Tum mere aasma meri zameen ban gaye # 3 pt 25 on pg 137 on 7/1 - Page 37

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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting teaser
loved it
Amma is very bad
Raman scolded Simmi
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Fantastic part
Waiting eagerly for the next one👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
raman confronted simmi
nice teaser
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 19
fabulous
ishu z feeling uncomfy wth ramanz touches
raman z lil hurt but tried to maintain distance to gv isju time to adjust
ishu was feeling guilty
finally dey slept cuddled to eachother
in sa morning dey went to iyer house
raman z shocked wth da revelation dat jis sister has planned evrythn
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends back with new update .

Part 20


Ishita was full of tears listening to the truth of her parents ,Raman saw her state and side hugged her for support .She shrugged Raman's hand and walked to his father who was looking down feeling shame .She reached him and asked " appa ,I lost my mother long back but never know that I lost my father also on same day. you never supported me ,only my mother died but I craved for my parents love in whole my life because you were always busy in pampering mihika ,then also I was living with you without complaining. But now how I will call you appa ,aapne kabhi nahi socha na ki how I will feel when I will come to know about this ,why you will think as you never considered me as your daughter ,haina app.. no Mr viswanath iyer ".

Mr iyer - don't say like this kanna ,I never thought bad about you .even I never wanted you to leave from here .

I- but you didn't stopped me either ,nor you even searched me ,it was simmi who searched you because she don't wanted me in her brothers life .

Till now Raman was listening this and feeling bad about Ishita but when he heard about simmi ,he called mihir and told him to come to Mumbai along with simmi ,then he walked to ishita and held her ,she hugged him tight and cried like baby in his embrace and spoke between his hicupps " I m so unwanted Raman ,no body loves me ,no body want me ."

R( cupping her face )- no baby ,nothing like that ,I love you ,I want you in my life .I m there for you ,I will love you for everyone's share.

He was consoling her and she was cocooning herself in his embrace , while amma was making dirty face and appa was feeling bad for ishita . He slowly walked to ishra and saw Raman for help ,he tried to touch Ishita but Raman stopped him by showing his palm and spoke " I m enough for her ,she don't need anyone " .

Saying so he turned to go when appa spoke touching ishita's shoulder " ishu kanna please forgive me ,I know I have done bad with you .you lived with my indifference for so long but I can't take your hatred ,please kanna talk to me ."

R- no she will not ,I will not let her talk to anyone who hurts her .

Saying so he walked ,he just took a step when they heard appa's voice .They turned and saw appa was wincing in pain ,holding his heart and was about to fell in floor .Ishra ran and hold him tight , supported and took him to his room .They made him lay and called the doctor .Doctor came and announced after checking him that he got a mild heart attack.Prescribed medicines and gave some injections and instructed ishita to take care of him as she was the one who always took care of him whenever he fall sick. Ishita was sitting beside appa while he was sleeping due to effect of medicine , while Raman had gone to bring medicines for him . Amma and mihika was sitting outside and were tensed , they don't know how to react ,they so wanted to go to Mr iyer but Ishita was sitting there so cannot go .This time they got stuck from every side , ishita has got a rich man who loves and support her a lot ,this time appa too was on ishita's side moreover Raman has called simmi and now their truth will be out . They don't have any way to escape . After sometimes Raman returned and went to the room ,he gave the medicine to ishita and sag beside her .

She rested her head on his chest and spoke " you know Raman I don't remember my amma ,as she died when I was very young but my appa was there . He brought new amma to take card of me but she never loved me and after mihika's birth appa to started ignoring me . I any how complete my studies and got a nice job , then appa thought to get me married but every boy liked mihika instead of me . Every time it happens amma cursed me a lot and finally that day I went to commit suicide when I met you ."

R- that was most ugliest as well as the luckiest day of our life ,that day we got us .

I- yeah I got you that day.

