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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

Superb update bhavya, loved it. Firstly I understand that when u didn't get response, u feel bad. We are with you, dont worry, take your time. We will wait for you.

I like this Rudra, who is passionately in love with paro his wife, & ready to fight with whole world & to do anything for paro. Seriously mohini is so mean. Why Rudra can't directly say to varsha that he is married to paro & love her so much. Its good to do things for others but I don't think it is good what is paro doing, she thinks that she can force rudra for sunehri's marriage but no one will be happy if Rudra marry varsha coz he loves paro very much. Paro love rudra. Mitra is so cute & brilliant. Rudra always feel connection with her. He also said same thing before too. He ask soldier to bring files, will he accept mitra wholeheartedly after reading files.did Shantanu wants to marry suneheri to come in Rudra havali?! What he is planning?? Hope Rudra could stop his marriage with varsha & remarry paro .

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Loved the update 👏
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Aman Mitra scene was emotional n romantic.confession was so beautiful.but mitra doesnt want sunheri's life to b spoiled so she suppressed her feelings.sad.stupid mohini blackmailed paro to agree 4 rudra varsha marriage.parud scene was romantic.conversation was very emotional.how she asked him to marry varsha sacrificing her luv 4 sunheri was sad.paro saying that he is hers n thats y she is giving him to varsha was a lovely sentence.hopefully like rudra wishes he will marry paro in public.

shocking that varsha is in love with rudra n bcz of mohini she thinks that parud relationship is just a drama.hope varsha comes to know d truth of parud love n backs out decently.parud pool scene was damn romantic.shanthanu is here for destruction.Oh!Wonder if it will b Aman Sunheri or Aman Mitra or Shanthanu Sunheri.Rudra Varsha dance was nice bcz of the pics u put.I was surprised to see Ashish Drashti dance pics as I hadnt seen their dance on JDL.i've a friend whose dream is ashish drashti together on a how.Rudra was talking to paro mistaking her 4 Varsha.poor paro.Parud conversation was very emotional n romantic..Paro asking him to marry varsha was painful.Mehendi scene was romantic.loved rudra saying that though he wiped his name from her mehendi his finger prints r on her waist.kiss was passionate.this was one of d best chapters of this ff n apt pics added more beauty to it

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Lovely update Bhavya. Thanks for continuing inspite of low response.

Just when Rudra thinks that Paro will relent she thinks of Sunehri and makes herself strong.
Even Aman is not able to convince Varsha as she is convinced by Mohini that Paro and Rudra's marriage is not real. Everyone is unhappy. Aman, Mitra's, Paro, Rudra.

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Chapter 36

At old place, Shantanu comes to Tejawat and told everything about Rudra's marriage with Varsha. Tejawat laughs and says he is Mala's son, he'll not marry Varsha, I know that well. Shantanu says ok, then what's your plan of playing with emotions of Rudra. Tejawat says it's right time to execute it, this marriage won't happen, because groom is going to search his lover and find her death body. Shantanu says I had an idea to trail of this plan with Sunheri, so that she & her family easily trust me. Tejawat says do it with local rowdies. Both of them are evilly smiles.

