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Chapter # 9
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SCENE 1

Geet in chem's class

Pinky: geet tu nain bataya kyuun nahi k tu MK k uncle ki beti hai

Geet: I think is ki zururat nahi thi is liyae

Pinky: pr geet tujhe btana chahiyae tha hm tmharay samnay Mk k baaray may pta nhi kia kia boltay thay

Geet: I don't mind yar

Pinky: hmmm

Geet: acha kal kon c class hui thi

Pinky: bio ki hui thi and chem ki lab

Geet: ohhh...i again missed chemistry lab...next time I m not gonna miss it

Class startsss geet sees maan and she keeps on staring at him through out the class.

Class ends

Geet: pinky chalo caf chalain

Pinky: chalo...

in corridor aadi comes and asks pinki to come

Aadi: pinky!! mjhe tm say baat krni hai zra meray saath ao

Pinky: pr geet???

Geet: its ok main caf ja rahi hun tm b caf a jana

Pinky: haan yeh theek hai

they both leave geet and suddenly kuku arrives and tries to stop her

Kuku: geet meri baat suno

Geet turns and sees kuku and become angry

Geet: nahi sunni mjhe tmhari koi baat just leave me(and start walking fast kuku starts following her and speaks)

Kuku: kyun choron main tmhain jb meri koi ghalti hi nahi hai,,,tum mujh sy naraz kyun ho??? Mujhay to kuch smjh hini a ra

Geet stops and turns: kia kaha tm nain tmhari koi ghalti nahi thi???

Kuku: haan geet meri koi ghalti nahi thi yeh maan singh khurana hamesha mujh se jealous hota raha hai wo daikh nahi ska k tm meray saath ho,,,,,,,aray us room mein main tmhain kisi ghalat niyaat say lay kr nahi gaya tha balkay wahan tmharay liyae aik surprise tha (Geet starts melting down)

Geet: how can I believe you???

Kuku: main jaanta tha tm mjhe,, apnay dost ko chor kr maan pr believe kro gi main tmhara ghair hun na or wo tmhara apna...tum mujhay itna ghlet kaisay smjhskti ho??? Main to tumhay apna best frend maan ra tha,,,bt you proved me wrong!

Geet: nahi aisi baat nahi hai actually us raat ko main kaafi dr gai thi

Kuku:us raat ko bhool jao,,,,n if I hurt u then I m very veryy sorrry,,now can we be friends again??

Geet: (smiles) lets go to the caf

Maan is walking with his frndss he sees that geet is with kuku,, kuku holding geet 4m sholdr and they are going to caf and laughing talking again maan gets angry.

in cafe, Geet,pinky,aadi and kuku are sitting on the table, maan comes and sits on another table in caf

Geet: kia khao gaye tm log aaj main lay kr aati hun

Pinky: mujhay to boht bhook lgi hui hai; mujhay to large size burger aur french fries chahiyae...

Aadi: aur haan meray liyae coffee

Geet: and kuku u???

Kuku: jo b khila do hum kha lain gaye akhir tmhari pasand ka ho ga...

Geet feels shy and smiles: kuku btao naa

Kuku: coffee n some snacks

Geet: sure main abi le kr aati hun...

(Now on maan's table)

Maan: tm log kia khao gaye order day do

Sasha: MK tm behto main le kr aatii hun... taniya tasha tm kia lo gaye??? And MK u??

Maan: tm apnay liyae lay ao main as usual coffee hi peon ga main le kr aata hun...

Sasha sees geet is going to take coffee

Sasha: Mk tm behto main tmhari coffe b laati hun

Maan: main nain kaha na main lay aon ga (stands up). Or MAAN singh khurana apna kaam khud kr skta hai

Maan goes to coffee counter and stands with geet while geet is mixing sugar in mugs

maan: yeh kia kr rahi ho tm??? (with anger)

Geet: kiaa??? (softly says) I m adding sugar Maan!

Maan: (anger) main sugar ki baat nai kr raha; main kuku ki baat kr raha hun...wo tumharay sath yhaan kya kr ra hai?

Geet: (with anger)Whaaat??? What u said? Listen maan! who r u to interfere in my life?? main jo kr rahi hun theek kr rahi hun..kuku ghalat nahi tha,, tm (points maan) ghalat thay aur tm ghalat ho,, he told me that us room main meray liyae koi surprise tha jo tm nain destroy kr diya,,,,,kuku is nice man u r getting jealous with him

Maan: (attitude) maan singh khurana kbhi kisi say jealous nahi huaaa...main jealous nahi ho rha main tmhain kisi bray nuksaan say bacha raha hun

Geet: (in hurry) bacha liya na thanks

Geet takes mugs and leaves counter in hurry. she goes back to table and sits with kuku infront of aadi and pinki on 4-chaired table.

Kuku: geet I m sorry pta nahi tm meray baaray mein kia soch rahi thi

Geet: is main tmhara koi fault nahi hai ghalti sirf maan ki hai,,aur kuch meri b (making face)maan ko aisa nahi krna chahiyae tha baishk wo tm say jealous tha pr...

Kuku starts staring at her just for show off because kuku knows maan is watching them

kuku holds geet's hand and she becomes confused and because of this her coffee falls down on her dress and she immediately stands up.

Geet: Oh GOD

Kuku: (stands up) I m sorry ghalti say ghir gaya,,,,,,,,I m sorry I m so sorry I m so sorry

Geet: its ok kuku!!!! tmhara fault nahi hai

Kuku holds her hands again, and says "I am sorry" geet sees their hands and then kuku. Maan sees and gets jealous and he leaves cafe with anger.

Geet: tm log class main jao main yeh saaf kr k aati hun

Kuku: main tmharay saath chalta hun

Geet: (smiles) ok...

In class its physics class

Maan is sitting on his seat and watching door

Pinky and aadi enters maan sees geet is not with them he gets angry coz he assumes geet is with kuku. Geet and kuku enters geet is holding kuku's hand maan sees and somewhat gets jealous. They sit together geet is not watching maan now and they r talking and class starts and class ends. Maan is sitting on his seat and doing something on cell phone. Geet passes from their seat (maan and sasha) sasha stops geet.

Sasha: geet stop

Geet turns: kia hua??

Sasha: lab lenay ja rahi ho naa??

Geet: yeah chemistry lab...bt y u asking???

Sasha: v r not taking lab v r going to hang out (geet gets jealous) so hamari approxy lga dena plzzz

Geet sees maan he is doing something on phone

Geet: ok main lga dun gi..


