~Mein Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga~SS on MehRya Chapter- 10 PG 141 29th Oct - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehryalove

SD It seems very Interesting 😳

SK aur MK singers hai this is new 😉
Jayesh is my favorite 😳 Woh Mehrya ka bacha hai aww i mean aryan
Toh mehak sk ka behavior ki waja se sk aur Aryan ko chod kar chali gyi
so our little hero will reunite his parents 😎


i am eagerly waitting for first chapter 😃 kab milegi 🤣


Thank you bangaram...yeah this time their son will be the hero of the story😆😆

And she left him because of his behavior ...

Aaj socha Tha likhongi but mood ka satyanash hogya 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Disturbed?? I hope not because of these award function 😆
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Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Disturbed?? I hope not because of these award function 😆

That's the only reason Roma 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you Mystic😳
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Chapter 1 :
Hello Mehrians... finally wait is over and here comes the first chapter of this story...hope you will like it ... please give the feedback after reading😳 I have added few paintings from Insta and the credit goes to original uploader 😆 Enjoy the chapter😉


Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi
Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi
Maine dil se kaha dhoond laana khushi

Bechaara kahan jaanta hai
Khalish hai yeh kya khala hai
Shehar bhar ki khushi se
Yeh dard mera bhala hai
Jashn yeh raas na aaye
Mazaa to bas gham main aata hai..

Shaurya was singing in a room where he spends whole night either singing or painting..he stopped the song in mid way when he heard a knock on the door...this room is always locked in day time and when Aryan sleeps shuarya comes quietly to this room and stays awake whole night... Shaurya opened the door and saw ..Aryan standing in front of the door rubbing his eyes, dad iam unable to sleep , Shaurya picked him in his arms .. what happened..why my Rockstar isn't feeling sleepy ?? Shaurya questioned ...I was thinking about mamaa ...how did she looked like dad ?? Aryan questioned..you want to know how she looked like ?? Shaurya questioned..aryan nodded his head ... Shaurya took him inside the room, and removed a veil from one of the portraits, room was filled with her paintings...this place is like a heaven for me yahan hamari yaadein basti Hai ... Shaurya told him.





This was the first time when I met her..he told caressing her face with one hand..




This is when I proposed her for marriage and she was completely in shock..




And this was after marriage when I was angry with her as she wanted to visit her family for paghpgera...he smiled remembering it ...the thought of staying without her for few days made me so upset and now look at me ..I am staying away from her since 6 years... Aryan wiped his tears ...when did you met her dad tell me na i want to know everything about mamma...Aryan requested...champ don't forget you have your school tomorrow , you need to sleep now Shaurya said while taking him back to their room...Dad it's just a report day and I will get ready on time don't worry...Aryan said making a pout , his talks always reminds him about Mahek...Achaa I will tell you how I met but you have to sleep after that promise me ? Shaurya forwarded his hand ...Aryan kept his little hand on his hand and said gentelman's promise..they both smiled Shaurya laid him on the bed and sat beside him..

Flashback :

7 years back I was traveling to Indore along with Vicky and Shruti.., Vicky was like my brother we both started our career at the same time , he used to compose most of my songs ... and Shruti and me have sang so many duets together...I have given her a first break when she was new in industry...we were judges of a competition show and at the same time I was looking for a fresh voice for my next album...we were few kilometers away from Indore when our car broked down... Vicky was driving the car and I was on the passengers seat.. Vicky went to find some mechanic and i just came out to breathe some fresh air, Shruti was busy listening music on her iPod on the back seat...It was evening time and could hear a sound of a temple bell from near by , I thought of visiting the place till Vicky returns , I informed Shruti and crossed the road ...there was a huge field to be crossed to reach the temple...when I entered the field...I saw a girl in her early twenties flying a kite along with some school kids ...her hairs were open and she tied her duppata on her waist...I reached near and I could hear her singing a song ...

Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...

Chal ke khushboo se juda juda juda hai
Kahin dooor...

Haadse ye kaise
Unsune se jaise choome adheron ko
Koi Nooor...

Bann ke titli dil uda uda uda hai
Kahin dooor...