Saying so she snuggled more into him , that's when his phone buzzed ,he picked the call and come to know that mihir and simmi had come to pune .He gave mihir the address and instructed him to bring Simmi to ishita's house . Though Simmi was not willing to come to mihir but came when he told her that Raman is there nd he himself had called her there .

On the other hand appa woke and saw ishra talking to each other ,he tried to got up when Ishita went to him and spoke " don't get up , lay down and rest ."

But he told her to make him sit ,Ishita was supporting appa ,seeing this Raman helped them and make appa sit ,after that Raman was going back to his place when appa hold his hand and spoke joining ishra hands " I know kanna you people are angry with me and I totally agree with you people your anger is right ,I deserve this only Ishita is right ,I never paid attention towards her but glad that my daughter is getting best life partner any one can get . I m sure you will take good care of my ishita ."

They were still talking when mihir called again nd informed that they had arrieved .Raman went out leaving the appa and Ishita there only .Till he reached amma has opened the door and saw Simmi, all the color of her face has already drained when he come to know that Raman is with iyers. She walked inside with slow ,steps when she heard Raman " aa gaye tumlog ."

M- why did you can us here bhai .

R- because everything started from here only .

M- I didn't get you .

R- I will tell you everything .

Saying so he told the whole story to mihir ,he was shocked while Simmi was down casting her eyes . Mihir spoke " no bhai ,you must be mistook Simmi ".

Raman saw simmi and spoke "say simmi ,I m waiting for your answer ."

S- bhai wo ... I ...actually.

R- don't talk in riddles just answer me ,did you offered them money to take ishita away from me and get her marry to anyone .

S- not anyone but some suitable boy .

Amma - no no she told that we should get ishita married to any tom ,dick and harry as soon as possible .

R- and you did same ,kaise log ho .arey may be she is not your own daughter but at least she is your daughter na ,how can you be so indifferent .

Listening chaos from outside ishita and appa too came outside, he pulled ishita to himself and spoke " shagun tried to kill me for my property ,I understand her POV but why do you wanted to separate us .what bad Ishita has done to you, if not anything then why you tried to send her away from me besides knowing that I totally depend on her .Is there any difference between you and her ,both wanted to harm me ."

S- bhai don't tell like this .

R- then what should I say ,simmi I m really hurt with your behavior and I m not going to forgive for this .

S- bhai please ,aisa mat bolo ,mamma papa ke baad,you are my only family .

R- that's what applies with me too ,you are also my only family ,but what you did ,you tried to separate my ishita from me ,you tried to snatch my happiness .
bolo why did you do this ,why you don't like ishita ,kya kami hai isme,she is so beautiful and cute ,dekho ise her face is so innocent ,I don't know anyone can hurt her .

He said cupping ishita's face and showing it to everyone while ishita looked down . He pulled her to him and announced " listen everybody I love ishita a lot and I am going to marry her as soon as possible .all are invited those who want it and those too who don't want it ."

Saying so Raman went out from the house taking ishita along instructing mihir to book their tickets back to Delhi, leaving a shocked simmi behind.

That's all for now friends .Hope you like this .

PS - 200+ likes and long comments for next update .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional update
Poor ishu
I felt bad flr her
Appa has heart attack
Raman gives a good piece of mind to simmi and iyers
Also
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updated new part have a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
All truth is out Mrs iyer was so jealous and greedy nice update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
poor ishita felt bad for her she is feeling no one loves her raman supported her
ishu called appa as mr iyer he got mild heartattack out of guilt
raman called simmi and gave peace of mind to her
amma and mihika had struck on all sides
raman annoicrd he is going to marry ishu asap with or wothout their blesings
contonie soon
Edited by jakkula.sirisha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
raman supported ishitha
ishitha confronts mr iyer
mr iyer falls due to mild heart attack
raman calls mihir and ask to come with simmi
raman conforts simmi and announced their marriage
simmi shocked by raman's decision

waiting for the next update

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