SCENE 2

Geet and kuku walking through corridor

Kuku: aaj lab nahi letay lets go to caf

Geet: nai kuku actually main nain kaafi dino say lab nahi le that's y aaj letay hain kal chor dain gaye

Kuku: (sort of gets angry) theek hai tm lab lo main ja raha hun

Geet: kuku plzzz le lo naaa or naraz mt ho naaa

Kuku: acha tm lab lo main caf ja rha hun tm lab le kr wahin a jana main naraz nahi hun (calms down)

Geet: (smiles) ok byeee

Geet goes to the lab

Geet: pinky!!! Kia chal raha hai???

Pinky: mjhe chor pehlay attendance lga sir bht ghusay main hain

Geet: achaa theek main abhi lga k aati hun

Geet comes back

Pinky: geet MK kahan hai

Geet: (with irritating voice) don't know sasha k saath tha

Pinky: k jxt leave now v r preparing crystals...

time passes

Geet: yeh wala Bunsen burner on krna hai sir????

Sir: nahi saath wala yeh wala kharab hai

Geet: ok sir

Sonia: sir H2 SO4 yeh raha

Geet burner on krnay lgti hai and Sonia H2SO4 la kr burner k pass laati hai

Sir: Sonia peechay kro aag lg jaye gi

Sonia: sorry sir

Geet: (with confusion)yeh wala burner hai pinky?????

Pinky: geet tu b na pagal hai yeh wala nahi hai saath wala hai

Geet: ohhh sorry

Pinky: wait main china dish laati hun

Geet is alone on that table where many burners are present

Geet turns on the burner and it kind of bursts geet peechay ho jaati hai saath hi chemicals rack hota hai udr b aag lg jaati hai

Sir: Oh mai God yeh kia kr diyaaa dono doors say niklo sb log

Geet ka right arm jal jata hai

Pinky geet ko lay kr bahir nikal jaati hai and sb log bahir a jaatay hainnn...

Sir: geet what is thisss? u have any sense????? Oh God tmhara baazon jal gaya hai!! Pinky tm isay lay kr medical room main jao

Tia comes in hurry and with cry faceee

Tia: sir!!! (sighsss very badly)

Sir: kia hua tia??? (become tense)

Geet is there and listening tia

Tia: sir!! prabha andr hi hai wo bahir nahi ai...

Geet: kiaaa????? (with worry)

Geet frees herself from Pinki and goes to the lab back to find prabha.

Sir,tia,pinky: geet tm kahan ja rahi ho??? Geet!! Geet!! Geet!!

whil in cafe Maan and sasha are having snacks,

Abhay (clerk of the college ;)): (shouting with worriness) chemistry lab main aag lg gai hai!!!!! Chemistry lab main aag lg gai hai!!!!! Chemistry lab main aag lg gai hai!!!!! Chemistry lab main aag lg gai hai!!!!!

Maan: (become tensed) kahan pay??????

Sasha: chemistry lab main

he becomes shocked because he reminds that geet was also in that lab (her words echoes, geet: yeahh main chem lab ja rahi hun)

Maan: Oh God geet b wahin hai

Sasha: jxt leave naa theek ho gi...

Maan doesn't reply her and takes his phone out and starts calling her. but she doesn't attend call. Maan becomes more tensed and starts calling back to back But she doesn't attend any call.

Maan: geet kis k saath ho gi????? (with reminding tone) pinky!! Haaan pinky k saath ho gi usay call krta hun. Maan calls pinky

Maan: hhello (with hurry) pinky geet kahan hai

Pinky:kuch pta nahi Mk geet andr hai

Maan: kiaaa??? andr hai???? Tm usay lay kr kyun nahi ai???

Pinky: Mk main lay kr ai thi prabha andr thi wo usay andr lenay chali gai...

Maan: yeh geet b naaa... main abhi aata hun

Pinky: theek hai

Maan leaves cafe and passes through corridor

Taniya: Mk lab main aag lg gai hai or geet lab main hai...

Maan goes very fast and gives answer in hurry and doesn't stop

Maan: pta hai

SCENE 3

Maan reaches near the chemistry lab.

Maan: pinky!! Geet ka kuch pta chala???? (in hurry)

Pinky: nahi Mk geet abhi tk andr hai

Maan: oh God yeh geet b naaa...

Geet in Lab searching for prabha and fire is on all sides.

Geet: prabhaa!!! Prabhaa!! Kahan ho Prabha????

Geet: (with cry face) prabha kahan ho???prabha!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaauuucchhh (she gets hit by something on foot.)

Geet: oh God ahhh (with pain)

Prabhaa!!!!!!!!!!!! Prabhaa!!! Kahan ho prabhaaa!!!!!!!!!!

while Outside the lab

Prabha comes from second door and Maan comes to prabha and asks her in hurry

Maan: prabha!!! Geet kahan hai

Prabha: pta nahi wo bahir a gai thi...*Pause* andr to nhi hai geet!!!!!!!

Maan: (with MSK style in anger) pr wo tmhain andr dhoondnay gai hai...

Prabha: mjhe nahi pta wo andr nahi hai

Tia: Mk prabha ko chot lgi hai us say questiong ansring bnd kro

Maan sees tia in Msk Style

Tia takes prabha from there..Maan goes in deep thinking.. while in the lab geet starts feeling dizzy and starts coughing because of asthma attack. she starts feeling pain in head

Geet: prabha kahan ho prabha!! (coughs)

Geet goes in last corner of lab

Geet: yahan b nahi hai kahin store room main na ho lets check (with tired feeling and coughs)

Geet opens the store room and feels head ache and falls down on the floor while Maan is waiting outside the lab from geet. but he loses his temper, leaves everything and goes inside the lab to save her.

Sir: ab yeh kahan chala gaya

Maan enters in lab charon side pr aag hai hr table pr aag hai and shaded garmi

Man: geet!! Geet!! Kahan ho geet??? Geet!! Meri awaz a rahi hai

and moving forward in lab

maan is searching geet and he is searching in all corners of lab.Every side, he is checking bt no geet he searched every place of lab but no geet. he gets tired and sees his hands which are turned black because of removing burnt things from his way. but he doesn't stop and now goes towards store room.

maan: shaed wahin ho

He turns, he sees geet and she is lying on floor unconsciously.

maan: (becomes somewhat happy) geeet! (smiles) mjhe mil hi gai (says jxt lyk he said in amrtisr when geet met in bazaar)

maan goes rapidly and hugs her. and as usual back ground maaahiii maaahiii ho ho ho ho ho ho ho. after he gets calm down, he realizes that she is not breathing normally. he holds her, and shouts. geet!! Geet!! Geet!! And he shakes her, presses on her heart to make her normal somehow, rubs her hands and feet. after few minutes, she coughs and breathes fast but remains unconscious. maan sighs and picks her up and leaves lab.

he comes out from the lab while holding geet in his arms.