I was mesmerized by her voice...but I couldn't see her face , when I reached almost near her I saw her shouting and jumping in joy showing a tounge to a boy...she had won the flying competition and only her kite was flying high in the sky , I was about to call her when I heard a voice...Ladoo what are you doing here ?? chachu was searching for you in whole college and he came to know that you are playing here with the boys...her mouth was wide opened she handed her kite to a boy and hid behind a big banyan tree and told everyone to run from that place...I just went and stood behind her she didn't turned looked back thinking I may be one of her friend...she closed her eyes and was praying that he shouldn't find her in this place ...her chachu came in the field and searched her but he couldn't find her anywhere...yeh ladki patah nahi phir kahan chali gayi ..her chachu said and left the field, He left ..I told her , she opened her eyes and looked around and took a deep breath.. saying thank you mataa rani aapny mujhy bachaa liya and she turned around and faced me she was about to shout when I kept a hand on her mouth and pinned her to the tree... don't shout else he will come back hearing you ...she bitted my hand and I winced in pain and shouted..what the hell ...she shouted back at me ..who the hell are you and what you are doing here ?? Woh I was just watching you playing with kids ,I tried to explain her , she looked at herself her duppata was still tied around her waist...I can easily feel how fast her heart was beating...she tried to remove her duppata...I holded her hand and removed it from her waist and covered it on her head..she looked at me with her wide open eyes ..what do you want she questioned...and I was still lost in her eyes..I want you I said ..her mouth was wide opened.. you are just unbelievable she said and ran away from the place ...arey I didn't mean that ..ohh hello ..miss ..wait ..I shouted running after her..Ladoo wait and listen to me once .. suddenly my leg got strucked with a stone and I fell on the ground..she stopped and looked back wondering how I know her name...she came back running to help me ..Are you mad can't you see and walk she shouted at me ...my hand got hurt and it was bleeding, she immediately tored her duppata and tied it around my hand ...her hairs were falling on my face when she tried to lift me up...I was so lost in her that instead of getting up ..I pulled her towards me and she fell on my top...I could feel her breath on my neck...I wanted world to freeze in that moment..I just cupped her face ..her lips were so attractive I couldn't hold myself and kissed her ...she was in a complete shock...she managed to get up and ran away from the place with out looking back towards me ..I wanted to run after her but my phone rang ...it was Vicky..he informed me that car is repaired and they are waiting for him...I told him that I have to find something important and asked them to leave... you are unbelievable Shaurya how will you reach the venue till morning ?? don't worry I will manage don't wait for me ..I replied and disconnected the phone...I just punched the tree rembering what I did ..what she must be thinking about me.. I have to find her and say her sorry for this .. saying that he moved towards temple...

Precap : MehRya's second meet and a flashback's of their first night...

PS : I wanted to write a lengty update but my daughter isn't well so updating what ever I wrote
Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res...edit ...
Okay little Aryan wanted to know his parents story ...
He is such a cute baby ..koi kaise mana karega ...?.😳
Shaurya started to narrate thier story to his kid ...
Mehak seems to be a lively girl ..her introduction was jovial to read ...shaurya was already a judge
And was trying to find new talent ...
But I guess he exceeded his limit in his first meet ...I'm sure mehak wud be scared to near him wen next time she sees him 😆

Well written coolbie ⭐️
Edited by Thabassum.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Lol ..what a surprise 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
Unres .

Sharms di .
Interesting character sketch both are singers and jayas little champ as Aryan imagination itself is wonderful.
SK spends his nights in her memories.
Sometimes we love someone truly but it's just not enough .
Ego is always a greatest barrier in any relationship .
One who crossed that barrier and sincerely apologise for their mistakes can lead a happy life.
SK is narrating his story to his kid .
Their first meeting was simply
Their
First meeting SK made it memorable by their first kiss.
Here SK is very fast like zkm 5G speed .
Vicky,Shruti ,chachu are other characters introduced .
Lagtha Hai purana natha Hai aapka dupatta yaha bhi phaddi Mehek ne.
Aryan ko yeh kiss ke bare mein bhi batha di uske papa ne bache ko khud baap hee bigaad raha hai.
Excitedly waiting for next chapter .

For the pm.

Edited by Heaven2hell - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


Lol ..what a surprise 😆😆

What do u mean by surprise ???😆
I have contributed so many first res you stories if u dint forget ?
Thou I wud be little late to unres it 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

What do u mean by surprise ???😆
I have contributed so many first res you stories if u dint forget ?
Thou I wud be little late to unres it 🤣


I remember that .. but I think after long time you are resing first ..tabu will you do the LU today if possible

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