Jalkukda Season 2(ShivIka SS Ft Advaay)pt7(a) pg 21 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Awesome teaser
Wow it's seems that your clg life is going to be really awesome
Update soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
That Rudy has done my dimaag ka gangaram. I destroyed his room. That AdvIka song banna dala.Bhai nahin hota toh mein uska kimaing karta.

Taking few strides further, I saw Advaay and Annika talking. Annika was eating chocolate ice cream and was laughing.

My annika was looking so pretty that I wanna kiss her there and laugh at her antics.

I smiled at her antics.She looked like a small child eating ice cream. Her giggles and bright smile makes my day. I always wanted to have that expression on her face forever.

I was not able to keep her happy but let her go.

May be she will remain happy with Advaay. I have had hurt her enough but letting her go is best option.

I was lost in my thoughts. I'll be sad at first but I'll get over it. Annika's happiness means much to me.

I smiled sadly.

I saw Advaay getting a call from someone.

He went to answer the call towards the pool side.

I followed him.

"Hey Amyra Baby, how's little cutie doing?"He cooed.

(Jalkukdi AMYRA)

"Oh I love you Baby."

"I'll come to meet you soon."

What!!!!!!

He is cheating on Annika. I'm such a stupid that I'm letting her go to a man who doesn't deserve her.

Advaay bachoo tune bahut raita phela diya hai, abb SSO teri class lega.

Ugggh! Again started Annikaisms. Annika what did you do omm of my dictionary?

I went to Rudy's room again and took his binoculars.

Going near a safe place in the mansion, I decided to spy on Annika and Advaay.

I saw my Annika in a short cute yellow top and jeans shorts and hills. She was looking hot, cute and beautiful at the same time.

OMG!!!!!!!!! This girl will be death of me.

I just want to kiss her.

I saw Advaay coming towards her.

This harami has to come now only. Oh Shit!

He started to check out Annika.



Author's POV

Shivaay was burning in jealousy.

Advaay had caressed Annika's cheecks lightly. Here Shivaay's cheecks reddened.

Advaay hugged Annika, Shivaay is fully red.

OMG!! Advaay kissed Annika on forefead, Shivaay is fuming now.

Still holding the binoculars, he had done murder of 52 roses, 61 daises, 22 jasmines and all the flowers kept near him had to face his wrath.He left the place

Annika was brought by Advaay to that place where Shivaay was standing few minutes ago.

Seeing their decorations destroyed both started lauging.

Maaf karna chamelis allowed but no champas🤢.
Was suffering from writer's block and tiredness.
Writting first time this week after my new OS pehli dafa.
.No precap. My updates will be shorter this month as I'm recovering from writer's Block.
Guys those who are thinking college life is fun I agree it is. But be ready to write notes of many pages. Our najuk komal ungliyon ki omm hojati hai. And this is only starting. Teachers are ready to do our gangaram.
I've taken BSc Maths Honours. 😆
Since I'm a day scholar and again studying for competative exams and tutions in evening won't leave me much time to spare and I really get tired.😭
Only Sunday free
So I'll be updating short updates till I get used to my Uni timetable and I think this month I'll be updating Jalkukda and & 7 Letters(RumYa SS)😭
Next month you'll get the FF updates.

For FF, which FF do you want me to update. Mention in comments
  1. Heartstrings
  2. Synced Heartbeats
  3. Bleeding Hearts
  4. Amour In Coffee Shop(Rikara and Ruvya Ft ShivIka)
Please like the post in the 1st page under PM list for PMs.

Daisy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Thanks for reading

Originally posted by: Mystrygirl152

Omg! Shivaay's anger is literally KHIDKITOD! He broke Rudra's room window! 😆He completely destroyed Rudy's room! And the song by Shivaay! It's really hillarious! Loving it! ❤️

Continue soon please... Can't wait to read more!