At heavli, in night time, Paro stands in front of mirror and saw her refection in mirror, her eyes are fixed on her waist where Rudra's finger prints which was radiating on her milky white skin, its looks darker than her hand. She touches her waist and closed her eye and feels that Rudra is caressing her waist. Her face become red as she recalls her marriage night with Rudra, how he cares her waist chain and her navel. She opens her eyes & shyly saw her reflection on mirror and sadly smiles when reality hit her. She turns to go to his bed, her reflection calls her. She faces her reflection, which asks what you are doing Parvati. Paro says going to bed. Reflection says you're a fool, everyone are using your foolishness to gain their profit. Paro is confused and says I'm not foolish. Reflection says then what you're doing, are you going to give your husband to someone, they are using your innocents to make you nothing. Paro says I'm not educated and... reflection cuts her by saying that are your feeling happy to see your husband with someone else. Paro put her hand on her heart & says I felt pain here whenever I saw Major Saab with Varsha, I'm not happy but I have to do this for Sunheri's favour. Reflection says your husband is there to solve this, don't mind about Sunheri. Paro says no, I can't, and I promised... reflection asks did you keep your promise still now. Paro nods and says yes. Reflection says no Paro, it's no, you didn't stop Rudra when his kissed you at pool, you just enjoyed to be with him and you need his shoulder when you're upset to know his past, didn't you felt happy when Rudra says that you're his wife. Paro shakes her head as no. Reflection shouts says don't lie Paro, I'm your inner soul, I know that you're in confusion to take decision, Rudra is yours, go to him and make him yours forever, don't waste time Paro, you have only few days to make your decision. Paro's eyes are filled with tear and her hands holding her Mangalsutra tightly and says I love my Major Saab, I,. I., she breaks down and cries. Reflection disappeared.

At terrace of Ranawat haveli, Paro is thinking about her promise, Rudra, reflection talk and her life. Suddenly she hears someone coming to terrace, she thinks who is that, it's late at night. Mitra says leave my hand, Aman. He says shh, don't make noise. Paro hides herself in darkness. He closed the terrace gate and makes her stand in front of him. Mitra asks what you are doing. He says I want to know the reason. She asks what reason, Aman. He asks why are hiding your feeling, Mitra? & he holds her face and says I saw your love for me in your eyes, I don't want to make Sunheri's future in stake. She says I want the same thing, I don't want to make any trouble in her marriage. He holds her arm and shakes her and says I want to know one thing Mitra, I want to know that are you in love with me or not, I need direct answer from you. She shocked at first & breaks from inside and cries in his arms for few minutes and pushes him away and says I love you Aman and she closed her eyes and cries hard. Paro overhears everything. Aman says enough, it's enough for me, I'll stop this marriage at any cost. Mitra says you promised to me. He says I'll stop this marriage for Paro's sake, not for you. Paro is stunned. Mitra says Rudra Bhaisa... he says yes, your brother is on mission to stop this marriage, but Varsha won't listen to anyone so it's in my hand to stop this marriage. Paro is shocked to the mention of your brother. Mitra says if you stopped this marriage, my entire family will face more trouble, so leave it, my brother will handle this. Paro is shocked to her core and comes out of darkness. Aman & Mitra are shocked to see her here. Paro says you both are acted so well in front of others. Aman says Parvati, I ... she signs him to stop and angrily saw Mitra who is stammered. She says Bhabisa, i... Paro asks who you are. Mitra didn't reply. She asks are you Tejawat's daughter? She says no Bhabisa. She says then who are you, how you related to Rudra? Aman says her father's name is Dil.. Mitra shakes her head to him. Paro says ok, now it's Rudra's turns to ask you and she walked towards terrace gate. Mitra says Dilsher Ranawat, My father name is Dilsher Ranawat, My mother is Mala Dilsher & My brother is Rudra Pradap Ranawat. Paro stops on her track and turns to her and asks how could this possible, I know that Tejawat's son & daughter are in some other country for their education. Mitra says I'm not Tejawat's daughter, when my mom is out this haveli, I was in her womb. Paro says then why don't you tell this to your family. Mitra says I wish to tell but I can't, Rudra Bhayya is not ready to accept My mom then how can he accept me as his sister. Paro says I'll help you.. Mitra says no need Bhabisa, everything will settle well when time allows. Paro nods and says if you want to disclose this to Major Saab, I'll help you. Mitra nods. Paro says Aman Bhayya, don't destroy Sunheri's life and marry Mitra. Mitra says no Bhabisa, he'll not destroy jeeja's life. After a long conversation, they came down to the main gate, when Aman hears something on backside and asks is everyone are sleeping or doing some work for next function. Mitra says all are slept when you came. Aman says go to you respective rooms and lock it from inside. He goes to back door to check when he hears Mitra shouts for Sunheri. Rudra wakes up and Paro stops on her way and rushed to her room. Aman is also rushed to her room. Aman is one who reached Mitra's room first and holds her face and asks what happen? Rudra is stuck in entrance of the room when he saw Aman is there with Mitra. Paro is come to his side and saw them and she breaks silence by asking what happen? Aman take her hand back when he saw Rudra. Mitra point bed where Sunheri is missing, Rudra rushed in and saw Sunheri's broken bangles. Everyone come there one by one and Rudra asks them to search Sunheri in haveli. Aman says sir, I heard some noise at back door few minutes ago. Rudra asks him to bring his gun and he runs to back door. All family members are gathered in hall. Maithili feeding Aarthi's daughter, Paro consoles Rathna who is crying. Mohini says everything happened because of this Parvati. Danveer turns to her side and asks Sumer who is came from terrace and says she is not there. Mohini says someone kidnapped my daughter insisted of this Parvati. Sumer gets angry and says maasa, I'm not that old Sumer to try to kidnap Parvati Bhabi and unknowingly kidnap Maithili Bhabisa. Samrat asks what? Sumer says sorry Bhayya, I did it for Money, not now, I'm not... Samrat pats his shoulder and says leave it, Sumer, its ok, now Maithili is fine that's enough for me and you too realised your mistake, very few persons will have that heart to realise their mistake. Danveer says correct Samrat, because of our past mistakes will definitely affects their future. Parvati says Sumer and Samrat Devarjisa, go and find Sunheri, this is not the time to discuss about mistakes. Both of them are nods and left.

