Their Love Story ~Thread 2~Chapter 14 up!!! - Page 86

Originally posted by: avishimishra

Vrindu please update soon

will try

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

will try

waiting dear

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

Plz update soonnn

Originally posted by: avishimishra

waiting dear

Finally here is the update and say thanks to my sister who typed half of the update as my fingers were nearly swollen and I was unable to type.

No don't ask me how I make her ready to type for me from my notes

And I know the chapter is not written in my usual style but please bear with this for this update...

Chapter 14 (last Chapter)

~~Jalal's POV~~

I enter the farm house in hurried fast step fearing the worse. Only God knows what I will do if I find Sweetie lingering over some bustard and kissing him. I hurriedly enter the house and toward the back garden where the party is expectedly held only to hear loud giggling sounds and Sweetie is sitting in between her friends all fine. No sign of any male presence there. Even Maina Ma is sitting beside her applying Heena on her hands. Suddenly I felt my mind clouded with confusion. What the hell just happened? I stop there with Abdul and we both hide somewhere close to the girls to listen their talks.

"I think Jalal Jiju must me sulking now, chirped Moti "or may be throwing his things here and there imaging that Jo has really kissed someone said Riva acting like throwing things here and there. "I guess now all the boys are cursing Jalal for disturbing the bachelor's party as I don't think Jalal will sit calmly after that phone call, said Salima one of my friend's wife. "What they were saying we want to throw bachelors party, you ladies can do whatever you want, said another wife. "Now I will see how their bachelor's party will go well said some other lady from the group.

"Waise Jodha you act so well. For once I thought you are really drunk. No one will believe that you haven't touched a drop of drink and you act so well. Said Riva. "She is a Drama queen right from college days, Right Jodhu said Moti and both girls high-figh.

Ghosh!! It was their plan and here I was dying thinking of her kissing some random person and here she is laughing with her friends. Making fun of me. This is not done!

I am about to enter the garden when I heard Jodha complaining "I just asked Abdul Bhai for a common sangeet and Heena party and what he said No, we boys want a party for ourself with drinks and all. We don't want to be part of your boring ladies functions' said Jodha mimicking Abdul's tone.

I glare at Abdul for an explanation.

"Actually Jalal, Jodha come to me yesterday to plan a party but you know our friends, they wanted your bachelor's party so I said to her that they can do whatever they want he said and I glare at him. How can he say no to her wish. It's her marriage also and she has some wishes. "You know I have nearly said yes to her plan and even asked wedding planner to arrange a function at short notice but it was our married friends who changed my mind. They wanted drinks and full of girl's party. You can see they are not here till now.

Argh!! My friends and my sweet Gappoo. It must be her idea to plan hen's party and take revenge from me in form of getting drunk and kissing other guy.

"Abdul you have to do a work for me I whisper my plan in his ear to make my Gappoo happy.

"You know I am felling bad for my Jallu, I heard Jodha saying which gain a huge smile on my face. She is regretting for her prank "But it was so much fun doing such a prank with him. I just want to see his face She and other girl broke into laughter at my expense.

"I don't see any problem in this, you can see my face now Miss. Prankster I said while standing in front of her. All the girls including Jodha stop laughing after seeing me like they have seen some ghost. So you were gona kiss someone I said with fake anger while moving toward her. I can also do good acting. "What about you're Dare? I don't find any other male here except me I said while standing face to face of Jodha.

"Ammm...ammm...It...Was...it...was...Yes it was my dare to act as drunk, my smart gappooo said quickly finding an excuse. "Dare! I said getting very close to her with fake anger. Seeing me jodha gulp down a lump. Shit! She is so much afraid from me. "It was just prank because I want to celebrate all our marriage rituals together but you...you and your friends wanted a bachelor's party she said with teary eyes.

It broke my hurt seeing her state and I quickly take her in my hug. "Hey! Why didn't you told me about your simple wish. We would have made this day unforgivable for both of us. Instead of asking Abdul about our day you should have asked me and you know me. I wouldn't have taken even a second to say yes and we would have made our day as you wished."

