Ishra SS_Arranged Marriage ~ Bonding of Two Souls,Part 9,page123,11/9 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: aru_27

nice character sketch
continue soon

Thanx😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sweetdivya24

Lovely character sketch

Continue soon

Thank you so much for loving it.
Will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: srithika

Nice intro and cs
Waiting for the story to unfold
Update soon
Thnx for the pm

Thank you for loving it...
Will update first part today
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
First of all a big thank you to all of you for such over whelming response on Prolonged, and character sketch... This was totally unexpected... Character sketch was also appreciated,thats means a lot... So much motivation you guys are giving, makes me motivates to write even more better, and make it upto your expectations.
This part 1, which I have uploaded below , trust me, I have spend a lot of time to pen it down, so that you people will love it and enjoy reading it...
So,I hope I have leave to yours expectations...
So without any further delay, here goes the first part...

Part 1 (a):


It's all about who are "The Bhallas



6 am @ Bhalla house:


Alarm rings in Mr. Bhalla's room, he wakes up and switches off the alarm.

After freshing up he goes to Toshi's picture hanging on wall and wishes her Good Morning. After that he leaves for his morning walk.


(It's daily routine of Mr. Bhalla to wish his wife in the morning and to start his day)


Around 8 am he returnes from his walk and calls his pari.


Mr. Bhalla: Where is my pari?? Come soon...dadu is backk...


(Ananya,the most favourite person in the house)


Ananya comes running to her dadu wishes him good morning and kisses him on both the cheeks and in return Mr.Bhalla does the same.


Ananya: Dadu mera coconut water kaha hai? (After observing that her grandfather is back with empty hands)


Mr. Bhalla (explaining): Pari aaj woh uncle nahi aye the, isliye mai aapke liye aapka coconut water nahi la paye.


Ananya (putting her hands on her hips): But dadu, aap hi bolte hona ke hume roj coconut water pina chaiye, as it is good for health (trying to show her small abs indicating him that she is soo strong). Par aaj aap nahi laye...toh mai kya piyu?? Mai healthy kaise rahunge??


(with cute sad pout)


Mr. Bhalla (trying to think): hmm... toh yeh baat hai...no worries baccha...aisa thode hai ke we should drink in mornings...hum aaj shaam ko pite hai! Mai aapke liye shaam ko lekar aata hu ok??


Ananya (thinking by putting finger on her cheeks) : Yes!!! but evening me pakka na?


Mr. Bhalla: Pakka mere nani mama...(pulling her cheeks)

Both of them were having there chit-chats, in between there chats simmi comes with a glass of orange juice for Mr.bhalla


Simmi: Good morning papaji!!


Mr. Bhalla: Good Morning beta!!


(Started drinking the juice,and gets ready to see mother-daughter argument, which was there daily routine)


Simmi: Ananya have u brushed your teeth?


Ananya: No mumma (With sad pout).


Simmi (scolding): Kitni bar kaha hai ke subah sabse pehle brush karna chaiye,par tum ho ke sunte he nahi ho. Aur yeh kya abhi tak school ke liye ready kyu nahi hue ho? It's already late. (She sees no response from her daughter and speaks) ok now your punishment is ki tum khudse ready hona hoga and I am not gone help you. Samjhi??


Ananya: OK mumma (again making faces so that her mumma melts, but as usual no use).


Simmi: And listen, before she could complete..


Ananya: I know I know I have to wake up chachu...(getting excited as this is her favourite work in morning)


Simmi: and...


Ananya (again interrupting): Haan haan pata hai mumma...hum dono time se breakfast table pe aajayange. And one more thing mumma, agar aap mujhe ready nahi karoge toh mein kya ready nahi hopaunge kya??? mere favourite chachu hai na...he will make me ready!! and with that she shows her tongue and runs away to avoid further scoldings!


(Simmi mummers this Chachu n Dadu ke pyaar ne is ladki ko bigad diya, and turns to towards Mr. Bhalla to complain about Ananya...)


Simmi sees Mr. Bhalla smiling and before she could speak anything,

Mr. Bhalla (knowing what was coming) excuses himself and goes away to get ready for office...


Simmi: "In sabka kuch nahi go sakta expression and leaves towards kitchen to prepare breakfast..


Ananya enters of her chachu's room,and first thing she does is switching off the A.C, putting the lights on and pulling off the blanket from her chachu and saying in loud voice "Good morning chachu...wake up!!!! subah hogai hai...aur kitna sona hai aapko???


Raman (gets up by her sweet voice still his were eyes half closed) makes ananya sit on his lap and wishes her good morning with sweet kisses and says: Pari maine tumhe kitni bar bola hai aese AC mat band kiya Karo, chachu ko kitne garmi lagti hai (with sad face).


Ananya (giggling): Garmi lagegi tabhi toh aap uthoge, warna Kumbhakaran jaise sote rahoge!


Raman: This is not fair pari, chachu mast mai so rahe the and mast mast sapne dekh rahe the...aese koi karta hai kya apne favorite chachu ke sath?


(acting to be sad).


Ananya: Obviously!! because mumma bhi mujhe aesai uthati hai, toh sirf mein he kyu suffer karu? Aap bhi karo suffer mere sath and starts laughing and suddenly asks: Waise chahu ap kya sapne dekh rahe the, chachi ke bare main kya?? and again starts laughing.

Raman: acha bachu...ab chachu ka bhi majak karna chalu kiya...now wait and watch, what I will do...

and starts tickling her...shouting and laughing nonstop.