An hour later, Mohini is sitting on sofa and crying for her daughter. Parvati went to Rudra's room to make Rathna lie down and made pillow wall around her and kissed her forehead. She walked towards the door of the room, suddenly she felt someone is holding her arm and closed her mouth. She try to free herself but she couldn't and other man come in front of her and put some liquid on cloth and put it on her mouth, she struggles a lot and her bangles broken, she try to make things fall on the side table but no one heard it. Finally she faints. They lifts her and jumped from window. Beema calls Shantanu and says work done. Shantanu cuts call and says I'm coming Sunheri. Outside Rudra and Aman searched for Sunheri but suddenly Rudra felt something and says Aman, last time they try to kidnap Paro, insisted of they are unknowingly kidnapped Maithili Bhabisa, I think they targeted for Paro. Aman is confused. Rudra runs to haveli. At mid of desert, goon says she will wake with 10 to 15 minutes. Shantanu says ok then proceed. A goon says tomorrow, I'll sell her to red light area head. Another goon says firstly I want her jewelleries. They nod to each other and started taking off her jewels. They heard some bike sound, even Sunheri is also hears it because she is regaining her conscious. Goon says we need go from here. Other goon asks what about her? He says leave her here. They run away from there but they are pumped with Shantanu who holds him and asks what you are doing here, are you a terrorist. He hears Sunheri's voice calling for help. Goon slaps him hard and pushed him away. Shantanu gets up and try to catch them but they are disappeared in the darkness of desert. He come to place where they hides Sunheri. He calls her by her name and pats her cheek to make her wakeup. She slowly opens her eyes.