Pinky: (shoutes with tension) geet!!!!

Maan: main isay hospital le kr jar raha hun she is in very bad condition. (maan is holding geet)

Pinky: main b tmharay saath chalti hun Mk.. (he nodes in yes)

SCENE 4

Hospital scene..Maan is holding geet and shouting @ reception

Maan: doctor!! Doctor kahan hai koi doctr nahi hai kiaa where are the doctors?

Ward boy comes

Ward boy: patient ko stretcher pr litain hm nain dctr ko infrm kr diya hai

Maan puts geet on stretcher and touches her forehead with care.

Doctor comes: patient kahan hai

Maan: yeh hai docter

Doctor : ok nurse isay I.C.U main shift kro and burn patient (nurse takes patient in the ICU) doctor or ap (he asks maan's name)

Maan: ummm Maan singh khurana

Doctor : okay. Mr khurana reception say form le kr fill kr dain.. waisay aapp ka patient say relation kia hai???

Maan: ummm main in ka frnd hun

Doctor : theek hai aap in k kisi relative ko bulain main patient ko daikhti hun

Maan: haan main krta hun

Doctor leaves and Maan calls dadi

Maan: hello dadi (in tension)

Dadi: kia hua maan betay sb theek to hai naa??

Maan: dadi wo lab main aag lg gai thi geet hospital main hai

Dadi: (in tension and holds heart) kiaaa???? Geet theek hain naa??? Betay ap kuch bol kyun nahi rahay hain??

Maan: dadi geet ko abhi hospital laya hun plzz ap a jaye abhi check up start hua hai

Dadi: theek hai hm abhi aatay hain kon sa hospital???

Maan: city hospital

Maan disconnects call and doctor comes and gives list of medicine to maan

Maan: Doctor geet theek to hai naa (tension)

Dctr: abhi hm kuch nahi keh sktay she is not out of danger (maan stiffs)... yeh dawaiyan main nain likh din hain jitna jaldi ho jaye yeh magwa lain

Maan: yeh main abhi laata hun

Maan goes for bringing medicines.

after sometime. Dadi comes maan is standing outside the I.C.U with tension

Dadi: geet ki tabiyat kaisi hai???

Maan: Doctors keh rahay hain wo khatray say bahir nahi hai

Dadi: maan betay!!

Maan: haan bolain...

Dadi: geet k parents ko batana chahiyae???

Maan:bta dain pr wo wahan parishaan hun gayee... ummm dctr say pooch letay hain

after one hour...

Dadi: maan betay Doctor say kuch pta krain k geet k kia haal hai wo kaisi hai???

Maan: dadi maa Doctor bahir aye gi tb hi poochain gaye naa I.C.U main jana allowed nahi hota naa

Dadi: wo dctr a gain poochay un say...

Maan: dctr geet ab kaisi hai...

Dctr: (with anger) daikhiyae hm koshish kr rahain hain jaisay hi geet ko hosh aye ga tb hm ap ko bta dain gayen abhi hm kuch nahi keh sktay

Maan: (with tension + anger) to jaye naaa or treatement krain us ka yahan kia kr rahin hain

Dctr: yeh injections hain aap jald as jald lain ayen

Maan: jii theek haii

Dctr leaves

Dadi: betay mjhe lgta hai geet ki mumy ko bta dena chahiyae phr kuch ho gaya to

Maan: (with anger) (and smooth maahi back ground) dadi maa aap aisa hi kyun sochti hain geet ko kuch nahi ho ga wo bilkul theek ho jaye gii (hohohohohohohohohohoho smooth hohohoho)

Maan goes to pharmacy and Dadi calls naina

Naina: hello

Dadi: hello naina hm saweta devi baat kr rahay hain

Naina: hello (with glad) dadi maa namastay kaisin hain?? geet kaisi hai???

Dadi: naina hm theek hain pr geet theek nahi hai

Naina: (wth tension) kia hua geet ko???

Dadi: actually wo college gai thi or college main aag lg gai or wo hospital main hai...

Naina: kia???? Geet hospital main hai??? Wo theek to hai naa???

Maan: dadi lain... main baat krta hun

Dadi gives phone to maan

Maan: hello aunty namastay

Naina: haan maan betay geet ko kia hua hai wo theek hai ya nahi???

Maan: aunty geet abhi I.C.U main hai pr wo zada nahi jali sirf baazun (arm) hi jala hai or main usay hospital le aya tha

Naina: main koshish krti koi flight mje mil jayee..or foran a rahi hun meri beti main keh rahi thi KH ko k mat behjain geet ko india pr unhon nain to jaisay than li hui thi bt this is not important geet ka khayal rakhna main a rahi hun

Maan: ji aunty

Maan: wo dctr nain visit krna hai main aap ko thori dair tk phone krta hun

Naina: ok (with wiping tears)

Dctr comes

Maan: geet kaisi hai??

Dctr: geet ko hosh a gaya hai

Maan sighs

Dctr: pr abhi b wo khtray say bahir nahi hai

Maan: dctr geet ko hua kia hai main problem kia hai???

Dctr: actually baazon ka itna prob hai na hi sir ki chout ka pr jo wo itni dair garmi main or aag k darmiyaan rahi hai . or wesy b unhain asthma problem hai or wo smoke and garmi ki aadii nahi hai is liyae...

Maan: hmmm hm un say mil sktay hain????

Dctr: abhi nahi abi hm unhain room main shift krain gaye tb and listen aap log un ko zada bolnay mt dena and plzz un ka oxygen mask mt utariyae ga un ko breathing problem hai to phr heart beat unstable ho jaye gii. abi srf aik bnda mil skta ICU meinn.

Maan: I'll try k wo zda na bolay,,

Dadi: Maan betay aap mil lain un sy,

he nodes in yes and calls naina

Maan: hello aunty aunty geet ko hosh a gaya hai wo ab kuch behtr hai

Naina: haan bs mje flight mil gai hai. or us main 2 ghantay hain

Maan: ji aunty

Naina: main kuch dair main phone krti hun

Maan: ji aunty

Maan goes to dadi maa she is sitting on sofas in waiting area.