"I thought you will also want to have your bachelor's party, so I didn't ask you a thing," she said still in my hug. My stupid Gappoo.

Soon Abdul enter the garden of farm house with my drunken friends who are cursing him. But seeing their wives glaring at their position they maintain themself to the decency.

Soon everyone are enjoying as planned by Gappoo while some ladies are looking at sweetie's Heena which is really dark in color. I m loving full hand henna on her hands and its color show how much I love her and that's true.

While some ladies are dancing with their Hubbies and It's fun looking at my wasted friends dancing in awful state.

It's nearly next day morning when we reach back home all tiered due to late night dance and hangma just the way my Gappoo wanted.

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Next day goes very well and busy for all of us looking at last minute preparations for the wedding. Sweetie wanted our marriage at the place where my parents married. So we all are off to my beach villa located in Goa which is all decorated like a bride and Sweetie nearly jump like child after seeing her small wish getting fulfilled.

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WEDDING DAY

---Jodha's POV---

Last 2 days of my life went so well and thanks to Jalal who fulfilled my entire wish. First he make my Mehendi and sangeet night memorable, after that he brought me to his beach house a very special and close place to him and Today is my marriage. It's like dream come true. Today is the day I always dreamt of. I will be Jalal's wife my Akku's wife and my dark henna is proof of how much he loves me. More than anything.

"Jodhu where are you lost? C'mon fast we have to get you ready." said Moti angrily while pushing me into bathroom "It's already 11 am and at 3 your presence is required at Mandap. God we have so less time to make you ready. Get bath fast" blasted Moti again while pushing me inside the bathroom.

Exact after 15 minute I come out of the bathroom due to continuous banging on bathroom's door by Moti 'come fast Jodhu, you are late, makeup team is here' and its true. My room is now crowded with professional who look at me with Aww and start their work on me.

2 people apply face pack on my face, 2 people are taking care of my hairs and 5 are giving me manicure and pedicure. I am really feeling like princess who is soon going to marry her Prince.

After 3 hours of hard work finally I am all ready for my wedding, getting praises from my beauticians. "I think Today Jiju will be blown away with your beauty, you are looking so beautiful Jodhu" said Moti making me blush hard. I just hope Jalal like the way I look.

It's still 15 minute left for me when Moti will escort me to mandap and I can feel all butterflied in my stomach and Moti and other girls are continuously teasing me. Here I am so nervous and they are increasing it many fold.

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------------------Jalal's POV--------------------

From last one hour my super idiot friends are pulling my leg. Here I am nervous about how everything will go and here my friends are asking me to run away from marriage saying my life will become hell after marriage. What a friend they are! They should be giving me good advice for happily married life but here they are talking rubbish about married life.

I wore my wedding dress designed by my love. Sweetie has really done a great work on my wedding dress. Hope she will be happy with her creation.

"Jalal we should go to mandap. Pandit Ji is waiting for you." said Ma and apply Kajal behind my ears to protect me from bad omen. I walk behind her to the mandap all nervous. The nervousness before marriage.

I sit on mandap and Pandit Ji start some mantra's but my full concentration is on stairs from which my bride will descend. I can't wait more to see her. Where are you Jo!

I again look at stair with hope that Jo is descending but find no one there. Even my friends are teasing me more now that I can't wait to see my Bride and that is true. I am dying to see my Angel descending from the stairs.

That is when I hear a tinkling of Anklets and I turn to find my Angel coming down from the stairs not looking any less. My breath got struck in my throat seeing her looking so beautiful. I just want to hide this beauty somewhere with me.

She is wearing red color wedding lahnega with heavy work and net duppatta from which one can clearly imagine her beautiful shape. She has also worn my mother's jewelry which also has side mange tika. I am very happy to see that she has fulfilled this small wish of mine by wearing my mom's jeweler.

As soon as she descend the stairs, I standup from my spot and stood in front of last stair with my hand out. She places her hand on mine and I hold her hand firmly. I make her sit comfortably on her seat beside me on Mandap. Everyone look at us with Aww, where my friends give me a teasing look but I ignored them.