At haveli, Rudra rushed inside and call Paro. Mohini asks where my daughter is. Rudra didn't respond and he rushed towards his room. Aman came and Mohini asks where Sunheri is? He says BSD is searching her. Sumer and Samrat is also came back to home without finding Sunheri. Danveer felt heart broken and prays for his daughter's safety. Aman come to Rudra's room where Rudra sits on floor, holding something in his hand and shouts Paro's name, everyone in hall are shocked and runs to Rudra's room. Aman come to him and says sir. Rudra opens his hand and shows Paro's broken ear ring. Aman was taken aback. Mohini taunts Parvati, Rudra signs her to stop, she saw his anger emits from his eyes so she closed her mouth. Aman informed BSD to search Parvati and Sunheri. All of them heard door bell, Aman says maybe it's Parvati, Danveer says main door is wide open, then why she rang bell. Sumer rushed to door and saw Sunheri with a man and calls others. Mohini come to hall and found her daughter who runs to her and hugs her. Samrat asks who you are. Did you kidnapped her? Sumer holds his collar. Sunheri says he saved my life and she explained everything to them. Mitra hugs her and says I was afraid. Sunheri says I'm fine, Mitra. Mohini thanked Shantanu who smiles and talked with them. Mitra come to Rudra and says bhayya, nothing happen to Bhabisa, Sunheri jeeja is returned safely, so bhabisa'll return safely. Rudra says again Paro was kidnapped because of my mistake only. He cries and says I lost her again, last time she touched her death and come back to me, now she left me without telling. She emotionally holds his hand and says Bhayya, don't lose hope, you can trace Tejawat by his watch, he use his satellite phone, he is always used to hide his secret things on ground and use underground room to hide from world. Rudra is stunned to her statement. Aman and Danveer are stunned to hear her. Rudra asks how you knew. She was taken aback and stammered to say something. Aman says sir, you need to read her file but now we don't have time to do it, we need to move sir, its Tejawat's plan only, and they manipulated Sunheri who don't know about Tejawat's evil plan. Rudra gets up and says let's move Aman. At hall, Shantanu thanked Mohini for tea. Rudra rushed out, Mohini says day after tomorrow, is your haldi Rudra banna. He turns to her and angrily looks at her for a second and left. Mitra come to hall and Shantanu saw her and thought that so separated family is started joining together, I'll kill you too Mitra, your escaped last time but not now. Mohini turns to him and he smiles. Mitra saw his evilly eyes and felt something bad and take Sunheri to her room.

At Dilsher's room, Danveer read a file named as Mitra and shocked to his core and thought that even Bhabisa didn't told this to me. Sumer comes to him and says Babusa, what are you doing her, your phone is ringing, he shakes him. Danveer give that file to him. Sumer reads it and says Mitra is Rudra's sister, is this true Babusa. Danveer says I don't know beda, I want to talk to her first and wipes his tears. They come to Mitra who is in Rudra's room with Rathna. Danveer asks who you are. Aman rushed in and says Mitra, we need your help to find Tejawat, she nods to him and sadly saw Danveer and says Chacha & she hugs him and cries hard. Danveer asks where Bhabisa is. She says I don't know, Chacha. Aman says we'll discuss about it later. Sumer says babusa, leave it, now we need to find Paro bhabisa. Aman & Mitra left from there. Sumer says babusa, don't talk about it in front of maasa. Danveer nods and says Bhabisa is the only one solution to solve this problem. Sumer says I know where Mala taaisa is. Danveer says I want to meet her. He nods.

At BSD, Mitra sits in front of computer to terrace Tejawat's watch and satellite phone singles. Rudra is surprised to see her speed of working. It's almost morning, they are stuck in BSD's control room. V.K rushed to BSD and scolds Rudra for his carelessness. Aman come to his aid but V.K says Parvati is my daughter, I have rights on her. Rudra says she is my wife, Sir. V.K asks then what you are doing here, go and search entire Chandangrah & Birpur. Aman says sir, we don't have any trace about where Tejawat is. Rudra says we are waiting for him to make any mistake, sir & all BSD soldier are searching for Paro, they distracted us by kidnaping Sunheri at first and then they kidnapped Parvati without any trouble.