Dadi: maan betay (crying) mjh say geet ki yeh halat nahi daikhi jaye gi aap hi ja kr mil lain

Maan: dadi theek hai pr aap roain mt

Dadi: (cryng) itni hasti khailti bachi ko pta nahi kia ho gaya

Maan: dadi aap honsla krain naina aunty a rahi hain

Dadi: kaisay wo wahan rukay us ki bachi yahan hospital main hai wo kaisay wahan ruk skti hai

Pinky comes

Pinky: Mk geet kaisi hai??

Maan: (with anger) tm kahan thi???

Pinky: wo prbha ki tbiyat zada kharab thi wo hsptal main hi thi main us k pass hi thi

Maan: Acha. geet ko hosh a gaya hai main us say milnay ja raha hun

Pinky: main b aon???

Maan: nahi

Pinky: theek hai

Maan enters.

Geet is on bed wearing E.C.G wires, oxygen mask, drip and canola also and have bandage on head and right hand...Geet is very weak

Maan is feelng like he got everything and he got whole world and feeling very happy and smile on his face and taking very small steps and coming towards geet's bed

And as usuall back ground no need to repeat :P :P maaahhhiii

Maan comes and sits on the stool, and holds geet's hand

Maan: geet tmhain pta hai mai kitna parishaan ho gaya tha?? Kia zrurat thi lab main wapis janay ki???

Geet apna haath churwaati hai and mask ki taraf le k jaati hai maan us ka haath pakr leta hai

Maan: Doctor nain mna kia hai mask utarnay say or tmhain bolnay say b...

Geet again apna haath churwati hai and mask utarti hai

Geet: (with weak and slow voice) prabha andr thi naa or tm kb se meri fikr krnay lgaye

Maan us ka mask uper krta hai

Maan: chup bilkul chup dctr nain bolnay say mna kia hai

Maan: or tmhari muma a rahi hain

Geet start breathing fast nurse comes for giving an injection

Nurse: yeh kya kia patient ki heart beat taiz ho rahi hai kaha tha naa k mask mt utarain...

Nurse picks phone and calls doctor

Nurse: dctr patient ki heart beat taiz ho gai hai... (to maan) Aap bahir jaen

Maan leaves room and comes outside

Dadi: geet ki tbiyat kaisi hai?? (with nervousness)

Maan thinks dadi maa ko nahi btata k us ki tbiyat kaharab hai dadi maa heart patient b hain or kaafi dair ho gai hai behtr yeh ho ga inhain ghr behj dun..

Maan: dadi maa aap ghr jaen bht raat ho gai hai main geet k pass hun (maahhiii) or kal dhupehr tk aunty b a jaen gi aap un k saath a jana

Dadi: nahi betay hm geet ko chor k kaisay jaen

Maan: dadi maa aap ko mjh pe bharusa nahi hai??

Dadi: hai beta...

Maan: dadi maa main geet ko college sy akailay yahan la skta hun to us ki yahan car b kr skta hun

Dadi: theek hai beta hm jatay hain phr hm subah a jaen gaye

Maan: jii dadi maa

dadi leaves and after sometime doctor comes out from the room.

Maan: geet ki tbiyat kaisi hai??

Dctr: ab kaafi behtr hai or geet ko abhi soft cheezain hi dain khanay ko and juices must hain or abhi un say zada baat na krain or behtr ho ga un ko un k right hand say koi kaam na krnay dain...

Maan: ji dctr main abhi us k liyae kuch laata hun or I m promise wo apnay right hand say koi kaam nahi kraye gi

Dctr: ok Mr khurana

Maan comes back, he also brings some food with medicines for geet

Dctr: hm geet ko room main shift kr rahay hain coz wo kaafi behtr hain..

Maan: yes dctrr

Dctr: abhi 5 say 7 din lgain gaye un ki recovery main or 10 days for her arm ...i think so she is sufrng wd mild asthma and smoke allergy,,so do take care of hr aur ye kuch test krwa lijiyae ga...u cn also hire a nurse if u want!

Maan: (interrupts) nahi dctr! I can take care of hr...

Dctr: gooddd or abhi hm nain unhain injection lgaya hai sooo wo so rahi hain and agar raat ko us ki tbiyat kharab ho thn u cn cal me...

Maan: ji dctr

Dctr leaves and geet is in room (mask, bandage, canola, drip, E.C.G wires)

Maan comes and places shopping bags on rack.

Maan sees geet is sleeping and smiles

Now tym is passing

Maan is sitting on sofa

Then

Maan is standing near window and watching geet

Then

Maan sittss on stool

Then

Maan sits on sofa

All th time thinkng about geet!!

Maan thinks "Maan ye tumhay kya ho rha hai??? Y u r thinking n caring bout geet so much...Maan! smthng hs changed or changing!!! Ni Ni (stands) Maan Singh Khurana kbi ni bdl skta...Bus 1 baar geet theek ho k ghr a jayae phr,,,phr,, Phr kya Maan??? Tm faltoo baton pr apna time mt waste kro

NEXT MORNING

Maan wakes and sees geet is already up and watching maan

Maan: good morning

Geet: (removes mask) good morning

Maan comes and sits on stool

Maan: ab tbiyat kaisi hai???(calmly asks)Aur mask mt utaro! (Ordering)

(and smooth back ground maahii)

Geet: (weak voice) Um!!! Feelng betr

Maan: dctr round pay aati hi ho gi,,,

Geet: howz prabha???? (with sweet and weak voice)

Maan gets angry

Maan: aik to tmhari itni tbiyat kharab hai or tm abhi b us ka pooch rahi ho??? Wo bilkul theek hai...(Calming down)

Geet: J,,,,,,kia krun frnd hai wo meri I care for her...morevr ye sb meri wja sy hi to hua hai!
Maan: (Sees geet shockingly)
Geet: Woo...Wooo

Dctr comes

Dctr: Hello,geet!!! Gud Mrnin.. hw r u feeling now???

Geet: kaafi behtr hun

Dctr: let me take a brief observation of u...Cn u please leave for smtime Mr khurana????

Maan: yeah sure...

Dctr: Thank you

After sometime, Pinky comes, geet is sitting with the support of pillows on her back, and having bandage on head and arm.

Pinky: hi geet kaisi hai????

