Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened] - Page 78

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

Hey Iptida 😊

Very nice story dear👏...and such a beautiful start..Maan and Geet ki already Parents milayi Jodi hai.😆..since childhood they knew about this alliance..and now they are grown up😳..Geet ka screw abhi bhi thoda sa dheela.😆..but uff !! MSK to bachpan se hi dadagiri dikahne mein believe krta hai...🤣

He teased her.😉..he himself was not confessing his feelings till now what he felt for her ..he was missing her madly and expects from her that she remembered everything or not??😲

He is very fast forward.😳.it's just 2nd day in his mansion and see his dominance ..to make her his..☺️.and they got married in childhood??😕..khel khel mein kya?? 😆and there Geet ke dimag ki batti slow work krti hai...she made him blush too with her ahemm ahemm...talk 😆

the fear of loosing her threatened him ..and for her he made distance from her...for her progress...for her success ...that's the true love I guess...but Geet is also not wrong..she was shattered with this behavior of Maan...and now they are naraz naraz types..not talking with each other much.😊

I really enjoyed your updates 😃...actually I read only 4 parts till now..so commenting for that..when I'll read further I'll comment for that as well.😳

Suchi

Originally posted by: Iptida

hey suchi, how are you doing?😳
So you are reading? i hope You will soon get rid off your confusion which has arose till now the 4th update and I guess you will get the answers by your own. And once you will learn their dynamics I am guessing you will love this Maaneet.😳
I am so glad that you enjoyed reading till now. Nothing makes me more happy than this dearie. Thank you so so much!

I am updating the next chapter of this one.

Also waiting for your replies eagerly.

😳❤️

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

I am good dear..😛

yupp!! I am new na..😆.and your story reached to 21 chaps ..much more to read and to be understood ..😉..will comment for next chaps asap😳

Originally posted by: Iptida

hey I am new too, and this is my first attempt to wrote something hehe! Hamari khub jamegi phir toh!

Originally posted by: Iptida

wow... such beautiful and encouraging comment.

These are the comments which make me get going further playing with my creative skills.

hahhaa, you too have problem with sam just like everyone else here. For some reason or known reason we Maaneetians hate sameera even if the shades of her character appears positive.

Beautiful analysis by you. I thank you for your patience which made you bearing with writing. Hopefully I will be able to draw the main plot just as I have thought inside my head and keep pleasing you all with more of Maaneet! 😳
Good morning. 😊

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

yeah..you are senior member here...😊you are very talented running 3 stories at a time..👏

I love to read FFs 😳...in this forum there is flood of stories ..sometimes I feel to read all of them...but I know it will take time😆...write now I am connected with Dr.Rose's , Richa's , and yours FF..😳.writers of this forum are very creative and mind blowing...not only writers...actually all of you are superb..as per the activeness of this forum😳