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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#771

Hey Iptida 😊

Very nice story dear👏...and such a beautiful start..Maan and Geet ki already Parents milayi Jodi hai.😆..since childhood they knew about this alliance..and now they are grown up😳..Geet ka screw abhi bhi thoda sa dheela.😆..but uff !! MSK to bachpan se hi dadagiri dikahne mein believe krta hai...🤣

He teased her.😉..he himself was not confessing his feelings till now what he felt for her ..he was missing her madly and expects from her that she remembered everything or not??😲

He is very fast forward.😳.it's just 2nd day in his mansion and see his dominance ..to make her his..☺️.and they got married in childhood??😕..khel khel mein kya?? 😆and there Geet ke dimag ki batti slow work krti hai...she made him blush too with her ahemm ahemm...talk 😆

the fear of loosing her threatened him ..and for her he made distance from her...for her progress...for her success ...that's the true love I guess...but Geet is also not wrong..she was shattered with this behavior of Maan...and now they are naraz naraz types..not talking with each other much.😊

I really enjoyed your updates 😃...actually I read only 4 parts till now..so commenting for that..when I'll read further I'll comment for that as well.😳

Suchi

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: .Suchi.
Hey Iptida 😊
Very nice story dear👏...and such a beautiful start..Maan and Geet ki already Parents milayi Jodi hai.😆..since childhood they knew about this alliance..and now they are grown up😳..Geet ka screw abhi bhi thoda sa dheela.😆..but uff !! MSK to bachpan se hi dadagiri dikahne mein believe krta hai...🤣

He teased her.😉..he himself was not confessing his feelings till now what he felt for her ..he was missing her madly and expects from her that she remembered everything or not??😲

He is very fast forward.😳.it's just 2nd day in his mansion and see his dominance ..to make her his..☺️.and they got married in childhood??😕..khel khel mein kya?? 😆and there Geet ke dimag ki batti slow work krti hai...she made him blush too with her ahemm ahemm...talk 😆

the fear of loosing her threatened him ..and for her he made distance from her...for her progress...for her success ...that's the true love I guess...but Geet is also not wrong..she was shattered with this behavior of Maan...and now they are naraz naraz types..not talking with each other much.😊

I really enjoyed your updates 😃...actually I read only 4 parts till now..so commenting for that..when I'll read further I'll comment for that as well.😳

Suchi

hey suchi, how are you doing?😳
So you are reading? i hope You will soon get rid off your confusion which has arose till now the 4th update and I guess you will get the answers by your own. And once you will learn their dynamics I am guessing you will love this Maaneet.😳
I am so glad that you enjoyed reading till now. Nothing makes me more happy than this dearie. Thank you so so much!

I am updating the next chapter of this one.

Also waiting for your replies eagerly.

😳❤️

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: Iptida

hey suchi, how are you doing?😳
So you are reading? i hope You will soon get rid off your confusion which has arose till now the 4th update and I guess you will get the answers by your own. And once you will learn their dynamics I am guessing you will love this Maaneet.😳
I am so glad that you enjoyed reading till now. Nothing makes me more happy than this dearie. Thank you so so much!
I am updating the next chapter of this one.

Also waiting for your replies eagerly.

😳❤️

I am good dear..😛

yupp!! I am new na..😆.and your story reached to 21 chaps ..much more to read and to be understood ..😉..will comment for next chaps asap😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

I am good dear..😛

yupp!! I am new na..😆.and your story reached to 21 chaps ..much more to read and to be understood ..😉..will comment for next chaps asap😳

hey I am new too, and this is my first attempt to write something hehe! Hamari khub jamegi phir toh!

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: Iptida

hey I am new too, and this is my first attempt to wrote something hehe! Hamari khub jamegi phir toh!

yeah..you are senior member here...😊you are very talented running 3 stories at a time..👏

I love to read FFs 😳...in this forum there is flood of stories ..sometimes I feel to read all of them...but I know it will take time😆...write now I am connected with Dr.Rose's , Richa's , and yours FF..😳.writers of this forum are very creative and mind blowing...not only writers...actually all of you are superb..as per the activeness of this forum😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#776

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: Iptida

wow... such beautiful and encouraging comment.

These are the comments which make me get going further playing with my creative skills.

hahhaa, you too have problem with sam just like everyone else here. For some reason or known reason we Maaneetians hate sameera even if the shades of her character appears positive.

Beautiful analysis by you. I thank you for your patience which made you bearing with writing. Hopefully I will be able to draw the main plot just as I have thought inside my head and keep pleasing you all with more of Maaneet! 😳
Good morning. 😊

Good evening dear !

After years too iam still mulling over spilt milk. Sameera's character never came into light of existence in serial but grabbed enough eye balls. Iam one curious cat wanted to analyze sameera's dark and bright shades in Maaneet's life and change in maaneet's dynamics post her entry but it never came. CV's kept us hanging and pondering over sameera's and Vicky's characterization till end. After reading stories related to Sameera's evil side protrayed by respective writers iam tend to be possessive for Maaneet :))

Ur welcome and would like to get pleased with more of ur writings !!😊😃😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: .Suchi.

yeah..you are senior member here...😊you are very talented running 3 stories at a time..👏

I love to read FFs 😳...in this forum there is flood of stories ..sometimes I feel to read all of them...but I know it will take time😆...write now I am connected with Dr.Rose's , Richa's , and yours FF..😳.writers of this forum are very creative and mind blowing...not only writers...actually all of you are superb..as per the activeness of this forum😳

Aww thank you so much for the complement. Indeed I do agree with you that GF has the best writers and I love the old FFs. I am a very lazy and choosy reader hehe so I am on constant readers block as i have already told in the introductory post...

Hoping your support would be with us for always. Thanks for your beautiful words dear. Be blessed. Waiting for your feedback. 😳

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#779

splendid update! beautifully written! Sam is indeed delusional! she just doesn't want 2 accept what she sees with her eyes! Geet means the world 2 Maan! Sam consoles her self that Maan was angry so he kissed Geet's forehead! what makes her thinks she has a chance with Maan? she certainly needs help! Geet gives Sam coffee n Sam comments abt the way Geet cooled Maan's anger! Geet recalls what Maan did! Thank God dad handled the situation! Geet was shocked with Maan's kiss! Maan is back! Geet n Maan have dinner together! All he needs 2 see Geet n is happy! terrific blissful moments! its party time! Maan cannot take his eyes of his beloved enchantress! fab convo! Geet warns Maan 2 control himself! wonderful songs n sizzling dance! Maanet have eyes only 4 each other! Sam watches Maaneet! she is upset Maan ignored her 4 Geet! Sam peeved as she feels Geet is playing with Maan while she proposed 2 Dev! This Sam😡 please send her away b4 she creates problems btwn Maaneet! thanks 4 da pm! cannot wait 4 next

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#780

lovely update... maaneet are lost in each other.. dadi knowing about them is silent for the time being but hope she announces their marriage before sameera play any dirty game... how can she think maan loves her.. there is not a single encounter which says he loves her but she for her dreams is getting angry for no reason... hope everything goes well..