Geet: (weak voice) behtr hun

Pinky: geet tu b naaa... daikh kia haal kr liya hai...shukr kr MK tujhe le aya tha warna kisi ki himat hi nahi ho rahi thi lab main janay ki...sb itnay prishan thy na! Aur mera lunch box b lab may hi reh gya!

Geet smiles very cutely and feebly

Geet: maan mjhe yahan le kr aya tha???

Pinky: haan geet! Wo main kya keh ri thi k (she keeps on talking about lunch box which she brought for her n stuff to 2day,, bt geet was smwhere else n the last thing she heard that "shukr kr MK tujhe le aya tha warna kisi ki himat hi nahi ho rahi thi lab main janay ki)

Maaahhhiii thinking "Mujhay Maan ny bachaya

Pinky: Geet tu kuch khaye gi kiaa???? Lyk burger or French fries???? Ya phr pizza ordr krun?

Geet: haan dil kharab sa ho raha hai...kbhi hospital nahi rhi naa is liyae kuch le aaa...Acha sa!

Pinky stands to go out

Maan opens door and cmes in

Maan is holding shoping bag

Pinky: hi Mk

Maan: hmmm

Pinky: wo main geet k liyae burger lenay ja rahi hun

Maan: (shoutes) Whaatt!!!

Geet: Maan! Is may whaatt wali kya baat hai,,, Pinki burgr hi lenay ja rahi hai, atom bomb to lanay ka ni bola ous ny (In funny mood)

Pinky: burgr ni to Piza ly aaun Geet??

Geet givng expression 4 yes in total fun mood

Maan: (Smwht confusd) Dctr nain is trhan ki food say mna kia hai sirf soft food allow hi lyk soup n juice etc...aur wo main ny dadi maa sy keh k mngwa liyae hain!

Pinky: ohhh...theek hai geet main college ja rahi hun phr college k baad aon gi

Geet smiles slightly n pinki leaves

Geet: maan tm nhi jao gaye colg???

Maan: nahi (maahiii) wo koi b yahan nahi hai to main hi rukon gaa,,, abi dadi maa aati hon g aur abi thori deir tk Naina Aunti b pohnch jayaen g...

Geet: hmmm...Bt mama ko kya zroort th aanay ki?? Brig Bro aur dad b kitnay prishan ho jayein gay! Maan tm b na

Maan: kya?

Geet: Wo,,Wo,,means...agr aap, ni dadi maa,, ni aap o ni..dadi maa,, Ni maan aap dono!!!

Maan: Kya hum dono???...Pehlay achay sy soch lo Geet! K tm kehna kya chah ri ho!
Geet: I mean K aap log Mama ko meray is accident k baray may na btaatay to...

Maan: Dadi maa ny btaya... if u have some problem then talk 2 dadi maa (getting rude)

Geet: k...Ab daanto to mat

Maan: Main ny tmhay kb danta?
Geet: abi ye aur kya kr rhay thy

Maan: ni geet; main daant ni rha, main srf smjha rha tha (smilng)
Geet: dekho ab tm jhoot na bolo...N I m nt a baby grl,, MAIN SRF SMJHA RHA THA (in maan's accent)

Maan: Nw cn u keep ur mouth shut,, or I should call th doctr?

Geet: Sorry Sorry (keeping finger on lips n smiling)

after few hours, maan sitting on sofa in her room and using cell phone

Geet's room

Geet: muma a rahi hain??? (feebly asks again,, just 2 hv an opportunity 2 talk 2 maan)

Maan: haaan (texting on cell phone)

Geet: maan!!!

Maan: haan kia hua??

Geet: mjhe bhook lgi hai...

Maan: (maaahhii) wo main bhool gaya tmharay liyae soup laya tha...

Maan gives the soup to geet in a bowl

Geet bowl ko left hand say pakarti hai

Maan doesn't pay attention to her, he keeps on using cell phone.while geet tries to eat with right hand. Maan sees and says loudli

Maan: geet yeh kia kr rahi ho???

Geet: ultay questions poochna chor do na maan! soup peenay lgi hun,,, ghoobara (balloon)thori na fula ri hun!

Maan: (gets confused) nahi mera matlb hai right hand mt use kro...

Geet: maan!!!! meray Maata g ki trha 50 haath to hain nai, k aik haath py canola lgwaun, aik say khaon aik say bowl pkron aik say rite arm ko pkrun, 1 sy...

Maan apni finger geet k lips pr rakhta hai

Maaahhhiii

Maan: chup!! Bilkul chupp!! Tm kitna bolti ho! Tumhari zubaan ni thkti?? Dctr nain zada bolnay say mna kia hai na...

Geet watching maan in maahi condition

Maan: raha sawal soup ka to wo main pila deta hun (maaahhiii ;) )

he takes bowl and sits on stool. while Geet still in maahi condition.

Maan takes soup in spoon and brings near her mouth and waiting for her to take it.

Maan: geet! Isay spoon kehtay hain aur jb soup peena ho to isay use krtay hain aur is ko use krnay k liyae moo kholna prta hai,, (Geet stil in maaahhiii condition)

Geet! Geet! (loudly) ab raat tk main ye spoon pkr kr betha ni reh skta!

(Geet blinks and opens mouth confusingly.)

Geet: Sorry Maan!

Maan: tumhara dhayan khan rehta hai Geet?

Geet: Wo tm,,,ni main...ni ye soup,,, Haaan main soup k baray may soch ri thi k ye soup veg hai ya chikcen... ni main ye soch ri th k soup dadi maa ny khud bnaya ha ya nakul ny??

Maan staring at geet

Geet: haan Maan! Yehi soch ri th (getting confused)

Maan: aur haan in saray questions k answers k sath sath is soup ki recepie b meray mun pr likhi hui ha na...Hai na?

Geet: haan Maan! Yehi to main bol ri hun,,,Ni..Ni leave it...soup thnda ho rha hai...waisay b doctr ny mujhy ziada bolnay sy mna kia hai...to

Maan: to??? (In Maaahhhiii condition)

Geet: to soup do maan!

Maan: yeah! sure

SCENE 5

COLLEGE

Pinky and aadi are walking from corridor

Pinky: geet ki kal condition both critical thi,,, ab wo betr hai.. aaj subah main mil kr hi ai hun

Aadi: hmmm may she get well soon

Pinky: hope so

Pinky sees the kuku and abhay (clerk :P ) in a room while passing through coridoor

Pinky goes and listens their conversation n start getting shocked,,,records their conversation

Pinky becomes shocked n says with fully opened eyes

Pinky: kiaaa kuku nain?????????