In morning, at haveli, Maithili and Sunheri prays for Parvati. Danveer, Sumer & Samrat are also joined with them. Mohini wakes up and says last night that two unknown babies are spoiled my sleep, now this Maithili, she throws sheet away and come to hall where everyone are praying for Parvati. At Shatabi house, Mala is praying for Parvati. At BSD, Mitra folds her hand and prays to god to help her to find Tejawat. Few minutes later, his watch signal is popped up on computer screen, Mitra easily locate the signal and call Aman & informed it. Both Rudra & Aman followed her direction to reach the place. The signal disappeared in some place. Rudra stopped his jeep where Mitra guided them. Mitra calls him and asks him to search on ground to know that is any underground place to hide himself. Aman says Mitra we are in desert forest, how can we able to search this entire place. She says now, we located him, I don't what BSD will do after knowing about the nearest hiding place of a criminal. Rudra says Aman, call BSD and inform them to surround this place and call Ambulance too. An hour later, BSD surround the desert forest. Rudra gave instruction to them. V.K says Rudra we need to find them before getting darker. He nods.

All are searching Tejawat throughout the forest. Rudra found an old factory which was closed long ago. He ordered all solider to gather around that old factory with fifteen minutes by using his walkie talkie. V.K in walkie talkie, he ordered that we need Tejawat alive Rudra, he says ok sir, V.K says voice broke and says Parvati.., Rudra says sir, don't worry about my wife, she'll not leave alone, she promised to me, don't worry. Inside old factory, Tejawat sense something went wrong, he ordered Beema to take Shantanu with him and use underground way to run away from here. Beema says Thakursa, come with us. Tejawat smiles and says if my perception is wrong, I'll miss the change to see Parvati & Rudra's death body. Beema nods. He added that he don't want to take any risk to his son's life. Tejawat lied to Shantanu & send him out of the factory with Beema. It's almost beginning of evening, Rudra is in temporary checkpoint & watched what is happening inside the factory with the help of binocular. He says there was no sign of Tejawat inside sir. V.K says Rudra, go inside & check. Aman got a call from Mitra who said that they are in right place, I found that Bhayya's GPS & Tejawat's watch GPS are showing same place. Aman convey it to Rudra who is ready to take action. All BSD soldiers are entered into the factory and searched for sign of Tejawat. There was no sign of them, Aman says sir, already they left, Rudra says no Aman, they are using underground way to escape from here, so we need to found underground entrance to find them. Aman nods. After few hours, soldiers found an underground room where few of Tejawat's worker are hiding, they opened it & worker started shooting them. A soldier fall down, other soldiers are fired them. Three of Tejawat's worker are died. Tejawat hears gunshot & stops in his track and says BSD found them. Mitra called Rudra who is angrily searching for Tejawat & she says he is moving from there to right side, you have to move faster to stop him. Rudra runs towards right side of the factory & in Bluetooth, Mitra says move faster bhayya, he is moving fastly. Rudra come out of factory & rushed into forest. At mid of forest, she says stay there bhayya, the signal stayed there. He says what are you saying, it's mid of forest, and no one is here. She says Bhayya, he used underground way to run away. Tejawat and few goons are heard someone is walking above their way to out. Mitra disconnect the call & make a call to Aman and asks him to go to Rudra for help him. Rudra walked here & there, holding gun in his hand, he says where you are Tejawat? Aman and few soldier rushed to mid of forest to help Rudra. Rudra take his walkie talkie & ask them to search Paro throughout the factory & underground hiding places of Tejawat. Tejawat smirks and thought that major you won't find your lover, Parvati and he saw his watch and says maybe she must be freeze within few minutes. Rudra walked on the top of the underground door, he found something different and again walked on it. He uses his leg to remove the sand on it and saw a wooden door which was looks like a floor of forest. He knee down and touches it. Tejawat says check the way where some of them are walking towards us. Goons says Thakursa, here Rudra is trying to open this door. Tejawat says take your weapons and be ready to shot Major. Aman reached and asks soldier to open it, Rudra point gun at them. When they opened it & Tejawat & his workers are started firing, Rudra fired at them, and two of them are died, only Tejawat & his three workers are alive. Tejawat points gun at Rudra who is pointing his gun at him, Aman says sir, we need him alive. Rudra didn't respond, Tejawat says Major saab, are you forgot your Parvati who is counting her last minutes, only few more minutes to go, did you think that am I last? No major, you last your love, she won't come back to you. Rudra shouts Tejawat. He smirks & says don't waste your time Major, go & search you lover's death body. One of his worker throws sand at them & All his worker are surrounded him & started firing at BSD. Rudra is escaped from gun shot by tugged in. Tejawat claimed & started running, Rudra and Soldiers are chasing them. BSD shot at them, two goons are fell down, Rudra points his gun at Tejawat's leg, Aman shots his worker and the third person of Tejawat's worker is escaped & BSD soldiers are chasing them. Tejawat is unable to run from there, he falls down. Suddenly Tejawat put his gun at his head and says you last major, he presses the trigger. Aman says no, Rudra fired him on his hand, Tejawat's gun fall down. Rudra says arrest them. Aman nods, Rudra says take them with you. Tejawat says you won't find Parvati, Major & smirks. Rudra angrily looks at him & went to factory and asks soldiers that did they searched everywhere, they nods & he asks where is Parvati. A soldier says sir, maybe they hide her in some other place. Rudra says no, that's not possible, search again, all are left him, and he tensely cares his hair and thought where you are Paro? It's started darken outside, & storm is on its way. Rudra says don't leave me Paro, where are you & shouts her name. Paro hears his voice, she tiredly says Major saab, her hand was tied above her head and her legs are directly in connect with ice bar, its pricking her like thousand needles are pricked at same time, ice bars are surrounded her, she couldn't able to call him loud, but tried few times but failed. She shakes her hand to free herself from it, but she hears her bangle sound & she shakes it harder, she hoped that he'll hear it. Rudra hears something near at window & says don't make noise to other soldiers, he hears someone moaning something, he says Paro, he walked towards the sound coming from and he found that sound coming from that pipe, he closed it & he listens carefully but he didn't hear any sound, he opened it and hears Paro's voice, calling him, he ordered soldiers to search factory's water tank, he rushed there. He come to water tank of that factory and claimed up & opened it. He saw Paro who is chanting his name & shaking her hand, she is half in conscious. He jumped in & untie the knot, holds Paro in his arms. Soldiers are helped them to come out of it. Rudra lifts her in his arms and says stay here & guard this place, I'll take her to hospital. They nods & he left with Paro.

