Mortal Promises - Maaneet FF MG Maan Geet!#T1*|[T6 opened]

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

nice pt

geet escaped from that man and saw maan calling hr she pick the call and she told man someone behind hr maan get worried sam was stunned seeing his reaction soon he found geet he stoppe the car and ran toward geet and hugged hr and kiss hr try to assure him self and geet she's fine and in his embrace he calm hr and make hr sit in car but she again in his embrace crying with fear wen they reached he make hr stand and seeing hr condition.they also get worried but they already knows someone stalking hr maan get angry agyer fresh up they all sitting maan lecturing her and she so cutely make everyone laugh afyer seeing hr laughing je went away but geet make excuse she want to woth him and found him on terrace

she hugged him amd he also he want to punish that guy whom scared his geet he appoint bg fr hr and he didn't told hr she visited hr class and warn them sam is suspicious about maan behaviour towards geet

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks 4 da pm n fascinating update! brilliantly written! Omg dadi knows abt the guy troubling Geet! it happened again! Maan stunned n livid! Maan confronts Geet and dadi! as she didn't tell him! dadi tries 2 calm him 2 no avail! Geet is hilarious! Poor Maan! they all laugh at him! Geet goes 2 speak 2 Maan! she manages 2 manofy him! Maan wants 2 get BGs 4 her! Geet upset! she only has 2 friends! love Maan's concern 4 her! she is his life! in a flow Geet talks abt her period tension n then realises! she is embarrassed! Maan doesn't let her go! he kisses her senseless! he cannot control! intriguing precap! loving this story! update asap😊👏⭐️ sorry 4 late likes n comments

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
I am well thanks...only busy during the day!

hey, great to know. I was waiting for your replies. Thanks for such motivating replies on both of my threads. yes dadi knows, read chap 11. Dev told them, i thought readers will understand by reading the dialogues between Dadi and madhu since I was focusing in Maaneet patch up so didn't wanna bore my readers with that dev portion of telling dadi, however now I feel I should have written it, next time I would be more careful.
About update, I will update the 2nd story, this one will take more days to update.
have a nice day dear. 😊

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: Doracake
Hi just started reading this FF totally out of curiosity.
And read all the previous updates back to back
For a new writer you are writing pretty good.

Keep up the good work.

Hey welcome to this story! 😊
Thanks a lot for your feedback. Hope you enjoyed reading it!
Stay tuned! 😃

Edited by Iptida - 8 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: sanum23
nice pt
geet escaped from that man and saw maan calling hr she pick the call and she told man someone behind hr maan get worried sam was stunned seeing his reaction soon he found geet he stoppe the car and ran toward geet and hugged hr and kiss hr try to assure him self and geet she's fine and in his embrace he calm hr and make hr sit in car but she again in his embrace crying with fear wen they reached he make hr stand and seeing hr condition.they also get worried but they already knows someone stalking hr maan get angry agyer fresh up they all sitting maan lecturing her and she so cutely make everyone laugh afyer seeing hr laughing je went away but geet make excuse she want to woth him and found him on terrace
she hugged him amd he also he want to punish that guy whom scared his geet he appoint bg fr hr and he didn't told hr she visited hr class and warn them sam is suspicious about maan behaviour towards geet

Thanks a lot dear. Beautiful comment!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Iptida

hey, great to know. I was waiting for your replies. Thanks for such motivating replies on both of my threads. yes dadi knows, read chap 11. Dev told them, i thought readers will understand by reading the dialogues between Dadi and madhu since I was focusing in Maaneet patch up so didn't wanna bore my readers with that dev portion of telling dadi, however now I feel I should have written it, next time I would be more careful.
About update, I will update the 2nd story, this one will take more days to update.
have a nice day dear. 😊

thanks...no problem! already waiting...pls dnt take 2 long😃