SCENE 6

Kuku comes in hospital carrying bouquet of red flowers. Maan is sitting on sofa and texting on phone and geet is sitting on bed and watching maan.

Kuku: may I come in???

Geet: of course kuku come in yrrr...

Maan sees kuku and then start texting again trying 2 ignore him

Kuku: Hey geet! My darling!!! (Maan gves a bitter look 2 kuku n geet is watching maan's response) How r u now????

Geet: fine(in reserved mood)

Kuku: this is for you sweet heart!!!!

Geet: thank u kuku... betho!

Kuku: geet mjhe abi thori deir pehlay hi pta chala k tm hospital main ho or kaafi tbiyat kharab hai main to ghbra hi gaya thaa...tm theeek ho na Geet???

Geet: now m f9 kuku!!! Maan hai naaa (geet sees maan) us nain meri itni care ki k main itni jaldi recover kr ri hun,,,,,daikho main tmharay samnay hi hun... bilkul theek and bol b rahi hun :-)

Kuku: Thnx God!!! get well soon dearr

Geet: :)

Suddenly phone rings

Maan: hey Geet! u carry on dadi maa ka phona hai,,,I'll b back in few minutes

Geet: haan theek hai...jaldi aana

Maan nodes n leaves room

Geet: or sunao kuku tm kaisay ho???

Maan goes outside and attends call and starts walking in corridor

Maan: dadi maa aunty ko koi nahi lenay gaya???

Dadi: nahi betay!!! Hmain lga aap lenay jaen gayee

Maan: ohhh!! To flight ki timings kia hain???

Dadi: betay flight ny abi land kia hai aur half n hour tk wo bahir a jayein g...

Maan: chalain dadi maaa!!!! Main lenay chala jaata hun or aap hospital a jaen

Dadi: betay aaj ghr pr koi b driver nahi hai...hum kaisay a sktay hain???

Maan: saaray kahan gaye hain????

Dadi: 2 to chuti pr hain...or 1 gari repair krwanay gaya hua wa hai ...

Maan: chalain main airport sy wapsi pay aap ko b ghr say pick kr lun gaa... chalain bye dadi maa

Maan disconnects call and then thinks

"Geet ko main itni deir k liyae aisay kaisay chor kr ja skta hun or wo b kuku k saath???? Nahi!!! Main yeh risk nahi lay skta...kuku is over-reacting

Maan calls dadi maa

Maan: hello dadi maa 5 mins main tyaar ho jayein main abhi a raha hun aap ko lenay...

Dadi: itni jaldi???

Maan: dadi maaa abhi geet k pass koi b nahi hai is liyae main abhi a raha hun...

Dadi: chalain theek hai beta...hm tyaar hain,,ap a jayein!

Maan goes back to the room.

Maan: geet wo main aunty ko lenay ja raha hun...

Geet: muma a rahi hain??

Maan: geet!! Yeh baat tm subah say 3 baar pooch chuki ho...

Geet: sorry Maan!

Kuku: actually she is worried about her mom...u know! Geet I can understand u dear!(adressing Geet) n Maan u cannot understand hr feelings,,,U know I always...

Maan: (in MSK style interrupting kuku) I think so I didn't talk to u...u must learn 2 keep ur mouth shut rather then understanding feelings of people around u!!! I hope so u got the point...if not we will better talk next time...

Kuku: Wooo...

Geet: (interruptng Kuku) Maan meray saath kon rahay ga???

Kuku: main hun naa geet!!!

Geet: tm to 5 min main chlay hi jao gay...

Maan: haan isi liyae main dadi maa ko pehlay hospital drop krun gaaa or phr airport jaon gaaa...

Geet: haan yeh theek hai...Thnx maan tm itna kuch kr rhay ho aur main...

(kuku gets jealous n stands up)

Maan: Geet! Can u do me a favour?

Geet: Ofcourse!

Maan: take care of urslf,, try 2 b quiet n dnt eat any food forbidden by doctor

Geet: Sure Maan! Tm b na

(maan steps 4 leavng room n thenstep back)

Maan: haan aur 1 baat!

(kuku still standing watching Geet n Maan)

Geet: Haan bolo??

Maan: Jb main aaun to mujhay yhaan koora kbaar ni dikhna chahiyae! Kisi sy keh k bahir phenkwa dena...

Geet: Whaaat KOORA KBAAR???? (Makng mouth)

Maan: I mean garbage (pointing 2wards kuku frst n then 2wrds a banana peel lying on floor near dust bin, Kuku understands th meaning n gets angry...)

Kuku: MK! U r crossing ur limits...

Geet: Kya ho gya kuku?? Maan theeek hi to keh rha hai,,, (Maan smiles n geet dnt understands Maan's meaning )

Kuku: Geet! Tm b??

Maan: Geet kailay k chilkay ko uthanay ka bol ri hai...agr kisi ko khud hi apnay aap pr meaning lenay ka shoq ho to phr shoq sy ly...is may main aur geet kya kr sktay hain???

(n maan leaves room)

SCENE 7

Kuku outside hospital n calls abhay (clerk of colg)

Kuku: main ny tmhay kha than a k mera kaam theeek sy ona chahiyae...pr tm ni kr skay

Abhay: sorry saab!! Main ni kr paya...aainda aisi ghalti na ho g!

Kuku: aainda?? Kya aainda??? Tum mujhay meray paisay wapis kro aaj sham tk!!

Abhay: Pr saab! Main itnay paisay kaisay itni jald wapis kr skta hunn wo to mujh sy khrch ho gyae hain...

Kuku: I don't know (and disconnects call)

SCENE 8

Pinky is sitting in taxi and thinking

Pinky

"pinky tujhy geet ko kuku k baaray main bata dena chahiyae main geet k saath dokha nahi honay dun gi haan abhi hospital ja kr sb say pehly yeh video dikhaon gi

Suddenly phone rings

Pinky: mom ka phone????... hello...

Mom: hello pinky tm kahan ho jaldi say ghr a jao (crying)

Pinky: kia hua mom.. sb theek hai???

Mom: beta jaldi say ghr a jao...hm abhi Chennai ja rahay hain...

Pinky: kyun kia huaa???

Mom: beta wo tmharay mamaa ji ko severe heart attack aya hai un ki tbiyat bht zada kharab hai...

Pinky: kiaaa??? Main abhi a rahi hun...