In jeep, Rudra slowly placed her on passenger seat & says Paro, don't worry, I'm here with you, he rubs her hand & removes his shirt & put it on her. She is shivering hard, he rubs her hands & legs. He says I'll not allow you to leave me, Paro, be with me, we'll reach hospital soon. He started his jeep & holds her hand. They are on their way to BSD hospital, heavy rain make a trouble to reach to hospital. He stopped his jeep & says Paro, don't worry. He took his phone to check where they are, he found light shining a few meter away that they are near at some village, and he turned his jeep to that place & found a small hut with single light outside, he came out of jeep in rain & calls for help. He found that no one is there, he come to Paro & checks her pulse, its' still weak. He lifts her & get into the hut & shut the door. He slowly placed her on ground, rushed to close a window, he found some hay on corner of house & spread it on ground & placed Paro on it. He rubs her hand & says don't leave me, Paro, stay with me. He rushed to take his walkie talkie to inform BSD about them, but it was not working, he saw his phone which was drenched by rain water, he says shit. He come back to Paro & used his lighter to make fire on wood & placed it near Paro. He says Paro, you'll be fine soon. She is still shivering. He says you need to change, and she didn't respond to him, he show his hand on fire & placed his heated hand on her cheeks. She cuddle herself by her knees. He tensed to see her like this but he couldn't do anything, without thinking further, he makes her sit & hugs her & untied her dori, he removed all her cloths & make her lie down & covers her by hay. Time is moving fast but he didn't get any response from her. Her state becoming worst each & every second. He sits near her & says Paro, be with me. He lie down next to her & hugs her tightly. He says sorry Paro, I didn't have other choices. He kissed her forehead & says love you, Paro, I don't want to lose you.

