Jalkukda Season 2(ShivIka SS Ft Advaay)pt7(a) pg 21 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Awesome
Poor shivu
I'm feeling bad fr him
ASR and Annika having fun before his eyes
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Amazing update Daisy!!!
Loved last line most... Shivaay searching Rudy:)
Awesome
Loved it..
Update next part soon
& Thank you for PM!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Awesome story line! Again we will get to see a jealous Shivaay! So excited!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
loved it
he he jalkudka shivaay yipee
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
It's beautiful beginning.
Haha I wanted to see jealous Shivaay.
Continue soon nd pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Rocking update
New twist
Amazinggg
Pooor shivaaayy
Loved it
Pm me please
Continue soom
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

Totally loved it...
the last part was hilarious...
shivaay searching for Rudy to take away his anger


Thanks for reading. Next part is going to be update soon

Originally posted by: Shaina744

This one is too good... I'm dying to read the story
Jealous Shivay... Poor ASR...he himself don't know what is going to be happen with him...
Waiting eagerly for the story... Tnq sooo much for pm...Update soon...

Oh i think you should pity on Shivaa instead.Updating in 1 hr


Originally posted by: pri12

Awsomee...loved it

thanks for reading

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazing concept

Advay and Anika ki jodi mast hai aur fir se jalkukda banne wala hai
Continue soon please


Yup next part will be updated soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome yaar
haha love the jalkukda
countinue soon...


thanks paru

Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Mummmy it was awesome

I really really love this
I want to read more 😭😭
Plzzz update soon 😃

You will get it soon

Originally posted by: Seema84

Superb dear... interesting start of this new season... please send me pm...

I'll be sending it soon

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Loved it, Daisy. Pavam Shivaay. 😆

Anyway, update soon. Thanks for the PM. 😉

Rhea you'll one soon

Originally posted by: farinaks

Awesome
Poor shivu
I'm feeling bad fr him
ASR and Annika having fun before his eyes
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm

You'll get so much comic scene that you'll wish Shivaay tu burnmore.

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

Amazing update Daisy!!!

Loved last line most... Shivaay searching Rudy:)
Awesome
Loved it..
Update next part soon
& Thank you for PM!!!

HEeh last line is today's episode hint.

Originally posted by: Mystrygirl152

Awesome story line! Again we will get to see a jealous Shivaay! So excited!😊

Yup you will see him soon.


Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

loved it

he he jalkudka shivaay yipee


sumi wait for next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: tikit

It's beautiful beginning.

Haha I wanted to see jealous Shivaay.
Continue soon nd pm me


awesome(@MysticRiver)//can't quote yours

You will be getting one soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20


Rudy Ka Room


Recap:
He angrily left the room in search of Rudy.He had take down his anger to calm down.
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After seeing Annika and that man together, I'm really very angry.My iPhone 7 has to pay price to cool my anger but my anger didn't cool even after breaking it.

Who is he? Why was he twirling my Annika like that? Who was that bloody bas***d?

I need to find something to vent my anger out before going to devise a plan.

My eyes darted in the direction of Rudra's room. He's better listener than Om and he may suggest some eccentric idea which might work out.

First of all, I need to vent my anger then I'll listen to Dumbell Oberoi. Mera dimaag ka dahi bana rakha hai uss cheapda aadmi ne.

What!!!!!!!Why I am talking in Annika language?Annika and her languages had done Oh My MAta of everyone's dictionary and mom too.

Irritated with my inner ramblings, I went to Rudra's room who was leaning near the glass window and was looking(spying) someone with his binoculars . I went near him and saw in the direction in which he was looking. I saw he was spying Nagini for sometime and since Nagini left for her house, he shifted his gaze from Nagini to Bhavya.

I face palmed at my assumptions. Yeh skirt chaser humesa skirt chaser hi rahega.

He was totally lost in Bhavya. My anger rose. Instead of giving your brother your shoulder to cry, you decide to follow a girl again.

I went and took a dumbell and threw at the glass window. The glass broke in pieces and the shards fell on the floor.

In span of some seconds, I completly destroyed Rudy's room but he is still.

What the wuck!!!!!!! This boy has lost his senses.

I went near him and see he was lost in Bhavya. Seriously meine iske room ka kabada kardiya phir bhi isne kuch nahin bola. No reaction.

A evil idea erupted in my mind. I took his phone and took out a recording and played it near his ear.

"CRRRYYYBAAABBBYYY OBBBEEEROOOIII"

He instantly back on earth with a thud. Upar se aaya khajur mein latka.

I smirked evilly at his state.

"Bhaiya, aap yahan!!!"He asked me with an confused expression on his face.

He look around and scanned his room perfectly. He was shocked at the mess."Bhaiya apne Advu Bhaiya ke saajaye hue room ka kima kyun banaya?" He said in a crybaby tone.

WHOA! WHOA! WHO The hell is Advu Bhaiya? I have decorated his room last time I checked.

"Yeah Advu kaun hai rudy?" I asked him suspiciously.

"Didn't Annika bhabhi told you about him? He is my new bhaiya and he got me facepacks and new gym equipment from Europe." Rudy said proudly.

I looked at him wide eyed.

"Te...Tere Na...NAye BHAIYA!!!!!"I gulped.

"Who the hell is Advu man?" I asked him.

"Bhaiya, he is Advaay Singh Raizada, my new bhaiya and the one who was twirling Annika Bhabhi there in front of you and caught Bhabhi in his arms instead of you."He said it causally while smiling cheek to cheek.

"I don't care." I said while clenching my hands in a fist. My anger was rising.

"Haan aapko kahan farak padega."He jeered at me.

"I made a song that I'll sing at there wedding."

AdIka ki Shaadi Hogi,

AdIka Dulha Dulhaan Banenge,

AdIka Switzerland jayenge,

AdIka Wahan Honeymoon Manayenge,

AdIka ke baal Bachhe honge,

AdIka on the moon honge,

AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka AdIka

Now my anger burst. I'm out of this room.

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Hey Guys!

How's it? Do let me know your feedback. I'll be waiting for it.

hope you all like it. I was in SSO level annoyed mood from the morning. I want to destroy my room but apna destroy karungi toh rahungi kahan so I destroyed Rudy's room

Chhaya you might have ideas about what roop dharan when I get angry.😆😆






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