Pinky: (phone bnd ho jata hai) ab main kia krun geet ko kuku ki sachai btana b zururi hai or ghr jana b... aisa krti hun Chennai say wapis a kr bta dun gi...q k geetko main ye phone pr bta ni skti aur ous ko video dikhana b zarooori hai...

Pinky: bahi sahib jahan say main nain aap ko hire kia tha ab mjhe wahin chor dain

Taxi driver: ji achaaa...Pr rent double ho jayae ga

Pinky: theeek ha theeek ha...aap chleiin jaldi!!!

SCENE 9

Naina enters in room (geet's room) and sees geet with bandage on head n in arm and weak geet she starts crying Maan is following geet's mother. Dadi was sitting on sofa after watching naina she stands up

Naina: hey geet!!! Mai daughter (crying)Mai Doll!!!!!!

Geet is sitting on bed with support of pillows.

Geet: mumaaa!!! (also starts crying)

Both hugs both r cryinggg

Naina: meri bachi!! kia haal bna liya hai... main KH(Geet's Dad: Karan Singh Handa) ko keh b rahi thi k mat behjain tujhe yahan pr KH b naa (cryinggg)...ab dekhein na wo k kya halat ho gyi hai meri bachi ki

Geet: mumaa I was missing you

Naina: o mai baby luv u shweet heart...I ws also misng u

Geet is crying

Maan: geet! Tm ziada mt ro dctr nain mna kia haii...

Naina leaves geet and wipes her tears. Geet starts crying and she got same problem (asthma) breathing badly n loudly with great difficulty n coughs

Maan: geet!!! (Maan goes near geet)

Dadi: kya ho gya?? Kya ho gya Geet betay??

Maan: main nain kaha tha naaa k zada mt ro dctr nain mna kia hai... geet tm late jao...leto tum

after sometime, geet is better, and she is sleeping having mask on. Naina and dadi sitting on sofa, while maan is standing near window,

Naina: thank u so much maan u helped her agr tm na hotay to...

Maan: (interrupts) nahi aunty yeh mera farz tha... Aisi koi baat nahi hai

Naina: main aaj geet k pas hi rukun g!

Dadi: ni betay, aaj aap thki hui hain...kal ruk jaiyae ga!

Naina: ni Aunty G! main ruk jaun g

Dadi: Maan aj ruk jatay hain...kal sy aap ruk jana...abi aap ghr chlein

Maan: Haan Dadi Maa! Aur raam laal ko main ny chuti sy wapis bula lia hai...wo aap ko thori deir may lenay a jayae ga!

Ward boy comes

Ward boy: sir, room saaf krna hai, ap log bahir chlay jayen.

Maan: ok, Dadi maa, aunty ayen ap ko main neechy tk chor b aata hun

they leave the room and ward boy intentionally removes mask of geet and immediately leaves the room. while geet starts breathing heavily.

SCENE 10

Maan is coming up from stairs and that ward boy cming down from stairs Wb (wardboy) is in hurry

In hurry he hits maan

WB: sorry saab!!!

Maan: its ok

Wb goes down and maan comes up

Maan stops

And turns and again sees the Wb bt he has gone...he keeps watching for few seconds And then maan starts walking

When he reaches the room, The door is opened, he enters in the room.

"THERE IS NO ONE IN ROOM

Maan: geet kahan gai??????...wow what a miracle abhi to wo so rahi thi abhi chal b prhi...strange...Ye larki b na! (smiling)

He goes near wash room

Maan: (calls) geet!!! Geet!! Tm wash room main ho????? Geet!!

Then starts knocking door

Maan: geet!! Geet!!

And now opens the door

Maan sees that geet is not here...

He become tensed and leaves room

And shouting

Maan: geet!!! Geet!! Geet!! Kahan ho!!! 2 mins k liyae neechay kia gya pta nahi kahan chali gyi

Maan: geet!!! Geet!!!

Nurse is passing from corridor

Maan stops nurse

Maan: nurse!!! Room no. 392 ki patient apnay room main nai hai???

Nurse: ohh aap us patient k saath hain...

Maan: (tensd) kia matlb???

Nurse: us ka mask remove ho gya tha or ous ki condition serious ho gai thi(maan shockd) us ko hm nain immediately I.C.U main shift kr diya hai...

Maan: kiaaa??? (tensed) w..w..wo theeek to hai naa????

Nurse: wo abhi theek nahi hai...dctrs treatment kr rahay hain, ap I.C.U k baahir chalain jaen dctr abhi aati hi ho gi...

Maan: acha theek hai...thanx

SCENE 11

Ward boy comes out from the hospital

Wb calls anyone

Wb: saab kaam ho gaya...

Man: good kaisi halat thi us ki??

Wb: kuku saab!! madam bht buri trha say tarap rahi theen..

Kuku: good or us Mk nain tmhain daikha to nahi???? Wo kahan tha?

Wb: nahi saab Mk saab mjhe daikh hi nahi paye kyun k main nain moo pr mask pehna hua tha...wo whan pr ni thay

Kuku: abhay agr yeh plan nakam hua naa to main pooranay paisay b wapis lun ga...aur tumhara both bura haaal krun ga...Samjhay??

Wb: saab aisa kuch nahi ho ga madam ki halat aisi thi k wo 5 nahi to 10 min main uper Papa G k pas pohnch jaen gi...

Kuku: good

he disconnects the call

Kuku: ab mjhe aik hi news ka intezzar hai k kb Mk mjhe phone kraye or mjhe btaye k geet (making face)

SCENE 12

Maan is standing outside the I.C.U

Maan: dadi maa ko bataon ya na baton???...abhi dctr jb aye gi tb baat kr k bataon ga dadi maa waisay b choti choti baton pr parishaan ho jaatin hain aur naina aunti to..ni,ni... geet k pass main hun na...abi kisi ko btanay ki zrooret ni hai Maan!

Dctr comes

Maan: ab geet ki tbiyat kaisi hai???

Dctr: Mr. khurana main nain aap ko kaha tha na k patient ka mask mt utariyae un ki tbiyat pehlay hi kharab hai...

Maan: pr hm to geet say milay b nahi...

Dctr: jo b ho pr main nain aap ko mna kia tha...or phr us waqt room main koi b nahi tha shukr kro nurse a gai...aap ko bola gya tha k @least 1 bnda un k pas rhay...Carelsness ki intiha hai...

Maan: ab tbiyat kaisi hai geet ki???