"Look he is in so much hurry to marry her" said Abdul to my friend Rahul. "I guess he is in hurry for first night" said Dev and all burst into laughter. My stupid friends.

Pandit ji continue his Mantra's as soon as we both get sited properly.

"I am lost of words seeing such a beauty sitting beside me" I whisper in her ears in dreamy tone. I really don't know how to praise her. "I just wish to take you away from the eyes of everymen present in this world. I don't want them to look at my wife," I said huskily in her ears gaining a shy smile from her. She looks so beautiful when shy.

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-------------Jodha' POV-------------

I come down on Mandan feeling all shy and fearing my fall due to heavy lahenga. I take my each step carefully to avoid my fall. I step the last stair when I notice Jalal standing there with his hand out. I hold his hand shyly and he took me to Mandan.

I look at him looking so handsome. My handsome men who will be all mine after some rituals.

We both took our place on man dap where he praises my beauty and here I am so shy to even praise him.

Pandit ji continue his Mantra's and we both follow his instruction. At time of sat phera's (ritual of seven steps and vows in presence of fire) the most auspicious part of Hindu marriage, we both took vows promising each other to fulfill them. After this, Jalal put vermillion in my hair parting. Followed by mangulsutra around my neck. I look at mangulsutra which has JJ carved in the middle. It's proof of our ever ending love.

After all this rituals Pandit ji announce us as husband and wife.

Finally we are married from Hindu Rituals. Now I am his wife. Jodha Jalal Mohammad.

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After Hindu marriage I am taken to the stage decorated for the Nikah. There is a curtain partition in between me and Jalal so that we cannot see each other. Kazi starts his Mantra taking blessing of God.

After reciting Prayers he asks Jalal.

"Do you accept Jodha as your wife?"

To which he answer 'Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai, and Qubool hai.'

Now it's my turn Kazi ask me same.

"Do you accept Jalal Mohammad as your Husband?"

To which I said 'Qubool hai' 3 times and whole hall get cheered up with clappings and all are relatives start coming toward us wishing us for our happy life.

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Jalal took my hand in his and take me toward the back garden where our reception party will take place. We both took our step together in the garden where Media and business friends are waiting for us to have a look at the Lady who has taken away the heart of Billionaire Jalal.

The garden is beautifully decorated with various flowers and balloon with while tent giving it a royal look. Why not it's Jalal Mohammad's wedding reception.

Jalal pull me by my waist when camera's start clicking our photos and whisper in my ears "Congratulations Wife Jaan. Finally you are mine." I place my head close to his heart and whisper "Finally I am yours Jalal. Finally our day is here. It's just like a dream."

Soon we both get mingle among guests congratulating us and I smile seeing proud smile on Jalal face while introducing me. He is proud of me and I am proud of him. I will give him all my love. Jalal also make me meet the team he has decides to take care for the orphanage. I am very happy that this dream of mine will also fulfill soon.

Jalal is my dream who fulfilled all my dreams and I am blessed to have him in my life. He made a poor orphan girl Queen of his life.

"I Love You Jalal" I said getting all emotional to which he captured my lips in his ignoring the clapping from the guests.

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So here is the last update of this story...I am going to this story so much...Love you all who have commented on this story and motivated me to type more and more update...

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Res

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres

Amazing chappy

So it's her prank

Beautiful chappy

Waiting for epilogue buddy

awesome minblowing oh god I don't have words what to say about it you know Reading previous Chapter I thought she is really going to kiss someone but oh god reading the I can't control my laugh Di it was hilarious overall whole chapter was wonderful Di but what happen to your finger Di why they get swelling pleas Di take care of yourself it's humble request to you.

awesome minblowing oh god I don't have words what to say about it you know Reading previous Chapter I thought she is really going to kiss someone but oh god reading the I can't control my laugh Di it was hilarious overall whole chapter was wonderful Di but what happen to your finger Di why they get swelling pleas Di take care of yourself it's humble request to you. and thanks for Pm.

Hey vrinda fabulous awesome romantic no words to describe