Next part updated

Next part updated

Originally posted by: tikit

Haha bechara Shiv😆😆

M loving jalkukda Shiv
Thanks for pm.
Do update soon nd pm me😳

Next part updated

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice update...

What will be shivaay's next plan?
Eagerly waiting for your next update...
Thanks for the pm

Next part updated
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: MRS.SSO

Awesummmn

Lovelllyy
Pooor shivaaay baby
He is so so so angeryyy
Ahahha and rudy was so funny


Originally posted by: Shrishti.

Ooh so Shivaay is an angry young man now, is he. I'm ROFL. Too good Daisy.



Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehe rudy and his song


Originally posted by: Seema84

Ohh God after listening Rudy's song I can only imagine what he z going to do with Rudy n ko bachakucha hai uske room main.. it's so interesting dear seriously this jealous Singh Oberoi z always a treat to watch... I loved it dear n thanks for the pm...


Originally posted by: pri12

amazing...loved it

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

loved it...


Originally posted by: enthusiastic

amazing update yaar
I loved itt soo much
thanks alot for pm...
countinue soon..



Thanks for reading
Updated on page 7
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Mera SSO to gusse se laal pila ho gaya hai...poor Rudy... Shivay baby destroyed his room...
Love it a lot..waiting for next... Update soon dear...
Tnq sooo much for the pm...


50 shades of red for sso

Originally posted by: RushaSen

Daisy!!🤣 This was hilarious!! 🤣🤣 Shivaay is so so angry and jealous..😆 He totally destroyed Rudy's room..😆 Poor Rudy!😛😭😆 Waiting for your next update!! Update soon!!

Thanks for the pm!😃

Love,
Rusha

Glad you like it

Originally posted by: farinaks

Awesome khidkitod nhi roomtod... Hilarious
He was annoyed to the level of infinity
Sorry for late rply as I was having my exams bt now they got over nd now I'll get time to look at my flooded inbox
Tq fr pm nd sorry again
Continue soonish



It's okay Fari.
Thanks for your comment. I missed your comments.
I like to annoy SSO




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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

Hey Daisy!Haven't commented on this series in quite long and I apologize for it.Actually I'm preparing to apply to colleges so life's like, super busy.

Teaser is khidkitod.Waiting to read the chapter!

Also, your life in college sounds cool already.Hope you're having fun.Keep breaking rules and rocking.

PS go watch Annabelle 2 movie, its AMAZING.

Loads of love❤️



Oh! Payal itz okay.
I know how hectic these admissions are.
Chapter is posted already.

I'll be doing that for the rest upcoming 5 semesters.
Already breaking rules 😃

I'm going to watch it. I'm biggie fan of horror stories and will watch with a biggie smile.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: farinaks

Excited continue soon
Nd ur Uni thing was hilarious... Mind blowing
Loved it
Reminds me of my graduations first yr


you are doing graduation?

I'm already doing hilarious jobs in my uni aready
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

College life sounds cool. 😎 Next year I'd be applying for colleges. So excited already. 😆

Nice teaser, Daisy. Continue soon. 😳
Thanks for the PM. ❤️



Rhea
Thanks

All the coolness of mine will be drained in few days. But Since I'm Maths Honours student need to keep a cool and collected head to solve the problems.
Once I turned SSO or Nandi Bell Mode😡😡😡, I start throwing water or anything in my hand to the person in front of them and that too once a week. I can't remain angry on anyone more than 1 week. Basically I'm a Paanika and SSO when angry
Best of luck for college

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for OMM of Advay... Shivay is hell angry with him...and not going to leave it so easily...
Shivay and his cheapda mind... 😆
This angry man is going to kill innocent flowers... He can't see her in anyone's arms...Moreover he listened Advay-Amaira convo... Surely he will break Advay's skull someday... Jealous SSO rocks 😛
Edited by Shaina744 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Nice update
So It's Anika and advay's plan to make Shivay jealous
Update soon please

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