Dctr: hmmm... Geet ki tbiyat theek nahi hai wo abhi behosh hai...or Mr.Khurana raat ko un k pass koi aik bnda room main hona hi chahiyae...agr aap log duty ni dy sktay to theeek hai,, hum 1 nurse ki duty whaan pr lga detay hain...

Maan: No, No... main ruk jaon gaaa...

Dctr: or haan ab khayal rahay k us ka mask koi na utaraye or yeh kuch medicines hain yeh laye ain...

Maan: ok main abhi lay aata hun

SCENE 13

Naina and dadi are sitting in the loundge

Naina: aunty ji!!Mera dil both ghbraa rha hai.. pta nahi kyun mjhe lg raha hai k kuch bura honay wala hai...geet ki trf say main bht parishaan hun...

Dadi: betay aap aisi baatain kyun kr rahi hain aisa kuch nahi ho ga...

Naina: dadi maa geet theek to ho jaye gi naa??

Dadi: haan betay maan betay jaisay us ka khayal rkh rahay hain geet bilkul theek ho jaye gi...

Naina: haan main nain daikha maan us ki bht care kr raha tha...

Dadi: pta hai jb say geet hospital main hai tb say maan ghr nahi aye bs aaj sham ko aye thay kapray change kiyae or hmain lay kr chalay gaye...

Naina: pr maan pehlay to caring lgta hi nahi tha...

Dadi: woi to hm soch rahay thay k wo Maan jo kisi ko poochtay b nahi thay aaj geet ki itni care kr rahay hain...pr hmay khusi b ho ri hai k chalo is lrkay may thora sa to change aaya

Naina: main abhi thori dair tk maan ko phone kr k geet ka haal pooch lun gi

Phone rings

Naina: dadi wo KH ka phone hai main abhi aati hun

Dadi: theek hai

Naina leaves and attends the call

Naina: hello!

KH: naina geet kaisi hai??

Naina: aap ko kia parwa??

KH: wo meri beti hai...mjhe parwa ni ho gi to kisay ho g phr Naino..

Naina: yeh baat tb kyun nahi sochi jb aap geet ko delhi behj rahay thay???

KH: main nain geet ko delhi behja bht acha kia kyun k insaan ko doosron k baray main b jaankaari honi chahiyae,..apnay culture ka pta hona chahiyae

Naina: khaak jaankari!! Abhi main hospital say ain hun geet ki tbiyat bht kharab hai wo theek nahi hai KH!!!! Aur aap abi b apna cultur apna culture ly k bethay huay ho?

KH: dctrs kia keh rahain hain???

Naina: Aap to geet k asthma problem aur smoke or dust allergy k baray may jantay hi ho..Doctrx keh rhay hain k wohi problem severe ho ri hai,,,or rite arm pr thora sa burn aaya hai or girnay ki waja say sir pr choot ai hai...10-15 din lgay gay poori trha sy theek honay may

KH: Naino! Tm fikr mt kromeri princess ko kuch nahi ho ga...wo jaldi theek ho jaye gi

Naina: aisa hi ho ga...

KH: or safr kaisa raha tha???

...

SCENE 14

Maan comes in room and geet is sleeping

Maan comes and sits on stool and holds her hand

Maan: geet yeh kia halat bna li hai tm nain (sad)...geet tm jaldi say theek ho jao na... aakhir tm mujhay itna tng kyun krti ho geet! (maaahhhiii...few secndds maan remains in mahi condition n then eye blinking- maan leaves geet hand)

Goes 2 window...watching sky...Maan! Aakhir ye tmharay sath kya ho rha hai? Control urself... Maan,,Maan! Tm smjh rhay ho na k Maan Singh Khurana kbi b kisi k liyae b ni bdl skta...Pr kyun kyun? Mujhy aisay lg rha hai k kuch change hi rha hai maan!

Maan steps 2wards door- Ni! Main geet ko aisay chor k ni ja skta...Geet needs me...she really needs me..Steps back- Kyun??Kyun Geet ko meri zrooret hai??? Main aakhir ous ka kya lgta hunn?? Friend..Wellwisher,,,Whaaat??? Kya lgta hun aakhir main ous ka??? Kuch b to ni... Sits on sofa- feeling sleepy sleepy cox from last 3 days maan hs slept only for few hours...all th day in hospital lukng aftr geet...feeling tired as well

Maan: Aaj raat mujhay is larki k liyae jagna hi hoga...LAST NITE MAAN!!! LAST NITE...Come on Maan!! Wake up Man! U can do it,,,,, Stands up n go 2 stool n sit there beside geet.

Maan: Is larki may aisa kuch to hai,, jo mujhy apni trf khench rha hai... I cant control myself...she is attracting me 2wards her (Maaahhhiii)then wakes up from Maahi cndition

Maan stands and turns to go he realize that geet has holded his hand he turns again maaahhhiii

And he moves 2wrds geet 2 kis on forehead... maaahhhii maahii Maahi hoho ho hooo Maahi vey Maahi Maahi vey Maahi mahi...n then stops...Straightens...

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PRECAP

Kuku turns...talking on phone

Kuku: kia??? Aisa nahi ho skta MK!...geet hamain chor kr nahi ja skti ... geet to bht hi achi lrki thi...MK keh do k yeh jhoot hai (with grief) hamari geet hamain chor kr nahi ja skti...Mk smbhalo apnay aap ko...MK!! MK!!

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Chapter One: The Studio of Shadows ⸻ The city outside never truly slept. It sighed, it buzzed, it rattled—but within the walls of the Khurana...

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Posted by: Pixiepixel11

6 months ago

MG- A Love to grow-Chap-27 to 31 & Epilogue-Page-26-(21/02/25)

A Love to Grow Prologue The rhythmic tapping of rain against the glass filled the dimly lit study of Khurana Mansion. Maan Singh Khurana stood...

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Posted by: Pixiepixel11

6 months ago

MG-Dark Obsession Unleashed-Chap-32to53&Epilogue-Page-25to27(22/02/25)

Dark Obsession Unleashed-(Prologue) Eclipsed Fates Prologue The moonlight bathed the palatial mansion in an eerie silver glow, but inside its...

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Posted by: Mg13

1 years ago

MANEET FF SAAJAN | UPDATED PART 50 ~ Updating....

hey guys... here is my new thread...my previous threads got removed so links will not be opened... so will pm you update link soon.. wait for a...

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Posted by: amrutha11

3 months ago

Maneet story guess the name

Hi everyone, I forgot tthe name of the story of maan and geet. The story line is maan dadhi force geet to marry her grandson maan whose half...

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