rudra, so he is not wrong to be desperately upset and angry with her now. Paro created her own misery and his too. That's the bit of Paro I dislike, that she doesn't listen p, her mind gets very blinkered as she won't allow anyone to talk sense to her. 😡
There is stubborn and there there is stupidity. I'm annoyed with her myself and I'm always Rudras biggest supporter as it is!
I want to see Paro fix the mess she made. Remove rudra suffering she caused. That's my view.

You gave that serial wedding scene a new fresh twist.
You are BRILLIANT at bringing new fresh and unexpected, unique twists !! 👏

A well written, well organised, well constructed, complex, exciting and layered EXCELLENT chapter, Bhavya you need to be very proud of yourself. You really do. I can really see the improvements as your ff has progressed to here. 👏
I Really enjoyed it.
LOVE ALL THE PHOTOS TOO.

Can't wait to see what is next.
Thank you.
Tc
Samina


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Hey bhavya,
Firstly sorry for last time that couldn't comment, loved the update. Like the way sunheri take news & deal with it. Coz if she married to aman, she will not be happy coz he love someone else. Varsha is seriously mad that she can't see truth. So evil mohini, planning & plotting against everyone. Atleast sumer took courage and marry shatabdi. Rudra is drunken & he Marry paro in drunken state. He said he hate her. Why can't he think that in this situation what was paro fault. She has fault but not completely. How can easily his love for paro vanished & finished. Sad for for, she got Rusra but lost everything
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Finally paro's stubbornness in not listening to Rudra and epaccepting their love has resulted in his starting to hate her. He is in trouble with the BSD because of it. But who put that news in the paper?
Aman, mitra and Sunehri's situation is resolved thanks to Sunehri coming to know the truth about Aman loving Mitra. Even Sumer gets married to Shatabdi. Now Mohini's all plans have flopped.
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Posted: 7 years ago
sad to see Rudra misunderstanding Mitra.Hope the mu gets cleared soon.What Rudra thinks is true.After consummation what Paro did to him was unbearable.That photo letters scene n paro thinking to go to rudra was nice.but sad that she was stopped by her promise to Varsha.Paro shud've told d truth to varsha.y did she hide the truth from Varsha?Paro imagining parud wedding was nice.Sunheri is so nice to unite Aman Mitra through bride swapping.Happy that Sumer Shadabdi too married n not Sumer Varsha.First I got tensed if Sumer Varsha will get married bcz of Rudra's absence.Varsha has left.I feel bad 4 her too.Hope she doesn't become revengeful n turn ve.hopefully she will get a nice person.Paro wants to return to Rudra now.but b4 she could open up to Rudra he married her in drunken state.It reminded me of d show.Happy that Parud got married.But sad that Rudra said there is no love.hope this trauma doesn't remain 4 a long time n parud start a happy married life soon.anyways happy that Mohini's plans failed
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Wissam.

Hi Bhavya

Awesome chapter loved it.
Thanx for pm


Hi dear...
Thank u...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the update.

Thank you for the pm.


Thank u 😉

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