Rudra descending his mouth to kiss her lips & he kissed her everywhere and her body moving, enflamed by the touch of his lips, she is still shivering but he make her body in fire by his hands touched, caressed explored her body. She know that what's going on but she couldn't respond because of her weakness, her hands are shaking which are trying to hug him but she couldn't lift her hands. Desire in their wake, he know that she is weak so he decided to slow down, he slowly made love his wife. Few minutes later, he take her with him as she lay in the circle of his arm, their bodies sweaty from the efforts of recent lovemaking. He sighs heavily and checks her pulse, "my wife is fine, he thought to himself. They are peacefully slept in each other's embrace.

Precap: Haldi function & marriage drama.

Dear frnds, pls forgive my grammar, spelling and sentence mistakes.

ADVANCE HAPPY DIWALI TO MY LOVELY READER...

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Hey bhavya,

I am first one
amazing udpdate. Like it. Many things in one chapter. Shantanu thinking to use sunehiri for taking revenge from Rudra. & easily he entered in rudra havali. Finally aman & mitra confess their feelings to each other. I like their pair. How easily tejwat's men entered in havali & kidnapped sunehiri & paro. How it is possible?? Superb & sharp mitra, who mitra,? I didn't remember., how she know abt tracking devices in tejawat's watch & mobile?? She did so well for catching tejawat & save paro. Rudra & paro beautiful moments, Rudra did this to save paro coz he didn't have any other option & he said sorry to paro coz she is not in her senses. Beautiful moments
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Chapter 34-36 comment

Mohini is true to character, selfish, malicious, cruel, manipulative and without remorse as she plays chess with everyone to get what she wants for sunheri, 😡
I love how you have developed your own really original twists and tracks in the ff
, like making shantanu tejawats son, mitra is mala and dilsher daughter therefore Rudra actual sister.
The way mitra knows how to trace tejawat through the satellite signals.
I love how your Rudra recognises that he loves paro, unhesitatingly tells her so as often as possible and is determined not to lose her. I think She feels as if she is not worthy of him which is why she gave him up without a fight to mohini scheming. Otherwise she is a strong, focused and courageous girl who is also stubborn to a fault.
Rudra clearly is working to a plan and won't marry the beautiful doctor varsha. His heart and commitment only belong to his village belle Paro. He doesn't care about how educated or not she is. Tho I wish the lovely varsha well.

I'm so impressed with the whole story that you have woven together. 👏
I totally love all the pictures that you insert. ❤️

Really look forward to rest of this, Bhavya.Thank you so much.
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This comment is for chapter 33
I'm sorry I don't have a clue how I got them in the wrong order p.

You have quite a complex plot going on which you're bringing together so well.
Rudra was considerate to anticipate that Paro will feel embarrassed the morning after.
It's sweet of him to have brought her a lovely new outfit.
Then he goes off on a mission, his absence understandably makes Paro feel insecure.
The Sumer shabti angle is a good addition too.
Your Paro is so brave delivering a baby !

Thank you for continuing your ff for us all.
Please don't feel down or disheartened by lack of likes or comments, I think it's important to remember quality is better than quantity as its now only the real and die-hard lifelong parud fans who are still on the forum. So it may not be many of us, but I'm sure we all truly appreciate your ongoing efforts to make us happy. As well as the fact that you have not left this FF incomplete like much of the fiction on the forum even from the time the serial was originally running.

Your doing an amazing job, stay confident in yourself. Keep enjoying your creativity.

I'm going to next chapter immediately.
Tc
Samina

Edited by LivesInHope - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Paro reflection scene was very emotional.finally mitra admitted her luv 4 aman.it was a lovely emotional scene.so truth of mitra is out b4 paro.hopefully paro will unite mitra rudra.shocking that sunheri paro got kidnapped.rudra tracing them was nice.rudra had to get intimate with paro to save her life.apologizing to her was emotional.their scene was romantic.waiting 4 d next part a i luv wedding funcs a lot

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