( This is the daily routine of chachu-pari morning dose, and eventually both get up to get ready, with Raman helping Ananya getting ready for school and both enters breakfast table together).


At breakfast table,


Mr. Bhalla was having his toast with a glass of milk and in meantime, Param comes to breakfast table and touches his father's feet, wishes him Good Morning and settles down to have his breakfast.


(Taking blessing from his dad is his daily routine to start his day)


Same time Raman and Ananya also comes to have there breakfast and Raman touches both Mr. Bhalla and his elder brother's feet, wishes all of them good morning and settles to have breakfast..


Simmi enters with a bowl of cornflakes for Param and sees him reading newspaper.. (she glares at him and speaks)


Simmi: Papaji nashta karte waqt paper padhna is not allowed right??? (still glaring at him)


Param: Its only bussiness newpaper yaar.


Mr. Bhalla: We have whole day for business, but breakfast time is..


Ananya (before Mr. Bhalla can complete the sentence, she speaks) "Family time!!


And smiles seing his father getting scolding.


Mr. Bhalla: True.


With that Simmi takes away his newspaper and shows him her victory smile!


Param knowing he can never win, starts having his breakfast..


Simmi then brings toast and milk for both Ananya and Raman. Seeing breakfast ananya starts having her breakfast and now it was time for Raman to get his morning dose of scoldings!


Simmi goes near Raman and says Raman: Raman have your breakfast.


Raman didn't listen at all...getting no response,

Simmi twists his ears, raman immediately comes to his senses and the phone he was holding slips from his hand (in which he was busy playing Candy Crush and dared not listening to his bhabhi)


Simmi scolding Raman, how many times I have told you no phones while having breakfast but you never listen..


Raman (winching in pain): Bhabhi, leave my ear, it's paining...aaah...!!!! Acha baba sorry, now no more phone...see I am keeping it on table.


Simmi then leaves his ears and tell him to continue his breakfast.


Meanwhile Mr. Bhalla and Param finishes their breakfast and Mr. Bhalla goes out, saying Param that he is waiting for him in the car.


Param goes to his room, takes his laptop bag and starts moving when simmi enters the room, and gives him his phone which he left on breakfast table.Param takes the phone kisses her on forehead and leaves for his office.


Simmi returns back to breakfast table for having her breakfast and sees both Raman n Ananya are still having there breakfast. She seats to have breakfast, trio had there breakfast together with there normal conversations and pulling each others legs.


After breakfast raman gets ready to leave for office and asks ananya to bring her school bag (Raman always drops Ananya to school, as it's on his way to office, and both loves spending time with each other)


Ananya goes to bring her school bag. Meanshile simmi thinks to tease her favorite Devarji (with a little smirk on her face). She goes to Raman where he was waiting for Ananya, and sees him again busy in his Candy Crush (shaking her head on his childish antics): Raman (not responding as usual) Ramaaannn...


Raman immediately says yes, as he doesn't want to gets his ear twisted again!!!


Simmi: Raman that today I am going to a new launching boutique to do shopping, so if you want I can purchase a Bridal Lengha for your "Dulhan what say??? (And holds her laughter, as she know what will be Raman's reaction)


Raman (Shocked): Dulhan?? whose dulhan?? what is dulhan?? pagal hogaye ho kya aap?? Mein abhi bacha hu...Ananya se bas ek - do saal bada hu..nabalik hu...meri Dulhan dundhoge toh apko jail hoga samjhe? for child marriage!!! (making cute pout)


Simmi (slighting hiting him on his shoulder): Nabalik ke Bache! dramebazzz kahi ke!! itne bade ho gaye ho! Office jaate ho,kaam karte ho and apne aap ko bacha bolte ho? Sharam nahi aate tuze?? (Laughing at his face..which was sacred just by mere word of dulhan!!!) she continues: are baba mein toh mazak kar rahi the!


Raman sighs in relief.


Simmi: Par sach mein aaj mein boutique ja rahi hu, so tum yaad se driver bhej dena Ananya ko school se pick up karne ko.


Raman nodding his head affirmatively, hugs his babhi and says her goodbye,and duo leaves for their routines.


Simmi went to complete her daily course so that she can leave for boutique and return soon.



This is the daily morning scenario of Bhalla house which is full of love, fun, respect and strong bonding between each other...




So Part_1(b), Will be all about "Who are the Iyers...


As part 1 got little bigger, so thought of putting Iyers,in second part...


If you liked the part and enjoyed reading it, then plz do share your views on this part, which will be appreciated..


~Monika





Edited by dtlover08 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Awesome Update...
Loved it..
Full of family moments
Loved raman and ananya bonding
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
lovely update
mr.bhalla and anaya scene was cute raman and ananya scene was beautiful
raman and ananya bonding is lovely
simmi was teasing raman he is so cute their talk was lovely
waiting for ishra meeting
pls continue soon
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Superb superb superb update
Love bhalla family routine
Love ananya n raman's masti
update next part soon
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also pm me




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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Superb update..
Loved bhalla's moment..
Raman & ananya bonding..
Thx for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Loved bhallas moments
Ananya and raman's bonding was beautiful
Nice update
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Really loved d bond btw bhalla's.
Every one r so connected with love.
Ananya is really a cute princess for all d family members.
Loved d bond btw Raman n Ananya n her dadu.
Simmi is teasing him n he is so scared even listening to d word dulhan.
Eagerly waiting to know about Iyers.
Plz continue soon.
Thanks for the pm dear:)

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